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he was cold and it sometimes hurt to touch him, he made my skin itch with the tell-tale signs of frostbite setting in and sometimes i would cringe. i never shied away though, because the pain was worth the touch, the blessing.

permanently, he was tainted blue, like lake fryxell or the Odessa sky in spring.

bundled in blankets and burning his hand with the iron, he shivered.

i loved his cheeks, they had a sign of life - they were red, blood vessels rushing to the surface - a kiss from jack frost. i was jealous.

i made him angry once and it was beautiful. snow fell from the ceiling, a blizzard in the bedroom, defying logic and reason. it did not stop for hours - it did not melt - and when his mother died; he cried, and the room cried with him - lightening and thunder; the dark roar that makes children scream and hide beneath their beds. this, too, lasted for many hours. the snow melted, and my carpet was soaked with the smell of petrichor. he apologised and i did not understand why, because i've always loved the rain - the sound, the smell, the touch, the taste.

i bet he tasted like rain.
 

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he was cold and it sometimes hurt to touch him, he made my skin

36 faves · 6 comments · Aug 8, 2014 6:22pm

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SingingQueen1996 · 9 years ago
i stumbled across this and i am mesmerized by your writing. i wish i had the ability to make words fit into each other in such a way. beautiful
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*nerium* · 9 years ago
oh gosh, thank you. that's so sweet!
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hyperion* · 9 years ago
i love this so much wow.
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*nerium* · 9 years ago
thank you!!!
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*anachronism* · 9 years ago
where is this from? its absolutely beautiful
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*nerium* · 9 years ago
oh, it's mine. thank you so much!
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