xoxoJordie30xoxo · 1 decade ago
yes!!!! so happy there together!!! keep on writing :)
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LONERFORLIFEEE · 1 decade ago
YES!!! YES. YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEAM MATTY YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
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volleyballfreak101 · 1 decade ago
I_want_more_now!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bec* · 1 decade ago
yay team matty!!!
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AmazedByYou · 1 decade ago
yayayayay

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JeMiNe2016 · 1 decade ago
Team Matty all the way
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Pumpit36 · 1 decade ago
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converse97 · 1 decade ago
I noticed that too.
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AmazedByYou · 1 decade ago
mattys dialogue is present tense because at the time he obviously said it in the moment. past tense is probably used because this is being looked back on by hollie, our narrator
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converse97 · 1 decade ago
Yeah, but the tenses switch in the actual story too, not just the dialogue.
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AmazedByYou · 1 decade ago
because looking back on a memory and flashbacks are different in writing and there are both in the story
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converse97 · 1 decade ago
But it doesn't only change when looking back on something. Like the first line says, "I sit down" but the fourth line says "I picked at my food".
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xForeverLovedx · 1 decade ago
k..can you please stop? I know you didn't mean to be rude, but when you keep it going it is kind of hurting my feelings..
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RawrrItsJenny · 1 decade ago
omg i love this story . :3
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dancer4life13 · 1 decade ago
Ahhhh finally matty and hollie<33
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maddysoccerlvr · 1 decade ago
So freaking perfect omg <3
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If_This_Was_A_Movie · 1 decade ago
You should add another chapter tonight ; omg I love this story so much xD ; it's like a drug addiction c;
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dancingpurplebunny · 1 decade ago
Me right now: Hunched over the computer with a cup of ice cream diligently reading this fabulous story and freaking out about Matty. Yup my life. LOVE IT
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runningislife* · 1 decade ago
so how'd the whole thing go with the girl from wattpad?

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RYERYE* · 1 decade ago
awwwwww how sweet!!!!!!!!!!
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PorkyPine · 1 decade ago
Do you have any pictures of what Matty might look like? I'm curious. (please just comment on my profile, the replies don't show up on the mobile site, and I usually use the mobile site) :)
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abigaail · 1 decade ago
But but but but but but
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TheWeirdKid · 1 decade ago
Yayyy(:
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Shyanne · 1 decade ago
Team Matty!
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em3456 · 1 decade ago
Wahhh! Nathaniel is better:( Haha but oh well! I still love your story:)
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jillybob22 · 1 decade ago
i love these stories!! u should do more!!!!!
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