How to Solve a Murder Without Being Murdered:
~2~
We didn't sleep a
wink for the rest of the night, knowing what had just
happened. Not to mention the cops, private investigaters,
and some super nosey neighbors were making a huge
comotion.
"Where are you going?" Tiffany snapped at me when
I started to get dressed. "Outside." She looked at me
like I was crazy. "Are you crazy? It's totally insane
down there? Why do you even need to go? You didn't know
her and you don't know her family?" Tiffany
whispered, trying not to wake Briana who had finally
fallen asleep. "This is the frist time something is the
boring town has ever happened. I don't know about
you but this summer hasn't exaclty been summer. We're
going to be Seniors in a month and I don't want to waste away
my last summer before college." I told her, expressing
what I truely felt. "Your point?" she asked in a
nasty tone. "My point is, I don't want to just sit
here while the most exciting thing in this town is happening. I
want to be a part of it." She clearly
wasn't understanding what I was getting at.
"Like by planning the funeral? What do you mean,
Haley?" he asked. I rolled my eyes, "No, by solving the
murder." I smirked. She stared at me with my mouth open
while I waltzed out of my room.
I walked across the street towards Bethany's house. It
looked like the whole town was there; either to mourn the
death or more likely to get some details on something new
to gossip about. The local news casters were
trying to get the story. "Last night, 17 year old Bethany
Finkle was murdered. We have no idea who the murderer is or
why she was murdered." A news caster with long
lucious blonde hair announced in front of the camera. I
couldn't help but notice the door was open and I slipped
in. Her parents were mourning in the living room and many
people were there to comfort them. Then, I saw it;
Bethany's body.
I stared down at her. She really was gorgeous. Beautiful blonde
hair and a perfect complextion. She was so peacful. It was a
shame such a nice girl had to die like that. Yet again, I
didn't know her that well and she was kind of
mysterious. She looked more like she was going to
Cinderella's ball, not down in the
dirt. Some older ladies crowded the dead body
and I returned outside to the chaos.
Well, in order to solve a murder you needed clues;
right? I have no idea, I've never solved a murder
before. But, I almost always won on the board game Clue so
it had to be a sign. I started to circle the outside of the house
looking for some kind of clue. Maybe the murderer dropped
something on the way out?
Someting caught my eye, a footprint that faced away from the
house. I knelt down to examine it. Before I could get really far
a black DC sneaker stomped down on it. "Hey, I
was..." I trailed off while getting up. It was Kyle;
that sketchy creep that girls around here seemed
to fall head over heels for. "You were what?
Trying to find the murderer to be the hometown hero?" he
smirked. I didn't answer since he cleary pinned it right
on the nose. "Hundred of people have been walking around
here for hours. It's likely not going to be the
murders." he spat. I huffed, "I knew that. And so
what if I'm trying to solve the murder? It's
not going to hurt anybody?" He chuckled. "So why
are you here anyways?" I asked bitterly. "Bethany
and I were good friends." he admitted. I kind of regreted
being rude to him. "Oh, I'm so sorry." I said
in a comforting way. "Thanks." he whispered.
It made total sense that sketchy Kyle and mysterious Bethany
were friends; they were probably part of some gang
or something. "So, don't you want to know who
killed her?" I asked. He shook his head, "No. It's
better I don't know." I bit my tongue.
"Well, do you think you could maybe help me
then? Like answer a few questions about her?" I asked. He
shurgged, "Sure. Just be careful with what you're
getting yourself into." he warned. A car horn parked
from the street. "I've got to go, nice talking to you,
um?" "Haley." I added, helping him out.
"Nice talking to you Haley. And good luck witht his murder
solving thing." he added sarcastically
while running towards the car. Yeah, I was going
to need more than luck. I was going to need
clues.
I
CAN'T POST A CHAPTER TOMORROW CAUSE I'M GOING
SKIING ALL NIGHT WITH MY FRINEDS! BUT CHAPTER 3 WILL BE UP
THE NEXT DAY! COMMENT IF YOU WANT A REMINDER! SORRY FOR THE
FORMAT! DON'T SWEAR AND SAVE
WITTY:)
292 faves · 62 comments · Jan 5, 2012 5:06pm
Daazz007
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1 decade ago
I love this story, but the grammar annoys me 'cause it's not perfect -.- Sorry, grammar over here! haha :P
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meluvsyou
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1 decade ago
plz let me know, this is sooo good (:
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phoebefba
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1 decade ago
Ahhh this is soooo good! Can't wait for chapter 3!
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Shes_Just_Broken
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1 decade ago
Ammmaaazzzinnngggggg!!!! <3
Please let me know when the next chapter is up x
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dubesbabe06
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1 decade ago
woah! amazing!!!!!!! id LOVE a reminder!!!!
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kd00
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1 decade ago
my god its so good! how do you get so many faves?
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momoluvsu
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1 decade ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i LOVE this....remind me for ch. 3 :D
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teenagedreamer14
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1 decade ago
this is soo goood. <3 yur such an amazing writer.
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nevejadendooleyx
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1 decade ago
cool bananas :D have fun tomorrow and could you remind me please?..xxx
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KimAngel
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1 decade ago
Have fun with ur friends! x3 Remind me when chapter 3 is out! .... awesome. xD
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ThatsSoMeee
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1 decade ago
i love it.. ♥
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bieberfever1540
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1 decade ago
Please let me know when chapter 3 is up :) Have fun skiing with your friends! :)
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heidy787
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1 decade ago
Let me now when Chapter 3 is out!!!
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hazzahamster
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1 decade ago
Let me know when Chp 3 is up xxx
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Lovenouritto
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1 decade ago
LOOOVVEEE IITTT ! I want a reminder pleaseee
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hannah143
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1 decade ago
sooo goodd!
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clemsoncookie
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1 decade ago
LOOOVE [: remind me please!
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cutecotton
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1 decade ago
Love it :] Tell me when chapter 3 is out?
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DaisyMouka
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1 decade ago
Please remind me
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surferchicknpg · 1 decade ago
amaziinigggg!
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