AwayWithTheFairies · 1 decade ago
*I forgot to mention, I think that was a great 'finishing chapter' if you want to end the series - I didn't see the most recent chapter and it ends perfectly, so if you want to end it there, it would work :)
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Thank you so much for understanding, but idek I wrote this story like a lifetime ago and I'm a whole different person now and I think it's pretty cheesy and stuff, and also I've been writing a fanfiction for a few months now and I spend all my time on this one (I'm posting it on Wattpad) so that's why I've lost all my interest on this one. I still don't know whether I'll continue posting here or no, but just so everyone knows, I'm posting the same story on Wattpad and probably gonna end it there
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AwayWithTheFairies · 1 decade ago
Ok, well thank you for letting me know - I'll try and find Wattpad (I've never heard of it before, what is it?) to read some of your other stuff and it's fine, I constantly change my mind in stories and create alternate endings - if you're bored of this leave it - these are almost like experiments until you find a story line that's 'perfect' for you - I'll find this Wattpad and read more! Thank you again for your hard work, I do think you can end the story with them back together though - it works - most stories don't inform a fan of everything anyway - they just let your imagination run wild ;D do what feels right for YOU :)
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AwayWithTheFairies · 1 decade ago
I don't come onto Witty much anymore but this story was one of the first 'quotes' or whatever that I saw about a month ago and in one day I read all the chapters to the newest one posted - I just want to thank you for the time you put into that story! I write stories (I don't post them though) and they take a lot of time and effort. If you're not into the story you could change it or maybe write something else (fanfiction/whatever you'd prefer) as your style is great and you can do anything (sounds cheesy but whatever)! If you decide to continue/write something else I'll be awaiting a notification and so will the other guys who have commented :) Do what YOU want to do, write for yourself for as much as you are writing for an audience, you are writing for yourself :)
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Daizee · 1 decade ago
Your last chapter got around 13 likes so quite a few people have seen it! Witty doesn't have that many people on it and less people fave everyday so don't let that get you down! I always use my iPad and sometimes it signs me out and I just can't be stuffed logging into my account so I can't fave anything, maybe that's the case for your other readers? You definitely should continue though- if not for us for yourself! That way you can sany you've released a novel and people have actually read and enjoyed xxxx
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I don't know really, I mean I used to get more readers and stuff and now I feel like people don't like it as much and I'm always thinking "have I done something wrong" and I don't even know if I like the story still...
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Daizee · 1 decade ago
Well I like it & by the amount of comments you get clearly other people do to! If you don't like it yourself do something about it: change it, edit it, whatever you see fit! This is great starting ground if you ever decide to go down a career path involving any form of writing, fictional or not! You're doing nothing wrong with the story- it's your story made your way- not everyone's going to like it. Think of J.K Rowling, so many publishers declined Harry Potter and look where she and the books are now! It's your decision though and I'm not trying to pressure you into anything! Just remember that the amount of faves or comments you get shouldn't be what discourages you, you should try and persist with all things you start xx
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I know but I don't know, I feel like I'm not into the story anymore and losing readers also pushed me into thinking that and I changed the section in which I'm writing to completely, considering I started writing fanfiction. I don't know, really
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Daizee · 1 decade ago
Okay well it's your decision and you should do what's best for you. I know what you mean by lacking motivation though like I get that 100% but if you never need someone to bounce ideas off of I'm here :)
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Thank you :) I'm glad you understand, I've been feeling super guilty lately because I really don't want to cut the story like that (I might wont) but yeah.. Well I might start posting once a month or so, I'll let you know :)
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AwkwardnessIsAwesome* · 1 decade ago
Just because people don't fav or comment doesn't mean they don't read. I know most of the time I read your story when I'm pressed for time so I don't manage to fav or comment.
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I understand you don't have time because I'm also reading stories and I hardly comment, but if I see nothing how am I supposed to know people like it...?
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country_gurl · 1 decade ago
I check every day. It's a great story, you really should finish it :)
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Thank you :)
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Kayla* · 1 decade ago
That's sad to hear, I enjoy reading it :(
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Oh :( I just don't know..
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LadyFranco384 · 1 decade ago
You really should finish the story, I check every day for a new chapter.
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Thank you <3 but it's basically three people or four reading this and that's kind of sad ya know /:
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LadyFranco384 · 1 decade ago
Yeah, I understand. :/ Still though...what we got more people to check it out?
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LadyFranco384 · 1 decade ago
What if*
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I don't know, I mean that would be great guys.. I might continue but I don't know if it's worth it when I have like three people you know?
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LadyFranco384 · 1 decade ago
Yeah, I know. I'm not going to tell you what to do, but it would be amazing if you would finish, even if it means ending it soon.
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
There are still more than 30 chapters which is crazy but well I don't know, I wanna continue too but I just don't know..
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