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Girls Like me .

Chapter 10.

“Eww, that’s gross!” I giggled, watching Jake pour raspberry syrup on his chocolate ice cream.
“Oh come on.” He smiled.  “It’s really not that bad, you should try it.”
“Oh let me think about it, no.” I said sarcastically.
He rolled his eyes playfully, shoving a huge spoon of ice cream in his mouth.
“This is nice.” I admitted, stirring my ice cream.  “You know, hanging out again.”
“I agree.” He smiled.  “I feel like I haven’t talked to you in forever.”
“Yeah.” I slightly laughed, smiling at him.  His smile was so, captivating.  Addicting, even.
“Bree?  Did you hear me?”
“What?” I asked, snapping back into reality.
“Do you want to go for a walk?” He laughed at my attention span.
“Sure.” I said calmly, a little embarrassed.
I stood up slowly, balancing my weight onto my crutches.
 We made our way down towards the beach, and began walking along the shoreline.
“So, how was Maine?” Jake ask hesitantly, shoving his hands into his pockets.
“Good, I guess.” I sighed.  “Lots of new friends.”
He nodded, understanding what I meant.
“But why’d you go?” He asked curiously.
I thought for a second, debating on whether or not I should tell him the truth.
“Well.” I shrugged.  “I guess I just needed to get away.”
“From?”
“This town, my family, an-“
“Me..”  Jake interrupted.
“Yeah.” I said reluctantly.  “Kind of.”
“I don’t know why I acted like I did, Bree.” He admitted, stopping us from walking.  “I was stupid, and selfish, and it was wrong to do what I did.”
I just looked at him, not saying anything.  I thought about saying it was my fault, but honestly, it wasn’t.  This was his turn to apologize.
“Do you think you’ll ever be able to forgive me?”
I then flashed back to all the names he called me, the torture he put me through. No Jake, I will never forgive you, I wanted to scream.  However, I forced a smile on the outside, because it was too late in the game to change the plan.
“I forgive you.” I smiled.
He eyes lit up, and I felt him moving closer to me, pushing loose strands of hair away from my face.  Before I knew it, our lips collided.
And strangely enough?

I didn't want to pull away.
     
Let the drama begin.  (:  Another chapter up tomorrow:D Sorry for making you all wait ( :  Chapter 11's going to be exciting,,in my opinion♥  I love you guys, thank you all times a billion for the feedback ( : < 3

The number to reach for a hint next chapter is 550 [:

 -Hint-
     “You’re mad aren’t you!” Zoe said worriedly.  “Bree, I can find someone else, really-"
“No!” I said quickly. “Zoe, it’s fine, really, I don’t even like him anymore.”

-Bree's POV-

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Girls Like me . Chapter 10. “Eww, that’s gross!”

719 faves · 37 comments · Jun 24, 2012 8:22pm

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carebear123 · 1 decade ago
4 more favs until 550!! come on guys i cant wait till the next chapter(:
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marebearj · 1 decade ago
soo amazing
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makeuptipsfromtheaspiring · 1 decade ago
oh.heck.no zoe gonna get shot.

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xLizzIsAmazing · 1 decade ago
I love this:)
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i_hate_her · 1 decade ago
this is truly amazing! you need to start writing now! haha i dont even like to read.. u got me hooked! i NEED to read more!(:
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chlochlo · 1 decade ago
is this story true? I love it!
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.* · 1 decade ago
God i love this story!!!
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0xxx0Love0xxx0 · 1 decade ago
okay I'm waiting for 550 likes, i love this series, i check every 10 minutes:)
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gemmalouise96 · 1 decade ago
WOW, your storys are amazing and i cant believe u have only been writing for 5 months. I have been writing for a long time and mine arnt any where near as good as your. I barly get favours on any of them, could you maybe look at my story called Dignity and tell me what you think xx
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hotchick123 · 1 decade ago
love this chapter ♥♥
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SkyBluexxx · 1 decade ago
HOLY SHlT!!!!
JAKEY! YOU SEDUCIST!
&& What kind of Ice cream was that... Jakey, you need to go to the dentist mate.
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xolivix16 · 1 decade ago
Love this storyy!!! ahhh
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Th3Br0k3nBl0nde · 1 decade ago
aww i missed 2 chapters ! sorry since you can't remid anyone now :/
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kylee_ericaa* · 1 decade ago
notify pleaseeee!
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Keep_Your_Head_High_the_Sun_Will_Shine · 1 decade ago
ahhh do we have to wait till 550 faves?? im like hooked i need to readd!
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beforehecheats · 1 decade ago
im actually addicted to this story.
its so good! i wish i could write like you
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Cruising_California · 1 decade ago
i am addicted to this series !
hahahaha but i kinda thought it was weird that he asked her to go on a walk when she literally JUST injured her leg ..... js. but i still LOVE the series
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BrokenLoveSeries · 1 decade ago
omg i loooove this and i am SUPER excited for the next chapter, please upload it quickly so I don't have to wait!!:)
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KateKat · 1 decade ago
Omg the hint just made me really really want to read the next chapter!:) put it up early tomorrow! As always I love your stories<33
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Annamaria25 · 1 decade ago
amazing i always look forward to the new chapters. so talented

check out my new story limited survival. thx xoxo bye
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