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A   Mi l l ion and One Th i ngs
Lillys POV
Chapter Eight PART TWO:)

“you got it you got it! He shouted as I stood on the board, gliding towards the sand.
“ YA!” I screamed jumping off and paddling back to him
“you have seaweed on your face” he whispered brushing the green strand of seaweed off my frozen face.
“thanks” I said stepping towards him.
“wholie crap, your freezing” he said feeling my hand. “I gotta get you out of here” he shouted, putting me on his back, acting like I was dying.
“what-”
“Stay calm, it will be okay miss!” he joked as he dragged our surfboards onto the shore.
“ I think I’m dying!” I overly acted as I pretended to pass out on the sand. 
“ funny funny” he said wrapping his only towel around me.
“ you know people die from being cold, I just had to save you” he said wrapping his arm around me, then quickly taking it off. 
“well mister, I think I should introduce myself.” I smiled, our face only inches away. “Lilly” I muttered.
“ I’m Jake” he smiled as he looked back at the dark, shivering sea. 
 
NMF


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Ookay so heres the problem, im not sure if i should write more of the story, idk if like anyones reading it? comment what you think PLEASE!
 

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A Mi l l ion and One Th i ngs Lillys POV Chapter Eight PART TWO:)

37 faves · 19 comments · Dec 18, 2011 12:34pm

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OneLoveOneShot_Stories · 1 decade ago
don't stop. i like this story! (-;
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i love the storyline!(: keep writing♥
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MeeAndYoou · 1 decade ago
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PLEEEASE KEEP WRITING!! i love this story...
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WithABrokenHeartThatsStillBeating · 1 decade ago
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thanks girrls (:
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nikkiparentrox · 1 decade ago
Its great! Im reading!
Check out my stories too?
MyLifeInBlackAndWhite
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2015 · 1 decade ago
I love your story :) you should keep writing
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