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A pill for the pain,
Two for the lies.
Three for the smiles,
I have to hide behind.
Four for the times,
when you weren't around,
Five for the reason,
I no longer care.
Ten for the scars,
Twenty for the abuse,
Thirty more for my pitiful excuse.
Forty for my friends,
Fifty for the family,
A promise to them,
that I was never really happy.
Sixty for the thoughts,
Of ending my life,
Seventy just out of spite.
Eighty for being lost,
Ninety for you not seeing,
Ninety eight for you,
And darling?
One Hundred for me.
  

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Copyright 2013 justanotherwittyguy18
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A pill for the pain, Two for the lies. Three for the smiles,

97 faves · 20 comments · Apr 28, 2013 2:48am

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likemillionares · 1 decade ago
I swear the pain gets better. You will be okay, just dont do this to yourself. As long as you believe you'll be.okay, you will.
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x3missykrissyx3 · 1 decade ago
Please don't do that. I understand that I don't know you, and hey none of the people commenting probably really do. But I'm sure we all know that. Even if we don't know you that we'll, we'd care if you passed. Personally, I have a very close person in my life who's in your situation. She thinks no one cares and what she doesn't know is I would be completely Lost in this world with out her. & I am 100% someone feels the same way about you. Don't do something that you can't take back, please.
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gracegreene · 1 decade ago
please don't. look at everyone who cares, and everyone who ever has cared. whether they be on witty or in real life, we want you here
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Sorrowful · 1 decade ago
No please dont...someone like you cant die, people love you and look too you. You are amazing and i honestly envy you...I know the pain hurts, i understand what you are going through and i wont let you suffer the way i suffered. So please...don't die because someone you are going to make a diffrence one day and save someone from their hell.


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JNettles53 · 1 decade ago
Please dont I look forward to your quotes everyday. Just remember that everyone who has liked or commented on here cares.
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bella is a penguin * · 1 decade ago
Don't commit suicide, stay please
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wordynerdy · 1 decade ago
come back. I will be praying for you. Please. we love you.
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FallenAngel* · 1 decade ago
Please don't go, there are actually thousands of people who love you, me included, please, stay strong. <3<3
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two* · 1 decade ago
Dalton you can't go, I need you<3
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DarkChocolateEyes · 1 decade ago
Please stay strong. <3
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phee* · 1 decade ago
You are one of my favourite wittians here on witty, please don't leave, but if you do, don't commit. You are worth too much <3
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Miluiel* · 1 decade ago
I'm not going to try to convince you out of anything because it probably won't do anything. But we love you. I love you.
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theawkwardauthor · 1 decade ago
Please stay strong. Please stay with us. We love you soo much. </3
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
Dalton, please stay strong. Please.
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ErinRAWR · 1 decade ago
I remember a few months back when my wrists were always stained and I was never happy. You pulled me through it. You may not remember it, maybe it didn't mean very much to you, but you saved me. I barely knew you and you stood by me and listened to me. If you leave, I can honestly say the world would loose an angel. You were there for me when nobody else was. Honestly, I probably wouldn't be alive if it wasn't for you.
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Rainbow185 · 1 decade ago
Don't leave! Stay strong! You are worth it like your heart :)
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SparksFly34 · 1 decade ago
I bet you think I'm annoying huh? Commenting on everything you post? Dalton I can't help it. Whenever I see something like this from you I feel like my heart stops. You mean so much to me and I can imagine that you are very important to others that you don't even realize yet.
No I do not understand your pain, I cannot tell you "I know how you feel" or "stay strong" because I believe pain goes so much deeper than that. There is nothing you or I can do to make the past fade away, but you can change your future.
So I'm gonna tell you a story okay? It's about this guy named Dalton. He's 22 years old, and beating those demons that hurt him most on his birthday. One day, he met this guy, and as soon as he saw him his heart skipped a beat. What Dalton didnt know is that this guy felt the same exact thing. Soon him and Dalton became very close, and he accepted Dalton's past and loved him even more because of the fact that he was strong enough to survive. Their bond became so strong that they were almost never apart. They leaned on eachother through all of their pain. Even his son saw that his Dad was so much happier, like he'd never seen before. And well, as future went on Dalton and this nameless man (for now) took the world by storm. The love that they shared was too strong to be broken.
Just imagine, sharing this scary life with someone. I bet it's amazing.
I love you darlingā¤ I hope I'm not too late.
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doublesidedice · 1 decade ago
Please don't leave. A lot people need you here. I know I'd be a mess for weeks and so would many people. Teyd be making quotes about how amazing you are and saying how they always loved you. If I were with you I'd stop you and all, but I'm not. All I can do is say I care and hope you believe me. Please stay strong. Don't leave <3
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Butterbear · 1 decade ago
Stay strong please c: <3
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_livelife · 1 decade ago
stay strong, don't leave! it gets better<3<3
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