78 faves · 23 comments · Feb 25, 2013 7:34pm
Melrose*
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1 decade ago
You're too sassy. Omfg. I love it.
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★♡flying high♥☆*
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1 decade ago
Love this story
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EssRox
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1 decade ago
Some of us are silent readers :3
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Shannon*
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1 decade ago
I don't know what to say other than good job. I've always loved your writing and I always will. And reading your little whatever it's called at the bottom... yea times like those are when I wish we were friends. But I'm awkward and you'd probably think I'm weird so nevermind... good writing, see you next chapter!
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gowitty1
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1 decade ago
we suk at feedback?lol u expect 2 much i mean dont take me the wrong way but most ppl give u great feedbqck cuz ur stories r great but dont u think ur going overboard.u cqnt exactly force ppl for feedback
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Melrose*
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1 decade ago
Learn to spell.
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xxHelloLovelyxx
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1 decade ago
lol melanie i love you. why didn't i see this before now.
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Melrose*
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1 decade ago
I honestly don't even understand how someone can say that using q's for a's is even remotely okay.
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gowitty1
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1 decade ago
i know how to spell ,but this is the internet not a place to apply correct use of grammar and punctuation
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Melrose*
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1 decade ago
Well when you use a q in place of an a it males me question if you actually own a brain.
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gowitty1
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1 decade ago
males?maybe you should learn to spell rather than picking others mistakes,and thanks you darling for finding that .You sure do know how to fix my mistake but not urs
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Melrose*
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1 decade ago
That was auto correct on my phone.
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Little Wolf*
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1 decade ago
I think this is my favourite chapter. Billy is my new favourite character. I don't know... But there's something about him that appeals to me. He better not die. Great story, I read it as much as you post.
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idkomg123
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1 decade ago
I LOVE THIS ASDFGHJKL EMOTIONS
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iamaawesomedinosaurx3
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1 decade ago
NO I AM THE #1 FAN -_-
buuut anyways!
i love the story! <3
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WhoThatGirl
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1 decade ago
WE SUCK AT FEEDBACK?? I AM OFFENDED. I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. GAHHH.
~#1 Fan!
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katiebug1115
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1 decade ago
THE FEEDBACK QUEEN IS BACK! I love the story though, because it almost makes me cry! Not good, because I don't try.
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AlpacaPerson
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1 decade ago
The story is great but "you only get one chapter tonight because you guys actually suck at giving feedback. You want two chapters tomorrow night? Yeah? Prove it." That's really rude.
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DⒶYϟ ◊F DIϟⒶϟTE®*
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1 decade ago
Oh come on. Witty is full of opinionated people. She's just telling the truth. We do suck at feedback.
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AlpacaPerson
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1 decade ago
Yea I'm just sharing my opinion too
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Jersey_Girl
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1 decade ago
ohmylordddd i love this story i literally come on like every ten minutes to check if its up or not
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runningislife*
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1 decade ago
OMG THIS IS AMAZING. I WANT 2 CHAPTERS. lyk naow.
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yazgirl1 · 1 decade ago
Love. Your. Story :):) please keep writing it. It's really good :D
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