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 Silence Is Golden, Speaking Is Priceless ♥
 
Avalaya's P.O.V
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''I promise you'll love it,'' he smiled a breathtaking smile at me. I loved him, I loved him a lot.
''I'm sure I will, what's the occasion? Its no one's birthday or an-''
''Do I need a special occasion to treat my girlfriend to dinner?'' he asked.
''Nop,'' I replied popping the 'P'. ''I'm so excited, I get to start working tomorrow.'' I had been going university to be a high school teacher for the past five years and tomorrow was my first day at work.
''I'm excited for you, Ava,'' he told me. We arrived at a fancy restaurant ten minutes later. ''You mentioned this place last week, so I thought why not.'' I smiled.
''Awesome! Let's go in.'' I flattened my black dress and we entered the restaurant and went to the front desk. I hummed as he got our reservations and we took a seat at our table.
''Hello, I'm Jamie and I'll be your waitress for the evening, here are your menus, can I get you anything to drink?'' A lady in her late-twentines asked with a bored expression on her tanned face.
''I'll have a water,'' I said.
''And I'll have a coke,'' he told her. We talked as our food came, soon we were waiting for our desert.
''I love you,'' I blurted out randomly.
''I love you too.''
''Good.''
Suddenly he dropped to one knee, he was holding a small box with a diamond ring inside. Bystanders gasped and some even 'awhed' when they saw him. ''Avalaya, baby, I love you. I always have, we've been together for 3 years now and I'm ready to take the next step, I want you to be mine, so Ava, will you marry me?'' Happy tears flooded my eyes.
''Yes, yes, yes!'' I cried out, happily. He slipped the ring onto my finger and put his lips to mine. The people around us cheered and I smiled into the kiss.
After we finished at the restaurant, we drove to our new apartment and as we walked in, he turned me around and kissed me. We got ready for bed and lay in bed.
'You are so beautiful,'' he murmured looking into my eyes. '''I love you.''
''I love you too.''
''I can't wait for you to be mine,'' he smiled.
''Me either.''
''Then I won't need to worry about anybody thinking they could have you.'' Before I could reply he put his lips to mine, his tongue swiping my bottom lip before entering my mouth. We had been making out for a good twenty minutes before we separated.
''Good night,'' I said sleepily.
''Night, Avalaya.''

Before drifting off to sleep I muttered, ''I can't wait to be Mrs Marco Loket.'


Comment for a reemmmiinnnddeeerrr c; 
Teaser: I was shocked to see who it was. 

{A/N: I'm bbbaaccckkkk! I wasn't even gone for a week but anyway. I hope you like this chapter && nop, she isn't with Carson anymore. It's five years in the future if you hadn't realised. If you've got any questions, feel free to ask! Oh & I don't know if I'll be able to do all the notifications before I have to go somewhere, so if you get your notification a little late, I'm sorry. } 

*Sequel to I'll mouth, "I love you."*
 
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♥ Silence Is Golden, Speaking Is Priceless ♥ Avalaya's

215 faves · 68 comments · Aug 17, 2012 7:54pm

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SkylarJessica13 · 1 decade ago
YEEESSSSSSSS!!! I'm so excited:) notify please?:) <3
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JLewis022500 · 1 decade ago
Reminder
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xocatherineee4 · 1 decade ago
reminder:)
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paigeobiee · 1 decade ago
reminder

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$* · 1 decade ago
Reminder please! I love your story, it's amazing!
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randi* · 1 decade ago
WHAT


reminder
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xmarsophxo · 1 decade ago
:O
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Harley91594 · 1 decade ago
Will Carson play a role in this at all? I'm curious about Marco.
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imjustsomegirl · 1 decade ago
Notifythis is a greatstory! You will be one of those people who everyone is on the back of bugging you to update!!! So notify me <3
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blair waldorf* · 1 decade ago
YAY, IT'S HERE♥
I'VE BEEN WAITING LIKE FOREVER WHERE'VE YOU BEEN?!?! :@
I'M SO MAD AT YOU. HMPHH.
YOU'RE GETTING THE SILENT TREATMENT. :P
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JK, WHO CAN STAY MAD AT YOU?
lol, sorry for me being stupid up there^
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER ASDFGHJKL I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT ONE!♥
I don't mind if the reminder is late, as long as I can get one! :D ^.^
I bet the teaser is about Carson. I hate Carson now! How could he get Lacy pregnant?!
So now I like Marco.
Haha :P
Reminder please, I'm so excited for the next chapter!♥
I can already tell this story is going to be amazing(:
(sorry for the long comment :$)
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jblover10105 · 1 decade ago
Reminder please
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Farnsworthy · 1 decade ago
I'm so confused, explain in the next chapter or so.. Notify please.
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theglassbutterfly · 1 decade ago
Will you notify me?
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OzzyPavy · 1 decade ago
I'm kinda confused but I want to know what happened between Ava and Carson
boooo Marco
reminder please c:
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marebearj · 1 decade ago
WHATS THIS NONSENSE!
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vrdahl · 1 decade ago
Are you gonna explain what happened between Carson and Ava in a chapter..?
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none* · 1 decade ago
Can i have a reminder plz? and poor Carson....
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Ralph* · 1 decade ago
I'd love a reminder! Thankyousomuch, xoxo. <3
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flossydossy · 1 decade ago
I like mario better than carson please keep reminding me ;)
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I* · 1 decade ago
Hewo!!!!!
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