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Only when I'm Taken
 another fan fiction of 1D ♥ ♥ chapter thirty-six

A year later
So let me catch you up on a few things. Zayn and I are friends. Close friends, that's all. Liam and I are a couple. Officialy. Kara gave birth to a girl. Harry and Kara named her Rosie. Louis and Madison are still together. Niall has fell in love with Anne. Remember that girl that Liam liked? Yeah, her. 
"Where are we going?" I smile as Liam covers my eyes with his hands.
"You'll see." He whispers. 

He stops walking. "Okay, wait until I say so."
I hear him mumble to himself. 
"Okay. Open your eyes." He says.
I open my eyes and smile. There are rose petals covering the floor. Romantic lights dangling from the ceiling. He is on one knee and I start bawling.
"I love you, Tatiana. Will you marry me?" He smiles.
"Yes! Of course, oh my gosh." I smile and kiss him.
-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-
Months later
"I can't believe this." I smile as Madison zips my dress.
"Well believe it. It's happening." Kara smiles at me.
The music starts playing and I wait to walk down the aisle. 
Finally, it's my turn. I quickly walk and meet Liam.
"You're beautiful." He mouths.
I smile and grab his hands.
We say our vows and all that. 
"You may kiss your bride." The priest says.
I smile and wrap my arms around Liam's neck. We kiss and everyone claps.
We run down the aisle hand in hand. 
Everyone is having so much fun at the reception. Harry and Louis are doing the inbetweeners dance. Liam and Madison are dancing with little Rosie. Kara and Niall are just jumping around. It's amazing. 
Zayn comes up to me.
"Congrats." He smiles and hugs me.
"Thanks." I smile.
"Remember that day I came home from the hospital?" He bites his lip.
I nod. "Yeah. What about it?"
"Well you said you were my girlfriend." He says.
I nod. "Right."
"And I didn't remember anything about it." He continues.
"And?" I raise an eyebrow.
"Well now I remember. And now that I do, I'm in love with you." He sighs.
The end.
-.-.-.-.-..--
Haha, cliffhanger. Should I make a part two? Or should I do another story?
What did you guys think?
I love when people comment, okay. So comment. 
But really. Should there be a part two?
Should I make another fanfic?
Should I make a story that isn't a fanfic?




 

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Only when I'm Taken another fan fiction of 1D ♥ ♥

36 faves · 22 comments · Aug 15, 2012 12:27pm

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NinaPayne · 1 decade ago
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_just_another_insercure_girl_ · 1 decade ago
PART 2!!
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WhoThatGirl · 1 decade ago
PART 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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MeMyselfandHim · 1 decade ago
Part 2 PLEASE!! I'm DYING HERE. <3
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akoc471 · 1 decade ago
PART 2222222!!!!!!!!!! I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!! IT IS SO GOOD I NEVER WANT IT TO END!!!!1
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DarkRoomWithEyes · 1 decade ago
part two!(:
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XxVasHappeninxX · 1 decade ago
PART 2 :O
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justxanotherxsecret · 1 decade ago
You left me broken inside :'( haha </3
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invisabledinosaurs happy witty anniversary! · 1 decade ago
No keep making fan-fics!!! And yes make a part two!
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Directionette · 1 decade ago
please make a part two!!
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cmayl11 · 1 decade ago
I REALLY want a part two. But a good writer will leave the reader thinking. And leave them WANTING a part Two. So i can't believe i'm going to day this, But i don't think you should but out a part two. I think you should just do another story.
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loveonedirectionsomuch123 · 1 decade ago
PART 2 defo!!!
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flossydossy · 1 decade ago
Part 2!!!
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penguinlova · 1 decade ago
PART TWO!!!
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iloveme97 · 1 decade ago
You should totally make a part two!!! You're a great writer :)
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overuseILOVEU · 1 decade ago
part two must happen!!! but if you can't think of a plot then erm....i have no idea. but it's an amazing story and you can't just leave us all hanging!
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cropacuddles22 · 1 decade ago
PART TWOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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amillionsecretsx3 · 1 decade ago
problem; if there's a part two idk what the plot will be like. haha.
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juliaissmexy · 1 decade ago
part 2 is needed omg this is soooooo sad
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brainysmurf123 · 1 decade ago
I think a part two is needed..very much
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