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  1. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    December 8, 2012 9:29pm EST
    Never let the fear of striking out, keep you from playing the game.

  2. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    October 12, 2012 12:08am EDT
    Hey!! People who are reading my story "I wanna save YOU"
    sorry I haven't posted in a while.. my parents took away my laptop so I'm on my cellphone..
    If you're willing to wait that's great but if you don't want to..
    I understand
    But I'm getting it back soon
    so hang in there guys!!
    Thanks!!

  3. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    October 12, 2012 12:06am EDT
    I washed my cuts with soap.
    it stung like hell.
    But only for a few seconds...
    Then I realized..
    Life is like a cut..
    when its rough it hurts.
    when you try to fix it, it stings.
    But in the end....
    It's all
    okay.
    So please.
    stay strong

  4. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    September 30, 2012 9:55pm EDT
    When dreaming with a broken heart…
    Waking up is the
    hardest part...
    -Liam Payne

  5. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    September 22, 2012 1:49pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 12
    Zayn
    Niall and Maia came stomping down the stairs.
    I looked at them and before I could say anything Liam took the words right from my mouth,
    "What the hell happened up there?"
    Niall is a mess with dry tears on his naturally red cheeks that were now a fire red..more unusual.
    "Nothing it was just an accident with a vase."
    Okay at least nobody got hurt....right?
    With that, Niall and Maia walked into the kitchen...where else would Niall go?
    After he finished making his sandwhich he got the car keys and took Maia and left.
    I turned to Zoe.
    "Want to go to my room to watch a movie?"
    She nodded her head and smiled shyly.
    Score.
    I jumped off the couch and grabbed her hand.
    "We are going upstairs to watch a movie...PLEASE don't bother us."
    I announced.
    "Don't have TO much 'fun' up there..."
    Liam winked.
    Zoe and I laughed and said
    "yes daddy."
    and winked back.
    After laughing for a minute or two we were walking to the kitchen for popcorn.
    "What movie do you want to watch"
    I asked.
    "Umm, maybe........a scary one?"
    Zoe suggested with a wink.
    "No....How about a cute movie like finding Nemo or something?"
    I laughed.
    She nodded.
    I leaned over to her and placed my hands on the edge of the counter and was an inch away from her face.
    "I love you."
    I was leaning in to kiss her when we were cut off by the microwave beeping to let us know our popcorn was done.
    Zoe
    Zayn leads me up the winding stair case with a bowl of popcorn in his hand.
    We reach the top of the stairs when he turned around and said,
    "So what movie do you want to watch?"
    "umm...Finding Nemo!"
    "Alrightt...on one condition.."
    I shrug
    "okay, what?"
    "you have to kiss me."
    I nodded and he leaned in with his eyes closed.
    I leaned in halfway and before i kissesd him i ran under his arm and into his room.
    "HEY! CHEATER!"
    he laughed.
    I laughed back.
    "Oh well! Now you have to watch Finding Nemo with me!"
    "No I don't...you didn't kiss me."
    He says standing in the doorway.
    I walk over to him and take the bowl of popcorn and set it on the dresser, I slide my arms around his neck and he slides his around my waist.
    I get on my tip-toes, and close my eyes.
    I give him an eskimo kiss first, rubbing our noses together for a second and I smile.
    I lean back a little and smile and so does he.
    Then I lean in as close as I can and say,
    "I love you too"
    I kiss him on his soft lips.
    We are standing in the doorway for a good three minutes just kissing...
    I break the kiss and get off my tip-toes and let go of his neck.
    "Now can you watch the movie with me?"
    "Why wouldn't I?"
    He smirked.
    Niall
    We were almost there.
    Ten more minutes and then i can show her.
    I can't wait any longer!
    "So Maia."
    I broke the silence.
    "So Niall."
    she smiled.
    "Sorry about our date getting unexpectedley cancelled.."
    "Why say sorry? Your friends got seriously injured!"
    She is so sweet.
    "Well consider this a....do-over date."
    I said as I pulled into the grass.
    I parked the car and got out, went to her side of the car and opened the door for her.
    She smiled.
    "You are such a gentleman."
    I laughed.
    The headlights to the car went off and everything was dark, but I knew my way around here.
    Maia
    He opened my door for me.
    "You are such a gentleman."
    He laughs.
    I took his hand and hopped out of the car.
    The headlights went off and everything was dark and I didn't know where I was.
    "Niall?!"
    I couldn't see and he let go of my hand.
    I spoke again in the silence.
    "I'm scared, it's so dark!"
    I reached for his hand, it was pitch black so i couldn't see anything.
    "Just follow my voice."
    He whispers in my ear.
    He trails his hands down my arms until he reaches my hands.
    He takes hold of my hand and starts to walk.
    "Niall how do you know where you are going?"
    I laugh nervously.
    "I just do."
    He says.
    As we are walking I hear water running.
    "Niall?"
    I say, but he doesn't hear me, the water is to loud.
    This time I shout.
    "NIALL!?"
    We walk under an arch..I guess we were in a cave...
    alright.
    The full moons reflection cascades along the water.
    This is so beautiful.
    There is a lake with a huge, beautiful waterfall.
    Niall still has my hand intertwined in his.
    He leads me behind the waterfall to a table in the moonlight.
    "Niall..What is this place?"
    it's quiet now, even though it seems so loud.
    My voices bounces off the walls of another cave that sparkles whenever I move.
    "It's my getaway.."
    He says staring into my eyes.
    He turns around to the table and pulls a chair out for me and i sit down.
    He sits down and looks at me resting his head on his fist.
    "Maia, I know we have only known each other for a few days, but I really..Really....Like you..."
    What was he doing?
    He went on.
    "I wanted to officialy ask you a question."
    This is getting weird..but in a good way.
    "What??"
    "Will you be my girlfriend?"
    --------------------------------------------------------------
    authors note
    Oh my god guys, i cannot explain how sorry I am for posting this so freaking late
    Anyways...ohhhh things are heating up between Zoe and Zayn!!!
    will they stay together?
    Or will everything fall apart again like the Xfactor?
    wait and see
    and Oh my gosh guys Maia and Niall?
    theu are so cute!
    but what will Maia say to niall?!
    figure it outtt
    if you want too.
    Teaser:
    "Why would you do this to me..again.."
    Tears are down her face.
    "Wait! It's not what it looks like!!"
    She packs her things while I am talking.
    "Where are you going.."
    "Back to london..Goodbye"
    she leads me to the door and slams it in my face..
    What just happened.
    *************
    OH NO....Whats going on!?!?
    you will have to find out who did what and whyy
    it'll be up tonight
    -Sophie

  6. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    September 21, 2012 12:50am EDT
    SO
    in What Makes You Beautiful
    Louis got pulled over for driving...a little too slow.
    Live While We're Young:
    WHAT NOW COPS.

  7. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    September 9, 2012 1:30am EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 11
    Maia
    We were all sitting downstairs on the couches and some on the floor and Niall and I were in the kitchen..
    "Maia, I really like you."
    I blush and walk to the sink.
    "Are you sure?"
    I tease.
    I don't see him but he sneaks up behind me and wraps his arms around my waist,
    "Yes I'm sure.. Would I be doing this if I wasnt?"
    We smiled.
    I turned around in his arms.
    He was leaning in to kiss me when we heard glass breaking.
    What the hell?
    We ran up the stairs into the room.
    Niall
    I was about to kiss her.
    We heard glass breaking we ran up the stairs.
    I run into the room. Blood and glass, but no one is here.
    I rush to the bed and find a note.
    sorry
    I won't be anymore trouble to you people.
    It wasn't signed but we knew who it was from.
    Harry.
    Where did he go?!
    I ran to the bathroom to see a blade and drops of blood leading to the bath tub..
    I slowly approach the curtain and slowly slide it back.....
    Louis
    I ran into Harrys room...What the hell happened in here.
    I go to the bathroom where I see Niall at the tub pulling the curtain back.
    he pulls it back and what we saw brought us both to tears, i grabbed Niall and we hugged each other.
    "HARRY!"
    I cry.
    "Noo"
    Harry
    I am sleeping in the tub.
    I was writing on my arm with red ink but it got smudged and the pen exploded.
    i did accidentaly cut my arm on a shard of pen.
    it hurt really bad so i smashed into a vase on the dresser and I ran to the bathroom and got in the tub to clean myself off.
    I guess I dosed off because I awoke to Louis and Niall crying.
    What the......
    "Can you people shutup?"
    I say groggily.
    I look up to them and squint because the light is shining in my eyes
    "Harry?"
    Louis sniffs and wipes his cherry red nose.
    "what..."
    I say turning my head away from Louis.
    "You're okay?!"
    He gets on his knees and hugs me and kisses me on the cheek.
    I push him away.
    "Why wouldn't I be...."
    I cross my arms.
    "We thought you commiteed suicide.... You cant blame us, there is broken glass in your bedroom and red liquid all over the place and you are sleeping in the tub surrounded by red water."
    Niall and Lou explain together.
    I turn to Louis and start to bawl.
    "Louis I'm Sorrry i was so mad i was so tired and I didn't know what was going on and yeah i was terribly mad but I thought about it and I am so sorry, I never meant to ruin our friendship!"
    I get up out of the water and hug Louis burrowing my head into his shoulder.
    He strokes my wet curls and tries to calm me.
    "Niall can you give us a minute?"
    Louis shoos Niall.
    "Louis, I'm sorry..."
    My clothes are soaked.
    "Harry it's okay..I knew you would forgive me eventually."
    I look at him and smile.
    "It's because we love each other to much."
    He nods and laughs.
    Niall
    Louis shoos me.
    Alright..
    I lead Maia out and explained what all of this was.
    We got downstairs and everyone was staring at us because of my tears and red nose.
    "The hell happened up there?!"
    Yelled Alexa.
    "Everything is okay, just an accident."
    I walk into the kitchen and continue making me sandwhich.
    when i am done making the sandwhich I stuff it in my mouth and gesture Maia to follow me.
    I walk to the car grabbing my coat and the keys.
    I got into the car and started to eat the sandwhich.
    "Is there a reason we are sitting in this car while you are eating a sandwhich?"
    Maia giggles.
    I nod and start the car with less than half a sandwhich in my mouth.
    I sit there for a minute until I finish my food in record time.
    "We are going somewhere special."
    I say swallowing my last bite.
    "Well where?"
    She looks out the window at the break in the clouds.
    I shrug,
    "I guess we will find out."
    Louis
    Harry and I are standing there and he is soaked.
    Great now I have to change my pajamas...
    "I thought you killed yourself."
    I sighed.
    "I was about to Louis, I really was."
    i broke the hug and looked at him.
    "......what....."
    I shook my head thinking I did not just hear that.
    "I stopped because I remembered what you would do."
    He started to cry again.
    "Harry, no....don't even say that...I do not want to hear that you were close to killing yourself!"
    Harry looked at me, sat down and curled up in a ball and was screaming sorry and that he knew it was wrong..
    I didn't know what to do to help.
    I just sat on the floor with him and rubbed his back.
    "Harry...HARRY, please.....please just.....just calm down, I can't stand to see you like this...."
    He looked at me and nodded.
    "Come on boy, we need to get you in some clean clothes....you are sleeping with me tonight."
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Authors Note!
    HELLO
    Where is Niall taking Maia??
    Now in a couple chapters before i brought Zoe and Zayn back together and now they will be back..in the next chapterrrr lol but i dont know what to do with them, should they be together or not?
    Comment what you think!!!!
    Okay so i was watching a video where the boys change the words to the songs and in one of them Harry changes them to 'It's a little to hot take off your clothesss!' and now i can't sing that song without singing that line like that! lol that stinks.
    anyway
    Teaser.
    "I'm scared, it's so dark!"
    I reached for his hand, it was pitch black so I couldn't see anything.
    "Just follow my voice."
    where are these people and more importantly who are they?!
    you will see ;P
    take a guess...go on... comment what you think.
    -Sophie

  8. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    September 7, 2012 12:50am EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 10
    Harry
    "What the bloody hell is going on here?!"
    I walk down the stairs to see Zayn with a death grip on Louis.
    I cannot believe he betrayed me.
    Who knew Zayn had that in him. I was one of his best friends.
    Zayn let go of Lou and turned to me awkwardly.
    Zayn
    "Listen Harry, Just because you have to be an idiot for not forgiving Lou.. Doesnt mean we dont have to..You know you love him to death and so do we. But if you want to be mad, so be it, you be mad and then dont talk to Louis for however long you want...Nobody cares..well i mean we do care, it's just that you dont have to make us ignore someone we love just because you are mad...Maybe you dont have to talk to him but maybe all of the rest of us want to. Raise your hand if you agree with me."
    Everyone looked back and fourth between Harry and I for a minute before looking down at their feet.
    Niall was first...He awkwardly rose his left hand into the air.
    Next was Liam.
    Then Melissa. She shot her hand up and stared at Louis.
    After was Courtney.
    Alexa and Erin decided it was true, so their hands slowly rose high above their heads, Alexa sadly turned to Harry.
    Maia and Lia didn't know us very well...yet but they still agreed with me.
    Zoe got up and came to my side and rose her hand.
    Maddy and Laila rose their hands too.
    Amy was hesitant looking from Harry to me back to Harry and then to me again.
    She got up and went over to Hazza and kept her hand down.
    I rose my hand..
    I looked behind me and even Louis put his hand up.
    "Louis, not helping."
    "Sorry."
    He put his hand down like an awkward potato.
    "Alright....I see how it is." Harry sniffled and smiled at Amy.
    "Let's go upstairs love, and leave all the backstabbers to their business."
    He glared at Louis.
    Louis shed a tear and ran after Harry.
    "Harry wait!"
    Up the stairs he went..
    Bad idea Lou....Bad idea.
    Louis
    He ran to his room, of course I ran after him.....
    I had to run after him....I just had to.
    "Harry!"
    He was in his room...Packing a suitcase?
    I grabbed his shoulder flipping him around to face me, he looked at his feet.
    "Where are you going?"
    He looked at me.
    "Home."
    "I'm going Home."
    He repeated.
    Home? He can't go home! He is my bestfriend.
    "You aren't leaving this hotel."
    I say sternly.
    He looked at me and said
    "want to bet?"
    He went back to his suitcase and Kept packing.
    "Harry, you cant leave.....You just can't."
    "I can and I will."
    He mumbled.
    I turned to Amy.
    I said over my shoulder.
    "Fine...Just know if you go...you wont ever see me again."
    I walked out glaring at Amy.
    Amy
    I saw Louis mouth the words
    'Help me'
    and he walked out.
    I didnt want to go on Harry's side, but he is my bestfriend and no one was supporting him.
    I turned to Harry who was angrly shoving clothes in his suitcase.
    "Harry?"
    "What."
    "Look at me a second."
    He stopped with boxers in his hand and turned to me with a swish of his blazer he had been wearing for two days now.
    gross.
    "You can't leave! I'm going to miss you to much"
    "No you won't." he grins.
    "What are you talking about Harry?"
    "You won't miss me because you are coming with me!!" He shouts.
    He runs to me an hugs me.
    I don't hug him back.
    Go back home with him??
    I couldn't possibly just pick up and leave..
    "Harry.." I mumble into is chest.
    He lets go and holds my shoulders.
    "I can't just pick up and leave...and neither can you."
    I shed a tear.
    "Amy! I HAVE TO GO! i have no other choice!"
    He yells at me.
    "alright...there is no need to shout at me."
    "Sorry..." He huffs.
    I walk to his suitcase and start to unpack it for him.
    "Amy STOP! I am going home whether you like it or not...With OR without you."
    I throw his suitcase to the floor.
    "FINE...You want to ruin yet another friendship.....Really? Fine by me....That's great Harry we are bestfriends since preschool and now you want to throw that all away for some person who got all of us mad for maybe an hour and we got over it but you....you just hate his guts now....For some reason you just now hate everyone.....Well count me with everyone else too because this time you messed up.."
    He interrupts
    "Amy..I-"
    "IM...Im not finished. Im not finished,' I poke him in the shoulder really hard.. He rubs it and says ow.
    ,'You LOVE Louis....He is like a brother to you! a freaking brother! Heck if i know, he could be more than a friend for anyone knows!' I chuckle ' But if you want to throw that alll away because of one little mistake....it's your loss, not his, because he has all of us behind him, but it will be your loss and i will feel sorry for you and i will say hello but if you walk out now....NOTHING and I mean NOTHING will EVER be the same between you and me or you and Louis or you and anyone for god sakes...You really want to jeoperdize friendships because of something so little you wont even care when you land in london or cheshire or where ever the hell you're going. Fine...Fine...if that is what you really want.....Then go, I won't stop you...Just know..you will be out of the band the very second you step on that plane."
    I grab my elbows, sigh and walk out trying so hard not to cry.
    I slam the door shut and walk into Louis who was apparently listening to the whole thing. I smile at him and keep walking.
    Louis
    I look at my phone.
    1:27
    It's late i better get some sleep.
    I jump to my room, hop into my PJ's and scram into my huge bed and shut me eyes.
    Just as I fell asleep,
    I heard glass breaking.
    What the.....
    -----------------------------------------------------
    Authors note!
    Hey people
    What do you think is going to happen with harry!
    and what the heck was the glass thing at the end?
    figure it out in the next chapter!!
    teaser:
    I run into the room. Blood and glass, but no one is here.
    Ohh shaaat whats going to happppen!?!?!?!
    okay well adios muchas!
    -Sophie

  9. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    September 3, 2012 1:23pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 9
    Harry
    After Alexa and I spent the night at the cafeteria, I went to go check on Louis. I overheard him and Lottie chatting. I didnt want to interrupt them, so I stood ouside the door with Alexa.
    "Lottie, it's not that easy to come out and say 'Oh i got my memory back yesterday and now i am faking.' Do you understand how mad they will be?!"
    Louis...Is lying?
    How could he?
    I walk right into the room not caring what they had to say, I was to angry at that point.
    "LOUIS!" I scream waking up Lia and Liam.
    "How could you!?" I start crying.
    "Harry, calm down.." Lottie comes up to me.
    I push her to the side.
    "You were my BEST friend...."
    "Harry, I still am."
    He reaches out to me.
    "NO LOUIS........No..Just no."
    I back away.
    How could he?
    No..How DARE he?
    "How dare you..." I get up and slam the door on the way out.
    Louis
    He slammed the door and I jumped, sighed and covered my face with my hands.
    "Lottie..What have i done?"
    I look over to Liam.
    "Liam-"
    "No Louis...Don't"
    He turns and talks to Lia, I can see the tears start to roll down his face.
    What have I done?
    Niall
    Harry walks in the cafeteria, grabs his keys and tells us to come on immediatley.
    "What's going on?" Melissa and Amy say.
    "He remembers.." Harry walks out.
    "Well that's a miracle!" I yell
    Harry turns to me, leans on the table and sternly says,
    "No...It's not."
    He gets off the table and leaves.
    I look around to Zayn, Zoe and the rest of the girls and shrug.
    We get up and leave with him.
    I'm the first to the car. I get into the passengers seat,
    "Harry....What's going on...Tell me."
    Harry Grabs the steering wheel and looks down, trying not to cry.
    "I over heard Louis talking to Lottie....He got his memory back yesterday before we got there...He never actually forgot."
    He has been lying to us this whole time..
    I can't believe this.
    Why would Louis..Of all people...Do that to us?
    Two Days Later
    Louis
    The only person who has come to visit and talk to me is Lottie. Not even Liam has talked to me and he is stuck in the same room as me.
    We are going home tonight.
    This should be fun.....
    What am I going to do...More importantly what am I going to say?
    I feel bad for what I did. I let my smile turn upside down, just like my life.
    I get to the house..
    "Hey guys, and girls...I'm home!"
    Everyone is on the couch on their phones or watching the telly...Only Melissa and Niall look up at me..No smiles just glares.
    Well that hurt.
    I saw Harry look up at Melissa and shake his head...
    What's going on with them?
    Melissa
    Louis' home..
    I text Harry from across the room.
    Me:
    Come on, you know he didn't mean it.
    Harry:
    If he didnt mean it..why'd he do it?!
    I looked at him and shrugged. He shakes his head.
    Harry:
    Just dont talk to him.... AT ALL.
    Me:
    But Harry..I Love him..........and so do you....I know youre mad but you love him....You know you can't deny that....even if you wanted to...
    He looked at me and I saw tears in his eyes..Poor Harry. He looked down trying not to cry.
    He gets up and goes up to his room.
    Harry
    I get up and go to my room because I'm a mess and I'm about to start crying. I do the adult thing..maybe not but still...I leave the room.
    As I am walking up the stairs I hear chatter.
    Amy
    After Harry was out of sight we all started whispering.
    "Lia, what do we do....We all cant just sit here and not talk to Louis."
    She shrugs
    "I don't know Amy..I wish we could talk to him but we would be betraying Harry..He is even making Melissa ignore him....It's terrible."
    She looks to Liam and frowns then looks to Louis. He shakes his and and sits next to her putting his arm around her shoulders.
    I turn to Alexa and Maia.
    "I don't know if I can handle not talking to Louis. He is one of my bestfriends."
    They shrug.. I hate shrugging...
    Zayn
    I am so angry at louis but at the same time I want to hug him and kiss him beacause he is okay..
    I wish....
    I don't just have to wish you know..
    This is all just a bump in the rollercoaster that is life...
    I took my chance on that note.
    "LOUIS!! You scared me half to freaking death! I missed you! I don't care you were faking. I care that you are okay and that you rememeber now!!!" I run to him and hug him until he is blue in the face.
    I guess Harry heard the comotion because the next thing I know he is at the bottom of the steps saying
    "What the bloody hell is going on here?!"
    He glares at me and I release my death grip on Louis and turn to him.
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Authours note!
    SORRY SORRY SORRY SOOOO SOOO SOOO SORRY!!!!
    I have been way busy this week and weekend i just dont know what happened!!!
    i am going to write all day today for you guys now so it will last you a little while because i dont know how much i will be able to update because of school
    Bleghh i hate school :(
    again i am so very sorry this took so long
    it wont happen again, i promise!
    Want a teaser?
    here ya goo: He ran to his room, of course i ran after him...."Where are you going?!"
    He looked at me
    "I'm going home."
    Ohhh no who is it!?!?
    why are they going home!?
    figure it outt!!
    -Sophie.

  10. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    August 29, 2012 1:35am EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 8
    Lottie
    "Louis? No, this has to be wrong!" i scream at Harry.
    I looked at the telly and the news was on
    'A car has been hit by a drunk driver who has run a stop-sign. The two boys whose names are classified.......oh wait.....i have a note just a second........
    uh..Louis Tomlinson and Liam Payne.
    They seem to be okay but Louis Tomlinson has suffered from....'
    Harry shuts the telly off and i glare at him
    "HEY!" Why cant i know what my own brother suffers from!
    "What. I think its...uh...better....for you to umm.. go see him yourself." Harry states.
    "FINE! LET"S GO!" I yell
    I grab the keys to my car and harry gets in with me and we drive off to the hospital.
    Harry
    We got to the hospital after about thirty minutes in the car, Lottie was crying most of the time and I was crying because I couldn't bare to see her like that.
    When we go to the lobby of the hospital we went up to the nurse at the front desk and said we were family. We signed in and went up the elevator.
    "He is in room B213" I told her.
    We entered the room.
    Lottie ran to Louis and he looked scared for some reason.
    Louis
    "Umm, who are you?" I asked the girl laying on my lap.
    I didn't know who she was...She looked somewhat like me though.
    She was with that curly haired boy..What was his name?
    Harry.
    He took out his phone and called someone.
    I looked back to the girl on my lap.
    "Did you hear me? I asked who you were."
    She looked at me, her eyes were red and puffy and mascara was running down her cheeks..She was a mess.
    I felt bad.
    I was supposed to know her, but I don't.
    "I'm Lottie."
    Lottie.....Lottie......
    LOTTIE
    Lottie is my sister!!!
    "LOTTIE!" I scream
    I hug her and hold her tight.
    "You're my sister!" I scream
    She looks at me and cries so hard and smiles so big.
    "Yes! haha Yes..Yes...Yeah I am your sister..yes... " She smiles even more
    Harry
    I hear Louis scream Lottie's name and then I look over and see them hugging..
    He remembers her......
    I'm happy for them but it hurts to know I may have to 'get to know' him all over again.
    I start crying and go back to my conversation on the phone.
    "So um, yeah..Do you want to come to the hospital now? I really need the company...Louis just remembered Lottie..." I say slowly.
    "Yeah of course I will come...There isn't a place I'd rather be than with you Harry.." Alexa is so sweet.. I love her so much.
    We have been dating for about six months now.
    Alexa
    I put my hair up in a messy bun.
    I walk out the door in my pajamas, pullover sweatshirt and my ugg boots.
    I grab my keys and walk out the door.
    I drive twenty minuts to the hospital and meet Harry in the room.
    "Harry!" I hug him.
    He holds me tightly and I feel tears drop onto me and I feel his warm breath beating down on my neck. he sniffles and releases me.
    "Hi Alexa." He mumbles.
    I can tell he isn't in a great mood.. Obviously he isn't.. His best friend has long term memory loss.
    I look at Liam who is peacefully sleeping in bed.
    I walk over to Lottie and Louis.
    "Hi Louis..." I say shyly.
    He waves to me and says hello.
    I introduce myself and he tells me it's nice to meet me and Harry is lucky to have me.
    How does he know about Harry and I if he forgets who Harry is?
    "Oh I spend all my time here so um he basically knows everything..Almost everything about me again..." Harry laughs a little.
    I smile.
    Harry is so sweet, spending all his time here for his bestfriends.
    "Want to go down to the cafeteria to get some food? I haven't eaten all day." I frown.
    Harry nods, waves to Louis and Lottie and we then leave them behind.
    "So Harry.." I take his hand and walk close to him.
    "Yes Alexa?" He asks putting his arm around my waist.
    I smile.
    "I missed you."
    He smiles.
    "I missed you too, three weeks away from each other is to long."
    We get to the cafeteria and see the boys and the rest of the girls.
    Harry waves to them and so do I.
    Harry points to a table on the other side of the room.
    "Want to sit there love?"
    I nod and walk over there.
    we sit down and Harry gets us a drink to split and some fries too.
    He sets it down on the table and then sits down across from me. He stares into my eyes and smiles.
    "What?" I laugh.
    "Nothing." He shakes his head and he curves the ends of his mouth and makes a beautiful smile.
    "I just love you so much."
    We then spend the rest of the night laughing and talking at that one cafeteria table.
    It's a perfect date.
    Lottie
    "So now you are just faking long term memory loss?!"
    "YUP!"
    I slap him on the arm.
    "Louis! You can't do that!" I whisper.
    He shrugs.
    "The doctors know....Right?" I ask.
    He nods.
    "Of course they do Lottie."
    "Does Liam know?"
    He shakes his head.
    "Nope."
    "Wasn't he in the room when you told the doctor though?"
    He shakes his head again.
    "He was in the cafeteria."
    We both look over at liam who is sleeping.
    A girl is sitting next to him sleeping in a chair.
    I point to her.
    "Who is that?"
    He looks at her.
    "A girl Liam met at the diner before we almost died. She is awesome. Really sweet. The perfect match for Liam."
    I look back to Louis.
    "When are you going to tell the boys?"
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    Authors NOTE!
    SORRY this was so late! I had homework and I fell asleep after I got home. I had a busy day. Got lost like four times. Blegh.
    Anyways.....
    Can you believe Louis is faking!!
    Is that mean or do you think it's for a reason?!
    What is going to happen if the boys find out?!
    will they be mad or just reliefed that louis remembers?
    Teaser: "How dare you..." I get up and slam the door on my way out.
    ^^^
    oohh what's going on there??
    You will see tomorrow hopefully!!
    bye bye..
    sorry again.
    -Sophie

  11. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
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    August 27, 2012 11:08pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 7
    Doctor
    "They are in critical condition....I don't you want to see them yet." I try to explain to the three boys and Three girls frantically trying to pass the lobby.
    "Sir....If I might add......THEY ARE OUR FAMILY!" The blonde boy states.
    I look at them..They don't look anything alike from the two who got into the crash.
    "Are you sure?" I question.
    The blonde one's face got as red as a tomato.
    He came at me but the other two boys held him back.
    I jumped.
    Niall
    Of COURSE I went at him, he was question brotherhood. THAT IS NEVER OKAY.
    I love those two boys. They are like brothers.
    I hope they are okay.
    I hear voices behind me.
    "NIALL, HARRY, ZAYN!!" They all say at once.
    It's Courtney, Laila, Madeleine, and Erin. Amy comes running in shortly after.
    thank GOD they came.
    Madeleine
    I run up to Niall and hug him.
    I hold on tight, I haven't seen him in three weeks and now I get a call Liam and Louis were in a serious accident!?
    What's going on.
    "Is everything okay?!" I pant.
    He breaks from the hug.
    "DOES EVERYTHING SEEM OKAY?!?" He yells.
    "Niall CALM DOWN."
    He said the doctor wont let them see our friends.
    "Niall, stand back.. I got this."
    I walk right up to the doctor and say
    "Excuse me...Sir? You better let my friends in to see their brothers..No, they aren't blood related but they are damn well brothers at heart. They are a band..a pretty big one at that! and if you dont let them see their friends who have been seriously injured....They will sue you....Trust me."
    and i walk back to Niall and hug him again.
    Doctors face=Priceless.
    Harry
    I laugh a little through my tears because of what just happened with Maddy.
    The doctor lets us through and Niall runs..
    "What room are they in?!?!" Niall almost yells at the nurse.
    "second floor room b213..." She answers quietly.
    We all dash to the room.
    B210
    B211
    B212
    B213!!
    We chuck the door open.
    I am first into the room, I stop right in the doorway.
    I drop to the floor and tears flood out of my face like Niagra Falls.
    Liam is laying there, one arm in a cast and one leg.
    He is in a coma.
    Well at least I think he is.
    The doctor comes rushing on after us.
    "BOYS!! You may want to know Louis woke up and is fine but.." he trails off
    "BUT WHAT?!?!" I scream.. Louis wakes up.
    "Louis?"
    I walk up to him.
    Louis
    I wake up to someone screaming.
    It's a curly haired boy screaming at a doctor.
    "Louis?"
    He walks up to me..
    "How do you know my name?"
    I don't know him....
    This is a bit awkward.
    There are nine other people in the room.
    WHO ARE THEY.
    Harry
    I try to talk but I am all choked up....
    "Lou....d-don't......... you remember, me?"
    He shakes his head.
    He looks at the other people and points to Niall.
    Niall comes foward, tears in his eyes, on his shirt, and rolling down his cheeks...His hair is a mess..Heck, Niall himself is a mess...Not just his hair.
    Niall
    Louis points to me.
    Me?
    Why me?
    "You...Look familiar." He states.
    I start to bawl.
    I lean down on his bed.
    "Don't cry....Please don't cry."
    He rubs my back.
    I cry even more at this, he always comforted me like this when i was sad or upset about something.
    "LOUUUIS!!" I cry.
    "I'm here for you, even though I don't know you.....You all seem to know me. So, I am here for all of you.."
    Harry
    I go over to Liam and sit on the edge of the bed. I guess I woke him up with sitting down because next thing you know he says
    "Uhh, are you?"
    Berfore he could finish the doctor runs up to him and he starts to ask Liam all these question and of course with Liam, he gets them all right...
    You would think Liam would have lost his memory too but the police say Louis wasn't wearing a seatbelt and flew foward.
    Liam is always safe.. Classic Liam.
    "Harry?"
    He reaches out to me.
    I look at him.
    "Yeah bud?"
    He points to his arm.
    I see a number and at the bottom it says:
    Love LiaxX
    "You want me to call her?"
    Liam nods slowly.
    I let out a sigh of relief. Of course Liam would want me to call the girl to let her know of all this.
    I pull out my cell and dial her number.
    Ring......Ring.......Ring.......Ri-
    "Hello?" I hear a soft voice.
    "Uhh, yeah this is Harry...Harry Styles... I just wanted to say sorry Liam didn't call you...He was just in a serious car accident a few hours ago."
    "OH MY GOD!!! Is he okay?!?!"
    "Yeahh! He is..It's Louis that isn't." I frown.
    I continue.
    "You should come down and see him. He says he really wants you too." I smile.
    She says yes as quick as a fox and hangs up.
    Liam
    Harry hangs up with Lia and smiles at me.
    "She is on her way." He states.
    I smile and Lay my head back.
    I cannot believe this happened...Stupid drunk driver.
    He had a stop-sign!
    "How is Lou?" I question.
    I look over to him. He looks confused.
    "Hey Louis!"
    He looks to me.
    "Yes?"
    "Are you okay?!"
    "I think so....But...umm....Who are you?"
    I look to everyone in shock..
    WHAT?!
    "Why doesn't Louis remember us!?" I shout.
    The doctor speaks up.
    "He has long term memory loss."
    We all look to Louis with sad eyes.
    He just smiles and waves.
    Classic Louis.
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    oooooh NO!!
    what will happen to poor Louis?!
    Will he be okay?!
    AHH this is scarryyyy D:
    comment to notify.
    comment what you think will happen next.....
    SINCE i have school tomorrow this is the last chapter for tonight :( i wish school didnt start yet, i would stay up all night and write!!..
    stupid school..
    anyways..
    Teaser? I think no.. Not today..
    I let you all suffer hahahaha jkjk
    i just cant come up with one today.
    Night guys :)
    -Sophie

  12. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
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    August 27, 2012 8:50pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 6
    Niall
    She was about to say something when
    I kissed her.
    Sparks flew, fireworks were bursting...That was it, I had found my princess.
    Finally.
    I take my hand off her cheek and wrap it around her waist but I still remain holding her hand in mine.
    I feel her smile through the kiss.
    It's perfect.
    I think I may have just fallen in love.
    I smile too.
    Liam
    As I am walking back toward Niall and Louis I see Louis staring in Nialls direction.
    I look over to see what he was staring at....Oh.
    Way to go Niall!
    I gesture to Louis to come over to me.
    "How about we ditch this place and go back to the hotel."
    He nods.
    We walk out and it's POURING and thundering and we see a few flashes of lightning.
    "I hope Harry is alright." Louis says concerned.
    "He is Lou, he is a big boy." I smile.
    We get into the car and start to drive.
    Louis switches on the radio and Stand Up comes on.
    We start jamming out.
    I take my eyes off the road for one second..
    ONE SECOND.
    "LIAM WATCH OUT!!"
    Louis screams at me.
    I look to the road.
    I saw the car at the last second and swerved.
    We are out.
    Blackness.
    I open my eyes.. Everything is a blur.
    Flashing Lights.
    Louis on the floor.
    My head is spining, I close my eyes.
    Harry
    "May I have this dance?!" I laugh and put my hand out to Melissa.
    "Why of course you may!" She laughs and takes my hand.
    We start spinning in circles laughing and talking.
    We fall to the ground laughing as hard as two people could. We are soaked.
    Next thing you know I my phone starts to ring.
    "Hello?" I question
    I can't make out the voice.
    "Let me talk to Melissa........." They say.
    How does this person know I'm with her?!
    I hand her the phone anyway.
    Melissa
    I take the phone from Harry.
    I'm nervous, and my heart is racing.
    "Hello? WHAT THE HELL?! STAY THERE I'M COMING!!" I grab the keys and RUN.
    Harry isn't far behind when he screams.
    "MELISSA WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!"
    "I'LL EXPLAIN IN THE CAR!!! JUST LET'S GO! NOW!!!!" I don't stop running until I get to the car. I'm sobbing and jump in the car, Harry gets in right after.
    "Melissa, WHAT is going on!?"
    I barely get the words out.
    "Louis...........Liam..................Huge car crash....."
    Harry moves me from the drivers seat and lays me down in the back.
    "Melissa, hold on."
    He starts to drive.
    Twenty minutes and we are at the scene.
    Louis and Liam.
    Blood.
    Glass.
    A car door.
    I can't take it.
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    Authors note :)
    Awwww Niall found his princess!!<3
    But what happened to Liam and Louis in the crash!?!
    Will they be okay? Or will they NOT be okay?
    Comment.
    want me to notify? Okay, you dont even have to ask :)
    TEASER: I try to talk but I am all choked up...
    See who and what they try to say...Next chapter!!!!
    AHHH SO EXCITING AND THRILLING...
    gotta go..
    Next chapter in about, say....five to twenty minutes..leaning more towards twenty but we'll see!!
    AHH
    -Sophie

  13. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
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    August 27, 2012 8:44pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 6
    Niall
    She was about to say something when
    I kissed her.
    Sparks flew, fireworks were bursting...That was it, I had found my princess.
    Finally.
    I take my hand off her cheek and wrap it around her waist but I still remain holding her hand in mine.
    I feel her smile through the kiss.
    It's perfect.
    I think I may have just fallen in love.
    I smile too.
    Liam
    As I am walking back toward Niall and Louis I see Louis staring in Nialls direction.
    I look over to see what he was staring at....Oh.
    Way to go Niall!
    I gesture to Louis to come over to me.
    "How about we ditch this place and go back to the hotel."
    He nods.
    We walk out and it's POURING and thundering and we see a few flashes of lightning.
    "I hope Harry is alright." Louis says concerned.
    "He is Lou, he is a big boy." I smile.
    We get into the car and start to drive.
    Louis switches on the radio and Stand Up comes on.
    We start jamming out.
    I take my eyes off the road for one second..
    ONE SECOND.
    "LIAM WATCH OUT!!"
    Louis screams at me.
    I look to the road.
    I saw the car at the last second and swerved.
    We are out.
    Blackness.
    I open my eyes.. Everything is a blur.
    Flashing Lights.
    Louis on the floor.
    My head is spining, I close my eyes.
    Harry
    "May I have this dance?!" I laugh and put my hand out to Melissa.
    "Why of course you may!" She laughs and takes my hand.
    We start spinning in circles laughing and talking.
    We fall to the ground laughing as hard as two people could. We are soaked.
    Next thing you know I my phone starts to ring.
    "Hello?" I question
    I can't make out the voice.
    "Let me talk to Melissa........." They say.
    How does this person know I'm with her?!
    I hand her the phone anyway.
    Melissa
    I take the phone from Harry.
    I'm nervous, and my heart is racing.
    "Hello? WHAT THE HELL?! STAY THERE I'M COMING!!" I grab the keys and RUN.
    Harry isn't far behind when he screams.
    "MELISSA WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!"
    "I'LL EXPLAIN IN THE CAR!!! JUST LET'S GO! NOW!!!!" I don't stop running until I get to the car. I'm sobbing and jump in the car, Harry gets in right after.
    "Melissa, WHAT is going on!?"
    I barely get the words out.
    "Louis...........Liam..................Huge car crash....."
    Harry moves me from the drivers seat and lays me down in the back.
    "Melissa, hold on."
    He starts to drive.
    Twenty minutes and we are at the scene.
    Louis and Liam.
    Blood.
    Glass.
    A car door.
    I can't take it.
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Authors note :)
    Awwww Niall found his princess!!<3
    But what happened to Liam and Louis in the crash!?!
    Will they be okay? Or will they NOT be okay?
    Comment.
    want me to notify? Okay, you dont even have to ask :)
    TEASER: I try to talk but I am all choked up...
    See who and what they try to say...Next chapter!!!!
    AHHH SO EXCITING AND THRILLING...
    gotta go..
    Next chapter in about, say....five to twenty minutes..leaning more towards twenty but we'll see!!
    AHH
    -Sophie

  14. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
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    August 27, 2012 6:40pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 5
    Liam
    When I was done eating I tapped Louis on his shoulder. He glared at me because he had half his mouth full of mashed potatoes.
    "whummtt!?" He tried to say.
    I looked at him.
    "Finishing eating before you talk!" I tell him.
    He swallows. "Yes daddy." He laughs.
    I told him we should leave so we can let Niall be alone with the girl, and I am guessing she just walked in because she was walking toward us when she tripped over another girl.
    Poor thing!
    I get up and run to help her when I trip over the same girl.
    "EXCUSE ME!" I snap.
    She bursts out laughing. Well she's not nice...Not nice at all. I frown. I get up off the floor, Help Niall's date and then glare at the girl who tripped us.
    "May I ask....What is wrong with you?"
    She points to herself and I nod.
    "Nothing is wrong with me...Nothing. At. All."
    I think for a second.
    "May I ask your name please?"
    The girl gives me a death stare.
    "You can ask.....But I am not going to answer.."
    I'm pouting at this point.
    "WELL WHY NOT?!"
    She laughs again when the girl sitting across from her answers.
    "Her name is Samantha."
    I smile at her and thank her.
    "And what is your name, if I may ask.." I flick my head to Sam and glare at her.
    "Me?"
    I nod again.
    "Oh,' She giggles, 'My name is Lia."
    Lia.
    I smile, I like that name....Lia
    Melissa
    "Are we almost there?" Harry pouts.
    I smile and nod.
    Switching the radio on, One Thing comes on, Harry laughs and starts to sing along.
    "COME ONE, JOIN IN!!" He yells over the music. So..I do
    "SO GET OUT, GET OUT, GET OUT OF MY HEAD......" I start to laugh as we pull into the lot.
    Harry
    We pull into the lot and it's an abbandoned park......Why would she take me here?
    I look at her. I'm scared now....
    "W-what is this pl-place?!" I stutter.
    "A park...That's abbandoned?" She says in a sarcastic tone.
    Well now I know she is almost as sassy as Louis...Good one Lou, I let out a laugh.
    We get out of the car and cross under the CAUTION: DO NOT CROSS tape, I get the chills.
    "Why again is this park abbandoned?" I'm curious
    "Someone was killed here." She laughs.
    I glance at her frightened a great deal.
    She saw my face and started to laugh even harder.
    "I'm only kidding Harry!" she chokes on her laughter.
    "It's abbandoned because no one ever came, I was the only one...I loved it here, and when it closed down I cried for weeks, I still cry from time to time because it was so beautiful." Woah, that was deep.
    "Race you to the swings!" I yell getting a head start.
    "CHEATER!" She screams after me.
    Haha.
    I like this girl. I'm happy for Louis, I'm not angry anymore.
    Just then it started to pour and thunder..I saw a flash of lightning and started to scream and laugh, getting up from the swing and dance around in it.
    Lia
    He smiles at me....Liam Payne. I let out an embarrassing giggle.
    Oh God..
    He smiles even more and sits down pushing Sam against the wall. I smirk at Sam and she just glares at me until I look away.
    Out of nowhere I hear Liam say,
    "Can I by any chance, get your number?"
    Sam rolls her eyes and pushes Liam out of the seat with her feet.
    I laugh my embarrassing laugh.
    "I ABSOLUTELY love that laugh of yours!"
    Liam Payne likes my laugh!?
    I can't help but just stare at him.
    Then I realize he asked for my number so I get back to reality and write my number on his arm and he smiles looking at his arm.
    "Thanks, I will call you later!" He gleams and walks away.
    "SAMM!! LIAM PAYNE ASKED ME FOR MY NUMBER!!" I whisper half yell.
    She rolls her eyes again.
    "Oh joy, a stupid boy from a stupid band wants a stupid number from my best friend."
    I think to myself.
    'He isn't stupid and neither is the band' I give her the death stare.
    "Whatever, let's just go." I slam down the money for the check.
    Maia
    I walk into the joint and see Niall and only two of the other boys but they were getting up to leave. I smile at them when I trip and fall on my face.
    "OUCH!" Turning to the girl that tripped me.
    "Oops, was that my foot?" She laughs and turns to her friend.
    My face is so red. What is Niall going to think?
    I look up to see Liam running to help me when he trips too.
    He helps me up and I thank him and continue walking to Niall.
    "Hi Niall..." I say kind of sad
    "Oh my goodness, Maia! Are you okay?! I got up to help you but daddy directioner beat me to it." He smirks.
    I laugh.
    "I'm fine I guess."
    "Here let's make it better than fine." Niall Smiles
    I'm confused as he grasps one of my arms and slides his hand down until he is holding my hand. I blush and turn away shyly.
    He takes his hand and turns my head back towards him. He looks me in the eyes romantically.
    What's happening?
    Just as i was about to say something,
    He kisses me.
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    Authors note!!
    Hey guys!
    I made this chapter a long one because i didnt post earlier today because i had school :(
    But i hope you liked it!!
    Comment what you think and like for me to notify or comment that....
    Either way is coooooool! :) posting more in a bit..
    Teaser: "Hello? WHAT THE HELL?! STAY THERE I'M COMING!!" I grab the keys and RUN.
    -Sophie

  15. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
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    August 26, 2012 8:26pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 4
    Maia
    I strut out of the hotel with my hair in messy curls with a braid going down on the side. I have a long british tee on with light blue shorts and black sandals. I tossed on some pink lip-gloss and sprayed a little perfume on. I grab my jean jacket and got into the car.
    I am so EXCITED for this date...Group...Thing with the boys! I start my vehicle and I slowly pull out of the lot. I get to the stop light and text Niall.
    Me:
    Hey Niall, I'm on my way:)
    I really hope he likes me... I really like him, and not just because he is in One Direction but because he isnt afraid to be himself. I like Niall for Niall.
    Niall
    I look at my phone.
    Maia:
    Hey Niall, I'm on my way:)
    Yes! I can't wait to see her!! She seemed so perfect from what I could tell. Maybe this was it, maybe I finally found my princess! I am so excited I spill my tea all over Zayn.
    "NIALL!" Zayn jumps.
    I started to laugh really hard. The tea spilled on his pants so it looks like he had an accident! Hahaha.
    After a minute Zayn starts to laugh with me and then punches my arm. ouch.
    Zayn
    "NIALL!" I jump
    Niall is such a clutz! He spilled tea all over me and now I have to go back to the hotel to change..Thanks Niall..
    "Alright lads, see you in a bit." I trail off walking out, they all wave, except Niall who is still laughing his butt off. Classic Niall.
    As I am walking out I spot my ex, Zoe. I try to run and hide but before I could she waved to me. I couldn't avoid it now, so I walked toward her motioning to the hotel.
    *********************
    "Long time no talk Zayn.." She says.
    I nod anxiously. I walk into my room to change my pants.
    "Yeah I guess it has been awhile." I raise my voice from my room.
    Why did I ever let her go? I think about her all the time, it's horrible.
    I trudge out of my room and into the living room, I plop myself down on the couch and just look at her in the eyes.
    "What?" she smiles.
    "I was just wondering why I ever let you go..." Oops! I didn't mean to say that!! It slipped! NOO!!
    Zoe turns to me and has a surprised face.
    "R-really?" She chokes.
    It's to late to turn back now so I tell her the truth...
    I nod slowly and bite my lip. I can't help it, i'm nervous.. What do I do?!
    All I could think of doing was moving closer to her....So I did.
    "Zayn, What are you doing...." She looks me in the eyes and tears roll down her soft cheeks.
    I placed her face in my hands, looked at her beautiful brown eyes.
    I stuttered,"Y-you know what?"
    "What?" She was still crying.
    "When we were dating during the X-factor," She cut me off,
    "Zayn, please..." Zoe was shaking, placing a hand on my arm.
    "No, I need to say this Zoe..It's the truth."
    She nods.
    "I never...Ever...loved you, but now? I think it's real.." I took the chance and kissed her.
    Tears were streaming down her face and i felt her cheeks getting hot. I broke the kiss and looked at her. She cried, hugged me with her head burried into my chest she said,
    "I missed you Zayn."
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    That seems intense..... What's going to happen next?!?
    Will they get back together or will something keep them from being together?
    ..............
    Comment if you want to be notified or not, it's all good :) i'm just writing because its what i love :P
    Tell me what you think....
    want a teaser? well you cant have one! it will give to much away, i have something planned for chapter number five!! ahaha you will soon see :)
    -Sophie

  16. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    August 26, 2012 6:10pm EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 3
    Harry
    I left the diner with Lou watching from behind. He started to run after me but I saw Liam stop him.....
    Stupid Liam.
    Crossing my arms, looking at my feet, I kept walking. After about ten or twenty minutes I noticed a car stopped in front of me. I couldn't make out who it was in the drivers seat until she unrolled her window.
    "Harry?"
    Melissa...Great, this should be fun.
    "Hi Melissa." I mumble.
    She gestures me to get into the car, I get in so I don't seem rude. Sitting there is a bit awkward since I dont really know Melissa all that well because she is with Louis all the time, I frown.
    "What are you doing?"
    I look out the window and shrug.
    I hear clicking on her Iphone and I turn to her to see what she is typing. She is texting Louis...Of course, why wouldn't she be? I let out an angry sigh and look back out the window and see the dark clouds rolling in.
    "I texted Louis saying I cannot make it to dinner.." She says.
    Why would she do that? Where is she going to go..Back to the hotel and sleep? No, it's not that easy.
    "Why would you do that?!" Now i'm annoyed.
    "I was just going to spend time with you. I want to get to know my boyfriends best friend. Only because he does nothing but talk about you." She grips the steering wheel.
    My face goes from down and sad to bright and happy. Louis talks about me? I thought he was ignoring me.
    "He does?"
    "Yeah, most of the time! So I figured I would get up close and meet the real you instead of always hearing from Louis." She laughs.
    I settle in the seat now and get comfortable.
    Louis
    My phone buzzed. I frown.
    Melissa:
    Hey:) I can't make it to dinner tonight, something came up:( maybe tomorrow?
    First Harry, and now Melissa.. I can't believe this is happening. I shake it off and reply
    Me:
    Yeah:) tomorrow. It's a date;)
    At least I have tomorrow to look foward to...
    Melissa
    At least there is tomorrow to look foward to...
    I felt bad about this but at the same time I am happy because I can get to know Harry. I grin to myself and start to drive.
    "So Harry...London is a big city, where do you want to go?"
    Harry shrugged...Classic Harry.
    "Umm.... I don't know."
    I giggle and say,
    "Fine we are going to a playground I know."
    He looks at me with a puzzled look.
    "Why?"
    "You'll see..."
    I smirk and concentrate on the road in front of me.
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Ohhhh No where is Melissa taking Harry?!?
    Poor Louis :( he got stood up...but what's in store for him tomorrow night??
    Teaser: "I never..ever... loved you, but now? I think it's real.." I took that chance and kissed her.
    ^^^
    woahh.
    who do you think said that?!
    Okay well I'll post another chapter in a couple hours!!
    comment for me to notify you....
    just over there in that comment boxx :P

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    August 26, 2012 2:02pm EDT
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  18. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    August 26, 2012 8:32am EDT
    I Wanna SaveYOU
    Chapter 1
    Niall
    The lads and I were going down the elevator to go for some dinner, since we haven't eaten before lunch.. I'm STARVING.
    "Niall are you alright, you look a little green.." Liam points out.
    "I just need to eat!" I snap.
    Liam shoots me a 'don't be rude to me' look just as the elevator doors slide open. I ran out of the enclosed space and then to Louis' car. Of course it would be locked! Turning my body to run and get the keys from Lou, I ran into someone,
    "OH MY GOD! WATCH IT!!" I scream as my bum hits the ground.
    "I'm sorry for your clumsiness." A girl giggles.
    Getting up off the pavement I see a beautiful girl standing in front of me..
    "No, No, please forgive me. If I'd known who I ran into I wouldn't have screamed like that." I say as I get lost in this girls big beautiful hazel eyes.
    She giggles and shyly turns away.
    "I'm Maia!" She shoots her hand out.
    "Niall!" I exclaim as I shake her hand.
    "I know who you are silly...Big boy band..Duhh.." Maia laughs.
    I smile and look at my feet.
    The sight of my sneakers blur when Maia puts a piece of paper in the way.
    My face must be confused to her because she smiles and says,
    "It's my number."
    My cheeks get hot so they must be red. I smile showing my braces.
    Before we could say anything more the lads come up to me and ask if I am ready to go. Waving goodbye to Maia, she smiles and waves back.
    Maia
    He waves.
    I smile and wave back as he gets into his car.
    Oh My GOSH! I cannot believe Niall Horan just ran into me!! To think a girl like me would ever meet a member of One Direction, especially Niall, is CRAZY! Walking into the hotel my Iphones vibrates..
    I grab it from my jacket pocket and see a text:
    UnKnown:
    Hey it's Niall :)
    My face lights up. He actually texted me!?
    Me:
    Hey (:
    Was that to boring? Should I have said something else? Changing the unknown number to Niall, I get another text.
    Niall:
    meet me at the diner down the road for dinner....sayy twenty minutes?
    Niall Horan...Wants me..to meet him for dinner.....This MUST be a dream. I smile and say yes and then jog to my room to freshen up.
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    authors note:
    Ahhh! Sorry the first chapter is a little boring and short but it will get better, I PROMISE :)
    Hope you like it so far!
    I know, I know....It's up way before I said it was going to be..I cant help it if im a fast writer :P
    Soo tell me what you think!
    Chapter 2 will be up at noon, how about that?!
    okay well...um yeah
    want me to notify you? Comment right in that comment boxx:P
    -Sophie(:

  19. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    August 26, 2012 4:16am EDT
    I Wanna Save YOU!
    Fan fiction Parts!
    If you didn't get a part, i will gladly make you and extra!
    Nialls Crush: luv2flip910 (Maia)
    Nialls Best Friend: MaddyMoo (Madeleine)
    Louis' Girlfriend: Italiangirl3 (Melissa)
    Louis' Best Friend: Cheezburger (Amy)
    Zayns Ex: ZoeBoe (Zoe)
    Zayns Best Friend: 1DLOVE11 (Laila)
    Liams Crush: Spottedleaf (Lia)
    Liams Bestfriend: CourtneyMeg (Courtney)
    Harrys Girlfriend: Pinkfrosting321 (Alexa)
    Harrys Best Friend: erinnn (Erin)
    Again, If you didn't get a part, i will gladly make you an Extra.
    First chapter up around Noon :))
    -Sophie

  20. brainysmurf123 brainysmurf123
    posted a quote
    August 26, 2012 1:47am EDT
    I think i will write a 1D fan-fiction
    Tell me what part you want and i will consider it, maybe.
    Nialls Crush:
    Nialls Best Friend:
    Louis' Girlfriend:
    Louis' Best Friend:
    Zayns Ex:
    Zayns Best Friend:
    Liams Crush:
    Liams Bestfriend:
    Harrys Girlfriend:
    Harrys Best Friend:
    just you know...comment and i will tell you if you got the part!

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