Prologue - Title to be decided.
if i get good feedback i'll write more.

He lied to me. That was all that was running through my head at the moment. Since my mind was running, it caused my legs to run. I didnt know where I was going. All I knew was that I had to get out of there. Run. Anywhere. Away from this hell of a town. My pathetic excuse of a life. That drunk of a mother. But most of all, away from him. As far away as i could get. I didn't realize how far and how long I had ran, until I came to an unfamiliar sign that said, "Caution: No Trespassing," with barbed wire going on as far as I could see. The adrenaline took over as I slowly and carefully found a loose area of wire and crawled through.
Where would I go now? It was woods for at least a good 5 miles, I discovered as I walked deeper and deeper into the terrorizing yet peacefully calming trees. I guess now would be a good time to tell you my whole story; from the beginning.
Well, here it goes.

**author's note -- not sure where this is going, this is a freestyle piece. if you wanna be a character please comment with your appearance, personality, age and name. don't get mad if you dont get a part, please.
just a heads up - im more into poetry, so story writing is a little new for me. so bear with me til i get the hang of it.
thanks guys :)
xoxo - Shira
nmf

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27 faves · 19 comments · Apr 22, 2012 9:24pm

Marigail · 1 decade ago
Lol nevermind, I saw the segment after this : P
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Marigail · 1 decade ago
Still looking for characters?
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Yay2horses · 1 decade ago
Great!!
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yousacutiee6969 · 1 decade ago
This sounds really good so far! You should keep it up:)
Name: Miranda
Age: I'm 16
Appearance: I have straight brown hair, green eyes, and I'm 5'6"
Personality: I'm kinda shy at first but once you get to know me I'm hard to keep quiet. I love to laugh and joke around.
I'd love to be a character! I can tell this is gonna be a good story:)
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x3Taytay · 1 decade ago
your story is awesome, by the way.. for someone who doesnt write stories, well, it seems like you do quite often! its really dragging me in and I cant wait for whatever comes next (:
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x3Taytay · 1 decade ago
Name: Taylor(girl)
Age: 13
Appearence: straight brown hair w/ black tips, light beige skin, freckles, 5'6"ish
personality: funny, nice, understanding, outgoing, friendly, chill
I like: music, art, photography, volleyball, softball, drama club, friends, Eminem, One Direction, Demi Lovato
Ethnic Background: French, German, Italian, Irish, and Welsh
*i figured i'd give you a little more info than you asked for to make things easier on you.... i'd really like to be a character if its possible(: thanks!
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Yay2horses · 1 decade ago
Name: Ash(Not Ashley, just Ash)(Girl)
Age: 14-16
Looks: Long, black hair and piercing green eyes
Personality: Quiet, strong, but not in a physical way. A total and complete loner.
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Name: Flame(boy)
Age: 16-18
Looks: Longish straight black hair, stormy grey eyes, tan
Personality: Aggressive, angry at the world. Lives alone since mom left him. A mystery.
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uoy_evol_i · 1 decade ago
Name: Sija (Pronounced Sigh-a)
Age: 13. 14 in August
Looks: Straight light brown hair with blonde highlights. brown eyes with speck of green and hazel. tan skin and I'm 5'6
Personality: Storing and doesn't need to rely on other people. super althetic (i play softball and basketball) and caring. helps others before helping myself. smart too.(:

I love your story and would love to be a character.(:
I'm writing my first story right now too freestyle.(:

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NeverForgetYourBeauty · 1 decade ago
Hey! Love the beginning, I'm hoping to read more.!(: It would be soo amazing if I could be a character in a beautiful story like this.! Here's a little bit about me:
Name, Maia
Age, 14
Hair, light brown with blonde (totally natural) highlights
Eyes, green, but sometimes blue-ish
Skin, caucasian, but tan (also natural, I wouldn't go near a tanning bed.. 0__o )
Height, 5'4"
Weight, 110 lbs
Structure, small, but very muscular. I run and play soccer.. I'm pretty good, but I'm not trying to brag :P
Social: not super "popular", but I have lots of fun and insane friends (:
Likes, sports, food, friends, shopping, singing, dancing, acting, cute guys (;
Dislikes, haters, bossy people, periods :P
Personality traits, funny, outgoing, friendly, smart, nice, sarcastic, crazy.!

Yup, that's pretty much me! Comment in mah profile if you (pretty pretty please please please) decide to use me as a character.! (: thanks for considering me, and for writing such a great (so far..!) story (:
-neverforgetyourbeauty (aka, Maia) (:
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littlemisssassy1099 · 1 decade ago
Name: Kyla
Age:13
Looks: Dark brown straight long hair, hazel/green eyes, light dusting of freckles, ivory skin with dimples.
Personality: Caring, funny, comforting, silly, bubbly
It sounds really good, keep it up!
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ApplePieFlutterDashRariSparkle · 1 decade ago
This seems like it'll be really good! Can't wait to hear more!! :D
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Potterlover99 · 1 decade ago
Name: Lizzie
Age: 13
Personality: Really smart, but sneaky and curious, too, strong and not afraid to fight. She is emo, though, and cuts.
Appearance: 5' with blonde hair, blue eyes, pale, long nails always painted black, likes wearing black clothes
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Sammie_LovesYu · 1 decade ago
Name- Samantha
age 14
apperance- 5 ft 3 light brown hair that is perfectly straight
personality- outgoing but at the same time i can be insecure i think im ugly so im alawys trying to make myself look better
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The Day Dream Expert * · 1 decade ago
I really really like it! and i would love to be a character in the story so heres all the stuff you asked for.
Name: Stephanie
Age: 13
Looks: Medium length hair. Black hair, brown eyes, Im kind of tan but not much anymore
Personality: I can be shy at times, mainly I'm just sort of sensitive. I fall in love too easily but i would wait until i find someone better who would give me a chance
Im a generally kind person. and ill tell people the truth and ill mean it as well. I see things into a different perspective. and just saying... i absolutely love running around in the rain! so I'm fun but sensitive. even the little of things can keep me crying for hours... yeah ik kind of pathetic
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hcbook · 1 decade ago
< pic of me
I'm sporty (play rugby, hockey, and soccer)
13
Haley
This story is friggen great, I can't wait to hear the rest of it.
:D
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Abiageal M* · 1 decade ago
this is soo good!!
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TruckSlut · 1 decade ago
i really like this so far! it could be really good!!! (:

if you want a character heres a bit about me if you wanna use it
name; abby/abigail
age; almost 17
looks; long auburn hair, naturally loose curls, kinda like beach hair, light bright blue grey eyes, i get freckles all over my chest cheeks & above my eyebrows in the summer, i get pretty tan in the summer, other than that im a bit fare skinned. ive been told i look like a mix of miley cyrus & katniss everdeen (how the actress looks in the movie, not her in real life)
my personality; its kinda a mix of everything, i see all angles of everything, but if i have an opinion on something, ill understand the otherside of it, but i wont change my opinion, i have strong morals of right and wrong, i dont fall in love easily, or anything like that, my views on love are a whole other thing, i really like the arts, as in writing, photography, that kind. umm im not really sure how to talk about myself, but if you want to know anything else about my personality, feel free to ask & ill answer honestly!

ps my username does not reflect me! im probably the farthest thing from a !
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sing4forever · 1 decade ago
I really like it so far, it got me interested!
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Fake_a_smile · 1 decade ago
good, keep going!
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