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Sija. I Write Stories. And Ill Make This Better Later. ;*
  1. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    August 20, 2012 11:23pm UTC
    IM Sorry But I Am Done With The Story UNTOUCHABLE,
    If you would like me to write an epilouge I will do so.
    As many of you know I write free verse.
    Therefore many times I don't have an exact idea of what will happen next.
    In this story I added too many characters and now everything is a mess.
    I truely apologize but I can't continue writing it.
    Sorry.
    - uoy_evol_i

  2. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    August 5, 2012 4:01pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 13
    I give a slight sigh while shoving my books into my bag.
    I just finished my last class of the day,
    and now I'm ready for some down time.
    I begin making my way across campus,
    avoiding the groups of cliques and keeping my eyes glued to the ground.
    Considering the fact I'm on my period and completely overwhelmed by a boy,
    I wasn't in the mood to be messed with.
    "Tara!"
    I spin around to see a guy sprinting at me full force.
    "What Eli?" I mutter.
    "What happened?" He questions, taking notice to my tone.
    I roll my eyes.
    "Nothing, kay. Now what do you want?"
    Eli gives me a look but quickly shrugs it off.
    "Everyone's going to Sweet Tina's to see Karli, I was wondering if you were still coming."
    "Ughh," I grumble. "I forgot it was Karli's first day at work."
    "So I'm taking that as a no." Eli responds.
    I bite my lip feeling some guilt.
    "I'm just not up for it today."
    Eli nods and heads off towards the direction he came,
    leaving me to walk back.
    ***
    "You sure you aren't coming?" Abby questions, seeming a little concern.
    I shake my head, motioning with my hands for her to leave.
    "I really wound rather not." I state.
    "Oh ok," she gives me a little smile.
    "Well have fun here I guess."
    And with that she closes the front door.
    I sigh, throwing my body back onto the living rooms couch.
    "16 and pregnant, pretty little liars, oh awkward! F//ck yea."
    I state to myself while running through the channels.
    Knock Knock
    "Ughhh," I mutter, pushing myself off the couch.
    "Abby I told you I don't want to come."
    I ramble while opening the door.
    "Oh," I exclaim a little taken back to see a guy there.
    "Hey," Alex smiles while taking a step inside,
    and a step closer to me.
    "Hi?" I question. "Why are you here?"
    "And not at Sweet Tina's" He finishes off my sentence.
    I nod taking a small step back and closing the door behind him.
    Alex shrugs. "I wasn't really up for it."
    "Same," I mumble.
    "I just wanted to stop by and." Alex stutters.
    "Continue," I say while turning around and heading back down the hall.
    Then I feel a pair on hands on my hips,
    and my body is turned back around to face Alex.
    I look up to see his eyes staring into mine.
    "Do this," he breathes.
    Then I felt I pair of lips against mine.
    Alex's lips,
    one of my best friend's lips,
    someone I have never considered a boyfriend lips.
    And the weirdest part.
    I kissed him back.
    Shorter Chapter.
    But at least I got one up.
    I can't notify for this one, sorry.
    Please give feedback.

  3. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    July 18, 2012 7:00pm UTC
    Dear Readers.,
    A couple weeks ago a posted a quote saying I wouldn't be able to post a chapter for about a week,
    well it turn out my summer is going to be a little more busy than that.
    I'm not going to be able to post practically anything for the rest of summer.
    I know I'm going to lose readers because of this which
    SUCKS
    but I truthfully can't do anything about it.
    Since I am in the middle of a book,
    I'd like for all of my readers to take a vote on what I should do.
    1. Finish Untouchable and try to post chapters every now and than during the summer if possible.
    or
    2. Start a new book and begin it when the summer is over.
    Please vote.(:

  4. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    July 4, 2012 10:47pm UTC
    Dear My Lovely Readers,
    I apologize for not posting a new chapter recently,
    and I also apologize for the fact that I won't be able to for over a week.
    I'm going to Indiana (I moved from there two years back) to see my friends.
    This entire summer will be crazy, and I am extremely sorry for that.
    Some weeks I'll try to post a chapter every other day,
    and other weeks I won't be able to get one up.
    I don't think you understand how sorry I am,
    and I hope I don't lose readers.
    I love you all.
    - Sija.(:
    uoy_evol_i

  5. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    June 30, 2012 10:23pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 12.
    I put my feet up on the dashboard and turned on my ipod,
    letting the music fill my ears.
    I hummed quietly to the tune, closing my eyes.
    "Tara?"
    I felt someone shake my arm, so I looked up to see Karli staring me down intensly.
    "Eyes on the road!" I instructed.
    Her head instaintly snapped back forward.
    I figuered she was done talking to me so I slide down in my seat and shut my eyes once again.
    "Tara!"
    She gave me a nudge that practically knocked me over.
    "What!" I muttered, annoyed.
    She furrowed her eyebrows, upset with my reaction.
    "I'm sorry, and Eli is too."
    "For what?" I asked, trying to play dumb.
    "Knocking you and Zack into the water."
    I winced at the name.
    After I kissed him he stopped talking to me.
    Talk about awkward.
    "It's fine," I replied while turning so I could look out the window.
    I placed my head on the cool glass and watched the trees pass by.
    I thought about the weekend, it was completely unsuccessful.
    I was planning to hook up with someone, anyone,
    and the one guy I tried for practically rejected me.
    Well, without meaning too.
    "I really am sorry though,
    like if Zack hadn't of fallen in too you could have landed on your ribs," Karli admitted,
    her eyes full of apology.
    "I realize," I reply, still touchy on the whole Zack subject. "Karli?"
    "Yea, Tara?" She responded, her eyes glued to the road.
    "I kissed Zack."
    My eyes glanced up at Karli's face, truthfully I was terrified for her reaction.
    She bit her lip catiously before replying.
    "What happened exactly."
    "Well uh," I started.
    "After we were pushed in, and he practically let me land on him, I said thanks and all, and then I kissed him. Nothing huge just a kiss, but he didn't talk to me after. Just sort of smiled and swam back to the boat. But we didn't talk at all after and I think I maybe like him and-"
    "Woah there, breath" Karli reasurred, cutting off my ramble of words.
    I stared intensly at the dashboard where my feet were
    before redirecting my eyes back up to Karli.
    "I really think I might like him," I mumbled.
    Karli paused for a minute, taking everything in.
    "Alright then, good luck."
    I felt my face go red in anger.
    "Good luck! What do you mean by that?"
    Karli looked at me.
    "Tara, you kissed him,
    and it seems like he didn't take it very well."
    "So?" I growl, still aggrivated.
    "Well I mean he's the exact opposite of you to,
    he doesn't drink or smoke and hasn't even hooked up with a single girl."
    I turn to face the window once again, feeling defeated.
    "Still," I mutter under my breath.
    "Opposites attract."
    Pretty Boring Chapter.
    Sorry Guys.
    I Love Everyone Of You!
    Thanks So Much.
    I Know Many People Are Doing Hints Now,
    But I Cant Cuz I Write Freestyle.
    Sorry. :\

  6. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
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    June 25, 2012 9:29pm UTC
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  7. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    June 20, 2012 10:55pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 10
    I woke up to the sound of clanking.
    "Rise and shine and give God your glory, glory."
    I sat up and rubbed my neck from the awkward position I slept in
    Alex suddenly stampeded into my room, banging a pan and wooden spoon together.
    He continued belting his song before turning around
    and heading off to annoy another victim.
    I quickly threw my legs over the side of the bed and jumped down.
    However, my body betrayed me when I landed so I ended up sprawled on the floor.
    "You alright?" Zack questioned between chuckles.
    "Yea," I muttered, embarressed by my clumsiness.
    He catiously helped me to my feet,
    and then we both left our room for breakfast.
    "There's the lovebirds," I comment, noticing Karli and Eli also exiting their room.
    Karli shot me daggers and I let out a laugh.
    She obviously did something with that boy last night.
    "Yes, I was starving," Eli exclaimed.
    He quickly rushed to the buffet of food, devouring anything he got his hands on.
    I rolled my eyes.
    "Good manner," I laughed sarcastically.
    Eli smiled at me, making sure I was able to see the food in his mouth.
    "Thanks," he responded.
    I saw a few other people from the party last night enter the room,
    and soon everyone was surrounding the kitchen table.
    "Alright, gameplan?" Karli asked, directing the question at Alex.
    "Uhm," Alex began, going into intense thinking mode.
    "How about we go out on the boat." Alex stated, looking at us for approval.
    We all nodded.
    Alex's boat had built in coolers, which ment there would be drinks,
    and since it's a pontoon boat, we would be able to anchor it in the middle of the lake.
    "What are we going to do on the boat?" Karli questioned.
    She was obviously hopeing for one specific answer.
    "Well sweet little Karli, we are going to get drunk." Alex began.
    "And then play drunk games."
    "Like?" Karli asked.
    "Spin the bottle, truth or dare, blah blah blah." Alex listed.
    I looked over at Zack and saw him gulp.
    B//tch gonna become unprude.
    I know this chapter's boring.
    Sorry guys. :\
    Next Chapter will be fun though.
    Trust me.(:

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    June 16, 2012 8:13pm UTC
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  9. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
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    June 13, 2012 8:46pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 9
    Part. 1
    I can sleep with the drunk, the rapist, or Zack.
    "I choose Zack," I mumbled glumly.
    Alex nodded, "Well then, get along you two."
    He gave me a light push back torwards my bedroom.
    I snapped my head back at him and narrowed my eyes,
    giving him a death glare.
    "Can I sleep on the outside?" Zack asked catiously,
    uncertain if his questioned would push any of my buttons.
    I forgot the kid was even next to me.
    I bit my lip, not really wanting to sleep on the inside,
    but since we had to share a single bed.
    It would be a better idea for the larger person to be on the outside.
    "Yea sure," I mumbled, crawling into the bottom bunk.
    I pulled the blankets chin high and wrapped the edges around my feet.
    Zack chuckled at me, and then crawled in.
    I rolled my eyes annoyed, and turned to face the wall.
    I layed back to back with him.
    It seemed that no matter how I was laying,
    we seemed to always be touching.
    Which, although I don't like the kid,
    he gave off body heat,
    and since I was dying of frostbite,
    I appreciated his warmth.
    My eyes were glued on the wall in front of my face.
    I tried to go to sleep,
    but almost everyone else was partying.
    So the noise kept me up.
    "Zack?" I finally mumbled after what seemed like an hour. "Are you awake?"
    He turned and faced me.
    "I have been this whole time."
    I narrowed my eyes at him in confusion.
    "What?" Zack questioned,
    noticing my sudden change in facial expressions.
    "Why aren't you partying?" I asked.
    He sat up in the bed, and I mimiced him.
    "I don't drink much," he responded casually, turning his body to face mine.
    "Then why are you friends with us?"
    He paused for a minute to think.
    "Cause you accepted me, I guess."
    I cocked my head to the side.
    "What do you mean by that?"
    Zack glanced down at his fingers before looking back up at me.
    "Look Tara, I know, I'm not like you guys.
    I don't party because I was never asked to until now.
    And I don't flirt with girls because I'm scared of rejection.
    You see,
    I've never really had any friends."
    He locked his eyes with mine.
    "Not until now."
    I usually don't do parts however
    this isn't the end of their conversation.
    Please Tell Me What You Think.(:

  10. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    June 12, 2012 6:52pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 8.
    I lifted my head off of the couch and peered around.
    Everyone was still taking shots
    or gulping down the rest of what was in their plastic red cups.
    A few kids were begging Alex to smoke weed,
    but he refused to let them since they were already drunk.
    It can kill you, smoking pot and drinking at the same time.
    *Welcome for the life lesson there.(:
    "Hi babe," a voice slurred.
    I looked up to an unreconizable face.
    Damn, you my friend, are attractive.
    The mystery boy took the empty seat by my feet.
    "You're really cute," he laughed, placing his hand on my thigh.
    I gave the boy one of my prize-winning smiles.
    "You aren't so bad looking yourself," I giggled,
    my words sounding more slurred then i wanted them too.
    He realized I was drunk immediantly, and brought his hand up higher,
    too high.
    "How bout you say we go up to a room?"
    At frowned at the boy, unhappy with his sudden change in character.
    "How bout not," I strictly respond.
    I try to push him off, but he doesn't budge.
    "Griffen, doesn't take no for an answer."
    Don't talk in third person, you sound gay.
    "Well to bad you don't make the rules," I smirk while kneeing him in the balls.
    He gives a quick groan and rolls off the couch, holding "down there."
    I smile at him and walk away, steadying myself on any near by object possible.
    "Dueces. I'm going to bed!" I shout into the kitchen were the crowd was.
    I see Karli sudden appear from behind everyone.
    "Get a good night sleep, you're going to need it."
    I nod and walk off torwards a bedroom, rolling my suitcase behind me.
    The room was dark, however, since the light would intensly hurt my eyes,
    I didn't bother to turn them on while I changed into sweatpants.
    Once I'm done getting into my comfy clothes I turned and faced the beds.
    It was a bunk, and I was guessing Karli was assigned the top bunk, like I was assigned the bottom.
    I climbed into the bottom bunk, pulling the covers over my body.
    "Ugh," I suddenly hear a voice murmer next to me.
    I let out a ear piercing scream and fell out of the bed,
    the other person toppling on top of me.
    I squirm around frantically but the sheet are tangled around my legs and body,
    practically trapping me.
    "Get off of me NOW!" I demand, my heart rate still going twice as fast as normal.
    "Dude calm down!" The voice replies.
    "Zack?" I question.
    "Yea, it's just me," he repsonds.
    I felt my heart rate slowly returning to normal and my breathing calm.
    "Well Zack, your weight is starting to cause me to lose feeling so?"
    "Oh, sorry," he grumbled while getting up, and climbing back into the bed.
    "Woah," I sarcastically laugh while grabbing his arm.
    "What do you think you doing there Mr."
    His face filled with confusion.
    "To sleep," he explained, pointing at the bed.
    I shook my head.
    "No, that my friend is where I'm sleeping, Alex assigned it to me."
    He took a step closer to me, after crawling out of the bed,
    and I was able to make out his figuer.
    The only clothing item on the kid was boxers,
    however, thank god, they weren't the short kind.
    His abs were barely noticable in the light,
    but trust me, they were there.
    "Alex assigned me this bed," he responded shyly.
    "What?" I asked irratated. "No, this is wrong."
    I took a strong hold of Zack's wrist and marched out of the room,
    dragging the kid behind me.
    "Alex!" I screeched, pushing through the bodies.
    "What?" He asked, suddenly apprearing in front of me.
    "You assigned us the same bed?" I questioned, pulling Zack up to my side.
    "Well yea, since you guys like-"
    "We didn't!" I screamed, interupting him.
    Half of the room went silent, and I felt eyes turn to me.
    "Tara," Alex lowered his voice and took a step closer to me.
    I could smell the alcohal from his breath.
    "Everyone said you two had a thing,
    so I thought assigning you guys the same bed would be a favor."
    He took in a deep breath, and paused for a minute.
    "The only other place you can sleep is with me or him."
    Alex pointed to the kid who flirted with me earlier.
    "Your choice babe."
    Omg I Finally Hit 100 Followers.(:
    AHHHH Thank You All So Much.
    I Promise This Story Will Get Better!
    I Love You All.xD

  11. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    June 10, 2012 10:11pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 7.
    "Karli," I whisper while holding onto the side of the kayak,
    keeping my distance from the boys.
    She doesn't hear me though and continues yelling at Eli and Zack.
    "Karli," I repeat, a little louder this time.
    I use my foot to kick her in the back.
    She turns her body so she's facing me.
    "What?" She asks, her voice still sounding aggrivated.
    "I don't know where my bikini bottoms went." I mumble, trying to keep the guys from hearing.
    Karli's eyes widen.
    "You're naked?" She questions, her voice a little to loud.
    "Tara's naked?" Eli asks, mimicing Karli.
    I clench my teeth.
    "Way to go," I bitterly say to Karli.
    "Sorry."
    I frown and countinue treding in the water.
    "I can't get out of the water like this."
    I look up at everyone.
    "Guys, what am I suppose to do!"
    Zack's eyes light up with an idea.
    "Guys always wear boxers under their bathing suits-"
    "So?" Karli exclaims, cutting Zack off. "Get to the point!"
    I see Zack's smile fade at Karli's actions.
    "Well maybe you could wear one of our bathing suits," he suggest.
    I bite my lip nevously, unsure of what to say.
    "I don't see what else we could do." Eli states, finally breaking the silence.
    Now I know, it's not that big of a deal.
    However, it's broad daylight,
    and let me remind you, this is a beach, a public beach.
    We are all still holding onto the upside down kayak for support,
    the two pairs of paddles where gone,
    and I was about to wear Zack's bathingsuit.
    I saw him dissapear under the water for a split second and then reapear with the bathingsuit in his hand.
    "Here," he said, handing them to me.
    I quickly pulled them onto my body, and retied them so they fit my slim waist.
    "I feel kind of bad now," Eli mumbled.
    "If you guys want, we will pull you back to the shore."
    Karli and I both nodded eargerly, not wanting to swim the entire way.
    The two boys took a hold of the kayak in the front and began kicking.
    I sprawled my body over the back of the kayak, letting my toes drag in the water.
    After what seemed like an hour, we were back at the beach.
    I rolled off the kayak into the sand and slowly stood up.
    Everyone was giving me the staredown.
    I glanced over at Karli confused and she quickly pulled me to the side.
    "What?" I asked.
    She looked down at her feet and kicked around some sand.
    "It looks like you and Zack went skinny dipping together."
    I frowned.
    "Well that's not that bad."
    She gave me worried eyes and I knew she wasn't done explaining.
    "They are saying you guys did more then that, way more."
    I felt my face heat up,
    not in embarressment, but in anger.
    "Who said that?" I asked, demanding an answer.
    "Everyone."
    I really feel like I am losing readers.
    So please if you have any suggestions to make my story better,
    tell me.
    I really enjoy writing,
    and I want to become better.(:

  12. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
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    June 10, 2012 12:04am UTC
    Just Got A Favorite From TheMascaraSeries.
    Life Goal = Achieve.
    Literally so happy right now.(:
    (If You Haven't Read Her Stories You Really Should)

  13. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
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    June 9, 2012 11:48pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 6.
    "You coming?"
    Karli asked while holding a white lace shirt up to her chest.
    I glance up at her and shrug.
    "Who is going again?"
    Karli turns to face me with an annoyed countenance.
    "I've told you a million times, It will be Me, Eli, Alex, Zack and a few other kids."
    I bit my lip in thought.
    "How did those boys become friends again?"
    Karli gives me a "I-don't know-I-don't-care" look and continues deciding on items to pack.
    However I'm still deep in thought.
    Only two weeks ago, Eli had no idea who either of those kids were,
    and now they were practically hanging out every day.
    "You know Tara, it's already been a week of school,
    and you haven't hooked up with a single boy."
    I fling myself back onto my bed.
    "Isn't that a world record!"
    Karli playfully rolls her eyes.
    "Well you could do something this weekend,
    if you came."
    I throw up my arms in defeat.
    "I'll go, happy."
    I laugh while sitting up.
    She flashes me a bright smile while darting to the closet.
    "Good because I already picked out your outfits."
    I gave the suitcase a good look down before nodding in approval.
    Karli knew me all too well.
    But how could you blame her,
    we had friends since 2nd grade.
    How did we become friend?
    Well,
    she's allergic to something in milk,
    so one day when they gave ice cream to the entire class,
    she got a popsicle.
    And not just any popsicle, but the real special ones.
    You know, the red, white, and blue ones that taste like Jesus.
    Yea those.
    Well anyway, I'm not exactly a fan of ice cream,
    so when I saw her get a popsicle I became extremely jealous.
    I actually even had the nerve to march over there and demand her to give it to me.
    And you know what she did.
    Karli just dropped it, right then and there.
    She then wiped her hands off and looked at me with a huge grin,
    and said, "Now neither of us can have it."
    And BAM, we became inseperable.
    "Hurry Tara, we haven't got all day."
    I quickly threw in a few other neccessities
    and sprinting down the stairs hauling my suitcase behind me.
    ***
    "I see you brough doll face along." Alex girnned, directing the statement at me.
    "How could I miss this," I squeled, my voice full of sarcasm.
    "I've been looking forward to spending my entire weekend
    on a lake with a bunch of sweaty kids."
    I drop my excited act.
    "I swear if you or anyone else takes my sun, I will have to kill."
    Alex chuckles, shrugging off my threat.
    Soon everyone had arrived and we decided to go down to the beach.
    I slipped into my skimpy bikini careful not to hit my newly pierced belly button.
    I gave myself in a smile in the mirror
    and then strutted out onto the porch where everyone was waiting.
    "Damn Tara," Eli laughed.
    I gave him a curtsey and a joking wink.
    He laughed and then we took off for the water.
    I burried my feet under the warm sand letting the warmth consume my body.
    "Tara! Tara! Help me with this!"
    I twisted around to see a double kayak ontop of Karli's head.
    "What are you doing hun?"
    I ask between my laughs.
    She finally reaches the waters edge and throw the kayak off of her with a groan.
    "Thank for the help," she snapped while rubbing her head.
    "Anyday."
    I smirk at her and parcially push the kayak into the lake.
    "You coming?" I ask hopping into the back seat and picking up a paddle.
    "Yea," she responds, turning around to face the others.
    "Zack! Help push us in!" She screams and he quickly sprints over.
    Karli plops into the front seat and picks up her paddles.
    "Ready?" Zack questions, placing his hands on the front of the kayak.
    We both nod and he pushes up back into the water.
    Karli and I paddle out into the middle off the lake.
    I feel like we are in the Olympics or something because, not to brag or anything,
    but we were going pretty god damn fast.
    "Tanning time?" Karli ask, poking me in the back with her paddle.
    "Or course," I respond, slipping my paddle into the side of the boat.
    We close our eyes and lean back, letting the radiant sun kiss our skin.
    The calm water is silent and the only noise is the birds and people chattering in the distant.
    I let my hand gently touch the water,
    and soon I doze off.
    "One."
    My eyes snap open to the reconizable voice.
    "Two."
    I glance over to my side to see Zack and Eli wading in the water next to us.
    "Three."
    I try to grasp Karli's leg to wake her but it was too late.
    Our bodys had already submerged into the water from the two boys flipping the kayak.
    I try to squirm out from under the boat, but I'm stuck.
    Suddenly I go into panic mode and thrash around violently.
    I feel myself make progress and then it's as if I'm cut free.
    I waste no time after and I'm quickly at the surface, gasping for air.
    However, something's missing.
    Oh yea,
    my bikini bottom.
    PLEASE if you read this,
    fav it.
    I'm not trying to ask for favs, however,
    I think I'm losing readers.:\
    If you have ANY suggestions.
    Don't be after to ask.
    And if you want to be notified,
    message me.(:
    thank you beautifuls.<3

  14. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
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    June 8, 2012 4:34pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 5.
    I make my way into my first class with Karli at my side
    and we catiously sit down in the back.
    Karli and I have almost every class together, thank god.
    A boy slides inbetween our desk, accidently knocking my stuff on the ground,
    spilling it everywhere.
    "I'm so sorry!" He apologizes, dropping to his knees.
    He frantically collects all of my items together and places them back on my desk.
    Then his eyes lock with mine.
    "You're the guy who nearly took my shirt," I state.
    He nods his head with a little smile.
    "You're gay?" Karli asks.
    "Wha-what? no!" The boy responds defensivly.
    Karli shoots back a question at him.
    "Then why were you trying to steal Tara's shirt?"
    He looks down at his feet, his flace becoming red from embarressment.
    "It was for my little sister."
    Karli places her hands over her heart and gives a "aw."
    I laugh and then look back over to the boy.
    "Well, uh Zack right?"
    He nods again.
    "Class is about to start."
    His eyes dart over to the front of the class
    where the teacher was giving him a staredown.
    Zack quickly sits down at the nearest desk,
    which just so happened to be the one next to me.
    "Well then class, I'm Mr. Towne-"
    ***
    The rest of the day went by with teachers introducing themselves,
    and giving out their expectations for the year.
    I just so happened to have almost all of my classes with Zack,
    along with Karli.
    We even had a few with Eli (Karli's boyfriend) and Alex.
    The best part though was that everyone from my sorority
    and Eli's Fraternity,
    had a lunch break at the same time,
    so we were all able to eat together.
    "Stop it!" Karli giggled.
    "Not until you go make me a sandwich!" Eli demanded.
    Karli kept squirming ontop of his lap, trying to avoid his tickles.
    "Noooo," she squeled inbetween breaths.
    The scene went on for a couple more minutes until finally Karli gave in.
    "Love you babe!" Eli shouted after her while she walked torwards the door inside.
    We decided to eat outside today since overall there were about 20 people here,
    and luckliy the sun was shinning brightly, making a perfect day to do such a thing.
    "Hey guys sorry we're late," Alex apologizes,
    while walking torwards us from the front next to Zack.
    No way, Mr. Steal-My-Shirt and Alex are in the same Fraternity as Eli.
    "It's fine." Eli responds.
    "Zack this is Tara."
    I give Zack a smile. "We've met before."
    Eli furrows his eyebrows confused.
    "Alright then, this is my girlfriend, Karli."
    Karli walks out of the house holding a poorly made sandwich.
    "Hey it's gayboy!" She laughs, referring to Zack.
    "I give up!" Eli moans throwing his hands up in the air.
    "You can introduce yourself."
    Zack chuckles and gives Eli a little pat.
    "Thanks for trying."
    Suddenly Hannah gets up from her seat next to Hayly and Harmany ,
    and struts over in front of Zack.
    "I'm Hannah." She announces,
    quickly wrapping her arms around his neck giving Zack a tight squeeze.
    "Sorry, I just thing handshakes are boring."
    "And I just think you're a hoe," I whisper under my breath.
    Zack just stands there, as if petrified.
    "It's nice to meet you anyway."
    Hannah gives him a wink before heading back to her seat.
    I can't help but laugh at the fact that Zack was still standing there,
    as if unable to move.
    But soon kids start giving him weird looks, and I feel bad.
    "Come here." I snap, grabbing his sleve.
    He stumbles after me.
    "She just hugged you. Haven't you hugged a girl before? You're in college."
    I whisper to make sure no one heres me.
    He looks down at his feet.
    "No, I haven't."
    What do you think so far?
    Still confusing?
    Please tell me your thoughts.(:

  15. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    June 6, 2012 9:02pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Characters.
    Tara-
    Main Character.
    Karli-
    Tara's best friend.
    Eli-
    Karli's Boyfriend.
    Abby-
    Another One Of Tara's Friend Who Is Staying In The Same Sorority.
    Alex-
    Took away Tara's drink at the party, close friend.
    Hannah, Hayly, and Harmany
    The Three Muska-Hoes
    Delilah.
    New girl staying in Tara's and Karli's sorority
    Zack.
    Mentioned in Ch. 1
    (Tried to take Tara's shirt)
    That about covers it.(:
    If you are still confused about the characters or the story,
    just leave a comment.(:

  16. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    June 5, 2012 9:15pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 4.
    Beep Beep
    "Ughhh," I moaned, rolling over in my bed.
    The clock read 6:10 AM, however, I believe it's 2 in the morning
    according to how tired I feel.
    I slowly sit up and stretched, making those baby dinosaur noises,
    and then placed my feet on the floor, building up the courage to stand.
    After I finally get up and put in my contacts,
    it feel like I'm wide awake.
    I quickly throw on a pair of high waisted jean shorts,
    and a black and white printed tank top.
    I also throw on a black leather jacket over it and a few matching accesories,
    including my favorite black pumps.
    I covered my face is makeup,
    not satisfied until I resembled a human barbie doll.
    Then curled my auburn hair,
    so it bounces with every step I take.
    http://www.polyvore.com/first_day/set?id=50282214
    I strolled down the stair to see my mom passed out on the couch,
    nothing unusual.
    By the time I arrive outside, Karli is already impatiently waiting in my driveway.
    "Took you long enough," she muttered.
    I lifted up my hands in defense,
    "Hey, it's the first day of sophmore year at college, hop off."
    She gives a small laugh and we drive off torwards campus.
    Class doesn't start until 8:00,
    but we both wanted to say hello to all the people in our new sorority.
    It was down the street from the university,
    and we already knew most of the girls already in it.
    However, some where completely new faces to us.
    We parked in the back, and walked around to the front door.
    "The party don't start til WE walk in,"
    Karli sang while swinging the door open.
    There were about 10 girls standing in the room,
    all chit chatting about something.
    But they silenced the moment Karli and I walked in.
    "I've missed you!" A tiny blonde squeaked.
    I gave out a laugh and hugged her.
    "I've missed you too Abby."
    She was one of my favorite girls here, well next to Karli.
    Next I gave Hannah, Hayly, and Harmany,
    or as Karli and I like to call them, the three muska-hoes,
    "friendly" hugs, making sure not to get aids while at it.
    I exchanged smiles to a few other girls,
    and finally it was down to one girl.
    Who truthfully I have never seen in my life.
    "Tara, Karli, this is Delilah," Abby announced while introducing us.
    She's from the big apple.
    Karli's eye immediatly widened.
    "Hey there Delilah, what's it like in New York City?" She sang.
    All the girls started laughing,
    besides for Delilah.
    What was her problem?
    Sorry for intorducing so many characters in just the first few chapters.
    If you need any help understanding who is who,
    I'll post something describing each one.
    However, I won't unless asked to.
    Please Give My Feedback.
    I really don't know how the story is turning out so far.:\
    PLEASSEEE
    tell me what you think.
    I will really appreciate it so much.

  17. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    June 3, 2012 9:32pm UTC
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  19. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    May 31, 2012 9:46pm UTC
    Untouchable
    Ch. 1
    My eyes windened as they landed on the perfect top.
    It said the words "princess" across it in black lettering,
    and was the color pink, with a black collar to match.
    Now I know what you're thinking.
    "Is she like five?"
    No, I'm soon going to be sophmore in college, thank you.
    However, this shirt will be perfect for the party I'm going to tonight,
    well, after I cut it so it's showing more then it's covering.
    I raced over to the rack where I spotted my golden clothing item.
    Only to see it being snatched off the shelve by someone else.
    "Uhm, what the hell do you think you're-"
    My voice is cut off once I realize who I was talking too.
    "Sorry," the boy stuttered.
    His brown hair his framed his face perfectly, covering his forehead.
    The lighter streaks in it accenting the golden flakes in his chocolate eyes.
    My god, this boy was attractive.
    I stuck out my chest a little.
    "Oh, don't worry," I smiled at him, taking a step closer.
    "Who's it for anyway, your girlfriend?"
    The guy let out a nervous chuckle.
    "I don't have a girlfriend."
    I feel a smile appear on my lips.
    "Well then, I'm Tara Schmidt."
    I stuck out my hand for the boy to shake,
    but he just stepped back reluctantly.
    "I'm Zack Kerner, it's nice to meet you, but I'm in a rush."
    He handed me the shirt giving me a quick smile before turning around.
    I watched in confustion as the boy sprinted out the door.
    He didn't even look back, just left.
    The boy was either oblivious to my flirting.
    Or just turned me down.
    A random boy turning down Tara Schmidt.
    No, that doesn't happen,
    ever.
    What do you think so far?
    Please give me feedback.(:

  20. uoy_evol_i uoy_evol_i
    posted a quote
    May 27, 2012 7:10pm UTC
    Trust.
    Epilogue.
    "Mommy!" I bent down and lifted up my little baby boy.
    "Hi boo," I let out a laugh as he eagerly wrapped his arms around my neck.
    His brown curly locks resembling his father's perfectly.
    "I'm home!" I turned around to face my husband.
    His chocolate eyes making me melt like they did the first time I saw him.
    "Are we still planning on going to Cori's and Tanner's tonight?"
    I nodded my head, setting down my child so he could run over and hug his father.
    He picked up his son twirling him around a few times.
    I smiled at the sight,
    my life had turned out so well.
    "David, would you be able to pick up some food? I'm going to head over to Cori's early."
    My husband nodded.
    "Anything for you."
    David pecked me on the lips before heading out the door.
    "C'mon kiddo! We are going to your godmother's," I hollared at my son.
    We hopped in the car and begain driving down the roads I knew from my childhood.
    ***
    "Aria!"
    I embraced my best friend.
    "Hi Cori! How have you been?"
    Her cheek begain to blush and she looked down.
    "Aria,
    I'm pregnant."
    I let out a little squeal and gave her another hug.
    "Do you have any names picked out yet?"
    She shook her head.
    "No, but I want to name it after someone important like you did."
    I looked down at my son, Tyler, with sad eyes.
    "You miss him don't you?" Cori asks me.
    "Everyday."

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