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Sliding away from the knife, i burried my head under my covers and begged myself not to look at the bloody mess of my sister.

When my mother came upstairs, my own words couldn't describe her pain. "Mommy someone in black came and killed Sarah, and gave me this" i cried pointing towards my sister, then the knife on my bed. My mother made this weird choking noise and ran over to my bed, picking me up, then crumbling to the floor with me still embraced in her arms.

My dad had been in the room for a split second, before he ran to get the phone and call the police. Tanner didn't come in the room, she stayed at the door crying as she called Lucas to tell him. And Riley was confused, she didn't know what was wrong with our sister. Those few minutes right there, before the police came, were the sadest moments of my life. All sitting there, crying and confused, we probably looked like we were in one of those horrible horror movies. i wish.

There was no DNA on the knife. No way to find out who killed my sister. We searched for weeks, but still found nothing. Eventually, my parents said we still had to have funeral. The room filled with more people than i had ever seen. Friends, family, and random people who felt sorry. I was still young, but not confused. I clutched the sweating hands of my sisters and brother. Lucas, who i had never seen cry before, was saturated in his own tears.

Before the funeral was halfway over, Lucas ran outside, saying he needed a minute. Thats what made me start to cry. My closest sister, my best friend, my family member had just been murdered in cold blood.

Just as the prayer began, a high pitched scream echoed from outside the room. Everyone began to run outside, where i saw something i never would have imagined. Lucas, lying still on the parking lot ground, with a slit through his throat. On the wall next to him, written in his own blood was "He figured it out; what a bad one"

Next chapter will be up later today or tomorrow :)

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Sliding away from the knife, i burried my head under my covers

258 faves · 35 comments · Apr 8, 2012 10:14am

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bindi · 1 decade ago
brilliant!
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briiannaa · 1 decade ago
ohai! can you comment me when the next chapter is up? thankss xox.
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phoebefba · 1 decade ago
Omg these are amazing! Iwant to know what happens!!!
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senna06 · 1 decade ago
sooo gooood oh snapp addictive too
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sportygirlhelen · 1 decade ago
Last night I was attempting to sleep and couldn't stop thinking about this...!! POST MORE WHAT DID HE FIGURE OUT!?
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thisisme123 · 1 decade ago
u had me sitting here crying. this is really good !
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SaaneKavapalu · 1 decade ago
This is really good! Keep it up :)
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onion8 · 1 decade ago
Seriously!! I read the whole thing thinking it was real!! I was crying my eyes out! Oh well glad it's not true though :L
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FallingTower · 1 decade ago
LOVE IT!! yet so sad

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Karrieson · 1 decade ago
FIGURED OUT WHAT OMGOMG
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wantdogs98 · 1 decade ago
oh my goodness. before it said next chaper will be up tomorrow i thought it was a true story and i almost cried.
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Nataliee123 · 1 decade ago
WHAT DID HE FIGURE OUT HURRY UP AND FINISH THIS I WANT TO KNOWE IASHDFKJASHDF,JAKSDF
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Justin_Selena_Forever · 1 decade ago
This is amazing!
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Apage · 1 decade ago
amazing (:
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slipper012 · 1 decade ago
My names Sarah... :'(
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wampler9238 · 1 decade ago
Holy . I'm in love.
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ncisrox13 · 1 decade ago
Notify me!!!!!
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Th£_Music_Fr£Ak❤* · 1 decade ago
this is amazing! ur such a good writer i cant wait till the next chapter comes!
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dakotashine · 1 decade ago
let me know when the next chapter is up?
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imjustsomegirl · 1 decade ago
WHOA. i dont read stories on witty but YOUR stories are absolutely amazing♥
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