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"He is bad news..."
Chapter 30
*Evelyn’s POV*
Everett switched off the engine of his car and looked at me. I returned the look and then he slid out and walked to my side, opening up my door. I smiled; he could be so kind sometimes. I got out of the car and looked up.
“I can’t believe you brought me to Dania’s” I laughed, feeling him staring at me.
“What’s wrong with that?” he asked innocently.
“Come on, last time I’ve been there was when I was 5” I said, grinning.
“Reunion after 12 years, so touching” he smirked, pulling me towards the store.
“Come oooon, let’s go to the park instead” I tried to escape.
“No! Don’t you want an ice–cream first?” he pouted.
“Fine! You’re lucky you’re cute” I scoffed, walking to the entrance.
“I know” he said and I could feel the smirk in his voice.
We went to the store and ordered. I got myself a marshmallow cupcake and he got chocolate ice cream. This was exciting. I hadn’t seen him eating ice cream before; it’s too childish for him.
We picked a table at the back of the room, next to a huge mirror. He pulled my chair as I sat down. I almost choked on the gesture. Why was he being so nice? It started to confuse me. Was something wrong? Where’s the rude and weird Everett I used to know?
He brought our food to the table and sat next to me. I ate my cupcake slowly; it was so tasty and awesome, it actually made me realize how much I missed this place.
Last time I came here was with Everett, about eight years ago. I don’t know if he still remembers, but I do. I ordered the exact same thing and he too. Just memories I can’t forget about.
“Ev” he called, nudging me. “You drifted off again”.
“Sorry” I said quickly, finishing my cupcake.
“What were you thinking about?” he asked carefully.
“Nothing” I mumbled, blushing and pushing my plate away. He had already finished his ice cream and I guess we’re ready to go now.
“Tell me” he said quietly, looking at me.
“It’s nothing” I insisted, avoiding his eyes.
“I’m sure it’s something” he claimed, holding my gaze. “But if you don’t want to tell me, I get it”.
What was that in his voice? Annoyance? Oh no, that’s the last thing I want right now, honestly. This night is supposed to be perfect; I want us to keep it that way.
“I was thinking about the last time I was here…with you” I blurted out, almost whispering.
His eyes widened. “That was ages ago, how can you even…?”
“You think I’ve forgotten? Well, I haven’t! You were the one who was always trying to do that. You succeeded, I guess. Well done” I said bitterly and tried to get away. He didn’t let me, though.
“You really should let people talk too” he whispered, giving me a playful smile.
“Talk, then” I said, tilting my head to the left.
“I never said I forgot. I tried, yes, but I never did” he started. “The day you got me staring, I had decided to stop lying to myself and do what I want. I knew I wouldn’t be judged for my actions so I went for it”.
“What did you want?” I asked.
“You”.
“You still thought I was Cassandra when you…” I stuttered.
“Let’s just forget about that” he cut me off. “It’s just you and me now”.
“I’m okay with that” I whispered.
“Look” he pointed at the mirror, showing me our reflection on its surface.
“That truly takes a picture” I laughed.
“Already there” he smiled, grabbing my phone from my purse.
“Everett, what on Earth are you doing?” I asked, trying not to burst out laughing.
“Smile!” he said cheerfully, turning the camera, kissing my cheek and taking a picture.
He chuckled, taking a look at the picture we just took.
“Show me!” I whined.
“Here” he said, handing me my phone.
Oh. My. God. I looked so ugly! My hair and my face and just EW!
“DELETE IT! NOW!” I demanded, giving him my phone.
“Why? You look so cute” he grinned.
“Seriously, delete it” I continued.
“Seriously no, you look cute”.
When he leaned in to kiss me, the butterflies in my stomach went crazy.

I felt like one in a million.

Wooooo! chapter 30!! And there's still looooong way to go!(:
I'm sorry for not uploading much lately but guess what
I'm sick D:
I'll try to upload more now that I have nothing to do with my life but schools start in a few days so no promises
I know my last quote was labeled as a "bad quote" and I really don't understand why
I lost many readers though and that makes me sad :(
Anyway, comment below if you wanna be notified
Xoxo, Fay (:

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"He is bad news..." Chapter 30 *Evelyn’s POV*

25 faves · 27 comments · Sep 8, 2013 3:41pm

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Radioactive · 1 decade ago
heu post post post
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I'll probably post on Sunday, schools started and I'm studying all the time :/
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Fathima · 1 decade ago
notify
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Sure
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shygirl78 · 1 decade ago
I really like this story. I don't get why people stopped reading. I liked the last chapter. :) notify please?
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I don't understand either... I lost like 5 readers or so tho :( Thanks (: and of course I'll notify you :)
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Onix* · 1 decade ago
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
εννοειται (:
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OfficialWittyUnicorn · 1 decade ago
You still have us! Notify me please :3
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I lost many readers though....
Of course I'll notify you :3
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ChrisMat · 1 decade ago
ειδοποιηση(:
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Εντάξει (:
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ChrisMat · 1 decade ago
Ευχαριστω(: περαστικα(:
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Τίποτα (: ααα ευχαριστω :3
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country_gurl · 1 decade ago
please notify. this is like the best story ever, you really should make it a book :)
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Of course (: and haha I'll try when I finish :)
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angelle* · 1 decade ago
Eeeeek I'm literally squealing right now and it's really awkward because I'm on my laptop but I'm at the park and people are just looking at me like "What the." xDD
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angelle* · 1 decade ago
I'm squealing because I love this story so much, just in case you were wondering.
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Haha I figured :3 I'm glad you like my story, it means a lot (: Do you wanna be notified btw?(:
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angelle* · 1 decade ago
Yes please. :3
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Okay, I'll make sure to do so :3 Do you like it so far? (:
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angelle* · 1 decade ago
Omg I love it. xD
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
I'm glad (: What do you think of Everett so far? Sorry for the questions I'm just trying to get opinions to make the story better haha
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Radioactive · 1 decade ago
i love it yes om my keys rnt worknin well,like backspace and te letter next to f and te letter before j andy elp any elp b
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
It's okay haha I understand (: I hope you liked this chapter :) Want me to notify you?
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Radioactive · 1 decade ago
yep
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HelloDepression* · 1 decade ago
Okay, I'll make sure to do so (:
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