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 ThShanGame
                                  Chapter 50


        Shane ran his fingers through his hair to try to whisk as much beer out as he could. No one really knew what to do so Paige just cut the cake and gave it to everyone. Savannah discreetly made her way through the crowd, upstairs, and outside.
          She sat on the front steps in the cool October air, hot tears burning her eyes. If Ava hadn’t done such a good job on her makeup she wouldn’t have tried so hard not to cry.
          Shane looked around for Savannah and someone told him they saw her go outside. ‘Sh..t,’ Shane thought. ‘She left.
          He ran up from the basement, out the door and down the front steps. “Savannah!” he called as loud as he could. He hit someone and before he knew it he was tumbling down them, until he ended up on the ground. He heard a sniffle and then a giggle and looked up to see Savannah laughing at him.
          “Savannah, I am so sorry,” he got up and sat next to her. She scooted away and when he moved closer to her and stood up and started walking. “Savannah, stop! Please!” He ran in front of her so that she couldn’t walk away.
          “Ten dollars, Shane?? That’s why you were doing this? You know, you really had me going for a second and I truly believed you liked me. And you got me to like you too. I should’ve known that you know how to play The Shane Game better than I do so congratulations, you’re the winner,” tears built up in her eyes. “I guess ten dollars is your prize.”
          “Blake is drunk as hell in there! The entire football team knows that I like you, Savannah. He told me if I hooked up with you tonight he’d give me ten dollars, but he was kidding! He didn’t know what he was doing when he gave me the money. I would’ve tried to kiss you anyway, because I truly like you, Savannah.”
          “How do you expect me to believe you after everything you’ve done?” she let a tear fall.
          “I risked my popularity for you, I lost some friends for you, I didn’t have s..x with some of the hottest girls in our school for you, I told you about the girls I accidentally hook up with for you, and all I’m asking for is a chance,” Shane said.
          Savannah looked up at him and saw the sincerity in his eyes. She wanted to kiss him so bad but she knew she couldn’t do that without falling in love with him all over again. The game was over, but neither of them had won.
          “Savannah, will you be my girlfriend?” Shane asked.

     

ThEnd
 
Note: I'm honestly so sad that this is the end :( I'm sorry if everyone hates me that I ended it here and you don't know Savannah's response but I think that's for you to decide. Do you think she should forgive him or should she forget him? I have no clue if there will be a threequel for this or not. Truly, I want to write another one because I've had so much fun for the past two years writing this for all of you guys but at the same time it might be good to let go and start fresh. I do have some ideas of what I could do for the next story if I make one, but I'm not sure how it will turn out. Thanks again to all of you who read this and stuck by me when I didn't want to continue writing and for those who really helped me through the hard times I was having. Please comment and tell me what you think of this chapter and what you think I should do in the future. Suggestions would really be appreciated!!! As you can tell I suck at endings so I don't really know how to end my thank you note hahaa but I guess I just want to say I appreciate you all and if you read this whole paragraph I appreciate you even more. I never imagined some stupid story I wrote about the guy I had a crush on at the time would be really liked and I guess that's just a good feeling to know you guys liked it. You're truly the best. I love youuuu(: -Kylie
 
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46 faves · 19 comments · Feb 10, 2013 5:10pm

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beautifuldisaster15 · 1 decade ago
..keep writing <3 please..
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ecawesomeness · 1 decade ago
omg this is one of my favorite stories I've read on witty :)
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awesomenessandahalf · 1 decade ago
I NEED MORE STORIES OMG PLEASE;)
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TiredOfTheHypocrites · 1 decade ago
I love this! But if you can, make a threequel! xD I absolutely despise open endings but I actually like yours. But ig you can, make a threequel! :)) Or whatever, make a new story xD Your stories amaze me :3
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Dakota398 · 1 decade ago
Threequel! If I can't read this anymore, I'll die!
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iluvblondie23 · 1 decade ago
MAKE A THEEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!
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dancingismylife213 · 1 decade ago
ive been reading this on wattpad/here, please make a threequel!
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Fai~* · 1 decade ago
I love you <3 You are soo good at this story! I really hope you make a third book. This story was mainly the reason I'd log into Witty everyday. If not, I really hope you make another book (:
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ay_baybay · 1 decade ago
I LOVE YOU AND YOUR BEAUTIFUL AND WE SHOULD CATCH UP. You're such a talented writer, Kyles, and you definitely should write another story <3 Write what you want to write about. Write what's on your heart.
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lovinnggyouuboo18 · 1 decade ago
youre beautiful, make another story please i will die if you dont
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rememberyourbeautiful · 1 decade ago
This was amazinggggg!!!!! I'm really sad that this ended! Personally I think you should start with another story because I love the way you ended this but I know either way I'll be there to read your story! I love your writing and I definitely think you should keep writing!!!!
P.S I didn't know you wrote this on an old crush, I think that makes this story even more interesting because we now no it actually happens to people!!!
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xbluexeyesx · 1 decade ago
i'm actually so sad this is over stop omg this was the best thing i have ever read on witty
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rooftops* · 1 decade ago
I think you ended this perfectly. It kinda just.. leaves us wondering? I like that! I loved this story. I remember reading the first one like.. forever ago and just thinking "I love this omg" and then i lost it. I couldn't find it anymore. I'm so glad I found it again though. you're a great writer, you really are! :) I think you ended this perfect and bring a threequel would be a bit much, honestly. You should right a new story or something... I like writing what you write, so ya know :p
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Crazy_Ginger · 1 decade ago
Please do another
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lexi1020 · 1 decade ago
Omg! I didn't know u wrote this about your crush<3
But I love it<3
& I think u should do a short threequal of them still in high school. Not like if they get married or anything.
But I like happy endings(:
This is by far one of my fave stories I've ever read on witty<3
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TheCityIsAtWar · 1 decade ago
Omg I loved this story you should do a threequel but make it small like 10 chapters or so
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rachelrichard16 · 1 decade ago
I.seriously.loved.this ... This story was amazing!!!!!
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purdygirl · 1 decade ago
Amazing(: I'm so glad I stumbled upon your stories at 1AM on Monday. I'm happy I went back and read everything, and stayed up a whole 2 hours to do so. I'm amazed that you continued even after everything that happened. I love your stories, and I think you're exceptionally talented! I would love to see continuation on this story, I really would. But I know that if you wrote something else, I would be just as in love with it. Good luck on whatever you decide to do(: and just so you know, you will always have me as a loyal reader!
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doublesidedice · 1 decade ago
Wow...this story was soo good. And in my opinion I think she'll say no. I would because I wouldn't risk it. Then when they go off to college hell pay for his decision and shell move on. That's my opinion but idk.....amazing story though :)
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