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The coach of his game


Chapter 14 *Ariel’s P.O.V*
“I’ll see you tomorrow, goodnight beautiful.” He whispered huskily in my ear, I tried to say something; I couldn’t so I just gave him a quick nod, and he let out a low chuckle and left me standing there clearly stunned with a lingering kiss on my cheek. What. Just. Happened? It took me awhile to process everything in my head; I mentally cursed myself for losing control like that. This was gonna be harder than I thought, and especially now that Brad knew he had the ability to make me lose control, he would use it more often than I would like him too. But that was one of the most amazing kisses I have had in my entire life. It was passionate but romantic; it was sweet but needy at the same time. It gave me a feeling never felt before. My thoughts were interrupted by Kelly and Scar bursting in my room, seeing me in my towel didn’t help them become any less shocked then they were. “Ever heard of knocking?” I immediately snapped. Kelly mumbled a quick sorry followed by a “What the hell just happen?!” by Scar. I turned red and sighed loudly, let me grab some clothes. “Not your hair too!” Kelly exclaimed. I immediately realized she was pointing out the fact that both mine and Brad’s hair was completely out of place. I turned bright red, for the billionth time tonight! I hated blushing. I ignored her comment earning a low snicker from both of them. I quickly shuffled around my room and grabbed a tank top and a pair of shorts to sleep in. I went to the bathroom quickly changed and decided to let my hair air dry. I left the bathroom and went on my bed and spilled all the details to Kelly and Scar, trying my best to completely satisfy them. Once I finished my story and how I was planning on getting my revenge on Brad, they seemed completely satisfied; I let out a sigh of relief. We talked for a while, and then we decided to go to bed cause it was getting late. I woke up to the sound of my phone ringing, I sleepily answered the it “Hello?” I glanced at the clock it was 7:50 it was time to get up anyways “Hey beautiful! Good morning!” I could recognize that voice from anywhere in the world. Brad. He seemed pretty cheerful today. I smiled “Good morning!” He answered, obviously knowing my next question “I just called to say, it’s wakey time!” I laughed “Yup, I’m up now.” I hopped out of bed and started to choose my days outfit while still on the phone with Brad. I decided on black denim cut offs, a plain yellow tee shirt with Guess written across the chest. I quickly washed my face and began to do my hair while talking to Brad. I pulled the shorter layers back and curled the ends of the long ones; I left out two pieces of hair at the front. I decided on smoky eyes, with a light pink shade of lip gloss. I paired my outfit with a necklace with two hearts, a pair of long feather earrings, and my black Zigi Skylar pumps. I put all my notebooks in my yellow flower handbag. I went to the kitchen eating a bowl of Froot-Loops as quick as possible. “I’m outside of your hostel, come fast!” Brad suddenly said in the phone. I was shocked “Why?!” He let out a chuckle “Of course to drive you to school silly!” I immediately sprinted to the balcony and spotted his car, and of course him leaning against it. He closed the phone and signalled for me to come downstairs. He was truly amazing. I went back to the kitchen to see both Scar and Kelly eating their breakfast. “I have a ride.” I told them and grabbed my purse heading towards the door. “Ooo its lover boy!” They both teased. I just laughed “Shut up guy, see you later.” They both chuckled and said bye before I left. I made my way to Brad’s car and he opened the door for me, I smiled this felt kind of weird him being totally nice, he was up to something I eyed him suspiciously as he got in the driver’s seat. He looked amazing he wore a white v neck shirt and a black blazer on top paired with a pair of blue jeans his hair in its usual bed head style. He looked at me from the corner of his eye clearly catching me staring, I turned red and faced the opposite direction, he smiled as he started driving, “You can look I don’t mind you know.” I snapped my head back “I wasn’t even!” he just let out a low chuckle “You look beautiful.” I turned red again and smiled at him, when we reached the school everyone was staring at us. Why? I earned a few Hi Ariels, I love your shirt/bag/shoes, the usual. Brad was just casually walking me to my locker big smirk plastered on his face, I just awkwardly strutted down the hall with him close beside me. We walked up to everyone when suddenly Sophia came slightly breathless “Did you guys see the new boy yet?” I shook my head no. “He is totally gorgeous you gotta check him out! Oh my god there he is!” she excitedly looked in that direction; I followed her gaze and immediately recognized who it was, of course no one other than; Zayn.

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 K so what do you guys think? Brad or Zayn? You guys are amazing, love yous! Also I have stopped giving notifications it takes too much effort and time, and then it becomes harder to upload sooner, so the best way to know when the next chapter is up is to follow me and the chapter will be up on your hompage/quotes by people you follow. Sorry guys but now I promise I'll upload sooner! Lemme know what you think! So comment/fave/follow! lovee y'all! :)
P.S the new format is temp i just gotta find another one! Lemme know if you have a good one! Thanks lovlies! <3 :)

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Bananana2397 · 1 decade ago
Brad..
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Lizzie_143 · 1 decade ago
zayn alllll the way, haha! that way brad wont be able to go through with the bet!
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maddysoccerlvr · 1 decade ago
And Zayn, Brad still made the bet, he's still a jerk.
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maddysoccerlvr · 1 decade ago
OH my god!!!! You took my suggestion! :) Now things should get interesting! :) xoxo
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Cassakia · 1 decade ago
Best story on witty I love it sooooo much <3
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its_okay_not_to_be_okay · 1 decade ago
this is so good omfg i love it
and it says direction above zayn omg that's great(:
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sarahlouisekuhnexx · 1 decade ago
brilliant hun! you just keep getting better and better XD make sure you keep me updated plz!!! x
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CCKITTY_0714 · 1 decade ago
So a regualr story to a fanfic? intresting...
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