Taken
My name is Arianna,
and I'm sixteen. I have an amazing life.
I'm popular at school, I have more
friends than I can count, I have good grades,
and all the teachers love me. To top it all
off, I have an extraordinary boyfriend, just
like the one most girls can only dream of. In
other words, I have a spectacular life.
That is, I did, before I was Taken.
I'll tell you my story, if you'd
like. I'll start at the beginning of
sophmore year.
This is my
first attempt at a story, so I'd like
feedback. Comment what you think please. I
won't be doing notifications,
sorry.
32 faves · 10 comments · Jul 11, 2012 8:41pm
soulofthereaper
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1 decade ago
"How do you spell taken?" xD
And nice. Zombies still would be cool. But this is good too. I like this.
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gizmo4398
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1 decade ago
by the way everyone, this whole story is made up. i got the idea from a friend of mine.
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jaziqueforever
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1 decade ago
I'd like to hear it. :D
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gizmo4398
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1 decade ago
so we like the story, and we have mixed feelings for the format. overall very good so far.
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CandyCool
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1 decade ago
I love the format! Lol same tacogirl!!!
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livelifeforever22
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1 decade ago
wow! sounds really good nice intro! u should start
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queen*
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1 decade ago
It sounds like it will be good but I would use a different format because this one is kind of hard to read.
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MusicIsAir
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1 decade ago
It sounds fine... just really stereotypical for an adventure story with the whole "perfect life" thing IDK maybe that's just me.
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tacogirl
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1 decade ago
hahaha lmfao I was reading this and I thought it was like a regular quote and I was like jeez this chick certainly knows how to brag about her amazing life then I realized it was a story! haha it sounds like it will be a great :)
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awaywiththefaeries · 1 decade ago
me gusta
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