The coach of his game.

Ariel-P.O.V

Chapter 11

After a long day of school today I think I might go and

hand out some resumes, I need a job. Before I left California

my dad would always convince me not to because according to

him I can’t “support myself” of course he’d send me money

but I just felt the need to prove myself to him. So today I

was gonna be going around New York looking for a job. I

hopped out of the shower still in my towel, I needed to wear

something attractive but classy I skimmed through my now

very full closet till I stopped at my baby phat one shoulder

ruffle romper. It was patterned with nice bright colours, I

paired it up with a black belt around the waist. I blow dried

my hair, leaving my blonde hair in natural waves I pinned

the short layers back and straightened out my bangs. I

started on my make-up deciding to keep it natural, I used

some concealer and foundation, I applied black eyeliner on

top of my eye to make the light bluecolour of my eyes stand

out more, I applied mascara on my already full and long

eyelashes. I left my diomand studs in my ears and paried

them up with, a love necklace with a blue stud, a turquoise

coloured flowery bracelet, finally I applied some natural

lip-gloss that made my lips shine but look natural too.

Lastly I paired up my outfit with a pair of turquoise coloured

Nicholas Kirkwood silk flower, t-strap, platform sandals, I

grabbed my turquoise coloured flowery purse and slung it

diagonally over my body, I grabbed my black Ray-Ban

sunglasses and took a last look in the mirror and I looked

amazing. I sprayed some perfume and rushed out of my

bedroom. “Kelly and Sophia were in the kitchen sitting on the

island eating. They both looked at me “You look amazing!”

Sophia gushed and Kelly nodded in agreement. I smiled at

them with my perfect white teeth “Thank you.” I quickly

grabbed a whole wheat granola bar from the cupboard, “Where

are you going?” Kelly simply asked. “Oh, I’m going job

hunting.” I responded to her honestly since there wasn’t

much to hide.

They gave me a weird look, not sure why “If you go like that

I’m sure you’ll get many jobs!” Kelly winked at me. I laughed

and

continued nibbling on my granola bar. “Ok I should get going!

Bye girls!” I said quickly throwing the wrapper for my

granola bar out. “Good luck.” They both waved at me, I

flashed them a quick smile and hurried out the door. After

dropping about 22 resumes I was officially tired! I decided to

grab myself a coffee and relax and continue dropping the

other ones off after. I ordered a coffee for myself and sat

down, rite when my fone buzzed. Brad ‘Hey:)’ I immediately

smiled but waited a couple minutes to not look desperate.

After about like 5 minutes I replied. ‘Hey, what’s up?’ he

replied immediately ‘Nothing at home with the boys:)’ again I

waited ‘Nice’ he asked me ‘I was wondering if you wanted to

go to Andrew’s party with me on Friday? :)’ I really wanted to

go with him but I couldn’t. I quickly racked my brain for an

excuse ‘Andrew is picking me up before the party to help him

out, sorry’. I knew he was mad ‘Oh,

I see. That’s fine. Where are you right now?’ he replied after

a couple minutes this time. ‘Job hunting ;)’ he texted back

‘Nice good luck :)’ after that I didn’t text him back. I

quickly left Starbucks and handing resumes out. I entered

McDonald’s; yes I was applying at McDonald’s, this is a hard t

ime of the year to find a job so I guess anything would work.

I walked in and greeted the cashier. “Hi, would I be able to

see the hiring manager.” I asked her sweetly. She quickly s

miled at me and nodded. She came back 2 minutes later with a

VERY attractive boy following her lead. He looked like he was

about 17-18 young age for a manager really. He was tall, his

hair was jet black in a quiff, he had chocolate brown eyes and

long eyelashes framing hes eyes, he had the perfect skin tone

and a perfect smile. He was walking right towards me. Soon

he was close enough for me to read his name tag it read:

Zayn. Outfit!: http://www.polyvore.com/job_hunting/set?id=52701976

OK so I'm very afraid of the response I get for this chapter! I'm

sorry if you don't like One direction, but I thought Zayn would be

the perfect character for this role! And he is not a celeberty in my

story! Please guys don't hate!! I'll try my best to upload again

tonight and upload the characters aswell!

I'm really lovin the feedback! And spread the word about my

story loves more readers the more fatser I upload! also Fave if you

read!If you want a notification when next chapter is up click this

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coolio128 · 1 decade ago
This story is amazing I just read all 11 chapters in 1 go ! Aha
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I_love_mee · 1 decade ago
Your story is amazing and it's now my favorite story on witty and I read a lot of stories in some ways it's similar to girls like me but not totally I love how you made it like a love triangle!!!
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randomcrayon12 · 1 decade ago
I just read all of your chapters, & I LOVE IT!!! :) it's AMAZING!!(: && I actually thought it was cute how brad was singing to one thing. THAT was adorable(: && I jus- just love everything! lol so sorry for fangirling and stuff. But i really do like it! c: Bye, love!

xoxo

- ♥ RandomCrayon12
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myname22 · 1 decade ago
I just read all of your chapterrs.. ANd im in lovee! :)
Its absolutelyy AMAZING. You're a really good writerr! :)
PLEASE notifyy mee! :) <3
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sarahlouisekuhnexx · 1 decade ago
brilliant! You should upload on wattpad, your storey will get so much more credit on there XD
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its_okay_not_to_be_okay · 1 decade ago
zayn, quiff.
okay i've been on your account for like an hour reading your story and i'm obsessed. i love all the jealousy stuff. you absolutely have to notify me for the next chapter!(:
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LaurynM · 1 decade ago
haha so Zayn works at McDonalds? ;P
once it said "Quiff" i had a slight idea that it might've been him!
so sorry i can't follow u on twitter- i don't have one... :(
i'm not too high-tech XP
lol hahaha but i looveeee the story! please keep notifying me!!! :D
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Th£_Music_Fr£Ak❤* · 1 decade ago
LOVE! can't wait to read
more! keep writing!
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JuniorMint801 · 1 decade ago
Yay:)
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