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Oh How I Wish...
Chapter 76
 (A One Direction Fan-fiction)


Whenever anybody hears the name "Rosie McDonald" in the town where she used to live, brings up the memory of a girl, who hung herself. She made a video, her suicide note, of the last good week, probably the best week of her life, when she met Harry Styles. After that *click* of her remote went off, Rosie stood on a chair, and tied a rope around her neck, then around the celing fan, then she stepped off the chair. And she was gone, just like that. Her twin sisters Nicole found her, ran and got her family. They were in total shock, no idea of how this could have happened. The police were called, they discovered all her secrets. Her secret room, her diaries, her video. It all bacome clear soon enough. There were news reports on Rosie, she was in the papers, her suicide video went viral and a funeral was set up for four days after her death. Everybody who knew Rosie, even some who didn't went, and for a hour or two, they shared thier grief with others who cared, and others who really didn't, because that's what people do. They pretend to care, just to make others feel like they aren't worthless. After it was over, everybody moved on, went on about their lifes. People went to school, work, did housework and soon, Rosie McDonald was just a memory...to most, but not all. Rosie's family was there, her sisters and parents. Only six months after the funeral, they moved upstate. They needed to escape her, they just didn't know any other way. They packed up and left, attempting to leave Rosie behind. They changed thier last name to Brown, Rosie's mother's maden name. Her sisters and parents made new friends and whenever asked, her parents would say that they had three daughters, Emma, Nicole and Analise. They never heard the name Rosie Mcdonald again. Her bestfriend Jill was at Rosie's funeral. She took it pretty hard. Jill fell into a depression, and I'm sure her breakup with Niall Horan didn't help. Just a few short months after Rosie's death, they split due to distance. Luckally, Robby never left Jill's side. Weirdly enough. they ended up together, then married, then had an amazing boy named Andrew. Even as they grew old, Robby and Jill were bestfriends, but Jill always knew that their friendship wouldn't never compare to her's and Rosie's. The members of One Direction were at Rosie's funeral too. A couple of weeks after the funeral, they released a hit single called, "Moments" about a girl who commits suicide. Whenever they preformed it, nobody dared throw anything on stage, or none of the boys dared messed around, especially Harry. One Direction moved on. The went on do to great things. Harry, oh lord. Harry Styles never shead one tear over Rosie, at least, not in public. Sometimes, when alone, Rosie could see from above a few tears, she would tell him not to cry. He would listen and stop crying. He plastered a fake smile on his face for as long as One Direction, was, One Direction. Evenually, they split and moved on, all got married and settled down, including Harry. He settled down with a sweet girl named Isabella. They had a beautiful girl names Skye. Eventually, she grew up and moved on, so Harry and Isabella grew old together. They were living in New York City from as soon as One Direction split. Everday, Harry would go to "the store" or "out for a stroll" but really, we went to a cemetary, about 20 minutes away. Everyday, he would visit Rosie's grave. He would usually just put his hands together, look down at the grave, then leave. One day was different, it was Rosie's birthday. She would have been 82, he was 84. He walked over to Rosie's grave, carrying one single, beautiful red rose. He placed down the flower and said, "Happy Birthday Rosie, I wish we could spend it together." he sat down next to the grave and continued. "I never really got the chance to tell you I was sorry. I should have never stop calling or texting. You were the one thing that I loved with all my heart, and I let you slip away." He was scilent for a few minutes. He put his hand on the grave and started to tear. "Why couldn't I go, you couldn't you stay here and be happy, I was never happy without you." he whispered. He layed down, closed his eyes and said, "Oh how I wish, that was me.".
Harry Styles' eyes never opened again.

THE END.
Hope you guys like it, I loved writing it so much! :)  

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ronie101 · 1 decade ago
amazing, i feel like an idiot crying but i love your stories! keep writing xx
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LyricalGirl · 1 decade ago
this made me cry
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arenaud · 1 decade ago
I am legit crying right now. "and the tears stream down my face" << sorry, i'm kinda a loser. anyways, youre such a great writer. i cant wait to read your next story!
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asianninjanerdsrule · 1 decade ago
this just made me plain out cry. WHY, ROSIE, WHYYYYY???????
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bunnybaby32 · 1 decade ago
omg ! i just cried . . .like bawled my eyes out cried . i really loved reading your story ! it was amazing ! (: keep up the good writing skills love !
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sparkle123 · 1 decade ago
You just made me cry so much. I can't believe that a story could affect me so much
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$* · 1 decade ago
i loved the story! i really wish that she and harry would live together and get married and be happy forever. u made me cry.its so sad that she would do that:( this is the best story on witty and hope that you keep on writing!
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Chikamex56 · 1 decade ago
You made me cry :') this was one of the best stories I h e ever read! I did not see that comin tho! U are a great writer
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purpleninja · 1 decade ago
You know it's hard to make people cry by reading a story that's made up, so congrats. You made me bawl. It was amazing and a completely different outcome then i thought it would be. I could not believe you killed her off but you did an amazon job with it.
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xxDANCER22 · 1 decade ago
I cried when I was reading this you did a great job writing this it was sad but really good
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jesslynnnrae · 1 decade ago
I have I say I absolutely loved this story, it made me tear up at the end. it's so sad, but also cute. keep writing, this story is amazing (:
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ImRightHere · 1 decade ago
im crying this was amazing if u write another story please please please keep me posted
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potayto · 1 decade ago
awe he died with her. okay i'm so done with life.
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jjjenn4000 · 1 decade ago
Just adding one thing... don't think that just because I was crying that I didn't LOVE this story OR the ending. I think the way you ended it WAS VERY SAD but also VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!
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jjjenn4000 · 1 decade ago
I am literally crying after reading that! It's so sad, but so sweet. The only thing making me not super sad is picturing Harry Styles as an old man!
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ncisrox13 · 1 decade ago
Ong that was an amazing story!!!!!!!!!! I love and hate the ending! Please write more! SOON!
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0xandie0x · 1 decade ago
that was an amazing story!! such a sad ending but still amazing
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Imjustme32 · 1 decade ago
NO THATS A HORRIBLE ENDING? HOW COULD YOU KILL HER OFF???? :'(
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TheOtherDirection · 1 decade ago
Awwww, this is so sad :( I actually cried. But it was beautiful and a dfferent ending then I expected. I loved this story so much! Please start another? Please? Notify me if you do :)
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GracieeLovee · 1 decade ago
I'm crying so hard right now. I loved this story! It was amazing
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