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Runaway9468

Status: read my story? ill love you foreverrr ;)

Member Since: 23 Dec 2011 09:33pm

Last Seen: 1 Apr 2013 05:06pm

Birthday: March 10

Location: the lovley state of Iowa... jealous much? ;)

Gender: F

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Hiii there beautiful :)
I'm Lauren and this is my writting account, as you can probably see :)
(You see that ugly piece of pile on the right? yeah thats meee :) see that gorgeous girl on the left?! thats my best friend/slut stick Allie! the love of my life;))
I blow out my lovely candles on March 10th :)
I'm 14 years young and loving life! :) HAHA <--sarcasm :D
buttttt anyways! :)
I love to play sports such as: volleyball(my ultimate passion! lolol), softball, and basketball :) and I also love to dance but I don't let anyone and I don't think many people know :)
Anyone that know me knows I love to sing and I'm not afriad to show it :)
ADELE<3 My idol and inspiration. I actually sang her for my school talent show and I won People's Choice :D
I also love to read and write (obviously:P)
I just finished my first story and just started my second!
Check it outt? ;)
lolol
well...this is getting awkward...and no one reads these thingys anyways :)
soooooooo :)
stay beautiful :)
- Lauren




  1. Runaway9468 Runaway9468
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    August 25, 2012 7:32pm UTC
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  2. Runaway9468 Runaway9468
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    August 19, 2012 8:31pm UTC
    Hidden and Invisible
    Chapter Four:
    Aaliyah's POV:
    "There you are Aaliyah." Adrain says as I walk through the door.
    "What do you want Adrain?" I ask annoyed, walking to my room to put my stuff away.
    "Woah, woah, woah. Where do you think you are going?" he asks grabbing my arm, pulling me back to him and crushing our bodies together.
    "Adrain. Let go." I say sternly.
    "Don't tell me what to do, b*tch." he says, gripping my arm harder.
    "Ouch, Adrain that hurts." I whimper.
    He puts his arms around my waist a grabs my butt.
    "I want you." he whispers, kissing my neck.
    "Adrain...please stop." I beg him.
    "No." he says, stuffing his hands up my shirt.
    He pushes me onto the couch and lays on top of me, shoving his tounge down my throat.
    "I'll be right back. I'm going to go and grab something and then we will continue." he says winking, before jogging into Ava's bedroom.
    This is my chance.
    I get up from the couch and sprint past Av'as room and into my bedroom.
    "Ohhh no you don't!" Adrian yells, grabbing my waist.
    "No!" I scream.
    I wiggle out of his grasp and run into my bedroom. I slam the door and lock it.
    "Get out here, you little sl*t!" Adrian screams, pounding on my door.
    I grab out my phone and text Rylen.
    "Starbucks in ten?" - Aaliyah
    I don't wait for a response. I grab my bag and shove clothes into it. I run over to my window, open it, and kick out the screen. I jump out and run to Starbucks a few blocks away, hoping Rylen gets there.
    By the time I get there, tears are streaming down my face.
    I open the door and run inside, smashing into someone.
    We both crash to the floor.
    "We have got to stop meeting like this, Aaliyah." Rylen says laughing, pulling me up from the ground.
    "Oh my gosh, Aaliyah. What's wrong?!" he asks.
    "Adrain...he..." I say between sobs.
    "It's alright, it's alright. I've got you, your fine." he says gently, pulling me against his chest.
    All the sudden the door slams open.
    "There you are, you little wh*re." Adrian spits at me.
    He stomps over to me and grabs my wrist, pulling me away from Rylen.
    "Dude, let go of her." Rylen says sternly.
    "No, she is my sl*t, go and find your own." Adrain says, pulling me to the door.
    "I said, let go." Rylen says, punching Adrian in the jaw.
    He tumbles to the ground, stunned.
    "Aaliyah, lets go. Hurry!" Rylen says, grabbing my hand.
    He pulls my outside and to his car.
    "Get it!" he yells, Adrain running behind us.
    I jump in the car and we speed away,
    leaving Adrian behind.
    Hii beautifuls! :)
    2 chapters in 2 days?! I must love you guys :)
    Feedback? pleaseee? :)
    What do you think?! :)
    Does anyone like this story? should I continue?
    *still doing notifications*
    stay beautiful :)
    - Lauren

  3. Runaway9468 Runaway9468
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    August 18, 2012 10:46pm UTC
    Hidden and Invisible
    Chapter Three:
    Aaliyah's POV:
    Finally, lunch. The only part of the day that I actually enjoy. I grab my food and go over to my usual table outside by my favorite tree.
    "Hey Aaliyah." I hear someone say behind me.
    My head snaps up to see Rylen standing there.
    "H-hi..?" I say confused.
    "Can I sit down?" he asks.
    I look up at him, my eyebrows raised. I don't respond, and look back down at my paper. He doesnt "catch my drift," and he sits down across from me.
    "I never said you could there." I snap.
    "Well, you never said I couldn't." he says smiling.
    My cheecks flush light pink and I try not to smile back.
    "What are you working on?" he asks, before taking a bite of his sandwhich.
    "Trig." I say sighing.
    "Oh, fun!" he says sarcastically.
    "Right?!" I say smiling.
    I take a big bite of my sandwhich to stop my growling stomach.
    Rylen just stares at me.
    "What are you staring at?" I say confused, my cheeks blushing a light shade of pink again.
    "Your eating." he says emotionless.
    "So..?" I ask, still confused.
    "None of the girls at this school eat!" he exclaims.
    "Well most of the girls are anorexic and uncomfortable in their own skin. I'm fine with the way I am." I tell him honestly.
    "I wish all girls would think like you do. None of those girls should do that. They are all beautiful the way they are." he says, taking another bite of his sandwhich.
    I look down at my book and smile, pretending to do another trig question.
    "Here, give me your hand." he says pulling out a pen.
    I give him my hand and he writes his number on it.
    "Text me." he says winking, before getting up to leave.
    "Bye." I say smiling.
    The rest of the day went fast, and I finally get to go home.
    But I didn't know that was the worst thing I could have wanted.
    Hii beautifuls! :)
    Sorry it took me so long to upload again...I started school last monday and I'm already up to my sh*t in homework... sooo 2 chapters tonight! next one will be up soon! :)
    Does anyone like this story? should I continue?
    *still doing notifications*
    stay beautiful :)
    - Lauren

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    August 8, 2012 8:15pm UTC
    Hidden and Invisible
    Chapter Two:
    Aaliyah's POV:
    "D-dad stop! I promise I won't ever do it again!" I hear Adrian yell, as my step-dad lands another punch to Adrian's face.
    The usual morning beating. I hurry with my breakfast and go to the bus stop, so I don't hear anymore. Adrain comes out of the house a few minutes later with another black eye.
    "What are you doing here, you freak?" Adrain says as he walks over to the bus stop.
    "Waiting for the bus?" I ask questioningly.
    "Don't you get smart with me, b*tch." he says, slapping me in the face.
    "You're lucky he doesn't give you a beating everyday! Maybe that should be my job." he spits at me.
    I drop my head so I'm looking at the ground.
    "You worthless piece of sh*t." he mumbles as he walks over to the bus.
    I get up a moment later and follow him, my eyes still at the ground. I climb up the steps and I hear the bus fall silent. I keep my head down and walk to the first open seat. The chatter goes back to normal as we get to school. Like usual, I'm the last one off the bus. I walk to my locker and grab my stuff. All the sudden someone smashes against me and I fall to the ground, my books and papers flying everywhere.
    "Oh, my bad shorty." he says, holding out his hand.
    I take it and he helps me up.
    "You okay?" he asks, helping me grab all my papers.
    "Yeah." I say as I grab the rest of my stuff and walk away.
    "Wait." he says grabbing my arm. "Aren't you going to tell me your name?"
    "Rylen...we have been in the same class since the 1st grade." I tell him.
    "Yo, Rylen! Lets go bro!" one of his friends yells from down the hall.
    "Oh..I got to go-" he says, still not knowing my name.
    "Aaliyah." I tell him hesitantly.
    "Well, I'll see you around, Aaliyah." he smiles at me.
    I roll my eyes and walk to class.
    "Why were you talking to the freak?" I over hear one of his friends say.
    "Who? Aaliyah?" Rylen asks.
    "Yeah!" his friend yells.
    "I just ran into her, that's all." he says as they walk away.
    I roll my eyes again and follow them (a safe distance away) to class.
    Rylen Cale. The quarterback of the football team, the hottie of the school, and every girls dream guy...but not mine. Who would ever like the shy, quiet girl?
    Thats right, no one.
    Hi beautiful's! :)
    Ik it sounds cliche but I promise it isnt one of those stories :) stick with me :) This format has pretty much gone to sh*t...Sorry it took so long to upload! I was on vacation! :) Does any even like this story? should I continue?*still doing notifications*
    stay beautiful :)
    - Lauren

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    August 3, 2012 9:24am UTC
    Hidden and Invisible
    Chapter one:
    Aaliyah's POV:
    "I do." Those fateful words my mother was forced to say. And now look at us. My step-dad is abusive and his two victims are my step-brother and step-sister, Adrian and Ava. I know what you are thinking; why not me? And the answer? I don't know. My mom is a float nurse, so she is out on call all night, every night. She doesn't know what goes on around here. She thinks Adrian is the "bad boy" of the school. She thinks he likes to pick fights with people to make him look "tough." Maybe if she came home once and a while, she would find out what really happens. And Ava? Well, if she ends up pregnant, I don't know how he is going to talk his way out of that one.
    *Flashback*
    "Hey Ava." I say as I walk into her room.
    "Oh hey Aaliyah! What's up?" she asks.
    "Noth-what's that?" I ask as my eyes flitter over to her nightstand.
    "Nothing!" she says quickly, grabbing the little packages and shoving them into a drawer.
    "Were those c-condoms?" I ask, whispering the last word.
    "So what if they were?" she asks.
    "You shouldn't let him take advantage of you like that Ava!" I tell her.
    "Well, what else am I suppose to do?!" she asks.
    "Stop him!" I yell.
    "How?!" she yells back.
    "I-I"
    "Exactly." she says, getting up from her bed.
    "You saw nothing." she says quietly, as she walks out of her bedroom and out the front door.
    *End of flashback*
    What has happened with the world? When did it become so cruel? How can a father sexually abuse his teenage daughter and beat his son? What happened to all those loving and caring families that you see in the movies? Do they even exist anymore? Does love even exist anymore? My biological father ran out on my mom when he found out she was pregnant. How cliche. And now she married a person who likes to beat people and sexually abuse girls?
    Sounds like love to me!
    That is one thing I will never do.
    Love sounds so difficult, and impossible.
    Almost like it isn't even real.
    Hi lovlies :)
    Sooo this is my new story...kinda a rough start but I'm just getting started :)
    Sorry it took so long to upload! I've been super busy with school starting soon :) and I had a HUGE writters block...already... :/
    If you commented on the prolouge or asked me to be notified, you are on the llist :)
    IF YOU WANT TO BE NOTIFIED: comment/ask meeee :) i would love to! :)
    *still doing notifications*
    I love all my readers and followers more then Twilight O.o
    stay beautiful :)
    - Lauren

  6. Runaway9468 Runaway9468
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    July 25, 2012 12:50pm UTC
    Hidden and Invisible
    Prolouge:
    Aaliyah is not the girl that you would call "popular". She is the girl thats you ignore when she is walking down the hallway. Even at home, she doesn't get a second look. Ever since her shy and quiet mom, married her loud and abusive boyfriend, her life has been nothing more then being ignored. Her brother Adrian and sister Ava are always in the spotlight, but not in the way you probably think. So what happens when Aaliyah is sick and tired of being
    Hidden and Invisible?
    Hi lovlies :)
    This is my new story called Hidden and Invisible! YAY :) i know i said i was going to put up a few prolouge ideas and let you all wonderful people choose... butttt i didnt get very many ideas and this was my favorite! :) I hope you guys feel the same! :)
    I am still doing notifications. If you commented on the last chapter of my last story you will be on the list! :)
    IF YOU WANT TO BE NOTIFIED: comment/ask meeee :) i would love to! :)
    *still doing notifications*
    I love all my readers and followers more then Twilight O.o
    stay beautiful :)
    - Lauren

  7. Runaway9468 Runaway9468
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    July 19, 2012 2:27pm UTC
    the Murder's Son
    Epilouge:
    Chase's POV:
    "Hi mom." I say sadly, walking through the front door after another long day of putting up MISSING posters. It has been one week since Evelyn went missing.
    "Hi sweety. No luck today?" she asks gently.
    I shake my head no and start to go upstairs.
    "Wait, where is dad?" I ask, stopping at the bottom of the stairs.
    "At work." she says.
    "Still? He has been there for a week striaght! Ever since Eveyln went missing..." I tell her glumly.
    I start to go back upstairs when all of the puzzle pieces start to fit together. My eyes open in shock. I run to the front door and down to my dads shop, four blocks away. I call 911 on the way.
    I hope I'm not too late.
    Ambulance and police cars pass me on the way. I finally get to the workshop, where there is a frenzy of people running around. I walk over to a policeman when I see my dad getting pushed out of his office in handcuffs, a smirk on his face.
    "Where is she?!" I scream, running over to a paramedic.
    "Where is who?" she asks calm.
    "Evelyn! The girl?!" I scream.
    The paramedic looks at me sadly.
    "I'm sorry... but she is gone. She lost too much blood. We did everything we could."
    I stare at her in horror.
    "No! S-she can't be g-gone!" I scream, tears streaming down my face.
    "I know this is hard but will you come with me?" the paramedic asks.
    "Why? Where are we going?" I ask through my tears.
    "We need someone to identify her body." she says.
    I shake my head yes and they bring me to the morgue.
    "Please follow me." a tall man says when I get there.
    He leads me through hallways and a bunch of doors untill we finally stop.
    I go in and I see Evelyn's beaten and bloody face, her body covered with a white sheet, laying on a metal table. I walk over to her side and start to cry.
    "Evelyn... I'm so sorry! This is all my fault!" I say hugging her cold, limp body,
    I look at her beautiful face, that is now covered in scratches and bruises.
    "I'm so sorry." I whisper, kissing her cold lips for the last time.
    I cover her head with the white sheet that is covering the rest of her body.
    "Excuse me, sir?" the man asks me.
    "Yeah?" I asks him, tears still in my eyes.
    "I think this is for you..." he says, handing me an envolope with my name on it.
    I take it with shaky hands and open it carefully.
    Chase,
    Thanks for everything. I'm really going to miss you, but I know I will see you again someday. The puzzle pieces all suddenly fell into place. I know now why you ignored me and why you were trying to protect me. And I want you to know this is not your fault. Because, in reality, it is my fault. I'm the one who fell in love with The Murder's Son.
    The End
    Hi lovlies :)
    THATS IT!!!! YAY!!!!! :) Whatcha think?! :) FEEDBACK PLEASE :):)
    I have decided I'm going to write another one but I still need a few more ideas and then I'll let you lovely peoples decide :) thanks for ALL the support that kept me going throughout the whole entire story <3 I love you guys :)
    I'll try to put up the different prolouge ideas sometime next week! :)
    IF YOU WANT TO BE NOTIFIED FOR WHEN THE PROLOUGE IDEAS ARE UP: comment me :)
    STILL WANT TO BE NOTIFIED? ask meee :)
    *still doing notifications*
    I love all my readers and followers with a passion :)
    stay beautiful
    - Lauren

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    July 13, 2012 8:09pm UTC
    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Twenty:
    Evelyn's POV:
    I wake up from all of the pain, all over my body. I know for a fact my leg is broken and my arm and shoulder are out of place. My right eye is swollen shut and I now have third degree burns all over my body from the last torture tool: the weldor. I am laying in my own pool of blood again, trying to keep myslef warm. I know from the days past and from all of my blood stains on the cement around me, that I can't have too much time left. A sudden light from the door startles me and I know that more hurt is on the way.
    "Time for the last one princess! Then I'll have the boss come to finish you off!" the man yells.
    I have learned to keep my mouth shut so I just lay here, shaking. I hear dogs barking and growling outside, scratching on the door. The man comes over and sprays something on me. I cough as the spray enters my mouth and surrounds the air around me. The dogs go wild. The man then, goes over to the door and opens it. The dogs sprint toward me, a look of hunger in their eyes. Their teeth sink into my skin and down to the bone. Their claws tear at my flesh. They bite and claw everywhere on my body. My face, my arms, my legs, anywhere they can. But I don't scream. I will not give them the satisfaction of seeing me suffer.
    Finally, one of the men comes forward and pulls the two dogs away from my beaten and bloody body. I close my eyes and hope to die.
    "Well, welll, well. Look at what we have here." I hear a fimiliar voice say.
    My eyes snap open to see a fimiliar face.
    "M-Mr. Marcek?" I ask shocked.
    "The one and only." he says proud.
    "I told Chase to stay away from you, but you just had to get in the way." he yells, kicking me in the stomach.
    "Why?" I croak out, as I gasp in pain.
    "Well, I took care of your dad just fine. Now it is time to take care of you."
    All the puzzle pieces are coming together, one by one.
    "Any last words?" he asks, pulling a gun out from behind his back.
    "Please..." I croak out.
    "Just one little thing, and then you can kill me." I say pleading.
    "What?!" he snaps.
    "Can I please just have a pen and a piece of paper? Please? This is all I ask." I plead again.
    He rolls his eyes and gives me them.
    "Stupid teenage love." he mumbles.
    I put all my strength into it.
    I shed one single tear, as I write my last letter.
    I seal it up and stick it in what is left of my front shorts pocket.
    I look up at Mr. Marcek one last time, my eyes strong. Not one ounce of fear.
    He points the gun at my chest.
    "Say hi to your daddy for me." he says, pulling the trigger.
    I hear sirens outside but I know its too late.
    I can feel the bullet entering my chest, making my heart beat slower, and slower.
    I look at the ceiling and smile, knowing that someone will find me.
    And with that, my eyes close for the last time.
    Hi lovlies :)
    If you cant tell... I'm not one for happy endings but I though it was good! :) feedback please? :)
    One chapter left after this! Epilouge? no epilouge? give me your thoughts! :)
    Should I write another one after this? if so :) IDEAS?! what would YOU guys want me to write about? :)
    SOOOO my friend Allie is about to start a story! she just uploaded the prolouge! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE check her out! she is an amazing writter!!!Her username is Cloudnine_21.
    IF YOU ASKED TO BE NOTIFIED: you will be on the list, you don't have to ask everytime <3 I got you covered ;) lol
    If you are reading will you please fav this chapter? I want to see how many readers I have :)
    Anyone want to be notified when the next chapter is up? COMMENT MEEE :)
    Thanks lovlies! :) stay beautiful <3 -Lauren Elizabeth <3

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    July 7, 2012 12:16am UTC
    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Nineteen:
    Evelyn's POV:
    I wake up in a dark room with my arms and legs tied to a chair with duct tape over my mouth.
    "Well, good morning princess." a tall, muscular man says as he opens the door.
    I am temporarily blinded by the light.
    "Are you ready to play a game?" he asks, almost excited.
    I look at him with a look of shock and confusion on my face.
    "You're an a**sshole." I mumble through the duct tape.
    He looks at me confused, then rips off the duct tape. I scream in pain while he smirks at me.
    "You said what now?" he asks.
    "I said," I say clearing my throat. "You're an a**hole!"
    He looks at me p*ssed, then he slaps me in the face. I scream again. I can feel the red handprint forming on my face that will likely leave a bruise.
    "Thats right princess. I'm big, you're little. I'm important and you're not. No one will even notice or care that you are gone." he says smirking again, pushing my chair backwords.
    My head is the first thing that hits the hard, cement floor. I feel something sticky and wet run down my hair line and down the back of my neck.
    "Now." he says untying my hands and feet. "It's time to play a game."
    He pulls/drags me over to the nearest wall and chains one of my arms to it.
    "What kind of a game?" I croak out.
    He smiles a devious smile and goes out of the room.
    He comes back a minute later, with what looks like a paddle wheel.
    "A very fun game. You will spin this wheel once every 12 hours and which ever one it lands on, will happen to you." he says smirking.
    "And if I decide not to play?" I ask.
    "Then I will chose for you."
    I gulp.
    "And what happens when they run out?"
    A devious smile appears back on his lips.
    "Then, I'll kill you. Now, spin."
    I hesitantly lift up my hand to spin the torture wheel. I read them as they go round and round.
    Teeth and claws.
    Weldor.
    Tools.
    I stop reading them when I start to get woozy.
    It finally stops.
    Fists and Feet.
    "Oh, I'm going to enjoy this." he says cracking his knuckles.
    My eyes go wide in shock and I shrink back to the wall.
    He smiles and walks toward me. He kicks me in the stomach and I scream out in pain. He picks me up off the ground by my shoulders.
    Oh God.
    Oh God.
    Please just let this end.
    He throws me on the ground and punches me in the face.
    And thats the last thing I remember.
    Hi lovlies.
    Im sorry it took so long.
    I have like NO motivation to upload anymore let alone write.
    I feel like no one likes it.
    I think this might be my last story on witty...
    okay: b*tch mode over!
    SOOOO my friend Allie is about to start a story! she just uploaded the prolouge! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE check her out! she is an amazing writter!!!Her username is Cloudnine_21.
    IF YOU ASKED TO BE NOTIFIED: you will be on the list, you don't have to ask everytime <3 I got you covered ;) lol
    If you are reading will you please fav this chapter? I want to see how many readers I have :)
    Anyone want to be notified when the next chapter is up? COMMENT MEEE :)
    Thanks lovlies! :) stay beautiful <3 -Lauren Elizabeth <3

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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Seventeen:
    Evelyn's POV:
    "Evelyn...will you be my girlfriend?" Chase asks nervously.
    "Yes." I say hesitantly.
    "Really?" Chase asks shocked.
    "Yeah?" I say confused.
    He smiles really big and hugs me while spinning me around. I laugh and he finally puts me down, while we both smile at each other. He leans in to kiss me when Lily and Ryan come down the steps, hand in hand.
    "Woah, woah, woah! Time to break up this make out session!" Lily yells quickly, winking at me.
    I take a step back and blush a deep shade of red. Lily and Ryan laugh and Chase and I soon join in.
    "Soo... what should we do today?" Ryan asks.
    Me and Lily look at each other and smile.
    "Sand. Volleyball." Lily and I say in unison.
    "Lets meet outside in 10!" I yell, grabbing Lily's hand and pulling her up the steps to change.
    Ryan and Chase run to his house to change quick as well. We both put on a pair of short shorts and a tank top. We fix our hair and put on makeup and then we are out the door. They beat us out.
    "Lets go!" I yell cheerfully.
    Chase grabs my hand and Ryan grabs Lily's. We make our way to the beach making small conversations on the way.
    "So, what are the teams?" Chase asks.
    "Me and Evelyn, and you and Chase. Duh." Lily says smiling.
    "Lets go already!" I yell, getting impatient.
    "We serve first!" Ryan screams, grabbing the volleyball and running to his side of the court.
    "Hey! Haven't you heard of ladies first?!" Lily yells.
    "Psshhh! No!" he says back smiling.
    Me and Lily roll our eyes and walk to our spots.
    "First one to 21 wins!" I yell.
    The game went fast. We creamed them. I had some great attacks, other then that, the reason we won is because they made stupid mistakes.
    "We just totally owned you." Lily yells, poking Ryan in the shoulder.
    "What are you talking about? We totally let you two win!" Chase says.
    "Oookay. Whatever." I tell him sarcastically.
    He smiles and pecks me on the cheeck.
    "Oohh! Lets go get some ice cream!" Lily squeals.
    "Okay. I'm just going to run to the bathroom quick. I'll meet you there!" I say.
    "Are you sure? I'll wait for you." Chase says.
    "No. It's fine. It's not like I'm going to get kidnapped or anything." I say smiling.
    "Okay. Hurry back." he says.
    "I'll try. I'm a girl remember?" I say sarcastically.
    He smiles at me before he takes off with Lily and Ryan.
    I turn around and walk to the bathroom. I go in, do my business, and walk back out.
    I start walking to the ice cream shope when all the sudden, a big, muscular hand clamps over my mouth.
    Hi lovlies!! :)
    AAHHHH! EVELYN!! lol :) whats gonna happen?! Trust me, it gets intense from here! and make sure always to check whos POV (point of view) it is before you read orrrr you could get a little confused :)
    Feedback? please? I really need some motivation to keep going. I kinda feel like no one likes it...
    SOOOO my friend Allie is about to start a story! she just uploaded the prolouge! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE check her out! she is an amazing writter!!!Her username is Cloudnine_21.
    IF YOU ASKED TO BE NOTIFIED: you will be on the list, you don't have to ask everytime <3 I got you covered ;) lol
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Sixteen:
    Evelyn's POV:
    I wake up with a huge headache, while the sun shines brightly through the shades. I groan and roll over. I suddenly hit something hard. My eyes snap open to see Chase laying next to me. His eyes open tiredly and he looks over at me.
    "Well, good morning beautiful." he says smiling a crooked smile.
    I stare at him in horror. I roll over onto my back and look up at my ceiling.
    "Are you okay?" Chase asks me.
    "I just have a huge headache amd I'm a little confused..."
    "I kinda figured." he said, laughing silently.
    "Here." he says, handing me a glass of water and some tylenol.
    "Thanks..." I say taking them.
    He doesn't respond he just smiles.
    "Sooo...um..what happened after I-"
    "Passed out?" he asks, interrupting me.
    "Yeah...that."
    "Well me, Ryan, and Lily-"
    "Oh crap! Where are those two?" I ask, interrupting him this time.
    He smiles and points to the ground by my side of the bed.
    I roll over and look on the ground. Ryan has his arms around Lily, both of them still asleep. I burst into a loud fit of giggles. Chase quickly clamps his hand over my mouth.
    "Sshhh!" he says smiling.
    I keep laughing for a minute or so untill I finally die down.
    "You done yet?" Chase asks smiling.
    I shake my head yes.
    He slowly takes his hand away.
    "You want to go make breakfast?" he asks me quietly.
    "Sure." I say back.
    He gets up and I see he is wearing no shirt, just his boxers.
    Holy mother of abs.
    I stare at him, my mouth drops open in shock.
    He sees me staring and he starts to laugh silently.
    I blush quickly and look away. He puts on shorts and a t-shirt and I slowly get up.
    Then, I see what I am wearing.
    I'm wearing a black razorback tank top and my pajama short zebra shorts.
    "How did I...uh.." I ask confused, blushing wildly.
    "Lily changed you. Oh and she borrowed some clothes too." he says smirking.
    "Oh..." I says still blushing.
    I quickly grab a pair of boy shorts and another tank top to put on.
    "Um...turn around." I tell Chase.
    He obidently turns around and I quickly put on my new clothes.
    "Okay. Lets go." I say.
    He turns around, to look at me.
    "Wow." he says, shocked.
    "Wow what?" I ask him confused and shocked.
    "You. Even in that, I don't know if I've ever seen someone so beautiful.." he says.
    I blush big time.
    He comes up to me and kisses me passionatly.
    "Okay, now we can go." he says, grabbing my hand and leading me downstairs.
    "What would you like?" he asks, going into the kitchen.
    "Wait, your gonna cook?" I ask surprised.
    "Yup." he says smiling.
    I go over and sit on a bar stool.
    "Hmmm...how about some pancaakes?" I ask smiling.
    "How about some ceral?" he asks smiling.
    "Perfect." I say laughing." he says.
    We eat our bowls of ceral and then put our stuff away.
    "Sooo..." I say trying to make a conversation.
    "Ummm... can I ask you something?" he asks.
    "Sure." I say confused.
    "Evelyn...will you be my girlfriend?"
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Fifteen:
    Evelyn's POV:
    "What are you doi-" I didn't get to finish asking when his lips crashed onto mine.
    At first I'm in shock, then I start to pull away. He tightens his grip on my waist and pulls me to him lightly. A thousand things are running through my head.
    What the hell?!
    Why am I kissing back?!
    STOPPP!!!
    Do I really want to stop..?
    We both pull away. I take an extra step back, just so we wern't as close.
    "Evelyn..." Chase says, taking a step closer to me.
    I take another step back.
    "What was that?" I ask lightly, confused.
    "Evelyn...I really like you." he says.
    "Well then why the hell did you break up with me?!" I ask.
    "I'm trying to protect you. And trying not to hurt you anymore." he says quietly.
    "Oh...so giving me all these hints that you like me, asking me to the formal, then ignoring me and ditching me, was trying not to hurt me?!" I ask, my voice getting a little louder.
    "Evelyn...I'm sorry, I really am." he tells me with pleading eyes, taking another step closer to me.
    "Chase..." I say with tears coming to my eyes.
    I try to take another step back but I hit the wall lightly.
    He takes another step closer and puts a few stray hairs behind my ear.
    "I promise I will never hurt you again...I'm so sorry Evelyn." he tells me sincerally. "I was stupid to let you go. I would rather keep you safe in my arms rather then have you be with Ryan..."
    He takes another step toward me and wipes the tear that fell from my face.
    He lifts my face to his.
    He starts to lean in closer and clo-
    "Evelyn!!!" I hear someone scream.
    Then, all the sudden Ryan bursts through the door.
    I can smell smoke in the air.
    "There is a fire! We need to go!" Ryan yells.
    I'm so shocked, I can't move.
    Chase grabs my hand and pulls me out of the room and down the stairs.
    We sprint for the back door, covering our mouths and noses.
    "Where's Lily?!" I scream.
    "I'll find her!" Ryan yells, running away from us and back into the burning house.
    "Ryan!! No!!" I scream, trying to run after him, but Chase pulls me back.
    I struggle against his grasp, but it is no use.
    All the sudden Ryan comes out of the house, carrying Lily in his arms.
    "We need to get out of here. Now." Chase says.
    We sprint through the backyard and into the woods. We run through the woods and I trip over the roots of the trees. Chase helps me up and puts me on his back. He carries me all the way through and then we run for my house. We get inside and we all collapse, a bunch of emotions running through all of our heads.
    I fall onto the ground.
    I feel like I'm flying.
    And thats the last thing I remember.
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Fourteen:
    Evelyn's POV:
    I woke up the next morning with tear stained cheecks. I get up and go look threw my shorts from the day before. I get my phone and text the number.
    "Hey Ryan! It's Evelyn!" - Evelyn
    "Hey! :) How was your night?!" - Ryan
    "Is that a retorical question?" - Evelyn
    "...I guess. I'm so sorry Eve! I have to go help my parents but call me later okay?" - Ryan
    "K. Bye..." - Evelyn
    I throw down my phone and walk to my window. Chase, Lania, Aden, and Adeline are all outside playing basketball. I smile. All the sudden, Adeline sees me and waves. I wave back smiling. Chase sees Adeline and turns to look at me. We both stare at each other for a second untill we both turn away. My phone starts ringing so I go grab it.
    "Hello?" I ask.
    "Be there in 3...2...1"
    "Hi Lily." I say as she walks into my room.
    "Hi gorgeous!" she says smiling.
    I roll my eyes.
    "Whats up?!" I ask.
    "Well...there is a party tonight..."
    I groan. "Lily..."
    "Chase will be there...You could bring Ryan!"
    "I don't know..."
    Lily looks over at my night stand and then back at me. Then, she sprints for my phone.
    "No!" I scream. "Lily!"
    "Oh hey Ryan! It's Lily!"
    "Lily!" I yell pushing her onto my bed, trying to pry my phone out of her hand.
    "Party at 6! Faith's house! 1316 4th ST! Bye!" she says really fast.
    I plop down in defeat. I glare at her.
    "Come on! Lets find you an outfit." Lily says.
    She gave me white short shorts and a pink and black flowy shirt. She did my make up and Curled my hair and then we were off.
    "Ryan!" Lily yelled for me as we got there.
    "Hey!" he said turning around, looking me up and down. "Wow. You look gorgeous."
    "Whatever..." I say, rolling my eyes, smiling.
    "Lets go!" he says, grabbing my hand, dragging me inside.
    The music is blasting and there are strobe lights going in every direction. I see Chase talking to a group of his friends. He sees me and his eyes go wide.
    "Lets dance!" I yell over the music, dragging Ryan to the dance floor.
    Everyone is grinding. Ryan looks at me with his eyebrows raised.
    "Just let go! Have fun!" I yell, putting his hands on my waist.
    We dance, well grind for about a half an hour till Ryan gets thirsty.
    "Want something?" he yells over the music.
    "Lemonade?!" I yell back.
    "Coming right up!" he yells smiling.
    Ryan comes back and gives me my drink, it tastes a little funny but oh well. I chug it down and grab Ryan again.
    "Lets go!" I yell smiling.
    All the sudden Ryan leans down and kisses me. Chase looks over at us, uncomfortablly. We gp back out to the dance floor when I see Chase's friends pushing him in my direction. I pretend not to notice.
    "Dude! Just go!" Drew yells at him.
    Me and Ryan are grinding again when someone taps my shoulder. I turn around to see Chase but I just ignore him. Then I feel a sharp tug on my right arm, pulling me off of Ryan.
    "What do you want?!" I yell over the music.
    He rolls his eyes and pulls me away. He drags me upstairs and into a bedroom. I look at him with a confused and shocked look on my face.
    I didn't notice but we were standing really close.
    "What are you doi-" I didn't get to finish when I felt his lips crash onto mine.
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Thirteen:
    Evelyn's POV:
    I grab my bookbag off the ground and stand up. Then, I see Chase stomp toward me, a p*ssed expression on his face. I smirk but I try not to let it show. He stops right in front of me.
    "Excuse me..." I say, trying to push past him.
    He doesn't budge and I raise my eyebrows at him.
    "What the h*ll was that?!" he asks, beyond p*ssed.
    "What was what?" I ask innocently.
    "That!" he almost screams, not finding the right words.
    "I don't know what your talking about." I say, trying to walk away.
    "Oh, don't play dumb with me!" he screams.
    I turn around sharply so I can look him in the eye.
    "Why do you care?!" I scream at him, tears threating to spill down my face. "You left me remember?!"
    I turn to walk away again but he grabs my arm to stop me.
    "Evelyn..." he says, sadness in his eyes.
    "You've ignored me for days, and all you can say is Evelyn..?'" I ask.
    I wipe the single tear that escaped my eyes and walk away.
    He grabs my arm again.
    "Let go..." I whisper and wiggle out of his grasp.
    I walk back into school to get back to class.
    Now, it is my turn to ignore Chase.
    I've done everything so he can't talk to me again.
    "Hey!" Ryan says, coming up behind me, at the end of the day.
    "Hey..." I say back, less enthusiastic.
    "What's wrong?" he asks me concerned.
    "I talked to Chase today...after you left." I say.
    "And? How did it go?" he asks excitedly.
    I look at him with sad eyes and then walk to my locker without saying a word.
    "Oh...Evie, I'm so sorry." he says hugging me.
    I hug him back, tears threating to spill again. He lets go and looks at me.
    "Not here you don't." he says, wiping my cheeck with his thumb.
    I bury my face in his chest.
    "He doesn't deserve your tears." he says, tilting my head up to look him in the eye.
    "Are you sure you still want to do this?"
    "Yeah...I think so."
    He raises his eyebrows at me.
    "Yeah, lets bump it up a notch and make it count." I say, hugging him again.
    "Okay...only if you want..." he says, still sounding unsure.
    "Ryan?" I ask him.
    "Yeah?"
    "Your a great friend."
    He smiles at me.
    "Well I better get going. Call me okay?"
    "Absolutly." I say giving him a small smile.
    He smiles back and leans down to give me a kiss on the cheeck before going to the bus.
    I grab a few more things from my locker before I turn to leave.
    I start to leave when I hear a locker shut behind me. I turn around and see Chase standing there looking at me. We look at each other for a few seconds untill he tries to say something. I turn around quickly and ignore him when he calls my name. I walk home, never turning back.
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Twelve:
    Evelyn's POV:
    Next Day at School:
    "Oh, hey Ryan!" I say smiling as he walks next to me.
    "Why didn't you tell me?" he asks, looking me straight in the eye.
    "Tell you what?" I ask confused.
    "That your the girl that all the guys are going nuts about."
    "Because I didn't know they were?"
    "O-okay. Whatever." he says smiling.
    "Everyone won't shut up. Eveyone knows the story." he says.
    "What story?" I ask kinda curious.
    "The one about you and Chase."
    "Ahh I see, I see." I say sitting down at a lunch table.
    Ryan sits down across from me.
    I see Chase walk with a group of friends, about to walk past us.
    "Oh my gosh Ryan! You are so funny!" I say giggling, trying to attract his attention.
    He looks over at us with a look of sadness and anger in his eyes.
    Oh yeah.
    Ryan smirks at me.
    "You still have feelings for him dont you?"
    I blush and look down at the table, totally embarrassed.
    "Well I can't just "stop" liking him..." I say quietly.
    "You want to make him jealous?" he asks.
    I don't respond, I just stare at the table.
    "I'll do it." he says quietly.
    "Do what? I ask while looking at him.
    "I'll pretend to be your boyfriend so you can make Chase jealous."
    I look at him in total shock.
    "Really?! But why? You barley know me!" I tell him.
    "Well first: I can get to know you, second: becasue your super nice and I want us to be friends, third: no guy should ever treat a girl like that and finally: it will get me a reputation." he says smiling.
    I smile at him and run over to give him a hug.
    "Ah! Ryan your the best!" I squeal.
    "I know, I know." he says, pulling me onto his lap.
    "Soo no hard feelings? All to make him jealous right?" I ask.
    "Absolutly. Want to go get this show on the rode?"
    I nod my head yes.
    "Just follow my lead."
    We both stand up, hand and hand, and walk outside to the courtyard, where Chase and his friends are. We walk out and sit under the shande of a tree, in hearing distance of Chase and his friends.
    I giggle along the way, while he smiles.
    "Soo...Evelyn. Will you be my girlfriend?" he asks a little too loud so Chase could hear.
    "Absolutly!" I yell and nock him over in a hug.
    We both start laughing and I hear Chase and his friends fall silent.
    He hands me a piece of paper as the bell rings.
    "I have to go to class. Call me." he says winking at me.
    Then, he leans down to peck me on the lips.
    We both smile at each other before he walks away.
    After he is out of sight I stand up to leave when I see Chase walking over to me, an angry expression on his face.
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Eleven:
    Evelyn's POV:
    At 5:55 A.M. my alarm clock went off. I get up and right away, almost excited. I put on my new outfit, and start on my makeup.
    After that is perfect, I curl my hair.
    I fix my makeup one last time and I'm out the door.
    I get to school about 10 minutes until the bell.
    'Perfect timing.'
    I open the front doors and walk to section 5- my part of the school.
    I turn to walk down the hallway, and then the heads start to turn.
    First one, then them all.
    On my left side about 100 feet away, I see Chase and a group of his friends.
    Chase is the last one to turn.
    I look away and keep walking down the hall.
    I hear someone whistle behind me and I just roll my eyes.
    I'm a lady, not a dog.
    "Dam Chase! How did you let her go?!" I hear Drew yell.
    I smirk to myslef and go to my locker where Lily is waiting for me.
    "Heey girlie!" I say smiling.
    "You look H.O.T.!" Lily screams. "I think our plan is working!"
    "I know!" I say smiling.
    "Ugh...I forgot I have to go and grab some paperwork at the office. I'll see you later kay?" I ask her.
    "Kk! See ya later chicka!" Lily says while walking away.
    I walk to the office to grab my papers when the receptionist calls me in.
    "Ms. Monroe?! Will you please come in here for a minute?"
    "Sure!" I say while I walk in.
    "What's up?" I ask.
    "Well, Mr. Freeman is new here and needs someone to show him around."
    "O-kay?"
    I look over by the counter and see a the new kid. He is about 5'9-5'10 ish with dark brown hair and bright blue eyes.
    "Thanks!" she says and shoo's us out of the office.
    "I'm Evelyn, but you can call me Evie." I say, holding out my hand.
    "I'm Ryan." he says smiling, shaking my hand.
    I smile back.
    "Soo..." I say taking his schedual.
    "Your locker is down hall." I say pointing. "And your first class is...Oh, with Mr. Tompson! I'm in that class to! I can walk you there."
    "Okay." he says smiling.
    "Lets go!" I say cheerfully, right after the bell rings.
    Oh Chase, you better watch your back. I've got a plan and I'm not afriad to use it.
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Ten:
    Evelyn's POV:
    It has been two days since I have heard from Chase. I have been sitting in my room like a love sick puppy, waiting for a call, a text, someting! But what do I get? Not a single thing.
    "Evelyn!" Lily yells as she bursts through my bedroom door. "Get up! You haven't been to school or out of your bed in two days! Let's Go!"
    "Lily..." I whine.
    "No whining!" Lily snaps as she rips off my covers. "It's time to go! No more mopping around!"
    "Where are we going?" I groan sitting up.
    "Shopping! Duh!" Lily yells smiling.
    "Let's go make him see what he is missing." She says while winking at me.
    I smile and jump up to get ready.
    In 10 minutes we are out of the door and at the mall.
    "Now what am I suppose to be doing Miss Lily?" I ask her, our arms linked together.
    "Were gonna make him jealous." she says smiling. "First up, clothes."
    She whisks me off tot the nearest store and I suddenly become her brand new human barbie doll.
    "Okay...sooo. Try this, and this, and this, and this, and this." Lily says handing me a pile of clothes and shooing me off to a dressing room.
    I first try on white short shorts with a pink crop top with a black cami.
    I walk out to show Lily.
    "OMFG! I love it!" she squeals.
    "Me too! But Lily, there is just one little problem. How are we going to pay for this?" I ask her.
    "It's called parents who have these little plastic things, called credit cards." she tells me sarcastically.
    I smile and roll my eyes at her while I walk back into the dressing room.
    After an hour, I walk out with four big shopping bags.
    "Next up is hair and nails!" Lily squeals and runs off toward the salon.
    Oh crap.
    I get seated at the salon right away.
    Lily tells them what SHE wants them to do and they get started.
    "Lily!" I yell.
    "Your gonna love it Evie! I promise!" Lily says smiling.
    I groan and sit back, trying to relax.
    "Oh...and here is the catch. You can't see it untill it is all done."
    My mouth drops open as they wheel me off to go and get my hair washed.
    While they were doing that, Lily covered up every mirror close by, so I couldn't see.
    After they were done, they wheeled me back and started to cut.
    I feel a bunch of weight lift off and I start to get nervous.
    Finally they were done and Lily uncovered the mirror.
    "Lily! You let them cut of 8 inches?!" I scream.
    "Yuup." she says smiling.
    They styled my hair perfectly, and it still fell about 3 inches past my shoulders.
    I get up and hug Lily tight.
    Next, we go to get our nails done.
    When thats done we walk out of the mall and I feel like a totaly different person.
    Chase Marcek, here I come.
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    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Nine:
    Chase's POV:
    "You what?!" I ask him speechless, my eyes wide with horror.
    "It was an accident." he says softly.
    "How do you kill someone by accident?!" I yell softly so Lania doesn't hear.
    "We-we got into a fight and he had a knife, and I pushed him..." he whispers softly. "And he fell, and landed on the knife..."
    "And you just ran away?! Like a coward?! You just let him die?! He was your best friend!" I yell at him.
    "I didn't want to go to jail! My business just took off, and I had to support our family!" he yells back.
    "I was right! You are a coward! And if you think your going to make me stay away from Evelyn, your wrong!" I yell as I stomp away.
    "We aren't finished young man!" my dad yells after me.
    "Oh, I think we are." I scream as I go into my bedroom and slam the door.
    Am I hurting her? He could be right. Me dating her, well almost dating her, is keeping her closer to her dad's murderer. What do i do?
    I put my head in my hands.
    I can't hurt her...I love her too much.
    I know what I have to do.
    Evelyn's POV:
    Next day at school:
    "Chase!" I yell as I see him walking down the hall.
    "Chase!" I yell again a little louder, trying to catch up tp him.
    He turns down the hall to go to his locker.
    'Huh, must not of heard me.'
    I shrug it off and go to my locker to get stuff for class.
    I get into class right as the bell rings. I go to my seat and smile at Chase on the way back.
    He doesn't smile back, he just sits there and stares at the teacher at the front of the room.
    45 minutes later the bell rings to signal the end of the day.
    Chase is the first one out of his seat and out the door.
    'What is up with him today?'
    I walk to my locker to put my stuff away when he walks past me to leave.
    "Chase!" I yell to him. "Wait up!"
    I grab my backpack and run to catch up to him because he didn't stop walking.
    "What is with you today? Is everything okay?" I ask him, gently tugging on his arm.
    "Let. Go. Evelyn." he says sternly.
    "Sorry..." I mumble, shocked.
    He turns toward me.
    "I can't go to the formal with you anymore." he says, his face expressionless. "We can't be friends. I'm not going to hurt you any longer."
    And with that, he left. Without saying another word.
    He left me standing there, with tears running down my face, while he walks away without a care.
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  20. Runaway9468 Runaway9468
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    May 23, 2012 11:40pm UTC
    the Murder's Son
    Chapter Eight
    Chase's POV:
    I walk back inside with a smile on my face.
    "Chase..." my dad yells at me from the kitchen.
    "When you have a minute, I would like to talk to you."
    "Okay!" I yell back as I run upstairs to take a shower.
    I go to my room and go to my window. I look out and see Evelyn walking into her house.
    I love living right across the street from her.
    I wait a few seconds and see something moving in her window.
    I look at her window and see her smiling and laughing.
    I smile.
    She must be on the phone with Lily.
    I get some clothes and go take a quick shower. I jump out and go downstairs to find Lania.
    "Lania!" I call.
    "Chase!" I hear her call back.
    "Marco!" I yell.
    "Polo!" I hear her scream, with a long line of giggles.
    I go downstairs and see her watching T.V.
    "What are you watching kiddo?" I ask her, ruffeling her hair.
    "Stop!" she says, swatting my hand away. "I'm watching Barbie and the Princesses."
    "Oh, good one." I say sarcastically, smiling.
    She sticks her tounge out at me.
    "Chase." I hear my dad yell.
    "Yeah dad?" I yell back.
    "I really do need to talk to you."
    "Okay..." I mumble as I trudge up the stairs.
    "Take a seat." He says patting the seat near him.
    "Okay?" I say questioningly.
    I sit down and turn towards him.
    "I'm gonna just cut to it..." he says. "You need to stay away from Evelyn."
    I look at him shocked. I don't say anything. I just stare at him.
    "Hello?" my dad asks.
    "Earth to Chase!" my dad says snapping his fingers in front of my face.
    I snap into reality.
    "What...What are you talking about?!" I almost yell at him.
    "You. Need. To. Stay. Away. From. Evelyn." he says slower, acting like he is talking to a two year old.
    "What? No!" I yell. "Why would I do that?!"
    "Because you are hurting her!" he screams at me.
    "How am I hurting her?!" I yell.
    "Y-your keeping her very close to someone who could be very dangerous..." he wishpers.
    "Oh really?" I ask sarcastically. "And who's that?"
    "Me..."
    "What are you talking about?" I ask confused.
    "I did something-someting I'm not proud of."
    I look at him questioningly.
    He looks me dead in the eye.
    "I killed Evelyn's father."
    DUN DUN DUN!!! :) Drama??? whats gonna happen?? :) I am sooo sorry for not uploading for the past week and a half :/ I had finals all week... still no excuse i know but... NOW ITS SUMMER!! for me anyways :) soooo more chapters. alot more often :D YAY :) sorry for the short chapter but I couldnt make it much longer :)
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    Thanks lovlies! :) stay beautiful <3 -Lauren Elizabeth <3

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