Witty Profiles
Girls Like me .
Chapter 12.
“So, what were you going to tell
me?” Zoe said happily.
“Oh.” I said,
remembering Jake and I’s kiss. “It was
nothing, really.”
“Are you sure?” Zoe
asked suspiciously, raising one eyebrow. “You
seemed pretty excited before.”
“Yeah, but it was no big
deal, I promise.” I lied right through my teeth,
giving her an award winning fake smile.
“But I really should be
getting back home now, my mom said dinner would be
ready soon.”
“Already? But you just
got here?” Zoe whined.
“Sorry.” I shrugged my
shoulders. “Mother’s
orders.”
“Okay, whatever.” She
brushed it off. “I have to call Jake anyways,
you know, to see if he wants to go out sometime or
something.”
“Have fun.” I gave a
sarcastic smile, rushing back down the steps to
leave.
P!ssed off didn’t even begin
to describe my emotions towards Zoe right now. Jake
was mine. I mean, not like ‘we’re
dating’ mine, but I had dibs! Zoe dating him
was completely against the girl code.
I stormed through the front door of
the house, making my ways up stairs.
“Back so soon?” My
mother asked, holding a freshly brewed cup of
coffee.
“Mhm.” I sneered,
slamming the door to my room.
I knew that it was wrong to take it
out on people who had nothing to do with it, but I
couldn’t help it. I had to let my anger out
somehow. I threw my phone against the wall, hoping
that maybe it’d break, and I’d have an excuse
to never text Zoe again. Suddenly, my phone began to
vibrate.
“Speak of the devil.” I
scoffed, seeing one new text message from Zoe appear on my
screen.
“We’re going out
tomorrow night!(: “ The text read.
I rolled my eyes, why would Jake go
out with Zoe? Did that kiss mean nothing to
him?
“Oh hey, what a
coincidence!” I sent back. “An old guy
friend and I are going out tomorrow night too.(:
Double date?”
“Of course!” Zoe
replied. “I’ll text you the detes
later.(:”
I gave a devious smile, looking up
a number in my phone.
“Hey Collin!” I
said sweetly into the phone. “I haven’t
talked to you in forever!”
We began making small talk about
Maine, and how I was back for good now.
“Yeah, we should totally go
out sometime!” I exclaimed. “How about
tomorrow? Two of my friends are going out too, so
it’ll be a double date.”
“Sounds great.” He
laughed.
“Perfect.” I said,
examining my freshly done nails. “See you
tomorrow.”
I then hung up, leaving a guilty
smile on my face.
Going out to eat with my
ex-boyfriend?
Two can
play that game
Okay, so I made a few mistakes last
chapter. Josh was supposed to say Jake, (I
used to write a story with a Josh in it ) &Dad,
was supposed to say step dad. I was really tired when
I wrote that..I'm so sorry. I've been
getting a lot of hate lately, and I realize my stories
arn't that great. I don't need to be
reminded. When I'm finished with this story,
i'm probably just going to stop writing. Okay,
that's all..
-Hint-
“So, do I have to like, kiss
you and stuff?” He asked hopefully.
“If you’re
okay with that.” I giggled.
-Bree's
POV-
706 faves · 171 comments · Jun 27, 2012 3:26pm
Ingoo16
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1 decade ago
Plz don't listen to all the hate your stories are amazing!! :)
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Sweetgirl1998
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1 decade ago
Plz don't stop writing , You'r story is REALLY GOOD..& I Love . Ignore the hate ! :D <333
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OzzyPavy
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1 decade ago
Don't listen to the hate comments, your story is amazing and you're an INCREDIBLE writer!
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roseisamazing5
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1 decade ago
PLEASE KEEP WRITING. I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! DON'T LISTEN TO THE HATE!
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bluetiger
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1 decade ago
dont listen to all the hate comments just listen to all the nice things people write. anyway please dont stop writting its really good.
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danser4life
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1 decade ago
i love your story! dont stop writeing !!! <//3
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redsoxreilly
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1 decade ago
GOOOD JOB!
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sunkid4
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1 decade ago
Really..you shoudn't stop writing, because your story is great! I really love it! ^_^ You're awesome sweety!))
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Amzybabe98
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1 decade ago
NEVER STOP WRITING. I will punch out the lights of anyone who says u can't write. I am obsessed with this story because you write it so well!!
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fungirl
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1 decade ago
aw I LOVE this story
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1 decade ago
OOOOOOOOOHHHH!!! this is getting intense!!! :D
and who told you that you cant write? they obviously dont know a real story. you write amazing stories and this is probably one of the best stories i have ever read, you should keep writing, and dont let ANYONE stop you!
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l0vest0live26
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1 decade ago
My name is Zoe <3
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Lmsx123
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1 decade ago
don't stop writing just because of a few people who are just jealous. There are going to be people who don't like you and what you do which is just a handful of people and do you see how many people are telling you stay! don't listen to haters. em all. if you stop writing thats what they want show em that you're stronger and u dont give a
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xxkrissyxx
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1 decade ago
Really?Don't stop writing you have so many fans and if you ended it all it would just be heartbreaking. Please don't stop writing because I am addicted to all the things you have written.
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xxcorinne95xx
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1 decade ago
Who ever says you cant wright has poor english skills.I have no idea if that made sense but you know what I mean.Your stories are AMAZING and you need to keep writing!I actually can picture this while im reading it,so therefore they are excellent.So if I see a hate comment on your story I will go tell them they need to ignore it.Some people hate reading,but others do and the haters hate reading.Alright Im going to go now since this makes no sense k bye
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LoveDiesSlowly
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1 decade ago
LOL what kind of up idiot would say that you're a bad writer, honestly you're one of the best, I'm surprised you're not at wattpad, you'd have a huge sucsess there too, your stories are simply divine and nice and summery, I didn't like the sad one, but I still faved it, you're so witty and you write like a professional writer in an age of what..15? Honestly I don't think you have much to improve you're already perfect at this. If you stop writing however, better for me (lol jk) I want to be a writer too hehe, but my first language isn't english so I couldn't write as good as you do ;)
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katie321
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1 decade ago
please dont stop writing i love your stories so much!!!!!!!
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fine_with0ut_y0u
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1 decade ago
Please keep writing! I'm obsessed with your stories! They give me inspiration for my books and kind of my actual life!:] haha
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mamaknickers
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1 decade ago
i love your stories! please don't stop writing!! you inspire me to write. please):
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lnln789 · 1 decade ago
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hey, i stopped on this story last week & now u've changed ur layout & its really confusing. I'm trying to read your other chapters but all i can see is the epilogue. How do u scroll down to look at the other quotes?! HELLPP PLEAASEE