PoisonIvy · 1 decade ago
Really good... but start a new paragraph everytime a differnt person talks.
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kotababii · 1 decade ago
this is pretty much my life exactly right now, besides my dad being in the military, but yeah i really like this! ♥
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feelthelove · 1 decade ago
keep going! except maybe you could make the font a little less squishedd? i had a hard time reading it... but other wise its fabbulous(:
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lovergirl13 · 1 decade ago
I normally encourage writing but not this. This is ungrateful. My father is leaving for war and I would move anywhere if I had to because of his job. So keep writing... But this was a terrible topic.
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YoungWildFree · 1 decade ago
great story!
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Blurryface* · 1 decade ago
awesome!
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roseisamazing5 · 1 decade ago
great story! keep writing! ♥
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