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'ello. my story account for my story: The Summer I Turned Pretty.
my main account is: sparklemisty
sooooo yeah! okie!! hope you read my story!
OH, and if you think my story is good, please pass the word on to other people! and favorite, so i know you're reading. comment if you want to be notified:)
  1. sparklemisty_stories sparklemisty_stories
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    July 20, 2012 2:00pm UTC
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  2. sparklemisty_stories sparklemisty_stories
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    July 17, 2012 4:39pm UTC
    The Summer I Turned Pretty
    Chapter 3
    "Mom, I'm going out for a while!" I yelled to her as I scrambled out the door. "Be back...whenever!"
    "You still have to pack," she called out to me. "Don't be out too long!"
    I had already slammed the door, so I didn't hear what Mom said.
    Oh well, I thought. Doesn't matter.
    I hopped on my bike and set off for the StarStone.
    I put in my earphones and smiled, feeling like a movie star as the wind blew through my hair.
    I stuck out my arms and closed my eyes, enjoying the warm summer breeze.
    "BOO!" someone screamed.
    My eyes flew open and I screamed.
    I almost fell off my bike.
    It was just Tim. I sighed.
    Time rode up next to me.
    "TIM EMERSON," I screamed. "Did you really have to do that?!"
    He answered by poking me.
    I stuck my tongue out at him.
    Tim knew I wasn't really mad, which is why we're best friends.
    We understood each other without having to say anything.
    I sighed, wondering if he would ever like me.
    He became my friend back in October 2010, when he came into my class during church.
    They put us in age groups and mine happened to be the 12-14 age group.
    He walked in and I got disappointed.
    He really wasn't cute. He sat right next to me and we continued with class.
    He knew like every answer and he was kinda loud.
    I noticed he was always smiling. He even talked to me a few times and made me laugh.
    I love Tim's personality. We've been friends ever since.
    "Hey, where ya goin'?" Tim broke into my thoughts. "Kat told me to come to the StarStone so I asked my mom to drop me off at your place with my bike."
    "Figured," I answered. "I'm going there, too."
    Kat had met Tim when we met up at the movie theatre to see the Hunger Games.
    "Race you there!"
    "10 bucks if you lose," I yelled, pedaling faster,
    "Make that 20!" Tim yelled, racing after me.
    We both looked at each other and laughed. I love that about Tim, he's so competitive.
    I'm as fast as him, maybe even faster, so he'd never let me win.
    That's the fun part, 'cause I don't believe in letting the girl win. I always like a little competition.
    I smiled as I watched Tim pedaling ahead.
    I snapped back to reality. Oh shoot, he's in front of me.
    I smirked. Not for long, I thought.
    I switched gears and started pedaling.
    With my speed at 7, I would be able to win.
    "What now," I screamed as I flew past Tim, with my hands in the air.
    "WATCH OUT!"
    "Huh?" I faced forward and screamed.
    I went up a small wooden skateboard ramp and the ground disappeared beneath me.
    How was that? I know, I hate cliff hangers too. But I thought the story needed to get a bit more exciting. What do you think will happen next? Comment what you think! And how's the story so far? I know, it's kind of boring at first but it will speed up soon. Feedback? :)

  3. sparklemisty_stories sparklemisty_stories
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    July 16, 2012 12:06pm UTC
    The Summer I Turned Pretty
    Chapter 2
    A=Andrielle, K=Kat, S=Sierra
    A- I'm telling you, it's not fair.
    K- But you get to go to California!
    S- You're so lucky!
    A- So? Why should I even go?
    S- It's worth it.
    A- No! I barely even know my cousins!
    K- Then you'll know them better this summer! It'll be great!
    A- NO!!
    *silence*
    S- Chill, girl. It's only summer, not the rest of your life.
    A- So?! This was supposed to be a summer with you guys! Going to the pool, meeting cute guys...I doubt I'll ever get one, HAH! Sleepovers, all nighters...
    K- Chill.
    A- Chill. CHILL?! You're telling me to CHILL?! Think of our bucket list! Don't you remember--
    K- Seriously, girl! Calm down. We'll meet at the StarStone at 6pm tomorrow.
    A- Fine, but--
    K- And come hungry.
    S- See ya! Gotta eat lunch.
    A- Bye Sierra, see you at 6!
    K- Later!
    *Sierra hangs up*
    A- Sorry for the outbusrt...I--
    K- It's cool. Don't worry about it. I'll see you at 6. Gotta go!
    A- Kay kay, see ya!
    -End of phone conversation-
    I wondered what Kat and Sierra were planning.
    It must be a picnic, I thought. They told me to come hungry! ...Yeah, that must be it.
    I looked around my room.
    In a week, I won't be here anymore, I thought, as I reluctantly started to pack.
    ~
    The StarStone is a large cave that's about half the size of an American football field. The entrance of the cave is big enough so one person can go in at a time. The height of the cave is about 8 feet. The StarStone has a small circular opening(about 1 foot in diameter)at the top center of the cave and right under it, is a crystal stone that's stuck in the ground. In the night time, the moon shines through the hole and onto the stone. The sky reflects off of it and shows the star's reflection, lighting up the cave. Hence, the name.
    Hey readers! How did you like the second chapter? Sorry for the huge delay of getting the 2nd chapter up, I was at Girl's Camp last week. It's exactly what it sounds like. It's so fun. Anyways, I promise my chapter updates will be faster now. The next few chapters start out slowly, it's all in the same week that Andrielle is packing, and otherr stuff is going on.
    Hm, if I get 2 new readers, maybe I'll post a hint! (This is a challenge to you, my readers!)

  4. sparklemisty_stories sparklemisty_stories
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    July 5, 2012 10:58am UTC
    The Summer I Turned Pretty
    Chapter 1
    "But its not fair!" I yelled.
    "Don't raise your voice, you lady," Mom said, calmly. "You're staying in California with your cousins, end of story."
    "But why for the whole summer?!" I spat back, tears filling my eyes.
    I stared at my mom. She opened her mouth, but I didn't let her say anything.
    I spun around, screaming to her, "I don't wanna go!"
    Silence.
    Then I stopeed, hoping she changed her mind.
    "You have a week to pack!" Mom called to me.
    "UGH!!" I screamed, slamming my door.
    I flopped onto my bed, tears streaming down my face.
    I turned on my laptop, plugged the earphones into my iPod, and whipped out my phone.
    I texted my best friends, Kat and Sierra.
    Hey girls, sad news. My stupid mom is sending me off to California to spend time with my cousins. FOR THE WHOLE STUPID SUMMER.
    A minute later, Sierra called me.
    "Hold on, lemme get Kat," she said.
    "Hello?"
    Going 3-way, oh yeah!
    Sorry, this was a short first chapter. I promise I will have longer chapters than this! Please comment if you want to be on the notifications list! I already have a few readers:)

  5. sparklemisty_stories sparklemisty_stories
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    July 5, 2012 10:28am UTC
    Hey guys, this will be my story account for my story!
    The Summer I Turned Pretty
    PREVIEW
    Andrielle Aranas is an average 15 year old Filipino girl. She's not popular, but not a nerd, either. She's not pretty, yet not ugly. She's just a plain girl who has problems like everybody else. She's made plans but with her friends, and later finds out her mom is sending her to California to visit her cousins! it may seem awesome, but not to Andrielle. To top it all off, her best guy friend, Tim Emerson, who also happens to be her crush, is going away for the summer! She only has a week to pack and a few days left with him. The time has come for her to leave, and she arrives in LA. Her cousin, Skai Lee, picks her up at the airport. She loved Skai right away. She was perfect to Andrielle. Skai was really pretty, had great hair, loved her style, her height- 5'5", and she was Andrielle's dream size--a size 2. Andrielle is a size 0 and hates it. She's a food lover, but cant seem to gain any weight. She dreams of becoming like Skai. With a little help from her cousin, can Andrielle finally consider herself pretty?
    reposting with a little edit from my other account.
    please comment if you want to be notified.

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