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Hidden Identity-
This is about a girll named Sofia who aquires a gift to be able to read minds, and soon she will fiind that the people who gave her the gift need her help.




 
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  1. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    September 4, 2011 1:26pm UTC
    Hidden Identity.
    Chapter eleven
    I waited at the door to which I thought was the exit of the building for Jake and Rob. When they didn’t show up after a few seconds I called out again.
    “Jake? Rob? Hello?” I heard somebody holding in a laugh and I turned around to see Jake standing down at the other end of the hall.
    “Nice outfit and the exit’s down here.” He smirked at me.
    “Thanks.” I rolled my eyes at him and walked forward going to push the door forward. It wouldn’t budge. “Is there some kind of code we need to get out? Eye scans or finger prints or something?” I said looking around, still trying to push the door open. Now Jake just burst out into laughter, and Rob let out a little smirk too, which was surprising. “What now?!”
    “It’s a pull door.” With that, he simply brushed me aside and pulled open the door. No code or retina scans or anything. Just a damn pull door. Could I embarrass myself anymore today? We hadn’t even left the stinking building.

  2. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
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    July 28, 2011 12:16pm UTC
    Hidden Identity.
    Chapter ten
    I woke up the next morning to someone gently shaking me.
    “Sofie, wake up. We have to get going.” I opened my eyes to see Jake staring down at me, freshly showered and everything.
    “Ugh, what time is it? I don’t feel like I got any sleep at all.” I groaned.
    “Probably because you didn’t get much, it’s only 5.” How was he not tired? How was already showered? He must have woken up at 4:30.
    “Gross.” I said, turning over to go back to sleep. The mission could wait. How was I supposed to be good if I didn’t get any sleep anyways?
    “If you want to shower you have to get up now. Otherwise you have to get up in fifteen minutes and you won’t be showered.” I debated it for a few seconds before rolling out of bed. Only fifteen more minutes and greasy hair wasn’t worth it.
    “Where’s the shower?”I mumbled. I could barely function at 6 in the morning when I had gone to bed at a decent time, let alone 5 when I had gotten like 3 hours of sleep.
    “Out to the door, to the right, and to the left again, sleepyhead.” He lopsidedly grinned at me.
    “Thanks.”
    I grabbed a towel out of the minuscule linen closet in the bathroom. I quickly showered, not wasting any time. I shut the water off and dried off. Then I remembered that I hadn’t brought any close in with me. Actually I had no clean clothes with me period.
    I wrapped my towel around me and ran out the door and into my room as fast as I could. I looked at my pile of dirty clothes. I really didn’t feel like putting them back on.
    “Jake?!” I yelled out, not really caring who heard.
    “Yeah?” he answered.
    “Can you come here?” I checked to make sure that my towel was securely wrapped around me.
    “Okay..?” he sounded confused. He knocked on the door and I let him come in.
    “What do you want?” he asked, giving me a weird look cause all I had on was a towel.
    “What am I supposed to wear?”
    “Clothes?” he said it like it was the most obvious thing in the world. It kinda was, but I meant more along the lines of cause I have dirty clothes, what am I supposed to wear. But I guess a small minded person like him can’t figure that out on his own.
    “Well, mine are dirty. And seeing as I was kidnapped, I didn’t get to grab any clothes to change into.”
    “Huh.” He said just staring at me like I was some alien. I glanced down to make sure that my towel was still covering everything.
    “What?!” he was driving me crazy.
    “Well I guess you could wear some of mine.” Guy clothes? Really? Well I guess if it was really the only choice I had…
    “Okay, go get me some.” He returned a minute later with a pair of running shorts and an extremely large shirt.
    “Thanks.” I said as he exited my room, closing the door behind him.
    I went to get dressed and realized something. I looked down at my dirty clothes, that I had slept in, on top of wearing them the whole day before. I needed underwear though. I quickly threw them and my bra on and then the shorts and shirt Jake had given me on over them. They were extremely large for me, but I didn’t have anything else to wear.
    “I’m ready!” I shouted walking out of my room with nothing in hand, I didn’t have anything to bring, not even my cell phone.
    feedback? thanks(:

  3. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
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    July 11, 2011 1:56pm UTC
    Hidden Identity.
    Chapter nine.
    The stuff that they took on their missions was a lot smaller than the rest of the stuff, which made sense seeing it needed to be portable.
    Rob went through most of the gadgets, and explained them the best he could to me, though I barely remember any of them. Jake laid off teasing me for a little bit. But I could still see the sparkle in his eyes, I hoped that I wasn’t falling for him. It wasn’t like I was ever going to see him again.
    “So when do I start this mission?” I asked.
    “Tomorrow.” Jeeze, that was soon. I wonder how my family was taking my disappearance. “And Jake and I will be accompanying you.” Say what? So Jake was going with on this mission. That was… interesting news. I would gladly appreciate the help from big Rob though.
    “But won’t they be able to sense that you guys are with me?” wasn’t that the whole point that I had to go, and that no one else could?
    “Well, yeah. But since you’re a beginner we decided that it would be safer if you had people with you. They still don’t know your ability though, so we still have one advantage. Unless you want to go alone…”
    “No, no, NO! You guys definitely need to come, I don’t want to do it alone.” Thank god I wasn’t going to have to do this all alone.
    “Good. So we’ll start first thing tomorrow morning.” And with that Rob walked out leaving Jake and me alone.
    “What about my family? What am I supposed to tell them? They’re gonna be worried sick about me.” For some reason I wasn’t that concerned though. Saving the world was much more important in my eyes.
    “Uhh, I’m not sure. Rob will probably figure something out. Don’t worry about it though.” Then he smiled at me; and my stomach lurched. I was falling for him, I knew it. But when a guy had a smile like that who couldn’t?
    “So am I spending the night here?”
    “Yeah, I’ll show you to the guest room. Follow me.” Then he flashed me one more of his gorgeous smiles and headed out the door.
    i know it's not much, but i've been busy and haven't posted in forever but i hope you like it. comments & favs are greatly appreciated(: thaanks;*

  4. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
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    June 30, 2011 8:19pm UTC
    Hidden Identity.
    Chapter eight.
    I took a few minutes to process this all. A month ago I was your normal teenage girl, now? I could read minds, and I was supposed to save the world from these bad guys that could try to kill me. Doesn’t sound like much fun to me. But what was I supposed to do? Just say no and walk away? Wouldn’t a lot more people end up hurt then? What if it was the people I loved getting hurt? I couldn’t let that happen. I was going to have to try to get rid of these guys whether I wanted to or not.
    “Okay… so where do I start?” A huge grin spread across the guys face, who I now realized, I didn’t know the name of.
    “Come with me.” He headed off towards a door on the opposite side of the room.
    “So... what’s your name?” I had to know what to call him, I couldn’t just keep calling him ‘that guy’.
    “Call me Jake.” He looked over at me and smiled, he couldn’t have been much older than me.
    “Okay, Jake, so how did you end up in this, whatever you call it?” I honestly felt bad for the kid, he was the one instructing me on what I had to do, and out of all the guys there he looked the youngest.
    “I was an orphan. Both my parents died when I was ten. These guys took me in, their my bros. I’ve been with ‘em for five years now.” So he was around my age; at the most, a year older.
    “So what’s your supernatural power thingy?” I asked him, I figured he had to have one.
    “I can teleport.” He said it evasively, making me feel as if there was more too it, but he didn’t want to share. I didn’t question him though, I figured if he wanted to tell me that he would. “Ladies first.” He said holding open the door and gesturing me inside. What a gentleman he was.
    The room was incredible, unlike anything I had ever seen before. There were computers and other technology machines I had never seen before all over the room.
    “Whoa.” I let out in a long breath. I looked over to Jake to see him snickering.
    “What?” I snapped at him. It really irritated me when people laughed at me when I hadn’t done anything, if I had done something stupid, I could understand, but if I didn’t do anything I didn’t want people laughing or snickering or whatever you want to call it.
    “I’m sorry, I just couldn’t help being amused by your awe.” His eyes twinkled and I knew he was making fun of me. I didn’t say anything, but playfully punched him in the shoulder.
    “Ow!” he said, rubbing it. Making a face to show me it didn’t hurt and he was just playing along.
    “Knock it off you two, we have to start working.” I big guy pushed by in between us.
    “That’s Rob.” Jake whispered to me loud enough for me to hear, but not loud enough for Rob.
    “These computers over here are researching ones, these t.v.’s are monitors, these computers are tracking devices, and all of this stuff,” he paused to turn to the other side of the room, “ is the stuff that we take on our missions.
    comments and faves are really helpful.. i still might end it but i figured i'd post some more that i had wrote, please tell me what you think, thanks loves♥

  5. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
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    June 25, 2011 12:35pm UTC
    Heey, to my readers of
    The Message/Hidden Identity
    I think i'm going to end it
    because no one seems
    to be reading it, sorry.

  6. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    June 22, 2011 10:51am UTC
    (I changed the title, used to be The Message)
    Hidden Identity.
    Chapter seven.
    “We have a mission for you.” A mission? What kind of mission could they want from a fourteen year old girl like me? They seemed like they could do anything they wanted, if they could block my mind reading then they must have other powers too. When I didn’t answer, they continued explaining.
    “We need you to find the hidden identity of some people, there are some people, like you and us, who are different. Except they are the bad guys; not good like us. It’s our job to stop them and protect regular mortals.” Did he just call us mortals, did he just say I had to stop the bad guys, ME?!
    “Wait, why do I have to find them? Why can’t you? What are they going to do? Will they kill me? Where am I supposed to find them? Am I supposed to kill them? Turn them in? Why did you have to take me hostage to tell me this? Why me?” A million more questions zoomed through my head, but he held up his hand, signaling for me to shut up.
    “They don’t know who you are so they won’t expect you, they know all of us here so they will be on the lookout for any of use. They also know all of our powers and have built up defenses against them, they don’t know of yours and nobody here can do what you can. They could kill you, I’m not going to say it isn’t possible, but it is very unlikely. We have a locator which gives us a range, which you will keep with you.
    “No, you do not HAVE to kill them, but you should. If we hadn’t of taken you hostage then you probably wouldn’t have believed us or stayed around long enough to hear us out.” I could feel my mouth gaping wide open at him and everybody in the room was staring at me, waiting for my response. I had no clue what to say though. What are you supposed to say when you are just told that you have to go and defeat an enemy and basically save the world? It was a lot for me, or anyone for that matter to take in at any moment.
    “So why am I the one with the powers?” was all I could choke out, it was my most important question though, I wanted to know why I was cursed with this ability. Yes, cursed. Most people would die for the chance to be able to read minds, and at one point I did too. Until it actually happened. Everything has an equal and opposite reaction as Sir Isaac Newton once said. Which means that with everything good that happens something bad must come along too, which is when the bad guy thing comes into play.
    “We have been trying to figure that out, we honestly have no clue why it was you who was given the power. Usually it is inherited or given to someone who is already extraordinary beyond measure.”
    “oh, thanks.”
    “I’m sorry, that came out sounding… wrong. But let’s say it is not usually given to an ordinary person.” It didn’t make me feel any better about myself, but that isn’t what this was about so I didn’t bother saying anything more on the matter.
    “So what do these goons look like that I’m supposed to, you know, kill?” The word kill still seemed foreign to me. I never imagined myself having to kill anybody.
    “No one knows. They are able to change their identity at will. That is why we need you to probe into their minds and figure out who they really are.”
    feedback? i really want to know what you guys think, sorry i changed the title, i kinda changed the plot and then the title didn't make sense anymore. but comments & favs are always greatly appreciated(: thaanks.

  7. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    June 14, 2011 3:11pm UTC
    The Message .
    Chapter six.
    “What do you plan on doing with her?”
    “Well we have to explain everything to her.”
    “But what if she told someone, we can’t risk being discovered.”
    “I think she didn’t, she’s a smart girl. I say we give her a chance.”
    “Okay, but we’ll have to ask boss about it when we get back to the lab.”
    I woke up into utter confusion, not knowing where I was, or who was talking. It sounded like they were talking about me though. Then I remembered what had happened, when I had been abducted. I tried my hardest not to move, trying to listen to what the voices were saying. One of them was the guys’ voices was familiar, and I placed it with the guy who had done the actual abducting. The other one’s wasn’t familiar though, he either must have been in the car or we picked him up on our way to wherever this lab was that we were going to. He didn’t sound very friendly though.
    “What was that?” The guy I didn’t know asked. I had accidently kicked the seat. They slowly turned around to look at me, I swear my heart was beating a 1000 beats per minute. I went to scream but before even a small squeak was let out the drugged cloth was over my face and once again I sank into the world of darkness.
    I felt ruff hands grabbing me and dragging me out of a car. I was waking up from being drugged once again. But, this time I was gagged, so I wasn’t able to scream. I had no idea where these people were taking me or even who they were. It was so dark I couldn’t see anything. I was surprised we hadn’t bumped into anything yet.
    I tried to read the guys mind, but I couldn’t hear anything. It was if a barrier was blocking me. I felt the guys eyes bore down into me; he must have realized that I was trying to read his mind.
    We walked, well more like he walked and I was dragged, for about ten minutes down a long black hallway it seemed, until we stumbled into a blindingly bright room. My eyes stung for a couple seconds as they adjusted to the bright light.
    “Sofia Lane?” I looked up to another man dressed in black, they reminded me of death.
    “Y-Yes?” I stuttered nervously. I had planned on trying to act bold but that plan shattered as soon as I spoke.
    “Resident of 19 Pale Moon Road?” I nodded this time, not talking seemed to help me stay stronger. I was on the verge of tears, I was more frightened now than I could ever remember being in my whole entire life.
    feedback? how do you think its going? sorry i haven't posted in a while.

  8. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    June 5, 2011 12:32pm UTC
    The Message .
    Chapter five.
    I’m not going to bore you going day by day what happened to me during that first month. It was all relatively the same; school, shopping, and hanging out with people. And of course mind reading. The whole month though my headache barely went away.
    The only other weird thing that started going on was the man in black, and the black car. Everywhere I went, or at least most of the places there was the man in black, or the black car. I didn’t know whether they were really there though, or if it was my imagination. Sometimes when I looked they were there, and other times they were gone; in a blink of an eye. I was worried of course, but who wouldn’t be. I didn’t tell anyone. Not even Mina this time.
    I stared down out my window at the man in black leaning against his car. He seemed to staring back at me, but I couldn’t tell because of his shades. I had seen him more today and in the past two days than I ever had before. In the past two days, I have also been able to do more than just be able to read minds. I can manipulate thoughts.
    I was just about to turn around and head downstairs to get a snack when the man in black beckoned towards me with his left hand, which was covered in a black glove. I doubled back, frightened for my life. I peeked out again, and once again he beckoned me to go out and see him. Don’t ask me why, because honestly I have no clue. I must have been going crazy, but I decided to go out and see him. I wanted to figure out what he wanted from me. I could always manipulate his thoughts if he tried to do something to me, right?
    Wrong.
    When I softly closed the door so that my mom wouldn’t hear me going out, I felt something was wrong. I couldn’t read his thoughts. As hard as I tried, I couldn’t. I was stumped.
    “It’s not going to work.” My heart skipped a beat as I looked up to see the man leaning against the car, staring down at me. It almost looked as if he was chuckling to himself.
    “Why no…” I was about to ask him why it wouldn’t when I realized something. In order for him to tell me that it wasn’t going to work, he would have to know what I was trying to do. In order for him to know what I was trying to do, he would have to know that I was trying to read his mind. And if he knew that I was trying to read his mind then he must know that I can read minds. I didn’t know who he was, but I didn’t like the thought of being around him any longer. I wanted to get back to the safety and the comfort of my room.
    “Don’t go Sofia, I still need to talk to you.” This man just kept getting creepier and creepier by the second. I wanted to run, but there was something so intriguing about him that I forced myself to stay and listen to him.
    “Alright,” I finally said, “I’m listening.” I strolled over to him and plopped myself down on the grass in front of him. Suprisingly, he sat down next to me. He looked younger now that I had a better look. Maybe in his early 20’s; possibly even still in his late teens.
    “You can read minds, am I correct?” I paused for a moment, not sure if I should confirm this for him, but then I realized he probably knew already; so I shook my head slightly in confirmation.
    “And manipulate them?” My jaw dropped slightly at this assumption of his, for I had just figured this part out yesterday.
    “How did you” he cut me off.
    “I’m the one asking the questions, you are the one answering.” Jeeze, this guy was pushy. “So yes or no, can you manipulate thoughts?” I nodded again. I figured I should just go along with him, I didn’t want to find out what happened when he got angry.
    “How long have you been able to do these things?”
    “About a month.”
    “And have you told anybody at all about any of it?” He stared me straight in the eyes as he asked this. It made me think that this was the only question he had asked so far that he didn’t already know the answer to. I was going to say Mina, but then I thought better of her safety and decided if anything was going to happen to anybody, it was going to be me.
    “No.” I said firmly; hoping he wasn’t able to read my thoughts. Apparently he couldn’t though, because he studied me, with his cold, gray eyes, and then stood up. He held out his hand to me and I grabbed it so he could help me up. I was about to ask him a question when I realized he was looking around anxiously, and I saw that nobody was on the streets. It was just the two of us, and it was getting dark. In an instant I realized what was wrong. I turned to run when I felt strong hands grab me from behind. I was being kidnapped. I went to scream but an awful smelling rag was shoved onto my face and the last thing I remember was being thrown in the back seat of the black car and then everything went black.
    whatcha think? feedbacck?

  9. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    June 2, 2011 5:07pm UTC
    The Message .
    Chapter four.
    “You can what?” She stopped abruptly. Head snapping up to attention.
    “Read minds.” I whispered again. Staring down at the ground. I decided to see what she was thinking, whether she believed me or not.
    ‘She can read minds? Did she just say she can read minds? Well if she can read them, what are you guys having for dinner?’
    “Tacos.” I said. It was kinda lame what she was thinking. If someone says they can read minds the first thing you think is, then what am I thinking about?
    “Huh?” She stared blankly at me.
    “You were wondering what we were having for dinner in your thoughts and I said tacos. We’re having tacos for dinner.”
    “Whoa. You really can read minds.” She plopped down on my bed and started contemplating about all of this. She was a bit pale. Maybe it was a mistake telling her.
    “I don’t know how it happen I was just sitting here on my bed last night listening to my ipod for dinner when I started hearing things. I thought that maybe it was just a remix of my music but it was numbers I was hearing. I ran downstairs to see if my mom was talking out loud because she was doing the taxes. She wasn’t though and when I asked her if she was she looked at me like I was crazy and then I heard what she was thinking. I thought maybe I was going crazy but I could hear it with my whole family. And then at school today I fainted because my mind was over worked with so many thoughts going on.” I gulped up more oxygen. I was totally all out of breath explain that to her, the words coming out faster than I could think.
    She moved her eyes to mine and stared at me blankly. I know I could read her mind if I wanted too, but I really didn’t want to. I didn’t want to get into the habit of reading my best friends mind, or anybody’s mind for that matter. I didn’t want to get their words and thoughts mixed up.
    “Mina..?” she wasn’t talking.
    “That’s. So. COOL!” She exclaimed jumping up from my bed.
    “Shhh. Be quiet or my mom’s gonna come up.” I said grinning. She believed me. I snuck a glance into her mind. She really did believe me.
    “Sorry. How does it work?” She asked eagerly, begging for information.
    “Well I can decide when I want to listen to people’s thoughts; and whose I want to listen to. It’s kinda complicated. I don’t exactly know how to explain it, but yeah.” She drank all of it in.
    “Are you reading mine now? Or no?”
    “Nope.”
    “Have you been all day? Do you know what everyone is thinking? Why do you think you can?” She was dying to more. Curiosity killed the cat. Hadn’t she ever heard that before.
    “No, if I want to, and I have no clue.”
    “What about...” I cut her off. I was tired of all the questions, and my head was pounding. I needed to take something for it.
    “No more questions. All I know is all I told you. Nothing more. You can’t tell ANYBODY. Promise?” Mina was good with keeping secrets I wasn’t that worried that she would tell anybody, but this was a very large and interesting secret if I do say so myself.
    “Of course I promise!” I checked her mind just to see, I couldn’t risk her telling anyone. And once again, she was true to her word.
    “Okay, well we should probably start working on our homework.” We settled down with our Algebra books and started to get to work on it. I could see Mina keep sneaking glances over to me and I couldn’t help but laugh every time she did. I couldn’t blame her though, if it was Mina who told me I would be just as curious as she was.
    “Girls, dinner!” My mom called up the stairs.
    After our dinner of tacos, my mom brought Mina home I turned in early for the night. My headache still pounding even after I took extra strength aspirin.
    feedback, what do you guys think? If not many people like it i'll probably just end it..

  10. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    June 1, 2011 6:44pm UTC
    The Message .
    Chapter four.
    “Hey slowpoke.” I said as she rushed in through the doors.
    “Sorry, I was getting yelled at.” I didn’t even bother to ask what for.
    “Just grab your stuff, my mom’s waiting.” You didn’t want to see my mom when you were late. She was not a very good angry person.
    Mina ran in and grabbed her sneakers out of her locker. I was getting more anxious every second that passed. I didn’t know what she’d think of me if she knew that I could read minds. Or maybe she wouldn’t believe me. I think not have her believe me would be the worst.
    “Ready?” she asked grabbing my arm and dragging me out. I found it funny that she was going to yoga with my mom. Mina isn’t the most coordinated person in the world. I let out a snort.
    “Did you just snort..?” she looked offended, but in a playful way.
    “Maybe.” I couldn’t hold it in any longer. I burst out into fits of laughter.
    “What in the world is so funny? Is my hair messed up? My makeup? Something on my butt?” She looked over her shoulder to check. It only made me laugh harder.
    “Nah, man. It’s just, you know, you aren’t the most coordinated person in the world and you’re going to yoga…” She stuck her tongue out at me and playfully slapped me across the face.
    Best friends. That’s what we were. More like sisters most of the time. I hope that didn’t change. I hope this new ability didn’t change it. I’d rather have never been able to read minds than to lose Mina.
    “I see your mom.” She pointed to a little blue car in the back of the parking lot.
    “Hey mom.” Mina said hopping in the car. I loved how my best friend called my mom, mom.
    “Hi Mina. How was your girls’ day?”
    “Good.” We both responded.
    “Mina had to…” I made violent slicing motions across my neck, signaling her not to tell my mom about my little visit to the nurse. I didn’t need my mom to worry about me. Especially when the other night I was acting delusional towards her because she wasn’t saying the numbers out loud.
    “Yes, Mina had to?” My mom questioned her.
    “Uh, she had too…” Mina stuttered trying to come up with something.
    “I had to go to the principal’s office today.” I had no clue were this was going; just hoping I would be able to slide my way through it.
    “What for?” It beat me. I should have just told her I had to go down to the nurse. I’m a horrible liar, especially when I’m put on the spot.
    “Some dumb kids got in a fight on the stairwell and I witnessed it, I had to tell them about it.”
    “Oh, everyone is alright I hope?” Well, seeing there was never any fight…
    “Yeah, just a couple bruises.” Then my mom gave me some lecture about how not to get into fights. I didn’t really listen to her though. I had a bad headache coming on.
    When we got home we rushed upstairs to my room and slammed the door closed behind us.
    “So what is it you had to tell me?” I could see the eagerness in her eyes, and the sweat that was starting to bead around the hairline on my neck.
    “Umm, well I’m not exactly sure how to tell you.”
    “Did you make out with someone? Something worse? You didn’t have…”
    “No! Nothing like that.” I quickly cut her off.
    “Then what is it girl? You know you can tell me anything.”
    “Well…” I really wish I had thought this through fully.
    “I tell you everything Sofie, everything. How I like Ryan, about my dreams, and all about…”
    "I can read minds." I whispered out well she was talking.
    feedbaackk? whaat do you think?

  11. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
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    June 1, 2011 6:14pm UTC
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  12. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
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    May 30, 2011 7:35pm UTC
    The Message
    Chapter Two.
    Quietness, perfect. I focused on a kid named Ryan in the front row and listened to his thoughts as I headed over to my seat. Slowly, I started to expand the number of people that I could listen too. When I got to eight, I started to get a little woozy, so I closed my mind again.
    Eight.
    Eight people I could listen to at once.
    By, then I had basically come to the conclusion that I had some kind of ‘superpower’. I didn’t have any clue how I had gotten it or if it was here to stay, but I was going to try and strengthen it well I had it. I figured eight people was pretty good since I had just gotten it.
    History class was boring. We were talking about ancient china. I really don’t like history. It’s my least favorite subject. I mean when in my life was I ever going to need to know about how ancient Chinese people grew corn and what tools they used and the kind of trade routes they had? Never, exactly. The only interesting part of the whole class was finding out that the kid Ryan has a crush on Mina. The rest of the classes’ thoughts were stupid; and you don’t even want to know what the teacher was thinking about. Yes, I went around the whole class to see what they were thinking.
    When the bell rang I grabbed my stuff and went into the algebra room next door. I hated algebra but I loved my seat. I sat in between Mina and Austin. I like Austin. More than a friend. If you get what I mean.
    They want us to solve equations like:
    Find the value of x.
    4(5x – 7) = 32
    That’s one of the simplest problems too. Dumb, I agree.
    I was debating whether or not I should try to see what Austin was thinking. I saw him sneak a glance over at me. I really wanted to know how he felt about me, but I also thought that I should try to figure it out the regular way.
    “Sofie!” mina, whispered elbowing me.
    “Huh?” I was broken out of my daze.
    “Sofia, could you please tell me what the value of x equals?” Mrs. Wilman asked.
    “Umm... 8.” Phew, that was a close one.
    “Thank you. Pay attention next time.” The class snickered and I could feel myself blushing.
    The rest of the class I tried to pay attention but my mind kept wondering elsewhere. I figured out a lot of useless information. Like that Kelsey was going to get blond highlights today, Julia was jealous of Sabrina’s flats, and that Jared thought Amanda was hot. Useless things like that. I did everything I could to prevent myself from reading Austin’s mind; finally it was just too much.
    I cleared my throat to make sure that his attention would be on me. Then I snuck a glance into his mind. ‘Wow, Sofia’s beautiful.’ That’s all I heard before he turned his attention back to math.
    I felt like an idiot because I could feel a huge grin spreading across my face. I didn’t attempt to wipe it away though. I was too caught in the moment. Luckily, the bell rang. I quickly copied down the homework off the board, and shot off to my locker. I was starving and couldn’t wait to eat.
    I grabbed my lunch and waited for Mina to get to my locker. When she got there we linked arms and started walking downstairs to the cafeteria. She told me about what we had done in English, not much as usual; just some silent reading and writing. Then I told her about how I think that Ryan has a crush on her. She said that she didn’t really care, but I could see her holding in a smile.
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  13. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
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    May 26, 2011 8:59pm UTC
    The Message
    still chapter one.. i haven't decided where
    to split up chapters.
    I woke up later in the nurse's office to a horrendous headache and Mina staring at me full of concern.
    "What...?" I started to get dizzy so I layed down.
    "Well we were just talking and Luke had just ran over to us and said hi. We were on our way into the school when you collapsed with no warning. I freaked out. I thought you were getting a concussion or something. Luke picked you up and carried you all the way to the nurse's office as fast as he could. I've been sitting her for the past three hours waiting for you to wake up. The nurse said that you hadn't gotten a concussion; just a major blackout. i'm pretty sure it's a concussion though. Are you okay?"
    "Yeah, I'm fine. Just a little dizzy and a major headache. No worries." Actually I was worried, but I figured that it was better not to mention that.
    "Well now that you woke up I better get back to class. They've been trying to get me to go for the past two and half hours but I wanted to make sure you were okay. Wait, one more thing." She pulled her eyeliner out of her pocket and leaned over to fix mine. Then she brushed my hair back into a clip. "Perfect. See you in Algebra!" Then she pranced off out of the office.
    "You had a pretty hard fall, Sofia. Are you okay?"
    "Yeah, I'm fine. Can I go back to class now?" I was anxious to leave. I had a hypothesis of what might have caused my fall, but I wasn't positive; but I wanted to test it.
    "First I want to test your oxygen level, then, if it's okay you need to walk around my office. If you have enough oxygen and you can walk fine, you're free to leave." I was going to need to get some pain killers for my head.
    She came over with some little device and had me put my finger in it. In 30 seconds it started beeping and she checked it.
    "Your oxygen level is a little under, but you should be okay. Now let's see you walk." I sat up, a little too quick and the room seemed to spin for a minute. I ignored it though so she wouldn't notice. I took a tentative step forward and seemed to be fine. I continued around the room two more times until the nurse was satisfied that I was able to go back to class.
    I grabbed my bag and headed down the hall. She had given me an elevator pass because she didn't want my oxygen level to go down any lower than it already was. Honestly, I didn't mind it. I would've had to go up six staircases. If we're a rich school, you'd figure that we'd have escalators or something. But no, dumb stairs.
    The elevator dinged when I got to the fourth floor. Almost time for me to test my hypothesis. I went to my locker and grabbed the books I'd need for algebra and history class and went over to history.
    I hated being late because when you walk in, everybody stares at you and the whole class goes silent. That's exactly what happened to me.
    Let me tell you what my hypothesis is before I test it. I remember that right before I fainted I went to try the mind read thing. I told you earlier that I realized I was able to decided when I wanted to read a mind and when I didn't want to. Well I hadn't really specified whose thoughts I wanted to hear this time, unlike most of the other times. I think that because there were so many kids walking into the school and I was surrounded by so many people, which were obviously thinking, that my brain got overwhelmed and I just fainted. I couldn't handle all the thoughts at one time. I was going to try to do the same thing again, but slowly. It's difficult to explain how I allow myself to hear thoughts, but I think that I could figure it out.

  14. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    May 24, 2011 7:43pm UTC
    The Message.
    chapter one continued.
    "I'm home!" Haley came bursting in the door, with her book bags, She must have just come from play practice. It was time to try my new talent out. I started to think of what my sister was thinking, and then suddenly I knew them. She had been thinking about how she failed her quiz in math, and about how she was jealous of her friend because she wasn't able to go to the movies with them. Then again, she was only ten.
    Soon after my dad, and brothers came home. We sat down to have dinner. I listened to what everyone was thinking. I really was coming to the conclusion that I was able to read minds because whenever someone was talking I would 'hear' what they said before they actually said it. My dad was talking about his work. Which I didn't understand in any way.
    "Thanks for dinner mom." I cleared the table and headed back up to my room. I still had some homework that i needed to finish. I wanted to go to bed early tonight and see if this weird mind reading thing would be gone by tomorrow.
    After I finished my homework and read a little more on my Davinci Cody book I shut my lights out and tried to sleep. The only thing was I couldn't. Haley was already asleep so I decided to see if I could read people's dreams. Turns out I can. I ended up falling asleep to her dreams.
    I woke up to my alarm clock the next morning. Man, I really hate school. I should not have to be waking up at five every morning. Technically, I guess that I don't have to. But I have to look good.
    I did my normal routine, shower, get dressed, blow dry and straighten hair, then makeup.
    "Hurry up, Sofia! Mina's waiting for you outside." My mom called up the stairs to me. I threw my bag over my shoulder and grabbed a piece of toast on my way out.
    "Hey, Mina."
    "Hey Sofia." I tried to do the cool mind thingy I was able to do last night. I could still do it. Or hear it. Over whatever it was I did. I 'heard' Mina saying, 'ugh, I really hate school. I wish me and Sofie could just ditch and go to the the mall. But no, i have to do my best to get scholarships.' Jeeze that was really a complete thought.
    I didn't know the whether or not I should tell Mina about my 'talent'. I mean I trusted her with everything, I told her all my secrets, she told me all hers. We never told anybody either of each others. But I just didn't know. It's not really your average secret. Unless you know a bunch of people who can read minds. That's cool too.
    "Do you want to go to the mall tomorrow? I've been dying to get some new spring clothes." I asked. I actually have really wanted to get some new clothes. I haven't been shopping in a while.
    "Sure! It's almost like you read my mind, I was thinking about that." Little did she know...
    "Now that would be something, wouldn't it?"
    "Yeah."
    "Do you want to come over after school today? I have something super important I need to tell you." I blurted. I should think twice before I speak.
    "Hold on." She turned to ask her mom. "Hey mom, can I go over Sofie's after school?"
    "As long as you don't have a lot of homework." She would come anyways, it didn't matter to her.
    "Okay, thanks!"
    When we got to school we did our handshake. It was routinely. We've done it every day before school ever since I can remember. We got out the car and headed towards the school.
    Mina and I are what I guess you could consider 'popular'. We didn't really think much of it, and we weren't snotty. It just kinda happened. Mina has brunette hair, hazel eyes, and perfect skin with a tint of tan to it. I was jealous of her, and yet he was jealous of me.
    "Hey Mina, Sofie." Luke, our best guy friend, said running up to us.
    "Hey Luke." We both replied.
    I went to go read his mind, and then I fainted. Just like that, I fell over.

  15. epic_stories_11 epic_stories_11
    posted a quote
    May 24, 2011 6:39pm UTC
    The Message.
    Chapter one.
    It seems like forever and a day ago when this first happened, but really it was only a month ago. I was sitting in my room after school listening to my iPod, like any other normal teenage girl. I started to hear words. I thought it was just a remix on the music maybe, but then I realized they weren't even the right words, or the right voice. It was, different. I shut the music off, and tried to understand the words. But it was only a jumble of thoughts. Like whatever was talking was saying everything that popped into their mind.
    I should probably tell you the simple things about me first before I get to the confusing part. My name is Sofia Marie Lane; pretty boring if you ask me. I have blond hair, wavy before straightened. Crystal blue eyes, 14, and 105 pounds. So, pretty skinny. I go to Graygore Academy. Lots of people would say it's for the rich and snotty. Yeah, I'm pretty rich. Not snotty though. I don't have a boyfriend but my friends tell me I could get one in the blink of an eye because all the boys are falling all over me. I know (like literally know) that some do. But I know for positive the guy I like doesn't like me back. You'll understand later. I live with my mom, dad, sister, and two brothers. (Haley, Jake, and George) Anything else i realize i forgot to tell you I'll just mention when I get to it.
    So I was telling you about that first day. I had no idea what was happening. They weren't stopping. The thoughts I mean. I went downstairs, only my mom was home. She was working on taxes.
    "Mom, why are you saying the numbers aloud?" she looked up at me and gave me a look like I was from a different world. Maybe I am.
    "Honey, what are you talking about? I haven't said one number aloud. I never have. Are you feeling okay?" I hoped that I was just imagining it, but it's still happening now, and even more things have started happening.
    "Um, yeeeah. Fine. Perfectly fine. I bet I was, um, imagining it." That sounded so convincing.
    "Well if you're sure..." She didn't look convinced. I slowly turned and walked away. I realized I hadn't heard the voiced. Then I was wondering what my mom was thinking, and suddenly it just came to me. It seemed like she said, "teenagers, they worry me sometimes." Then it just went back to numbers. I tried not to think about what she was thinking and then I didn't.
    At the time I was thinking there must be some rational explanation. There had to be, right? But then a thought came to me. Maybe I was able to read minds. At the time it sounded bizarre, but now I'm not so sure about it anymore. The only person who knows about it is my best friend Mina. She's practically my sister. She thinks it's absolutely amazing, except when I read her mind of course. Back to that day.
    I went back up to my room and started experimenting with my new talent.
    "Mom, when's Haley supposed to come home?" I 'heard' 5 before my mom actually said it. I went back up to my room. It was only about ten minutes until five. I couldn't wait to figure out whether it was just my mom, or everyone. It was weird how I could decide whether I wanted to 'hear' what she was thinking or not. I wouldn't think I would have had the choice.
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