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Hidden Identity.
Chapter eight.



            I took a few minutes to process this all. A month ago I was your normal teenage girl, now? I could read minds, and I was supposed to save the world from these bad guys that could try to kill me. Doesn’t sound like much fun to me. But what was I supposed to do? Just say no and walk away? Wouldn’t a lot more people end up hurt then? What if it was the people I loved getting hurt?  I couldn’t let that happen. I was going to have to try to get rid of these guys whether I wanted to or not.
            “Okay… so where do I start?” A huge grin spread across the guys face, who I now realized, I didn’t know the name of.
            “Come with me.” He headed off towards a door on the opposite side of the room.
            “So... what’s your name?” I had to know what to call him, I couldn’t just keep calling him ‘that guy’.
            “Call me Jake.”  He looked over at me and smiled, he couldn’t have been much older than me.
            “Okay, Jake, so how did you end up in this, whatever you call it?” I honestly felt bad for the kid, he was the one instructing me on what I had to do, and out of all the guys there he looked the youngest.
            “I was an orphan. Both my parents died when I was ten. These guys took me in, their my bros. I’ve been with ‘em for five years now.” So he was around my age; at the most, a year older.
            “So what’s your supernatural power thingy?” I asked him, I figured he had to have one.
            “I can teleport.” He said it evasively, making me feel as if there was more too it, but he didn’t want to share. I didn’t question him though, I figured if he wanted to tell me that he would.  “Ladies first.” He said holding open the door and gesturing me inside. What a gentleman he was.
            The room was incredible, unlike anything I had ever seen before. There were computers and other technology machines I had never seen before all over the room.
            “Whoa.” I let out in a long breath. I looked over to Jake to see him snickering.
            “What?” I snapped at him. It really irritated me when people laughed at me when I hadn’t done anything, if I had done something stupid, I could understand, but if I didn’t do anything I didn’t want people laughing or snickering or whatever you want to call it.
            “I’m sorry, I just couldn’t help being amused by your awe.” His eyes twinkled and I knew he was making fun of me. I didn’t say anything, but playfully punched him in the shoulder.
            “Ow!” he said, rubbing it. Making a face to show me it didn’t hurt and he was just playing along.
            “Knock it off you two, we have to start working.” I big guy pushed by in between us.
            “That’s Rob.” Jake whispered to me loud enough for me to hear, but not loud enough for Rob.
            “These computers over here are researching ones, these t.v.’s are monitors, these computers are tracking devices, and all of this stuff,” he paused to turn to the other side of the room, “ is the stuff that we take on our missions.


comments and faves are really helpful.. i still might end it but i figured i'd post some more that i had wrote, please tell me what you think, thanks loves♥
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livvxyourxlifeee · 1 decade ago
Pleeaasee please please don't end it!!!! i really love this storryy:P i wish you could get more favs than you do, but the amount of readers doesn't reflect on the quality of your story. Keep it coming please(:
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takeback · 1 decade ago
pleeaase look a this
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