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1. last_breath
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   June 15, 2011 12:41pm UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 17: matts pov
   "okay its your turn, why did you never check back up on me? like with meg or holden?" i asked, she took a deep breath and sighed. o gosh whats wrong.
   "well, first off i thought you were dead, so i was in a mode of depression for a year. so i didnt want anything to do with any details of what you suffered. so i just didnt contact any one." she started.
   "but what about later, did you ever get over it?"
   "yea. well, this is kinda hard to tell you but i met this guy."
   "oh," i was surprised. had she really? "what was he like."
   "his name was murphy. he was very kind but he wasnt comparable to you at all." i smiled, thats always good to hear.
   "hm...."
   "but, even though he was nice, he became abusive and i couldnt get out."
   i leaned over the table worried, i also didnt want her to have to say it to loud.
   "what do you mean?"
   "i dont want to talk about it. i had my mom end it cuz i couldnt before i came here."
   "oh. why couldnt you end it." she crouched down.
   "i was scared matt. i dont ever want to go back!" she started to cry so i grabbed her hand.
   "dont worry kylie, ill always be here for you. i promise, wait i pinky promise." i held up my pinky and she interlocked hers with mine. just like old times.
   so sweet. and im on writers block... what needs to happen! please help!!!!
   
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2. last_breath
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   June 14, 2011 6:46pm UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 16: aprils pov
   "kylie?!" matt said in shock... which i knew he would.
   "hey!" i said as i ran over to him and gave him a big hug. it was kinda like seeing him for the first time, even though i had seen him before. it was like a big reunion! matt stood speechless so i grabbed his arm and pulled him to his car, "come on, we have a date to get to!" i said with a wink. he was still in shock so i grabbed his hand and made it open my door and i slid into the car. "okay boy, you ready to go?" truthfully i was veryy happy and still in shock from when i found out that matt was james, but i really should have seen that coming with all the hints that meg was dropping.
   "this is crazy!" he said as he sat down and cranked up the car. he put his hands behind his head and just sat there for a second. i allowed it, i mean he just find out i was his long lost love... so i didnt blame him.
   "okay, you had your time to pull it all together, but im hungry and i know my parents are sitting outside wondering whats going on, and you have a lot of explaining to do."
   "fine, lets go, and you have some explaining to do to." he said as he smiled like a kindergartner that was just given and bucket full of candy and a puppy. we drove to the nearest pf changs, the one that we had gone to on that valentines so many years ago. we took our seats and ordered our food, then we started talking.
   "how are you alive?!" i started off, "i got the mortuary in the mail, and it said you were dead." i leaned over and poked his cheek, "but here you are... all alive and breathing."
   "well i was actually in a coma. so my mom had already anticipated me dieing, the doctors even said i was going to die that day, so when i went into a choma, she thought i was for sure dead. she had already written a memorial that was at the newspaper company just waiting to be printed. so when i went out, she had it printed immediately, before they realized i was just in a choma. i shunned her after i woke up."
   "wow..." i sat there for a second and took a sip of tea, "thats crazy, but your hair... its not...."
   "blonde, i know. when you loose all your hair, like in chemo, sometimes it can grow back a different color."
   "cool. so this time its brown... i like it. why the name change?"
   "i wanted to start over, i didnt want to be known as james... because ive had such a bad history behind that name. you even knew that after just being at our school for a semester. so when i was fully recovered and my hair grew back a different color, i decided to change my name, but its only my middle name."
   as he finished i chuckled, when he asked why, i responded, "april is my middle name, its crazy how we think alike."
   "okay its your turn, why did you never check back up on me? like with meg or holden?" i took a deep breath and sighed.
   cute :) <3 crazy that this story is getting so long!!!!
   
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3. last_breath
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   June 14, 2011 4:35pm UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 15: matts pov
   the week passed by fast. but day by day i grew more and more anxious. what did she have to tell me? finally it had been a week so i texted april for where we need to meet up. she told me to pick her up at her house and find a quiet place to hang out... she must be pretty serious. holden and i had been hanging out a lot this week so we were just finishing up playing Black Ops.
   "you nervous?" holden asked.
   "psh. why would i be nervous?" i said shakily trying to hide the face that i really was slightly nervous.
   "maybe because youve been shaky all day." well it was true.
   "your right, im gonna go jump in the shower and start getting ready."
   "kay, then im gonna get going then."
   "aight." i headed up and started to get ready for our date. at 6 o clock i headed to aprils house. i was kinda nervous what she needed to tell me... i was still confused on how she figured out that i was james. this also meant that tonight was going to be of complete explanation, like why i never contacted her, how im still alive, ect. i pulled up to aprils house and brushed off my jacket. i could feel the summer breeze accross my fore head and through my hair. my knees began to shake as i rang the door bell.
   "have fun sweetie." i heard her mom yell as she ran to the door.
   "i will." her voice was all sing songy and happy. the door handle turned and i made a big step back and took a deep breath in. her door flew open and i couldnt believe my eyes.
   "kylie!"
   kylie! kylie! kylie! yay for kylie! ha ha ha :) time for the date of fun :D
   
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4. last_breath
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   June 14, 2011 11:54am UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 14: megs pov
   that night kylie april faith came up with a plan.
   "your sure that the die is wash out?" i asked, she had died her hair so dark it looked like it would at least keep it light brown and not return to its natural state.
   "ya, i just need to wash it a bunch and really hard, too."
   "well then lets get started washing."
   she ran upstairs took out her contacts and jumped in the shower and began to wash. her bathroom was reasonably big, and not being a creeper or anything, i sat in there while she washed her hair and we chatted. she was behind a shower curtain! it wasnt like i was going to sit there awkwardly in her room all alone.
   "so what did matt say?" i asked about the 3rd wash.
   "he was kinda speechless... he has no clue that im kylie i bet. thats why i wanted to get this dye out so he will believe me, or else he will think that im crazy.
   "i get ya." i sat there awkwardly for another few washes, "holden text me and asked if i had told you."
   "you had not. you just said i wasnt wrong. ha ha ha!" i laughed along with her.
   "hows it going in there? is it coming out." it had been atleast an hour.
   "uh... can you hand me my pjs?" she asked as she turned the water off. i did so, and sat there anticipating my old friend again. she stepped out from behind the curtain. the die was completley gone and she had her normal eye color.
   "beautiful. he is going be speechless." she dried her hair with a towel to get the water out and then blow dried it. she had really pretty blonde hair in the first place, so i have no clue why she would die it so dark.
   "you really think so."
   yay for old kylie! :D ha ha ha ha... so do you think i should find pics of what they all look like... would you like that?
   
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5. last_breath
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   June 14, 2011 11:41am UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 13: matts pov (yes matts pov)
   "james?" april said on the other side of the phone. my heart stopped for a second and i looked over at holden, "what?" he mouthed, i shook my head and motioned i would tell him in a second. he started to shoot some hoops while he waited for me to finish. we were at his house playing basketball.
   "james. ive gotta talk to you. i dont care if its now... it can be a week if you like. but you have to tell me everything, and i have to tell you something too."
   "uh okay... a week then?" i replied setting the "talk" we needed to have. especially since she now knows about my old life, did meg tell her?
   "ya, see you then, james..."
   "matt, i go by matt now."
   "erm. kay, bye matt." she seemed uncomfortable with using my middle name, james matthew cooper. and what did she have to tell me? and why a week? questions like this flooded into my head.
   "was that... april?" holden asked. it seemed like he was about to call her by another name.
   "uh... ya." i said as i scratched my head. "she know im james... i think meg told her." holden whipped out her phone and began to type...
   "ill ask meg...." he told me as he sent the text, "um. no she said she didnt. she wouldnt lie to me. she knows better than to lie to me." he said with a smirk, "what was the last thing you told her or anything you said tonight that would make her think that you were james?"
   "well i told her about kylie, and that she was my first kiss."
   "why?!"
   "well she asked me... anyway, when i told her kylies name she looked like she had seen a ghost or heard her mother call bloody murder from inside the house. maybe she used to know kylie...? well i dont know how thats possible. but she did say that she had to tell me something later, like in a week... i dont know why a week, but o well."
   "well then, all we have to do is wait." he picked up the basket ball from his last shot and tossed it to me, and we resumed our game.
   yea... i did skip megs pov this time, but it will be her pov in the next chapter :)
   
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6. last_breath
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   June 13, 2011 4:34pm UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 12: aprils pov
   whoa. meg was sitting on the couch staring at me with a smirk. "sooo how did it go." she asked. i sat down and tried to catch my breath. "he said.... he said he dated me?"
   "what?!" she looked happy for some reason, but i was terribly confused, "what do you mean?"
   "well, he told me that i reminded him of a girl he used to like a long time ago, and i asked who she was but he wouldnt tell me."
   "and..."
   "he said he would think about it. and he says that he dated kylie faith.... im kylie faith, and the only guy i dated down here was. . . james. o my gosh meg! is matt james? he is! he is! how is that possible?! i knew it!" wow it took me forever to figure that out.
   "well im not telling you that, you are going to have to ask him yourself."
   "im calling him." i grabbed the phone and found his contact and clicked call. i started to shake as the fone began to ring. i looked over at meg who was smiling like a drunken hobo.
   *ring* how was this possible, this is crazy... i got the mortuary with his name and everything.
   *ring* its crazy, the fact that he really is alive...
   *ring* i mean how... he was really close to death, what if im just making this up, but the way meg smiled....
   "hello? april?"
   "james?"
   :) okayyy sooo were getting closer and closer!
   
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7. last_breath
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   June 13, 2011 10:07am UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 11: matts pov
   the whole way back to the house i pondered whether or not i should tell april about kylie. i mean first off why was she so curious. i looked over at her, she looked half awake and had her head on my shoulder. it was crazy how well we got along already. it was like we had met before, and we were just picking our relationship back up after a long separation. call me crazy but i had wondered if she could somehow be kylie or kylies clone or something, but there was no way i was going to tell holden or meg that, they would call me crazy.
   they too had been acting all weird since the concert. like they knew something amazing that i wasnt alowed to know and they werent planning on telling me.
   we got to kylies old house/aprils current house and dropped meg and april off. as they headed off into the house i grabbed april's shoulder, "night." i said. kinda shaky, was i really going to tell her about kylie... or should i do it later?
   "night" she said as she turned towards the door again.
   "erm.... april wait."
   "what?"
   "her name.... that other girl."
   "what was it...?" she smiled a killer smile.
   "her names kylie.... kylie faith."
   the blood drained from her face like i had said something terribly wrong. but she looked like she was trying to keep her cool,
   "cool, um night matt." she tried to pull out a smile and ran inside. had i said something wrong?
   noooo april! tell him tell him who you really are! yes... i may or may not tell my writing what to do... :)
   
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8. last_breath
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   June 13, 2011 9:47am UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 10: megs pov
   holden smiled at me as we turned around and looked at matt and april together. i was the only one that knew that it was just a broken relationship placed back together by pure fate and a crazy miracle. i wanted to tell holden so bad that april was kylie, but i knew she would kill me. i dont know why she was hiding her identity, i guess she's just really hurt still.
   "i think were pretty good match makers, hm?" holden said as we watched them dance.
   "i guess you could say that." i smirked. maybe i could tell him, and make him promise that he wont tell any one that he knew... maybe.
   "what do you mean by that?" he replied confused.
   "what if i told you that its more fate than two friends putting two other friends together?"
   "i barely know april so i wouldn't consider her a friend yet."
   "i beg to differ."
   "what do you mean? ive never met her."
   "yes you have."
   "uhm.... no. no i havent."
   "not as april you havent, but at kylie you have." o gosh i just told him.
   "what?! april is kylie?" he seemed shocked, kinda angry i hadnt told him sooner, and happy all at the same time.
   "you cant tell matt and you cant tell april you know! kay?" i told him with the most serious face you can pull at a moment like this.
   "i promise, but. but, this is crazy!!!"
   "you cant tell. shhhhh. they will figure it out soon enough." i looked back over at them as they danced and kissed her. they were so happy together and i knew that they were meant to be together.
   i just knew that they would come back together, somehow, someway.
   im typing as fast as i can. :D glad to see i have atleast 5 readers :) its getting better so im not as bored with it. soo... idk :) ill finish this story, promise!
   
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9. last_breath
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   June 12, 2011 8:17pm UTC
   miraculous love
   chapter 9: aprils pov
   i loved this song. matt put his arm around me and started to sing along to the lyrics. he was a pretty good song. i looked down at me and grabbed my hand and whispered, "follow me." in my ear. he pulled towards the back of the park where it was less crowded and the noise was alot quieter.
   "what are we doing here?" i asked, he pulled me close and started to dance.
   "i thought we would get away from the crazy crowd and talk a little."
   "ah, so how long have you been at dustin?" i asked... i knew he was new, because i didnt remember him from when i was here 3 years ago.
   "well i came the summer after 9th grade."
   "hm... thats why i dont recognize you, i left right after the final day of ninth grade." i replied, his face looked suprised.
   "cool... cool. where did you used to live?"
   "well ive lived pretty much in every state known in the US. my dad likes to move around alot. especially when i was a child. but he has tried to stay in the same generall area for my high school year. i lived in charleston for a year then moved to dustin for a year and have stayed in charleston since now... and well here i am."
   "so you used to be good friends with meg?" he seemed to be getting more and more curious by the second.
   "ya... well when i first came i think she wasnt to fond of me. but we became really good friends." he looked dazed as i responded, like i had reached back to his past somehow, "have i offended you?" i asked.
   "um. no. i just. its just that you remind me of someone i used to know." he said staring down at me with his dreamy eyes. i felt like i had been in this position before, with james.
   "uh not to get personal, but who do i remind you of?" i asked batting my eyelashes.
   "a girl i met a long time ago. its nothing, just forget about it." he leaned down and kissed me softly.
   "how many girls you kissed then?" i smiled curiously.
   "why do you want to know?"
   "you look like a guy that would have gone through this routine before?"
   "you really think that?" he seemed offended.
   "uh..." i really didnt want to hurt him, "how many girls, just tell me that. i tend to see deeper into people than other people see. its a gift i have."
   "a gift, huh?"
   i smiled back and nodded.
   "kay, then guess how many girls ive kissed." he asked.
   i looked him over and made a wild guess, "hm.... 14+"
   "your way off." he smiled, he leaned and kissed me. "your the second."
   "whose the first?"
   "that girl i was telling you about."
   "what was her name."
   "oh... i dont like to bring it up."
   "pretty please!" i said as i poked his belly with my pointer fingers. "please!"
   "ill think about it..." he said. all seriousness on his face, "but for now" he kissed me hard, "lets stay quiet."
   long chapter :) they just keep getting closer and closer to figuring out who each other is... do i have readers?
   
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10. last_breath
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    June 11, 2011 6:16pm UTC
    miraculous love chapter 8: megs povi stepped up to the door of aprils house. ironically it had been kylies old house. holden stood beside me with a smile on his face. i heard someone grab the door handle and start to turn it, "mom! i got it!" i heard april yell. i heard a thump thump thump thump thump as meg and april ran downstairs. the door swung open and the two girls stood there with big smiles on their faces. april looked stunning. her hair was really pretty curled and her tank made her icy blue eyes pop."ready to go?" holden asked. the girls nodded. meg ran up to holden and put her arm around his waist. i held my forearm out for april to hold as i escorted her to the car."you look... amazing." i whispered in her ear. she stood on her tip toes and whispered back, "you dont look half bad yourself."i smiled and opened her door. she slid in to the seat and i followed. we got to pizza inn and ate fast. we wanted a decent view of the concert. the park was already packed when we got there. i grabbed april's hand as we weaved through the packed crowd. i held my breath as we squeezed through the drunks. i hated the smell of beer and achol. and smoke. we found a open area and meg pulled out a large blanket and spread it out over the grass. we took a seat as we waited for the band to play. april pulled out some homeade lemon custards her mom had made out of her large bag and passed it around. they were really good, sweet and tart. when the band came out the crowd went crazy! we stood up for the first few songs. i noticed that april was having a good time. i stuck my arm around her and she moved in closer. the band started sing CRUSH by David Archeleta... i hummed along to the lyrics....
    I hung up the phone tonight,Something happened for the first time,Deep inside it was a rush, what a rush,Cause the possibility thatYou would ever feel the same away about me,It’s just too much, just too muchWhy do I keep running from the truth,All I ever think about is youYou got me hypnotized, so mesmerized,And I just got to know
    Do you ever think, when you’re all alone,All that we can be, where this thing can go,Am I crazy or falling in love,Is it real or just another crush
    so i found this song and thought it was adorable and fit along perfectly! :) i havent been getting to many comments latley... and ya know how they make me smile... :D
    
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11. last_breath
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    June 10, 2011 6:33pm UTC
    miraculous love chapter 7: megs pov"i am sooo picking out your out fit!" i told april as her cheeks got redder and redder by the minuete. she looked so happy, my plan was beginning to work! "could you do my hair and make up too?" she asked, "lets go home right now and get started! manis and pedis before lunch, out fit hair and make after lunch.""perfect. lets go to the mall!?" i smiled i needed a cute outfit to wear too. "sure!" she smiled super big. we got to the mall and april got a super cute outfit, a light blue tank with silver beading at the top that really made her eyes pop and a dark wash pair of shorty shorts. i told her to pair it with a pair of converses and a school boy fitted blazer. it would be perfect! the tank really made her contacts pop and the rest really brought out her dyed hair. i dont think that she could pull it off if she still had blonde hair... and lost the contacts. i chose a yellow tee and navy blue shorts. i had a cute pink beaded necklace that i was going to pair with the white vans my mom got me for my birthday. it looked amazing with my bright red hair and green eyes. i loved color. when we got back to aprils place we painted our toe nails and finger nails. april painted hers dark brown, and i painted my hot pink. we grab a small lunch since we had just had fro yo a few hours ago. i started with aprils hair, i did soft waves. it looked super pretty on her. i curled mine while she got dressed. i did a smoky eye on her eyelids and a little mascara. she put on a pale lip gloss. she looked stunning, i just couldn't wait to see matts expression. by the time we were both ready it was 7:30. but when matt rang the door bell with holden, aprils face went completly pale. so cute :) awhhhh a date... i tried to be as descriptive as possible with the out fits..... :) how did you like it :)
    
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12. last_breath
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    miraculous love chapter 6: aprils povwhen matt walked into the froyo store i felt my heart flutter and my cheeks get hot. meg punched me and i giggled. it was so crazy, i didnt know if it was just me or that he could be james twin brother. i gave him a soft smile and played with my hair, twirling it as i paid for the peanut butter fro yo, with strawberrys, blue berries and white chocolate chips. it was a healthy portion and i ended up paying about $6. we found a cozy corner, and took a seat. it was pretty quiet and awkward for the first bit of our snack till holden offered that we go to the park later that night for a free concert that he heard about from his cousin, kyle. i flinched at the name because it was so close to my real name kylie... matt did too, but i dont know why. meg saw it, and patted my back, "ya that sounds like alot of fun... who is playing?""some local teen band, my cousin is good friends with the guitarist and the lead singer, he said i should come and bring a few friends.""i think we should go... that seems like alot of fun, ive never been to a concert in dustin." i said. "okay well then its settled, what time should we meet?" matt asked holden."how about we grab supper before, because the concerts at 8 tonight. wanna meet up at pizza inn?" "sounds good." i agreed. after we finalized the plans we gathered up our froyo trash. as i was about to get into the car with meg, we usually carpooled, matt stopped me. "hey, so i was thinking... um, would you wanna be my date to the concert... cuz i mean holden and meg are already together and it was just be us too awkwardly there and i thought we could go-" he asked. my head began to spin and i cut him off. "sure..." i said casually, "pick me up at 7:30?" and i slid into the passenger seat of megs car, my heart beating so fast i thought i was having a heart attack. "he asked you out?!" "mhm!" i nodded, blushing like crazy.... maybe i could find a way to put james out of my mind.... its not like i was ever going to see him again. sorry i havnt written but with witty being down yesterday... i didnt have time too. the format isnt working either. soo ya know.
    
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13. last_breath
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    miraculous love chapter 5: matts povi sat on my bed in boxers and a tee looking down at the floor. i was tired from playing basketball from holden, meg, and april. i never thought that i would here myself say this but i think that i was falling in love again... just like with kylie. but april was different, she was not as shy, but had built up a wall that i thought that i would never get down. i felt guilty for thinking about this, but its not like i would ever see kylie again. she told me to my face that she never wanted to see me again, she probably thinks im dead... well james is dead, im matt, not a jerk not a player... would never heart a girls heart. i fell backwards on my back and stared at the cieling. i pulled out my phone because i had gotten a text from holden.holden: had fun tonight. wbu? me: ya. wanna get meg to let april hang out with us somemore.holden: hm? whats this about.me: idk. yet.holden: you think u ready to date again?me: idk... yeti sat my phone on the counter and switched on the tv. baseball world series was on, so i watched for a bit till i realized i had dozed off. when i woke up the next morning i jumped in the shower ran my fingers through my hair to shake out the water and through on basketball shorts and a tee. meg had invited holden and i to go get some fro yo at the local fro yo place... tutti frutti. while driving i realized i caught my self only thinking one thing... whether or not april was going to be there. this was different i used to catch myself hoping that kylie would be at every place i was, waiting to hug me and tell me she loved me.... had i really moved on?thanks to the 3 readers i think i have im gonna finish... its just i think i get my hopes up that im a more popular writer than i think i am... o well :l ill just write cuz i enjoy it... r readers or not. <3 thanks for all the comments by the way.... and i got a formspring so ask me questions. :)
    
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14. last_breath
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    my story.... miraculous love isnt getting much attention so im thinking about starting a new story... but i have no clue what im thinking about writing... any ideas... or prove me wrong about no followers... its just that its already explained itself in the first 4 chapters....
    
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    miraculous love chapter 4: megs povi knew that i had to tell holden about april being kylie, but i knew that she would be super angry. but i need his help to help me get her and matt together... she would love him! little did she know that james never did die... he just died to his old self... he decided he was going to be a new person. its crazy because his whole look changed... did you know its possible for your hair to grow back a different color after you loose it all! and jame's hair did, i kinda liked it better this way anyway.i looked over at april who was fidgiting with her hair and watching holden and matt play ball. they were both really good and were the most popular choice for team captains in basketball. i personally thought that holden was better, but that may be because he is my boyfriend, so im obligated to think that. i started to think of double dates that we could go on with matt and april... or plotted how i could get them together. maybe we could see a movie... i could get holden in on getting them together with out telling him about april. i really did like her new look, it was going to take some getting used to, but it looked great on her. and her outfit was to die for, a flowly tank and jean short and flip flops, she had her hair tucked back behind her ear and held in place with a bobby pin. and she had also picked up a fondness for pearls, she had big pearl earings in her ears. she got up and walked over to the guys and took the ball from matt and shot the ball. swish... perfect shot, the guys went crazy and she joined the game, so i decided to join in the fun. maybe i wasn't going to have to do anything to get them together.... maybe fate would lend a hand.slow chapter... i know :l just hang in there... it will get better! my friend soCCergirly96 is helping me out... if you have any ideas, comment on the quote :) i love all the comments :) yay!
    
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    miraculous love 2chapter 2: matts povwhen i heard meg run out the back door i looked over at holden who was engrossed in his music. while he finished his air drum solo i walked over and grabbed a soda and sat back down. i popped the lid off and threw it at holden. he pulled one earphone out and looked over at me."what was that for?""where'd meg go?" i asked. he looked over and noticed she was gone."eh... idk... shes sure to return soon... im sure."i took another big swig of coke."wanna play some ball?" i asked as i stood up and walked to megs garage and grabbed a basketball."sure... but be warned...your gonna loose." i got ball first, i dribbled past holden with ease and went up for the shot. 2 points! holden got the ball. he crossed it under his legs and went for the dunk. i didnt dodge the ball or holden while he was in air and got knocked over. "dude, you alright?" "ya..." he helped me up and i held my head, "whose the girl with meg?" she was pretty dark brown hair, skinny with a figure, tall and somewhat fimilar. i waved and holden did the same. the new girls face became fear ful and shy. she turned back around to walk back, but meg pushed her forwards till they met up with with us."hey guys... meet april." meg smiled as if she were a kid who had just found a long lost puppy or toy, "she's an old friend of mine." holden and i extended our hands for handshake. "holden and matt." meg said to april with a small smirk, while she introduced us. April was a beauty... long dark chocolate hair and icy cold blue eyes played well with her lighter complextion. she had rosy cheeks and lips that seemed perfectly glossed, and accross her nose were a few freckles that seemed sprinkled on. she reminded me of a porcelain doll that i was afraid to touch because of a fear that she might shatter. she grabbed my hand and gently smiled showing off her perfectly straight and white teeth, "pleased to meet you."i had a little too much fun describing april/kylie... do you care if i just call her april in the pov's and commentary? could you picture her well? i plan on doing this on all the characters hopefully.... so tell me if i should describe more so you have a better picture or not :)
    
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18. last_breath
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    June 6, 2011 10:12am UTC
    miraculous love 2chapter 1: megs povi sat on the swing porch and rocked back and forth as the wind pushed me along. holden sat in a rocking chair and was humming along to his ipod. matt sat in the corner of the barricade of my front porch reading huckleberry finn. summer let out just 2 days ago and we were already bored. i walked inside and poured myself a glass of lemondae. i heard my mom and dad talking in the living room with another couple so i walked in to see who it was."megan... you remember the faiths? they were our neighbor 3 years ago... they had a daughter..." thats all i needed to hear. i ran out the door and ran to the house i had so many good times in. i loved holden and matt, like brothers, but i really needed a girlfriend at times. i busted through the back door."kylie!" i called through the house. it seemed to echo through the kitchen. i got no response. i walked into the living room, "kylie faith?" i said a little louder. still no response. "KYLIE APRIL FAITH!" i yelled. "shhhh...." came from her old bedroom. i peeped my head around the corner and saw a dark haired girl sitting on kylies bed.... wait... kylie? i stepped in and put my hands on my hips. she looked up... "its just april now." she said with a smile. she ran up to me and gave me a hug."man! ive missed having you around when hanging out with holden and... you have to meet matt! you'll love him! what did you do with your hair? how long are you back?" the questions kept coming, i had so many questions to ask her."megg.... i dont want anything to do with my past... ive already had to face who i always met at the front door... he's gone." "uhm... yea..." i mumbled under my breath. no one told her?! well... she will find out soon enough."so why the dark hair?" i asked."didnt want to be recognized. and im staying here permanetly.""this is gonna be a great summer. want me to help you unpack?" "sure?" she responded. later that evening i was going to convince her to meet matt, and see holden... she had to face her past sometime.... and it would be something she wouldnt forget... for the better :)what does megan know that kylie/april doesnt? if you know... comment... shouldnt be to hard my sister guessed after she read the first chapter so i know you can (well if you read book 1) otherwise take a wild guess! comments make me happy :D soooo much more than faves... but i like those too!!!
    
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19. last_breath
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    miraculous love 2proglogue i sat on our front porch watching my dad pack the moving boxes into the van, but this time it was going to be permanent. it was 3 years later from when i had moved from florida and summer was just approaching. i was going to be a senior the upcoming school year, but my dad had to move back to florida. right before my last summer with my friends. we were moving back into the same house as before, but i was not going to be recognized. i died my hair dark brown and had convinced my mom to buy me unnatural but beautiful icy blue contacts. i was also going by my middle name, april. i had sort of built up a wall guarding my emotions ever since james died. when my mom asked me.... i told her it was a self discovery ambition... so she went along with it. "kylie-" my mom called as she stepped into the van."april!" i corrected her."sorry... april.... ready to go?" "ya... on my way..."i grabbed my bags and raybans and put them over my eyes. i walked backward to the van and slipped in to the hot back seat. the leather seat was sticky and i was completely misrable. i was kind of excited to see meg. there was no way that i could pull off my "self discovery" personality and look away from her and she not realize who i was. and we were neighbors too... so there was no way. but i hadnt told her that was coming either. acutally i had deleted all my dustin, florida friends from contacts and removed them from my friends on facebook.i slouched in my seat as my dad cranked up the van and sent cool air blasting on my fore head. i pulled out my summer reading book for dustin high and prepared myself for an 8 hour ride into my pain ful past. soooo you like? i want to thank all my readers of change in heart! this is the sequel, but it is not necessary to read change in heart if you dont want to! lol :) im making it so anyone can read it if they want to. fave if your ready for the 1st chapter... wont write it till i have atleast 6 faves :) yay for new plot :D
    
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20. last_breath
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    June 4, 2011 8:46pm UTC
    change in heart
    chapter 17finalejames pov
    i sat motionless in the hospital bed listening to kylies note in my year book. mom was reading it as i drifted off into sleep.before you gave me only attention, before anyone gave me any attention, i felt hopeless and just wanted to go home, but as i fell in love with you, home just seemed farther and farther away. i took a deep breath and listened to the monitors continuous beeping*beep*beep*beep*beep*beep*james i never told you this but ive always been hard hearted and shy. you changed me. you caused me to have a change in heart. i took another deep breath and closed my eyes. they grew heavy and exhaled and fell asleep for what seems like forever. the last thing i remember hearing waskylies words: you changed me. you caused me to have a change in heart. it made me laug, because i wrote something in hers at one point. the last thing i said waskylie i love you. my mom gasped after i said that and ran out of the room and i fell asleep. after what seemed like months i woke up..."mom?" i whispered"its a miracle!" i heard someone shout. all i know is that i felt like i was a completely different person! he's alive! and that would be the end of my story! :) stay tuned for the real good story... its called miraculous love... wanna make a format for it. go ahead! ooo contest! ill pick the best format for my story! and ill follow you :) and fave you 10 most recent quotes! be sure to include my name so i can find it.... last_breath. have fun :)
    
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