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The Letter. THE CHANGE. The Lie.

Chapter 83:       July 18
*Katia's POV*


He was good at hiding feelings from his eyes; maybe because of the fame and constantly being watched, and normally I couldn't tell what he was thinking by his eyes. But right then I could. He was wistful, and terrified- praying I would see what he was saying was the truth but afraid I wouldn't. I took a moment to take everything in, everything he had said, everything I knew, everything I had thought about, and took a deep breath before answering.

 

"Yes."

 

"Thank God, Katia I'm so sorry for all of this," he started to take my hand in his but I pulled away.

 

"But just because I believe you doesn't change some of the things I thought about." I told him slowly.

 

"Like what?" he asked. He turned his body even more towards me and looked at me inquisitively. His voiced sounded normal, maybe slightly concerned, but it was his eyes that showed me how terrified he actually was.

 

"Like how we jumped into our relationship too fast. How maybe we aren't really ready for this. How it's not fair to you to have to deal with some of the things you have to by dating me right now," I paused before continuing with my eyes shut tight  

 


"How maybe, even if you didn't cheat on me, we shouldn't be together."


AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello! Oh my goodness it's been forever since I last updated but I had no internet connection for a week so it's not entirely my fault. Okay so what do you guys think of what Katia had to say? Any predictions on what is going to happen??

Also I'm going to start editting the story starting back with The Letter, which was forever ago. But I'm still going to ask, do you have any comments or constructive critism to give me? I already know a lot is going to change and there is going to be a ton different but let me know your opinions. Anything you wish was different? Anything you wish I would have expanded on, not have gone in as much detail on? Even anything you have to give me on The Change, including this chapter! Pretty much guys I just want critism on my writing so I get better so yeah, anything will work.

Thank you so much for reading! Love you all!
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The Letter. THE CHANGE. The Lie. Chapter 83: July 18 *Katia's

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TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
Love you for uploading but... WHAT IS THAT SECRET?? :'( i really want to know, I'm dying her... DYING :( Pweety Pweese? xx
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OnceUponAStory · 1 decade ago
I would love to tell you what the secret is but I can't! I'm really excited for you guys to learn what it is but at the same time I'm afraid you guys are going to be greatly disappointed... I'll give you a hint though: it's not a secret that Louis is going to be eager to tell, and definitely not on the spot (just to know in case something happens in the upcoming chapters)
Thanks for reading love! (:
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TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
Ok?... :( will it be revealed soon like in the next two chapters? Welcome! <3 x
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OnceUponAStory · 1 decade ago
Something will be... *cheesey smiley face*
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TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
Yay!
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