x_theycallmequiet_x · 1 decade ago
this is...so sad!! but well written, haha.
some feedback: totally your choice (i dont know if you did this intentionally or not), but dialogue is supposed to be in a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. It might make more sense from a reader's perspective as to who is talking, but it's good either way!(:
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rooftops* · 1 decade ago
thank youuu! <3 and thanks for the feedback too :) i like feedback like that (:
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PunkRockerDude1 · 1 decade ago
Of course we'll take you back.
A very startling start, but I like where the stories headed.
Nice to have you back:)
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rooftops* · 1 decade ago
I'm glad to hear that. I know a lot of people are mad, I got some comments on my profile that I deleted. But atleast some of you are (: and Yeah, it's not just a typical romance story. Lets put it that way. There's a lot other than romance in this story. & nice to be back (:
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BasketballisLife12 · 1 decade ago
i'm pretty angry...
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rooftops* · 1 decade ago
Aboutme being back.. or? :(
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BasketballisLife12 · 1 decade ago
nah
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rooftops* · 1 decade ago
Oh. So then why are you angry? o:
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BasketballisLife12 · 1 decade ago
dead bodies
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rooftops* · 1 decade ago
What do you mean? What. lol.
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