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The Virgin
Chapter
14


"It... It's Javin. He's the one for me." I spoke in a low, sad voice.
He looked at me with a million emotions driving across his face.
"It's fine." He said, a hint of sadness in his voice, "I shouldn't have kissed you like that. I'm sorry. Lets just go back to being friends. Ok?"
He spoke with a monotone, emotionless voice.
I nodded. "Do you want to come to a party at my house next week?"
He nodded. "Sounds good." Then he left.
I spent the rest of the party worrying about him and how bad I hurt him.
The party was 2 hours in when I realized Javin still wasn't here yet.
I found my purse and checked my phone and realized I had 4 unread texts from him.
Sorry I couldn't make it. J
Tomorrow night, Me. You. La Hotel Lafunda. 8 OC. J.
Hurry and reply, I need to make these reservations. J.
I made them and I just blew a crap loud of money on them. J

I quickly responded saying I was in for the hotel.
He texted me back a few seconds later.
It'll be a special night baby, I promise. J.
I smiled and put my phone away thinking of tomorrow night.
I wasn't going to let anything ruin my night. NOTHING. No fears, nothing.

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8:00 the next day.
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I adjusted my dress and fixed up my hair before walking into the hotel.
I had on a tight black dress with a jean jacket on top.
My cheetah clutche matched the cheetah flats I wore.
My hair curled down my back and stopped right at my wrist.

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I adjusted my smokey make up before stepping out of the car and into the hotel.
Javin waited for me by the door wearing a suit and tie. I smiled at him.
"What's all this for?" I asked.
"I wanted to treat my girl to something special." He said kissing me on the lips.
I kissed him back for a few seconds before he pulled away.
"Lets go my beautiful princess, your table awaits." He said smiling at me.
He grabbed me around the waist and led me to our table.
When we were seated, the waiter came and put down meals, already ordered.
I looked down and saw my favorite foods.
I smiled at him. "How'd you know?" I asked.
"I figured." He said not going to reveal his secret.
"My mom?" I asked rolling my eyes.
He nodded and laughed.
We smiled and talked the whole dinner time.
He got up, paid our bill, and grabbed me by my waist before leading me to our room.
When we got there, a bottle of champagne was sitting in an ice bucket.
"Awe." I said blushing a deep red.
He smiled popping the bottle open, champagne spilling over.
He filled two glasses and handed one to me.
He wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me closer to him.
"To us." He said clinking my glass against his.
I smiled. "To a perfect night."
He nodded and smiled.
We talked about the beautiful view from our hotel window when he suddenly turned to me.
"That sky reminds me of you when you smile. Everything is lit up." He said kissing me.
I blushed a deep red.
After a while of talking and drinking, he excused himself into the bathroom.
He came out wearing comfier clothes.
"Oh shoot. I should of brought more clothes." I said rolling my eyes.
He smiled. "You can put on my extra boxers and put a robe on top. Everything is in the bathroom." His eyes lit up with a crinkle in his eyes.
I walked into the bathroom and noticed how beautifully decorated it was.
I slipped out of my tight dress and flats, and into his comfy shorts.
I kept my bra on and put the robe on top.
I left the bathroom and saw him sitting on a bed, waiting for me.
He looked up when he heard me. "Come here baby." He said tapping the bed.
I walked over and laid next to him.
He tipped my chin up and kissed me gently.
Within the next few moments. My life was about to change..





Wah :( This story is almost over!
This is the climax of the story.
I'll try stretching out the next part into 3, at least 2 chapters.
I love you guys :)





 

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myahroxsdance5 · 1 decade ago
MIKE???
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xmadixdisantix04 · 1 decade ago
oommmmggg. this storrry is adddicting! pleasee write the next chapter sooon and make it interesting!(;
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BabyCakes248x · 1 decade ago
WHAT ABOUT MIKE D: Reminder pleaseee
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Ivey4eva · 1 decade ago
no!!!! she has to be with mike!!!!!
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ilovestars · 1 decade ago
M.I.K.E!!!
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cheetah678 · 1 decade ago
nooooo i wanted it to be Mike!!!! He seemed so sweet!!! Javin is soooo gona break her heart!
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queen* · 1 decade ago
It's ending soon?!NO! And also NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO about Mike because Javin is an jerk! He tried to her and she goes back to him. Gosh, this is so good!
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SayingWhatMeFeel · 1 decade ago
Asddgflkj!! I'm so glad you continued writing! I love thissss!
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movelikejagger · 1 decade ago
I love this book.
Please write the next chapter soon and u did to chapter 14’s just to let u know. ;)
Oh BTW i feel bad fro mike :(
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Shaylicii1O1E · 1 decade ago
U Mean 15 ;D
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abrakadabra · 1 decade ago
notify
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ThisRandomGirl · 1 decade ago
and theres 2 ch. 14 o_O
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ThisRandomGirl · 1 decade ago
Oh my Gosh! I love this story but the sad part is that its soon to be ending D: Please write more stories just like this one next!!!! :D
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Apage · 1 decade ago
didn't see that coming lol. its really good tho(:
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Th3Br0k3nBl0nde · 1 decade ago
Reminder please??? Thanks!!!!
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madyc13 · 1 decade ago
notifyy!
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You_R_Beautiful · 1 decade ago
notify?

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Alaska Young* · 1 decade ago
more please!!!
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QuietPeopleHaveLoudMinds · 1 decade ago
this is sooo good
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babiegirl503 · 1 decade ago
notify, please. this is amazing and so are your other stories. never stop writing
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