Can’t Control
Love
Chapter Three/Melody’s
POV:
Junior year was coming to the end, summer was
just around the corner. Friday after school I went over to
Luke’s house. We were in his basement making out. His hand
started to reach towards my boob. “No.” I shook my
head while moving his hand away from me. I got up and dusted off
my uniform skirt. I gathered my purse and keys. “Where are
you going?” he asked. “I’m going to
Chase’s gig.” I told him. It was nearly a year since
Chase and I started to be friends. Now we were extremely close.
“Melody, you can stay a little longer.” he said while
putting his hands on my hips trying to pull be back towards the
couch. “No, I can’t be late. I got a talent scout to
come to this one.” I told him while smiling brightly.
“Whatever, have fun. Just remember, I’m your
boyfriend.” he said while letting go of me.
“What’s that suppose to mean?” I asked raising
an eyebrow. “You spend a lot of time with him. And
I’m not saying you’re cheating on me or anything. All
I’m saying is that you shouldn’t be spending more
time with Chase than your own boyfriend.” he complained
while walking away. “I’m sorry, it seems that way. I
have to go, I’m sorry.” Lately Luke’s been a
little jealous of me spending so much time with Chase. I
can’t blame him though, I mean I did spend an awful lot of
time with Chase. But Luke was my boyfriend and I loved him and I
didn’t want to loose him.
I walked in in the middle of Chase's first
song. He smiled at me when he saw me and I smiled back. I scanned
the room for the scout that I told to come here and finally
spotted him. “Mr. Brownfield?” he looked up at me.
“Hi, I’m Melody. The one who told you about
Chase.” I told him while pointing up at him. “Oh,
hello there.” I sat next to him and we listened to the
whole set. I tried to read his body motions to see if he liked
Chase or not, but I couldn’t exactly tell. Chase
didn’t know I had brought a scout to come watch him. Last
time I got a scout to come listen to Chase and I told him about
it he totally freaked out and was really nervous. It didn’t
exactly end well. I nervously twiddled my thumbs as we listened
to Chase’s last song. He clapped at the end of it.
“So?” I asked the scout. “He’s defiantly
very talented and has great potential and everything.” I
nodded my head smiling, “But he’s not exactly what
I’m looking for. I’m sorry.” he said. He shook
my hand and then left. I took a deep breath and took a big sip
out of the coffee I ordered. “Excuse me miss?” a
middle aged lady asked me. “Yes?” I responded
sounding confused. “That young man that just sang, you know
him?” she asked raising an eyebrow. “Yeah,
he’s my best friend.” I told her. “He’s
very talented.” she said. “Thank you.” I
responded taking another sip of my coffee. “Listen,”
she started, “My name’s Trisha Burkwell. I come here
sometimes to scout out young talent and I haven’t seen
talent like your friend’s in quite a while. He has an
amazing voice, I like his lyrics and his songs, and he has the
perfect image that I’m looking for.” she pulled a
rectangular piece of thick paper out of her Gucci bag.
“Here’s my card, if he’s ever interested in a
record deal give me a call. I expect big things from him.”
she handed me the card then shook my hand before she left. I was
so overjoyed I couldn't stop smiling. This could be
Chase’s big break. I looked up the lady I had just talked
too. Apparently Trisha Burkwell was very successful at making
musicians famous, this wasn’t some
joke.
“Hey, how’d I do?” Chase asked
while walking up to me. “Amazing!” I told him
smiling. I decided to tell him the news later, after all it was
really big news and I couldn’t just spill at some coffee
house. I drove him over to my house for dinner. The car ride was
spent with laughter, I felt closer to Chase than I did with Clara
and Steph. “Hi, Chase!” my mother exclaimed as Chase
walked in the door. “Chase, how are you?” my dad
asked. My parents loved Chase, I wasn’t quite sure why.
They were always more excited to see him over than my boyfriend,
Luke. We had a nice enjoyable dinner. “How’d Chase do
tonight?” my mother asked peering over at me. “He was
great, as usual.” I said while taking a bite of corn. He
didn’t argue with me like he used too. But he was still way
too modest for being so good.
After dinner, Chase and I went to go hang out in
the game room. “You’re keeping something from
me.” he said. “No, I’m not.” I said
trying to lie. “Yes, you are. I know what you’re like
when you’re not telling me something and you’re
defiantly not telling me something.” I continued to deny
it. I wasn’t sure if it was the right time or place to tell
him. “Please Melody!” he begged. I kept shaking my
head, “I told you, I’m not keeping anything from
you.” All of a sudden he started to tickle me and I laughed
uncontrollably. “Chase stop!” I managed to say in
between giggles. “Not until you tell me.” I continued
laughing. “Please stop!” I told him while laughing.
He continued to tickle me, he knew it was the only way to get
something out of me. “Fine, I’ll tell you!” I
told him. He stopped. “Okay, you might want to sit down for
this.” He looked at me weird and sat down. I sat down on
the couch next to him. “Okay so today, when you were
playing at the coffee shop I had a scout come and listen to you
but he didn’t seem interested.” He started to frown,
“Oh.” “I’m not done yet, listen. So after
he left this lady came up to me and she was all did you know the
person who just played and I’m like yeah. So then
eventually she ends up saying she loved you and she gave me her
card and she wants to give you a record deal!” I exclaimed
smiling. “Are you serious?!” he said sounding super
excited. “Why would I joke around about something like
this?” I pulled the card out of my pocket and gave it to
him, “Give her a call!” I tried convincing him.
“I defiantly will, thank you, Melody. I wouldn’t be
where I was now without you.” he took my hands,
“You’re the talented one, Chase.” I started to
blush, “If it wasn’t for you I would have given up by
now, I mean it.” he told me. He was so excited, all his
dreams were so close to coming true. We could barely contain our
excitement; Chase had the shot to become
famous.
140 faves · 20 comments · Nov 24, 2011 2:07pm
patonrice
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1 decade ago
oooo this chapter's really long I'm excited!
I can already tell I don't really like luke hahaha
oooo parents like chase more...interesting
I swear by the time I'm done reading your most current chapter the next one better be up because this is amazing!
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kaila*
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1 decade ago
That. Was. Amazing
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yoursecretissafewithmefanclub
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1 decade ago
i love this story sooo muchh! cant wait for chapter 4!!!!
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xxnailpolishxx
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1 decade ago
this is really good:) im like obsessed! haha!
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supergleek
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1 decade ago
its getting good now:):)
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3girlscollab
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1 decade ago
chapter 4 soon?????
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ImC00likethat
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1 decade ago
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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ohmylanta
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1 decade ago
im shocked this isnt a top story! its sooo good! like you dont even know! this would be so popular if it were like a tv show! uk?
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livinginafairytale
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1 decade ago
i LOVE your story soo muchh!! i cannot wait until chapter 4!!!
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gleequotes
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1 decade ago
this storys amazing<3 my favorite on witty!!! keep it up!!
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doublelife
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1 decade ago
im addicted to this:)
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3girlscollab
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1 decade ago
im like obsessed with this story!!
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Bailey06
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1 decade ago
I'm addicted to this story.. :)
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zpoiledrotton313
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1 decade ago
lovee thiss storyy(:
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xxchloethedogxx
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1 decade ago
omg is he gonna become famous? that would be sooo cool!!
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belieber23
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1 decade ago
i love this story!:) its sooo good!
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awkwardpenguin
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1 decade ago
this was the best chapter so far:):)
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unibugsrock
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1 decade ago
This story is great! And the chapters are longer! YAY! As I've said before, whenever you type 'definitely' it comes out as 'defiantly'. :)
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stillwaitingforyou
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1 decade ago
sorry everyone! this is the real chapter three! i had some technical difficulities with some stuff... sorry & happy thanksgiving!! there was no room to say so in the chapter cause it was soo logn!
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loveisthemovement22 · 1 decade ago
luke seems mean. lol. this story is awesome.(:
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