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About me.
My name is Tessa, and this is my story account. My other account is dontworrybehappy123. I love to write stories, and it means alot to me if you read them. Other great stories to check out are OnTheOtherSide and LiesHurt.
Anyway, I hope you like my stories. ❤ 
  1. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    August 20, 2012 1:54am UTC
    Repunzel
    #14
    “I don’t know what you’re so worked up about Charlie, but whatever it is you know you can tell us,” Amie was plaiting my long brown hair while Vicky painted my nails.
    “I think it has something to do with Dominic!” Vicky sneered, giving me a wink.
    I laughed uneasily. Vicky was right, of course. I was nervous about Dom, and what he said to me yesterday. I was actually upset that I didn’t get to say goodbye to him, and I still didn’t know how he knew my name.
    Like the day before, we caught the bus and arrived at the school. As we walked through the front gates I looked through the crowd towards the group of boys passing a football. They were the ones that had run by us yesterday. My eyes met Dom’s. He smirked at me, exactly like the yesterday and turned away. I felt my face grow hot, and I followed Vicky towards our first class.
    The class passed painfully slowly without Dom in the same room. I tried to concentrate and take notes on what the teacher was talking about, but my mind kept drifting off towards the smirk that suited Dom so well, but had me worried at the same time.
    I gave a sigh of relief and stood up. The next class that I had was with Dom and I was desperate to interrogate him about that stupid, gorgeous, ridiculous, charming smirk of his.
    I reached the classroom and found Dom already sitting in his seat, waiting for me. I couldn’t stop the smile from flashing on my face, but I frowned slightly when I saw the look on his face. Instead of the smile that had been on his face all day, there was a concerned, sympathetic look on his face.
    I slowly took a seat beside him.
    “What’s up?” I asked him.
    He sighed and didn’t look into my eyes as he told me “You know, I was looking forward to proving you wrong, but as it turns out I don’t really want to hurt you…”
    His voice trailed off as I continued to stare at him, completely confused.
    “What on earth are you talking about?”
    He finally looked up at me and pulled an envelope out of his pocket. He opened it and pulled out some old photos. Dom hands me the photos. There were only three, and as I was looking at them I asked Dom, “Who are they?”
    The first photo was of a woman holding a baby in a hospital, obviously right after the baby was born. The lady had tears in her eyes as she looked down at her child.
    “Her name is Donna. I’ve met her a couple of times, a while ago. To be honest I thought she was insane. And that,” he said, pointing at the baby, “Is you.”
    Hey everyboday.
    Ohmygosh I'm so sorry, I haven't posted in ages! I promise it won't happen again!
    I don't know if I want to keep writing this story ? It just doesn't seem like anybody's actually reading it, but you know .. comment if you think I should keep writing. I've also started writing another story which I really think you guys would like.
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  2. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    July 21, 2012 9:00am UTC
    Repunzel
    #13
    I spent the rest of the lesson writing notes and listening to Dom talking to me. He had that special ability to be able to make me smile in the most serious situations. He poked fun at other students which made me laugh, and he did impressions of the teacher that had me in stitches.
    You know how in some of your classes in school, when there are those two or three people up the back giggling and laughing, and not listening to a word that the teacher was saying? Well that was us. That afternoon Dom and I bonded, despite our conversation from that morning. At one point, I was laughing so hard that I snorted. Yes, I snorted, which then sent us into another round of laughter and we got some very disapproving looks from the teacher.
    When I had wiped away the tears, Dom said to me seriously “So you really don’t believe me?”
    I looked at him curiously. “Believe you about what?”
    “That your dad is dead,” His blue eyes are looking into mine with such intensity that I have to look away.
    “No, I don’t. I have been living with him for my whole life, and just a few days ago he was just as alive as you and me,” I fiddle with the corner of the page on my book.
    Dom just gives me a smirk and says “You’ll see.”
    I frown at him, slightly concerned by that smirk, but right on cue the bell rang for the end of the school day and we all stood up and left the classroom. I caught up with Vicky and Amie, and we were walking out to the bus stop when Mitch, the strange boy that was friends with Vicky joined us.
    “Hey girls,” he smiled at us. “And I’m Mitch, in case you didn’t know.” He said to me.
    I smiled back. “I’m Charlie.”
    And together we walked towards bus stop.
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  3. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    July 13, 2012 10:29pm UTC
    Repunzel
    #12
    The teacher rambled on, but I continued to ignore her. I stared at that gorgeous face, and let out a small laugh. Dominic raised his eyebrows at me.
    “What on earth is funny about that?” he frowned at me, unimpressed.
    I smiled. “I really don’t think so. If he was dead, who have I been living with for the last fourteen years?”
    “I don’t know, but it wasn’t your father.” His voice was quiet know, like he was deep in thought.
    I couldn’t believe it. I wouldn’t believe it. The bell rang and I stood up and walked towards the door, Dominic right beside me the whole time.
    “Charlotte, you gotta believe me!” He said to me, his voice stern. “My parents knew your-”
    “Hello Dominic,” Vicky said as she appeared on the other side of me.
    “Victoria.” Dominic said as he nodded in her direction. He looked back at me and said, “See you around Charlotte.”
    He disappeared into the crowd as Vicky said to me “Wow, I was looking at you guys through that lesson, looked like a pretty intense conversation.”
    “You have no idea,” I replied, rolling my eyes.
    We laughed together as we walked towards the cafeteria for morning tea. We found Amie and sat down at a table.
    “Looks like you’ve got the next class with me Charlie,” Amie said, smiling. “English with Ms Mac.”
    I beamed back at her. That day, despite Dominic’s crazy theory about my father, was the best day of my life. It was my first ever day of school, with my two best friends that I had only known for a couple of days. Nothing could go wrong.
    The last class of the day, I had math by myself. Vicky and Amie showed me the classroom, and then went off to their class. I walked into the classroom and, as fate would have it, Dominic was sitting by himself at the back. He saw me too, and gestured for me to join him. I walked over and sat down in the seat next to him.
    “Hey Charlotte,” He smiled at me.
    I smile back and said to him, “Calle me Charlie.”
    He gave a little laugh, and said “Okay Charlie. You can call me Dom.”
    Hey everyone.
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  4. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    July 9, 2012 12:03am UTC
    Repunzel
    #11
    He had gorgeous blue eyes, and longish brown hair. When he smiled his eyes crinkled a little bit and showed off his dimples.
    As I looked into those incredibly blue eyes, I couldn’t help but smile.
    He smiled back at me and said “I just can’t believe you’re actually here.”
    Just then, I felt suspicious again, before school. I felt my eyes narrow, no longer smiling I asked him “Well where else would I be?”
    I studied him carefully, waiting for him to answer. He looked back, a small smile growing on his lips. He opened his mouth to reply, but the teacher walked into the room, cutting him off. I reluctantly turned towards the front of the classroom and listened to the old teacher at the front.
    “Where have you been Charlotte?” whispered Dominic in my ear.
    And that was the moment that I absolutely knew that he knew about me, about my life. I flinched away from him, not knowing whether I could trust him yet. I looked him in the eyes, and hissed back, “I don’t know.”
    In a way, it was the truth. I honestly had no idea where that house was, and I wasn’t planning on finding out. I wanted nothing more to do with that house, or my father.
    Dominic looked at me, obviously not convinced. “Please?”
    He wasn’t even trying to pay attention to the teacher. Those blue eyes were completely focused on me. I sighed and looked away. Looking into those blue eyes, I just melted. And then it all started pouring out of me.
    “I don’t know. I was living in a house in the middle of the forest with my father.”
    I looked up at him shyly. He seemed confused, like it wasn’t something he was expecting.
    “Your father?” He was frowning slightly, like he was trying to comprehend this.
    “But Charlotte… Your dad’s dead.”
    DUN DUN DUN!!!
    Hey everyone, sorry I haven't been on here for ages! I'll try to post more often!
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  5. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 28, 2012 8:52am UTC
    Repunzel
    #10
    The bell rang signalling the beginning of the school day. I had gone to the office to get my timetable and I had my first two classes with Vicky. We walked towards the science building while I laughed at Vicky’s impression of Dominic’s facial expression when he saw me.
    “So what was the deal with you two?” She asked me. “I mean, do you know each other or something?”
    I shook my head. “No, I have no idea who that guy is.” Which was the truth, but I couldn’t help but feel that maybe I did know him somehow.
    “Well I think we can both agree that he maybe needs to see a therapist.” Vicky smiled, laughing a little at her joke.
    I laughed with her as we entered the classroom. I went to take a seat at the front when Vicky grabbed my arm.
    “Oh no, you don’t want to sit there.” She said, pulling me to the back.
    “Why not?” I examined the seats at the back. They looked no different to the seats at the front.
    “Mr Gonwell spits. Really bad. Like you’re standing under a shower.”
    I nodded and took my seat at the back. I had already had a shower this morning.
    I noticed at that point that a boy with long hair had entered the room and taken a seat at the very front of the classroom.
    I nudged Vicky and sneered at her. “He’s sitting at the front, the teacher can’t be that bad!”
    She just rolled her eyes and muttered “Yes, but that’s Mitch…”
    I looked at her questionably when the teacher entered the room. The class went quickly and I soon figured out that my many years of reading had made me smarter than I realised. When the bell rang for the end of class, we stood up walked out the door. I saw that the boy right at the front had stood up and left the second the bell rang, like at the speed of light. So I asked Vicky, “So what were you saying about Mitch?”
    “Oh, it’s just that Mitch isn’t the kind of person that has, like, a million friends, you know?” She watched Mitch walk away with a distant look in her eyes.
    “Soo, are you friends with him?”
    “Of course I am! I mean, he didn’t always used to be that way. A while ago he was just like everybody else, just normal.” She stopped talking and looked at me. I guess she could tell from the look on my face that I wanted to know what had happened, so without me asking she kept talking. “His mum was in a car crash, and his dad tried looking after him for a while, but eventually he just ditched him and ran off. He didn’t talk to anybody for months. He quit the football team and all of the other boys started making fun of him. He was never the same since.”
    I had never seen Vicky so down, her eyes full of pity. I hadn’t realised that by now we had made it to our next class, and we walked in in silence.
    By the time we had arrived the rest of the class was already in their seats, and there were only two seats left and unfortunately, they were not together.
    “I’ll see you at the end of class,” Vicky said to me, skipping off to one of the empty seats, which I realised, was right next to Mitch. I couldn’t help but feel that Vicky had a soft spot for this boy.
    I turned and looked at the only other empty seat left in the classroom. I was shocked to find the person next to the seat was watching me carefully. I walked over and sat down and turned to face Dominic.
    He smiled a gorgeous smile and murmured, “Hey Charlotte.”
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  6. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 27, 2012 5:05am UTC
    Repunzel
    #9
    While he was talking to us he hadn’t really focused on my face, which was good I guess, because it meant that I blended into the crowd. But when he saw my face, he stopped dead in his tracks. His jaw dropped, and he shook his head like he couldn’t believe that I was standing right there in front of him.
    Vicky, who had become strangely hostile since the unknown guy came up to talk to us, put her hands on her hips and snapped at him, “Yes, yes, we know, she’s beautiful. Stop staring, you’re making her self-conscious.”
    He looked at Vicky, then at me again. I couldn’t help but blush.
    “Ch-Charlotte,” he stuttered. “Is that you?”
    I raised my eyebrows a bit when I answered “Do I know you?”
    Of course I didn’t know him; I didn’t know anybody here except Vicky and Amie. Everybody here was a stranger to me. But apparently I wasn’t a stranger to some people.
    He seemed hurt by my response. “You don’t recognise me, do you?”
    “No, I’m new here. I don’t know anyone.” I stared at him. For the life of me I could not place his face, even though something in the back of my brain was nagging at me. Did I know this boy? No, of course not. I lived in the middle of a forest with my father. No one else. But nothing could excuse the fact that he knew my name. Maybe he had overheard Amie or Vicky ? I asked myself. But the nagging wouldn’t go away, and before I could ask him how he knew my name Vicky linked her arm in mine, snapping me out of my own little world.
    “If you’ll excuse us Dominic, we have to get this young lady a timetable of her classes.” She announced, starting to drag me away towards the office.
    The boy, Dominic, finally looked away from my face. “Oh, okay… It was good talking to you Victoria,” he added sarcastically, before taking one last look at my face and jogged back over to his group of friends.
    “Pfft, what was all that about?” Amie muttered. “Do you know him Charlie?”
    And then it hit me. If Dominic had heard Vicky or Amie saying my name, they always call me Charlie, not Charlotte. This boy knew me,
    and I was going to find out how.
    Heeey everyone!
    Biiiit of a boring one ...
    Don't like it? Write your own story then. But if you steal my idea then I'll come to your house in the middle of the night and cut your foot off.
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  7. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 26, 2012 6:38pm UTC
    Repunzel
    #8
    A sea of faces, teenagers, some stared, but most of them continued walking on past toward the centre of the school. The only two faces I knew were right beside me, Vicky and Amy, as they guided me towards the front gates with a sign above it which read ‘St James College Brisbane’.
    We passed through the gates and entered the front lawn of the school. I had never imagined that a school would be that big. And there were so many people! St James was a very different place from my house in the forest, and I soon realised that I had no idea how to act in social situations like this, and from some of the stares that people gave me I probably looked like it too.
    “Okay Charlie, that’s the cafeteria over there and right next to it is the math building. And the front office is just there so if you ever need anythi-” she stopped mid-sentence. “Geez Charlie, you look like you’ve just entered a prison.”
    “Well, it sort of is a prison, but you get what she means,” Vicky whispered in my ear, smirking.
    Amie gave her a death stare before turning to me and saying “Listen, you just need to relax. It’s just school. It’s not like you’ve never been to a school before.”
    Except I haven’t.
    I felt a fresh wave of guilt wash over me. Eventually I would have to tell these two the truth. But now was not the time.
    Vicky chipped in, saying “Come on Charlie, I don’t want to be forced into saying one of those cheesy lines like ‘Just imagine everyone with no pants on.’”
    This coaxed a smile out of me. I took a deep breath, pushed my shoulders back and continued on just like I always have. The nerves still rushed through me though, so I unconsciously rubbed the scar that ran along my temple.
    A football flew past us, barely missing us, and a herd of boys ran after it. Some wolf whistled when they passed, others called out things like “Sorry ladies!” but one boy detached himself from the group and came towards us.
    “Sorry about that,” He said, smiling at us. “We had a big win on the weekend. That and Johnny likes to show off to the ladies.”
    He gave us a wink and was about to turn away, but then he saw me.
    Hey guys!
    Sorry it took me so long to put up this chapter, I've been away. Now that I'm on holidays I'll probably be posting more.
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  8. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 21, 2012 5:31am UTC
    Repunzel
    #7
    In life, there are those mornings that you wake up peacefully, with a smile on your face, knowing that the day ahead would be a good one. And then there are the other mornings when you jolt awake from the alarm clock being held beside your ear.
    I let out a little yelp as the sudden beeps from the clock snap me awake from the peaceful dream I was having. Vicky and Amie were rolling around on the ground laughing. Literally.
    “Thanks for that!” I growled sarcastically, but soon I was giggling with them. I crawled out of bed and put on my new uniform. We all headed down to breakfast, Amie and Vicky still giggling when a man pulled stopped us in the middle of the stairs.
    “Ah, you must be the newbie,” he said smiling at me. “I’m Dave, the manager. Welcome to Fr Tatt’s Home for Children. If you need anything, just come to me.” He beamed at me, making me feel a little uncomfortable.
    “Right, well, uh, thanks.” I said awkwardly. I heard Vicky and Amie snort behind me, laughing at my conversational skills.
    “We better be going to school Dave,” said Vicky, coming to my rescue.
    “Of course, Victoria, of course. Well, see you later girls.” He gave us one last smile before walking away.
    “Smooth,” said Amie with a smirk.
    We all laughed and went down to breakfast. When we finished we walked out to the bus stop where we waited and Vicky and Amie gave me an explanation of the teachers at my new school.
    “Well Mrs Mac is just lovely; she’s definitely the best teacher there.”
    “And Mr Thompson, he’s pretty good too.”
    “But don’t go anywhere near Ms Verning, she loves to hand out detentions.”
    “And get on Mr Gonwell’s good side, you won’t regret it.”
    The bus pulled up and we got on. I recognised the uniform, and the people wearing them stared at me a little. The bus trip didn’t last long and when it pulled up I felt the adrenaline run through my veins.
    Vicky turned to me, giving me a wide grin, and whispered,
    “Here we go.”
    Hello everyone!
    Chapter seveeen, enjoy!
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  9. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 18, 2012 4:26am UTC
    Repunzel
    #6
    I woke the next morning to a fright. The walls in my new room closely resembled the ones of my old house in the woods. When I opened my eyes, fear consumed me of being back in that house, trapped by the four walls and a very angry father.
    I waited for my heart rate to slow, and then sat up to find Vicky plaiting Amie’s hair. They looked over and smiled at me.
    “Good morning sleepy head!” Amie crooned. “How was your beauty sleep?”
    “Very good,” I answered smiling and trying to think of the last time I had slept in an actual bed.
    We were walking down to breakfast when Vicky explained the plan for the day. “We need to get you a uniform for school because tomorrow’s Monday, and I noticed that you don’t have many clothes, so we have to go downtown. That’s where all the good clothes shops are.”
    I scoffed down breakfast while Amie explained to me how ‘dorky’ the school uniforms are. I smiled and laughed at her jokes, but all the time growing even more nervous about the next day when I would be attending school. To be honest, all I wanted when I was little was to go to school, to make friends and learn new things. But we had entered the age of the teenager, and I didn’t exactly know how to act in public, being raised in a house in the middle of nowhere and all.
    When we finished breakfast, we got changed, I let Amie and Vicky do my hair, and then we set off to go clothes shopping. I had never been clothes shopping before, so this was a new experience for me. At the end of the day, I didn’t actually buy anything because I had no money, but the other girls didn’t end up buying anything either. We just enjoyed window shopping and trying things on. I decided that I liked shopping.
    We went to one store where they sold uniforms for different schools. We bought my uniform, and when Amie paid for it, she swiped a card and we left.
    “What was that card you just swiped? Like a credit card or something?” I asked, curiosity getting the better of me.
    “Oh, just a card from the adoption place,” Vicky explained. “The government pays for everything we need, like food, school, and our uniforms and stuff. You’ll get a card eventually, but whatever you do, don’t use it for nail polish.”
    This made Amie and I laugh as we walked back home. Home. I smiled to myself for like the hundredth time today. The house in the middle of the forest was never my home. It was temporary, while I was waiting for my prince. I suddenly realised why it never bothered Amie or Vicky that they would never get adopted. Whilst they had each other, they had family, and it didn’t matter where they were. As long as they had family, they were home. Now I had these two girls, both perfectly imperfect in their own ways. Now, I wasn’t waiting anymore.
    I was finally home.
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  10. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 17, 2012 4:15am UTC
    Repunzel
    #5
    The two girls were bright and friendly and once I introduced myself they never stopped chatting. At first I sat back shyly, not really talking, but I began to get comfortable and soon I was laughing and chatting just as much as they were. I had a shower, and Amie let me use her conditioner so I could wash out the tangled mess that my hair had become over the last couple of months. At dinner, which was a combination of pea soup and mashed potato, I asked them when they thought they would get adopted. The two looked at each other and laughed loudly.
    “Oh you poor thing,” Amie said with a smirk. “No one ever wants to adopt us, not moody teenagers.”
    Nodding in agreement Vicky added “They want cute little babies, we’re just too old.”
    “Plus, most of the families who adopt are first time parents, and you know, they want little kids, so they can have the family experience.” Amie continued, shovelling the soup and potato mix into her mouth while I marvelled at how the fact that no one wanted them didn’t bother them at all.
    That night we set up my bed and stayed up late talking and laughing. Victoria and Amie’s parents were also dead, as mine supposedly were. Victoria was the survivor of a car crash and Amie’s parents both had cancer. I felt guilty when they sympathised for me when I told them that mine had died in a house fire.
    In the early hours of the morning we said goodnight. I realised while lying in my new bed that that afternoon was the first time I had ever had an actual conversation.
    “Goodnight Charlie.” I heard Amie sing out into the dark.
    “Yeah, goodnight Charlie. Don’t let the bed bugs bite.” Said Vicky.
    Charlie. I let the smile grow across my face. Things could not get any better.
    Hey guys!
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  11. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 16, 2012 6:50am UTC
    Repunzel
    #4
    As I walked, a car pulled up on the road beside me. The window rolled down and there was an old couple looking a little concerned.
    “Excuse me dear,” the woman said. “Are you lost?”
    She was in her seventies, and had a kind look in her eyes, like when a grandmother spoke to her grandchild, not that I would know. But I felt as if I could trust her, so I answered “Yes, would you be able to drop me off into town?”
    After my time in the woods by myself, I had come up with a plan for when I arrived at civilisation. When I came across a town, I would find an adoption agency and be sent to a nice home where I could go to school and make friends.
    The woman smiled and said “of course, love, hop in.”
    I opened the door and looked into the clean, nice smelling car. Slightly ashamed, I looked down at my clothes, which I had only washed about twice in the steam, and was covered in dirt and dried blood from all the rabbits I had caught. I had some more clothes thankfully, which I had never worn since leaving the house.
    “Um, do you have a towel or something I could sit on?” I asked, not wanting to dirty the perfectly clean seats.
    The couple looked at each other and just laughed, they told me to get in and stop worrying, so I did. The two were very easy to get along with, and for the half hour ride into town they asked me why I wanted to go to the adoption centre, so I told them that I had been in adoption for a long time now, which seemed like a believable story, so I stuck with it. When we arrived at the centre, we said our goodbyes and I walked into the building.
    I walked up to the receptionist with a name badge with her name, Sharon. She looked up and smiled at me. Sharon was the kind of person who had a smile which made her look about ten years younger. When I asked to live there so I could find a family, she seemed surprised but said “Okay dear, I just have to ask a few questions. Starting with your name, where are your parents living and what are their names?”
    I was a little embarrassed, because to be honest I didn’t know what my father’s name was. I had always just called him ‘father.’ I smiled a little shyly and said, “My name is Charlotte… Charlotte Smith. And uhh, well, my parents aren’t with us anymore.”
    Sharon nodded, and smiled at me sympathetically. “Okay sweetheart. We just have to get government approval of you staying with us, which shouldn’t be hard, and it may take a while for a family to take you, so I will show you to your room.”
    I let her lead me down a hall, hoping that the last name ‘Smith’ wasn’t too cliché. Truth was, I didn’t want anyone to know my last name, incase they knew my father and let him know where I was. I admit, I may have been a bit paranoid, but who wouldn’t be in a situation like that? I had run away from that house in the middle of nowhere, spent months in a forest with no contact to the outside world, and now I had made it to an adoption centre. I had come too far to go back now.
    I followed her upstairs to a room where two girls were sitting on a bed talking and laughing. One of the girls was short, with amazingly blond hair that was almost white. The other was slightly taller and with dead straight black hair and a nose piercing.
    “Charlotte, this is Victoria and Amie, you’ll be sharing a room with them until we find you a home.” Sharon said.
    When Sharon left, an awkward silence settled over the three of us. Then the girl with the piercing stuck out her hand and said “Hi, I’m Victoria, but you can call me Vicky. This is Amie,” she gestured to the girl beside her. I took her hand and smiled.
    “I’m Charlotte Smith.”
    Hey everyone.
    Getting into the story a bit now.
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  12. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 15, 2012 2:54am UTC
    Repunzel
    #3
    I had fashioned a spear out of a long thin branch and a sharp rock, and used it to hunt rabbits, fish, anything that I could eat really. I tried to make a bow and arrow, but the sting always snapped, so eventually I gave up and kept walking in the opposite direction of the house. I was also terrified of the thought of my father coming home to find me gone and coming after me. By the time the sun started setting, which was the time he usually returned home, I starting walking even faster. Eventually I got tired, and had to rest, but all night long I woke up at the slightest sound, and in the early hours of the morning I gave up on sleep and kept walking. I recognised a few edible berries, and the forest that I was once so frightened of had turned into something beautiful. I loved the lush greenery that surrounded me, and the light breeze that cooled me down when I got tired from walking.
    I stayed in those woods for a long time. About three months, on my own, all the time still walking away from the house, but it felt like a lot longer than that. I had found a stream which flowed in the direction that I headed so I followed it until I came to the end of the forest. I remembered as I stepped out of the forest, I saw a field with cows and sheep. I smiled as I looked out at the massive plain ahead of me, so different to the dense woods behind me. Right in front of the field was a road, which I followed for a while. Living in the woods for that long had I guess changed me from that quivering little girl in the house. Now I felt as if I was older, stronger, ready to take on the world. As I walked I ran my fingers along a scar that ran along my temple, the last beating that my father had given me. I felt an anger growing inside me.
    I would not let that man hurt me anymore.
    Chapter three, hope you like it.
    A bit boring, but it'll get better.
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  13. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 13, 2012 5:41am UTC
    Repunzel
    #2
    I was mad at my father for making me believe in something that would never happen in a million years. I felt helpless now that I knew that nothing was out there waiting for me, that I would probably spend the rest of my life in that house. Then I got desperate. The thought popped into my head one day when I was reading that very same survival book. What if I just run away? I would break all the rules my father had, and if he caught me I was as good as dead. But I would rather face the wrath of my father than to be stuck on that house all my life. So the next day, I got up and acted like it was just any other day. When my father left, I waited and watched him leave. When I was sure he was out of ear shot, I opened the door and step outside. I had read the survival book three times, and by then I had a pretty good idea of how to make a weapon, how to set traps, and how to survive for a long time with no contact from the outside world. I spent two whole years teaching myself how to stay alive in the immense wilderness around me, each day like the next; waiting for my father to leave, before sneaking out to train. Training for what, I had no idea. Until the day that I turned fourteen.
    My father returned home the day before, and was carrying a letter addressed to him. I dared to ask him who it was from, and what it was about, and he beat me. It was obviously something private, something he didn’t want me to know about. But instead of making me never want to see that stupid letter again, as I assume was the original intent, it made me even more curious as to what it contained. So the next day when he left, I turned the house upside down looking for it and when I found it underneath his pillow, I was eager to find out what was so secretive about it. That letter was what saved me from that house. I didn’t even read the whole thing, just the first sentence was enough to make me pack up the few things that I owned into a backpack and run away and disappear into the forest, with the first sentence of the letter still fresh in my mind.
    All is stable with the subject (Charlotte Denman) still unaware of the current experiment # 305 …
    That was the day that I realised that I, Charlotte Denman, was nothing but an experiment, and I didn’t know what for, but I knew that nobody was coming for me. There was no prince charming. There was no hope for me leaving that house. So if my true love, whoever it was, wasn’t going to save me.
    I would just have to save myself.
    Hey guys, thanks for reading.
    Here we go Emily, chapter number two.
    Enjoy (; xoxo
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  14. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
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    June 10, 2012 10:38pm UTC
    Repunzel
    #1
    When I was twelve, I was reading a book on survival techniques in the wilderness. It said that if you were abandoned in the middle of nowhere, like a desert or a forest, that it could take days, or even weeks, for someone to find you. But that’s if someone is looking for you. Slowly, I started putting two and two together. I was in a remote position in the world, although I wasn’t sure where that position actually was, and if someone was looking for me, wouldn’t they have come by now? I thought about my mother, but dismissed the thought straight away. If I had a child that was living in a forest, I would do anything to be with them. I had long given up on her. So if my mother isn’t coming for me, then who is? No one. To the outside world, I practically didn’t exist. And how could a prince charming come for me, when he didn’t know that I was even alive? That day, I felt a little part of me die. All hope of leaving that place was built on that one person coming to find me, and take me away and we would live happily ever after.
    But that only happens in fairy tales.
    Hey everybody, sorry this chapter is so short. I promise the next one will be longer. (:
    Thank you for reading! xo
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  15. helloeveryboday helloeveryboday
    posted a quote
    June 10, 2012 8:43am UTC
    Repunzel
    Prologue
    I spent my whole life in that house. No, not a house, more like a prison, though I didn’t know it at the time. I remember waking up, day after day, for fourteen long years to the sounds of the vast forest around me. Usually by the time I had woken, my father was eating breakfast, or sharpening his knife. I had loved my father. He was my idol, my god, my everything. Back then, he was the greatest man I knew. The only man I knew. Every day he would leave that house, disappearing into the forest which fascinated me and terrified me at the same time. I had no idea what he did in there, I still don’t, but when he returned he always brought food, wood for the fire, everything we needed to live in that house. In the meantime, I was left alone in the house, forbidden to leave it. I never dared to disobey him. I had been punished before, beaten for things that I did wrong. So I stayed inside that house, and like any child would have been, I was bored out of my mind. Sometimes my father brought home things to keep me entertained, mainly books. I had taught myself to read, one of the many things I did to keep myself busy. I also taught myself math, and I read about science, and by the time I was eight I was intelligent enough to go to high school, and being that clever, I had started to question things, even my father. One day when he came home, I asked him when I would be allowed to leave the house, to make friends and travel the world. Immediately a scowl came across his face. I expected to be punished, like the time I had asked about my mother, but much to my surprise, he leaned in, his face inches from mine and growled, “You can leave when someone comes for you.”
    So I waited. I waited for a mother, desperately looking for a child. Someone. Anyone. In the long days when I had nothing to do, my mind began to wander to the day that someone would turn up at the door ready to take me with them, and for a while it felt like I was Rapunzel, waiting for her prince charming.
    But no one came.
    hey guys! This is the beginning to my new story! Hope you like it! If I don't get enough faves then I will most probably stop writing. But if you have any feedback or comments then feel free to comment. Thanks for reading! xoxox
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