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Repunzel
 
Prologue

 I spent my whole life in that house. No, not a house, more like a prison, though I didn’t know it at the time. I remember waking up, day after day, for fourteen long years to the sounds of the vast forest around me. Usually by the time I had woken, my father was eating breakfast, or sharpening his knife. I had loved my father. He was my idol, my god, my everything. Back then, he was the greatest man I knew. The only man I knew. Every day he would leave that house, disappearing into the forest which fascinated me and terrified me at the same time. I had no idea what he did in there, I still don’t, but when he returned he always brought food, wood for the fire, everything we needed to live in that house. In the meantime, I was left alone in the house, forbidden to leave it. I never dared to disobey him. I had been punished before, beaten for things that I did wrong. So I stayed inside that house, and like any child would have been, I was bored out of my mind. Sometimes my father brought home things to keep me entertained, mainly books. I had taught myself to read, one of the many things I did to keep myself busy. I also taught myself math, and I read about science, and by the time I was eight I was intelligent enough to go to high school, and being that clever, I had started to question things, even my father. One day when he came home, I asked him when I would be allowed to leave the house, to make friends and travel the world. Immediately a scowl came across his face. I expected to be punished, like the time I had asked about my mother, but much to my surprise, he leaned in, his face inches from mine and growled, “You can leave when someone comes for you.”
So I waited. I waited for a mother, desperately looking for a child. Someone. Anyone. In the long days when I had nothing to do, my mind began to wander to the day that someone would turn up at the door ready to take me with them, and for a while it felt like I was Rapunzel, waiting for her prince charming.
But no one came.


 

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