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  1. bluegreeneyes28 bluegreeneyes28
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    May 14, 2012 3:24pm UTC
    Life Changing Game
    chapter one
    The ball is in the air. I knew I could get it. I went out after it. I jumped to grab it as Rocky went to head it. Then there was the collison
    ********
    I'm Payton McCoy, AC high schools star goalie. It's my junior year and spring has just sprung around here. Being that its springs means its soccer season, for me and my best friend that means life begins again. My best friend Julia Houston plays sweeper infront of me. We're a total dynamic duo defensively. As we're jogging out to take our places on the field I glance into the stands and see our boyfriends-Drew Campbell and A.J Collins-sitting togehter. Julia and A.J have been together since the sophomore year and have been disgustingly adorable ever since. Me and Drew have been together for about five months now. Me and Julia are jogging out to our spots on the field and Drew and A.J. cheer. We were playing our first conference game of the season against local rivial NR. NR has always been good and their forward Rocky is known for having the most header-goals in the league. The first thirty minutes of the half go back and forth. NR has a corner kick and I know Rocky's going to go for the header. Me and Julia are barking directions at everyone. The balls in the air. I knew I could get it. I went out after it. I jumped to grab it as Rocky went to head it then there was the collison.
    *********
    "Payton! Payton can your hear me?!" Someones yelling. I hear sirens in the distance. What happened? I rolled over and a man was kneeling over me.
    "Ahhh!" I yelled.
    "Payton," the man said, "I'm a paramedic. Do you know what happened?" I shook me head.
    "Do you know what you were doing today?" I looked around I was on a grassy field.
    "I'm not entirely sure."
    "This seems like more than the standarded hit to the head." He said to the man standing behind him.
    "Wait maybe she remembers me." A girl said.
    "Payton, do you know who this is?" I looked at the girl and shook my head. The girl looked like she was about to cry. I felt bad for upsetting this girl.
    The paramedic asked me a l ot more questions. Finally I threw my head into my hands and started crying.
    "Payton, whats wrong?" The paramedic asked.
    "My head really hurts and I don't know the answers to any of your questions."
    They loaded me onto the stretcher and started to cart me off the field. I looked into the stands.
    "Wait!" I yelled. "I remember him!" I pointed into the stands.
    I was pointing at my ex-boyfriends Austin Bradley.
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  2. bluegreeneyes28 bluegreeneyes28
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    June 30, 2012 2:38pm UTC
    The Secrets To A Perfect Season
    chapter two
    Me: Pat Klien's on our team.
    Court: For real? why would your dad do that?
    Me: He doesn't know what happened last summer
    Court:You didn't tell him!
    Me: I handled it myself, did I not?
    Court: You did but still Hayden, that was crazy.
    Me: Hopefully he doesn't do anything that crazy again this summer.
    Court: HOPEFULLY
    *******
    It was the night of our first practice. I was excited but dreading it. Excited to see some of the boys I hadn't seen since the tournament team. When I walked up on the practice I saw some of the boys had already gathered. I didn't see Pat which was a good sign. Then I heard a voice behind me.
    "Hayden? Is this freaking for real?"
    I turned around and saw him.
    "I'm not thrilled either Pat. But I've been doing a lot of thinking. We should set aside our differences for the sake of the team. Then we can go back to hating each other once this is over."
    "You have no right to hate me." He said. He actually freaking said that.
    "Are you kidding me Pat? Do you remember what you did last summer."
    "That guy was a tool. And you know it."
    "That doesn't change what you did and how you did it."
    "Yolo." He walked past me without another word. This was gonna be a long summer.
    *******
    "He seriously said you have no right to hate him?" Courtney whispered. We were sitting listening to the end of practice talk and didn't want to get busted for talking ourselves.
    "Yeah he was like Brendan was a tool and you know it. Unbelievable."
    "Well, Brendan kind of was a tool."
    "That's not the point."
    "I know. I know. But he acts like what he did was no big deal."
    "Maybe, he'll change and realize the truce is a good idea."
    "Doesn't seem likely right now. You saw how he acted during practice. Cracking girl jokes and literally running over me in the outfield. He's ridiculously immature."
    "Just give it time Hayden."
    We got up to leave and someone bumped into me. I turned around. Pat . Ughh.
    "See ya bud."
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  3. bluegreeneyes28 bluegreeneyes28
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    June 30, 2012 3:16am UTC
    The Secrets To A Perfect Season
    chapter one
    I'm Hayden and sports are my life. But baseball is my favorite. I've been playing for atleast nine years now. That's how me and my best friend Courtney met. We were four and just starting in t-ball. When we were in t-ball there were these two girls Hallie and Cami were up at the nine-ten year old level. They were both amazing players and played up all the way to the last year they could. As we got older people started to say were were the next Hallie and Cami. Now we are thirteen and at the first year of travel ball. For the last few years we've been the only two girls in the league. Last year we even got to play on our first trounament team for eleven-twelve year olds. Now we have a big step playing travel ball. We have to prove ourselves ten times more than we already do. Boys can be creuel. We already have a few jerks in our league but theres gonna be boys we've never met that are gonna doubt us. But for now, we had our own boys behind us.
    ******
    This year were the Royals. Ironically one of the worst teams in major league baseball. I hope that wasn't an omen. This year we had a few guys that we had played with on the trounament team and the rest were guys from around the league who we knew we had respect from. Atleast thats what I thought until I saw the roster.
    Royoals '12
    Hayden
    Courtney
    Frankie
    Nick
    Jon
    Martin
    Dawid
    Anthony
    Ryan
    Pat
    Kevin
    Pat Klien was on this team. This was going to be a nightmare. Out of all the boys on the team-in the league- we get Pat Klien. He hates me. Especially because of what happened last summer.
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  4. storiesaremoviesinyourhead storiesaremoviesinyourhead
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    June 5, 2012 12:33pm UTC
    Make Friends or Break Friends
    Chapter 5
    Maya's P.O.V.
    She hasn’t been home tonight. I am seriously worried about her. How could she do this to me?
    *Nock Nock*
    I went zooming down the hall and guess who was at the door.
    ‘’BROOKE! Where were you?’’
    ‘’I had the best night of my life! When Lewis came up to me and kissed me on the neck, he took me to a lake. We had the best time ever. He threw me around in the water and kissed me over and over again. They were just little kisses but it got way better.
    Once we were out of the water, Lewis layed a blanket out. Then he told me I was the most beautiful girl ever. I was so shocked! The real kiss happened. He turned and slowly pressed his lips against mine. We soon started to move in sync. He started to pull me closer. Oh May! It was so hard not to let out a massive groan. We just stood there for hours, snoging!’’
    I just stood there. Stunned. I started to wish it was me telling Brooke what happened to me last night. I had to be happy for her!
    ‘’Wow, Brookie Babes! That’s amazing!’’ I said, faking the enthusiasm.
    We sat for hours talking about her night.
    ‘’Maybe you should get a boyfriend.’’ Brooke said.
    ‘’Possibly. I sort of want one now! The way you described that kiss!’’ I said, truthfully.
    ‘’Thats it. Tomorrow we’re going on a hunt for a boy!’’ Exclaimed Brooke.
    Sorry I haven't been writing latley guys and about the short chapter! The past weeks have been busy!
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  5. storiesaremoviesinyourhead storiesaremoviesinyourhead
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    June 5, 2012 12:11pm UTC
    Make Friends or Break Friends
    Chapter 4
    Brooke's P.O.V.
    This was it. The first time someone actually wanted to go out with me.
    News spread round the school fast.
    ‘Brooke Marsh is going out with Lewis Shep!’ They would all whisper.
    ‘It will die down.’ Lewis kept telling me. I was getting a bit annoyed with it. Big whop. It’s not the first time two people have went out together.
    After maths I went to my locker to get my lunch. Out fluttered a note, shaped like a heart.
    ‘Wait here. I have a surprise for you babe.’ It read.
    I was truly ecstatic! I waited thinking what was going to happen.
    A person came up behind me and gave me a kiss on the neck. It was the most romantic thing ever, but I was soon brought back to reality when everyone around us went, ‘’OOOOOOO.’’
    TYPICAL!
    I don’t know what they were ‘oooo’ing at. People have done a lot more in the school corridor. Lewis grabbed my hand and ran out of school with me. He didn’t tell me where we were going either, so I was pretty excited.
    When we arrived at our destination, he took me by the hand, and we ran down a hill. At the bottom was a massive lake. Next thing I knew, we were having a massive water fight. It lasted for ages! He was spinning me around, again and again and giving me so many kisses. I felt so special.
    Afterwards, we walked up to the car, and he layed out a blanket. We built a camp-fire, and made dinner. Then he whispered in my ear, ‘’you’re the most beautiful girl ever.’’ I was stunned. Then he pulled me close, and gave me the most passionate kiss I have ever had. He pulled us tighter together which made it very hard for me to not let out a groan. That night, we sat beneath the stars, cuddled up together.
    Sorry I haven't been writing latley guys! The past weeks have been busy! Though nothing coming up soon, so check most days, as there will probably be chapters up. Aiming to get this story finished by summer, as I have been getting alot more feedback!
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  6. storiesaremoviesinyourhead storiesaremoviesinyourhead
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    May 27, 2012 2:09pm UTC
    Make Friends or Break Friends
    Chapter 3
    Brooke's P.O.V.
    ‘’Will you go out with me.’’ Asked Lewis.
    What? Was this actually happening?
    Hiya. My name’s Brooke. I live with my best friend, Maya. I call her May and so does everyone else she knows! May’s parents died when she was little. Sad, I know. My mum, dad and I are the only things she’s got. May has long, dark brown, wavy hair past her shoulders. She has the most wonderful curves, all in the right places. She really is stunning. I look a lot like May only I have light brown hair and no curves. My body’s like a 12 year olds.
    I had just got asked out by Lewis. Oh those blue eyes! Not to mention the hair, or I would be drooling all over him. Inside my stomach was doing summer saults.
    ‘Yea, sure.’’ I said, trying to act as casual as possible.
    He then gave me a kiss. Yes a kiss! I little one on the cheek. Wow! I’m like putty in his hands!
    As soon as he left I got straight onto the phone, to May.
    ‘’Lewis just asked me out!’’ I yelled, down the phone.
    There was a long pause before she replied. Oh darn. I forgot May likes him as well and we said we would be single Pringles. Well done Brooke.
    ‘’You are okay, if I go out with him?’’ I questioned.
    ‘’Yea, sure. If you want to.’’ May said.
    That was it. No scream of happiness for me. We were meant to be in this together. Ah Well. She’ll just have to get over it.
    What do you think guys? What will happen next? Will Maya's jealousy take over her friendship with Brooke? Sorry about the gaps in this Chapter! Witty's gone weird!
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  7. storiesaremoviesinyourhead storiesaremoviesinyourhead
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    May 26, 2012 4:58pm UTC
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  8. storiesaremoviesinyourhead storiesaremoviesinyourhead
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    May 26, 2012 4:47pm UTC
    Make Friends or Break Friends
    Chapter 1
    Maya's P.O.V.
    Here I was.
    Brooke and I.
    My name’s Maya but most people call me May. Brooke’s my best friend. I live with my best friend. I know weird right, but when I was young, my parents went out in their little boat together. The loved each other.
    I wanted to look like that someday. When they were out in their boat, something happened. I don’t know what and I’m not sure I want to. My parents were gone. Just like that. Life’s so cruel sometimes.
    That’s why I live by the rule; Do it. You could be dead tomorrow.
    Sometimes that rule is very stupid. When I was 11, I was at the shopping centre with Brooke. She said that it would be really funny if we jumped into the fountain. So we did. Not a good idea, when you get kicked out of the mall and banned for a year.
    Anyway, Life’s great at the moment. Brooke and I are single Pringles and we’re loving it. We do so much together. Brooke’s mum, Kathy is like my mum too. I just call her ‘mum.’ She is the most cool mum ever. She’s married to Marcus. Dad. (Not really my real dad but he acts like a dad to me so dad.)
    Kathy always chats to us like she’s 16. It’s actually really great. Having an older person there who always knows what to do, yet she still is like one of us.
    Just perfect.
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  9. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    May 30, 2012 6:44pm UTC
    taking chances
    Chapter 8
    I went up to my room to change out of my bathing suit. I threw on a pair of white shorts and a black tshirt and walked back downstairs. I only imagined how awkward it was for Tyler to hang out with my brother while I got changed, knowing that he didn't like him.
    "I'm back!" I announced, walking into the kitchen. Marissa was cooking, which suprised me.
    "So how did you and Marissa meet?" I asked, actually curious. She looked like the kind of girl you would meet in a club, which is probably where Nick did meet her.
    "Through friends." he said vaguely, and I knew what that meant. The dinner wasn't as awkward as I had thought it was going to be. I was nice to Marissa, because I wanted Nick to be happy. He was civil with Tyler, which I appreciated. I couldn't see why he didn't like Tyler, because he's only met him once before. After Tyler left, Nick and Marissa went out for the night, leaving me home alone. I went up to my bedroom and logged into my Facebook account.
    RELATIONSHIP REQUEST FROM TYLER JOHNSON. I accepted, and saw that I had a new message. I clicked on the chat box and saw that Luke messaged me.
    Luke Martinez: Hey Martin. Sorry about last night. Megan was way out of line. I should have stood up for you.
    Kourtney Martin: Don't apologize, she's not your responsibility. And I can fight my own battles.
    Luke Martinez: Yeah, she is my responsibility. I'll make sure that doesn't happen again.
    Kourtney Martin: No offense, but she's kind of a jerk...
    Luke Martinez: Yeah, I know...
    Kourtney Martin: If you don't mind me asking, why are you dating her if you think she's a jerk?
    Luke Martinez: I honestly don't know..
    I didn't respond to this, already suprised that I had asked him that question. I went to bed, getting some well needed sleep.
    I woke up the next morning and jumped in the shower. When I got out, I threw my hair up into a messy bun and walked over to my closet. I picked a tribal print top and jean capris with my gladiator sandals as my outfit for the day. I grabbed my bookbag and put on my sunglasses, because it was bright out today.
    "Ready?" I asked Nick as I walked down the stairs, in a rush to get to school.
    "Sure." he said, sounding hungover. Shocker.
    "Thanks for the ride." I said, once he pulled into the school parking lot. I got out of the car and met up with my friend Carley.
    "Hey good lookin!" she said, giving me a hug. It's been weeks since I hung out with Carley, and it was nice to have someone new to talk to.
    "what's up girly?" I asked.
    "Word on the street is you bashed out Megan at Luke's party!" she said, waiting for the details.
    "Not really.." I said, trailing off. I walked to my locker, and she followed me.
    "Hey Martin." said Luke, and I just ignored him, while continuing my conversation with Carley. When Tyler walked up to my locker, she walked off.
    "Hey." I said, looking up at Tyler.
    "Hey cutie. I gotta go, but I just wanted to say hi. Sit with me at lunch today?' he asked with a hopeful smile. I said yes, and he walked off.
    "Honestly Lukey. Just move lockers. I don't want you haveing to be next to that every single day." I didn't even have to turn around to know who was talking. Megan.
    "Megan, stop." he said, seeming annoyed.
    "What?" she snapped, irritated.
    "You can't just talk about people like they're invisible." he said, sticking up for me. I thought I told him I could fight my own battles.
    "And you can't tell me what to do." she said.
    "Well, let me tell you this. We're over." he said, walking away after slamming his locker shut. She stood with her mouth open wide, then walked over to me.
    "Look, I don;t know what game you're trying to play here, but you will never get my boyfriend." she said.
    "I think you mean ex." I pointed out with a smirk on my face.
    "Whatever. You better watch out Kourtney. Or I'll make you regret it." she said, and stormed off. I walked to class, which was the same class I had with Luke. I walked in just as the bell rang, and took the seat closest to the door. Which also happened to be the seat closest to Luke.
    "Hey, are you okay?" I asked him, thinking he would be upset.
    "I'm actually kinda relieved." he said with a small smile.
    "You can do better than her." I said, offering him a smile.
    "Thanks Kourt." he said, calling my by my nickname, and not my last name.
    After class, Luke asked me to wait for him.
    "Look, I know we're not really good friends, but thanks for being there for me. It means a lot." he said.
    "Hey, no problem." I said, suprised that he was being this nice to me.
    "and when you said I could do better? I was thinking the exact same thing about you." he said.
    Did I hear him correctly?
    ~~~~~~
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  10. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    May 26, 2012 1:44pm UTC
    taking chances
    Chapter 5
    "You look absolutely stunning." Tyler said, complimenting me again for the third time in two minutes.
    "Thanks." I said, biting my lip and blushing.
    "Hey Tyler." Matt walks up to us and shakes his hand, and even though Tyler knows matt and I are just friends, he looks upset that I'm here with another guy.
    "Wanna dance?" Matt asked me, a hopeful look on his face.
    "Absolutely!" I answered, grabbing his hand and pulling him towards the dance floor. A fast beat song was just ending, and a slow sang began next.
    "May I have this dance?" Matt asked, goofind around.
    "I would be honored!" I replied, having a great time. We stayed on the dance floor for another two hours, having a blast with our friends. When I glanced towards Tyler, he looked like he was having a miserable time.
    "Ladies and gentlemen, it's that time of night! We will be announcing our homecoming king and queen!" said the principal.
    "Our king this year is a member of the varsity football team." he said, giving us a hint.
    "Congratulations, Luke Martinez! Your 2012 homecoming king!" Everyone erupted into applause, and Luke seemed shocked. He went up to get his crown and flashed a winning smile.
    "And for the first time ever, the homecoming queen is a member of the varsity swim team." My heart started racing at that point. Nobody on the swim team ever won. I wondered who it was.
    "Congrats to Kourtney Martin! Your homecoming queen 2012!" My jaw dropped, I was so shocked. I had never even thought of winnig this. Matt gaev me a push towards the stage, and I made my way up there, looking stunned.
    "Hey there gorgeous." Luke whispered to me when I got on the stage.
    "And now for the first dance." announced the principal.
    Luke offered me his hand to help me off of the stage, and I took it. He led me to the middle of the dance floor where a small circle was cleared for us. The dance was awkward, because I wasn't absolutely crazy about Luke. When it was almost over, he pulled me close and whispered in my ear.
    "I really mean it. You're gorgeous." he said, and I suddenly felt guilty.
    "Thanks for the dance, but I have to go." I said, backing away. I walked over to Matt and he told me that Tyler had elft.
    "I'm sorry girl. If I knew he was gonna ask you, I never would have." he said, feeling sympathetic.
    "No, it's not your fault. I had a really great time tonight." I said with a smile.
    "Alright, let's go." he said, and I was confused.
    "But the dance isn't over yet." I said.
    "You're going to Tyler's. I'm driving." he said, grabbing my jacket and his car keys. We drove to Tyler's, and he dropped me off.
    "Thanks again mattie!" I said, leaning over to give him a kiss on the cheek.
    I walked up to Tyler's front door and rang the doorbell. His mom answered the door.
    "Kourtney, hi sweetheart! Tyler's upstairs in his room." she said, pointing the way to his bedroom. I walked up to his room, and knocked on the door. He opened it, andhe looked really upset.
    "Hey." I said.
    "Hi." he said, opening his door so I could walk in.
    "Why did you leave so early? I went to ask you to dance, but you were gone." I said.
    "You looked pretty happy dancing with Matt and Luke all night." he said, obviously jealous.
    "I told you, Matt needs a friend right now. And it was one dance with Luke, which I left early to find you." I told him.
    "IThat's not my business." he said.
    "But it is! You're obviously upset over this, and I have no idea why!" I said, growing frustrated. He didn't respond, but he walked over to me an put his arms around my waist. He pulled me close, and kissed my lips. It felt like fireworks were exploding in my stomach.
    "That's why." said Tyler.
    "I really, really like you Kourtney."
    ~~~~~~
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  11. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    May 25, 2012 4:25pm UTC
    taking chances
    Chapter 4
    "Would you like to be my date to the homecoming dance?" he asked.
    "Tyler, I really would like to, but Matt already asked me." I said, feelig guilty.
    "Oh, that's cool. I didn't know you were into him." he said, trying to shake off my rejection like it was no big deal.
    "I'm not into him. He's my best friend, and he's going through a tough time right now. He really needs me, so we decided to go as friends." I explained.
    'So you don't mind if I go with someone else as friends?" he asked, and I felt jealous.
    "No, of course not." I lied. The rest of the car ride was silent and awkward, but I hoped we could put that past us and have fun hanging out this afternoon.
    We walked into his house, and his mother was in the kitchen, making some kind of casserole.
    "Hi kids! How was school?" she asked, as if we were life-long friends.
    "Good." answered Tyler.
    "This is my friend Kourtney. We're gonna hang out this afternoon." he said, introducing me to his mother.
    "Hi Kourtney, I'm Lisa. Let me know if there's anything I can get you." she said, with a smile. We walked to his back porch, and his backyard was huge. He had a swimming pool, a volleyball court, and a beautiful patio.
    'Wow, this is amazing." I said, admiring it.
    "Thanks. My dad's an architect. He built this house." he said, and the whole time I was thinking that this house should be on MTV cribs.
    'It's beautiful." I said, still in awe.
    We spent the afternoon goofing off, playing volleyball, badmitton, and air hockey.
    "You wanna go for a swim?" he asked me.
    "Yeah, it's so hot out." I replied, digging through my backpack for my swim team suit.
    Tyler went up to his room to change, and I used the bathroom to change. When I walked back out into his backyard, he was rubbing suntan lotion on his back. He turned around, and I had to admit, that guy kept himself in shape.
    "Sunblock?" he asked, offering me the bottle.
    'Can you get my back?" I asked, feeling flirty. He put his hand on the small of my back and kept it there for a second. I got butterflies, and I knew I was falling hard for Tyler.
    The next day was the homecoming game. Nick, Matt and I all went to watch it together. It took forever, but when it finally ended, my school had won 35-28. Everybody was in a good mood, which meant that the dance was going to be a lot of fun tonight.
    "Okay, so I'll be over to pick you up in about an hour." said Matt, who went back to his house to get ready after the game. I walked up to Tyler to congratulate him.
    'Great game!" I said, smiling when I saw him.
    "Thanks babe." he said, giving me a hug, even though he was all sweaty. I didn't mind. Wait, did he just call me babe? Could he get any cuter?
    "I have to go, but I guess I'll see you later tonight?" I asked, and he shook his head yes, and told me to save him a dance. I was about to say goodbye when Mandy walked up and asked him what time he was going to pick her up.
    "Let's just meet up here." he said, looking annoyed.
    "Oh. Okay. Well I can't wait baby!" she said, giving him a peck on the cheek. He wiped it off when she walked away and turned back to me.
    "You're going with Mandy, huh?" I asked, raising my eyebrows.
    "You said you didn't care if I went with a friend." he said.
    "I don't. I gotta go, see you later." I told him, walking to Nick's car.
    When I got home, I went straight up to my room to find a dress to wear.
    I found the cream colored dress that I wore to my aunt's wedding. It was a solid cream colored bottom, and the top had gold sequins. I put it on, and it looked perfect against my tan skin. I slipped into my gold heels, and walked over to my jewelry box. My fingers glided over the gold locket that lay in there, uncertain as to whether or not I should wear it.
    "It would go great with the dress." said Nick. I got tears in my eyes when he said that, and a sad smile on my face.
    "Mom would want you to." he said, coming over to give me a hug.
    "I miss her." I said.
    "I know sweetie. I do too. But tonight's your night. And Matt's downstairs waiting for you." he said, helping me fasten the locket around my neck. I walked downstairs and Nick took pictures of Matt and I. It was awkward, and I knew Matt thought it was weird too, because his hands were tense around my waist.
    "That was awkward." I said, once we were in his car and on our way to the school.
    "Tell me about it." he said, laughing.
    When we got to the school, Matt came around to my door and opened it for me.
    "Aw, how sweet." I said, laughing. When he gave me his hand, I used it to get out of the car, and I saw Tyler staring at me, his jaw literally wide open. Matt and I walked in to the gymnasium, and he went over to talk to a few friends.
    "Hey you." he said, his eyes twinkling in the light.
    "Hi." I said, smiling.
    "You look beautiful." he said, which only made me blush harder.
    ~~~~~~~
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  12. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    May 24, 2012 1:58pm UTC
    taking chances
    Chapter 3
    I went home and went straight to bed, exhausted from my swim meet. Once I turned off the lights, I saw my iPhone light up. I had a new text message from 'Coolest Guy Ever,' also known as Tyler.
    "Great job today. See you tomorrow(:" was what the message read. I do like Tyler, a lot. But I can't figure out why he likes me. Guys like him don't usually fall for girls like me, which is what confused me. I couldn't tell if I was being used, or if he actually liked me. So I decided I would talk to his brother Connor in school tomorrow.
    When I woke up, I quickly braided my hair to the side, threw on a pair of skinny jeans and a cute heart top, and laced up my black high top coverse. I threw on my glasses, too lazy to put in my contacts. I grabbed my school stuff and ran downstairs, rushing out to the car because otherwise I would e late for school.
    Nick dropped me off, as usual, and I made my way to my locker.
    "Good job at your meet yesterday. You're a really good swimmer." said Luke. Great. Now I had to talk to him.
    "Thanks. I didn't see you there." I replied.
    "Yeah, I left early, but I saw two of your races, and you're really good." he said, complimenting me. Luke was a nice guy, I just didn't like him because he was dating Megan. Although Luke was s jock, he didn't seem to be a jerk. I know, that's a bad stereotype, but for most of the guys in the school, it's true. In fact, Luke doesn't really hang out with the other populars. He's not that popular himself. To be honest, he's kind of shy. And he's sweet. I still can't figure out why he's dating Megan. When I saw Connor walking down the hallway, I walked over to him. Connor was a sophmore, and I wanted to see if he would tell me if Tyler liked me.
    "Hey Connor!" I called out, falling into step beside him.
    "Oh, hey. Kourtney right? You're one of Tyler's friends." he said. Friends. Of course. What was I thinking?
    "Yeah, that's me." I responded.
    "Did you want something?" he asked, and I debated whether or not I should ask him what I was going to.
    "Actually. Yeah. But can we keep this betweenn us?" I asked, and he shook his head yes.
    "Okay, uhm. Tyler and I have been talking for a few weeks, and I think I like him, but I don't want to flirt with him if he doesn't like me back." I said, sounding unsure of myself.
    "Go for it. Yesterday when he was texting you, he had this smile on his face. It's kind of obvious he's into you." he said, and I knew he wasn't lying.
    "Okay thanks Connor! And remember, this stays between me and you." I said, walking in Tyler's direction.
    "Hey Kourtney." he said when he saw me walking towards him.
    "Hi! How are you?" I asked, making conversation.
    "Pretty good. You look cute." he said, giving me a smile. I got butterflies whenever he told me thta.
    "Thanks." I said, biting my lip.
    "So do you wanna come over after school today?" he asked. Since it was a Friday, I didn't have swim practice.
    "Sure, that sounds like fun." I said. He stopped me in the hall and turned my head towards him. He stared into my eyes for a few seconds before speaking.
    "You have the most beautiful eyes I've ever seen." he said in a low voice, that was incredibly sexy.
    "Thanks." I sad, blushing and focusing my eyes on the white floor tiles.
    "I gotta get to class." I said, and he wrapped his arm around my shoulder.
    "Let me walk you there." he said, and we walked to my english class.
    "Meet me at my truck after school." he said, flashing me a million dollar smile. The rest of the school day flew by, and before I knew it, school was over. I texted Nick to let him know I wasn't going to be home right after school, then went to my locker.
    "Hey Kourt! No swim today?" Matt walked up to my locker, striking a conversation.
    "Hey Matty! And yeah, since it's a Friday and we won yesterday, there's no practice today." I explained.
    "Kourt, I gotta talk to you for a minute." he said, suddenly sounding serious.
    "Sure, whats up?" I asked, curious as to what was going on.
    "Lizzie's moving." he said, referring to his girlfriend of two years. Lizzie and I got along okay, but I was better friends with Matt. Matt and I had been friends for the past seven years, and he was probably the best friend a girl could ask for.
    "To where?" I asked.
    "Virginia." he responded, looking extremely upset.
    "Oh my gosh. I'm so sorry Matty." I said, giving him a big hug.
    "We broke up this morning." he said. I felt so bad for him.
    "Look, I'm gonna be here for you whenever you need me okay?" I said, comforting him. He looked oike he was about to cry, but he held the tears back.
    "Come over tomorrow, I'll find something fun for us to do!" I said, trying to cheer him up.
    "Tomorrow's homecoming." he said, talking about the dance that happened after the big football game.
    "I totally forgot about that! Does that mean you and Lizzie aren't going together?" I asked. He shook his head yes, then his eyes lit up a bit.
    "Are you going?" he asked, forming an idea in his mind.
    "I might." I answered, wondering where he was going with this.
    "Come with me! It will be fun! Two best friends, we'll have a blast!" he said, seeming excited. I didn't want to say no to him because he was going through some pretty hard times right now, so I smiled and told him to pick me up at 6 for pictures.
    I walked out to Tyler's truck, and he was talking to one of his friends before he noticed me.
    "You ready?" he asked, hopping in the driver's seat. I opened the passenger door and got in, buckling my seat belt.
    "So you coming to the homecoming game tomorrow?" asked Tyler.
    "Yeah, I think so." I said.
    "Would you like to be my date to the homecoming dance?" he asked.
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  13. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    May 23, 2012 4:04pm UTC
    taking chances
    Chapter 2
    "Give me the chance to treat you right." said Tyler. I didn't know how to respond to that, so I just thanked him and his friends for coming to the meet. I walked to the locker room and quickly changed into a pair of shorts and an old swimming tshirt. I didn't really know what Tyler meant when he said that, and I felt kind of bad for ignoring him after that.
    "Hey Anna, wanna go get something to eat?" I asked, wanting to spend some girl time with one of my close friends.
    "Sure!" she said, and we walked out to her car. We went to the local pizzeria and and ordered, waiting for our pepperoni pizza to arrive.
    "So you and Tyler?" she asked me, taking a sip of her sprite.
    "I don't know. Right now, we're just friends." I answered, because that's what I thought we were.
    "Do yuo like him?" she asked me. Caught.
    "Honeslty? I do. He's just different than most guys." I said, playing with my straw wrapper. A few minutes later, I saw a few guys walk in the door.
    "Speaking of.." I said, and anna turned around and saw who I was talking about.
    "Go talk to him!" she said, and I shook my head no. When our pizza came, I dug in, starved from all the swimming I did today. I caught Tyler staring at me and laughing to himself, probably at how ridiculous I looked right now. A few minutes later, two girls from my school, Ally and Mandy walked in and sat down with Tyler and his two friends. Mandy sat down next to Tyler, obviously trying to flirt with him. She was practically on his lap, and I looked away, not wanting to see him flirting it up with another girl. Was I jealous? I think I was. When I finished my pizza, I told Anna I had to go, and I stormed out of the restaurant. I thought I saw Tyler get up when I walked out, but probably not. I started walking home, because I coudn't be in the same room as those two anymore.
    "Kourt! Kourtney, wait up!" I rolled my eyes when I heard his voice, and turned around, a fake smile on my face.
    "Is everything alright? You looked upset back there." he said, making sure I was okay.
    "No, everything's fine! I just have a lot of homework and my brother needs me home soon." I lied, trying not to make it obvious.
    "Oh, okay. I I knew you were gonna be here, I would have takne you with me." he said, his lips curving up into that ridiculously sexy half-smile.
    "Maybe next time." I said, turning around and walking away from him.
    "You need a ride?" he asked, grabbing his keys from his pocket.
    "Sure." I said, getting into his pickup truck. We rode in an awkward silence for a few minutes, when he finally spoke.
    "Nothing's going on between Mandy and me." he said.
    "That's none of my business." I responded.
    "I can;t figure you out Kourtney." he said, giving me a confused look.
    "What do you mean?" I asked, curious as to what he was talking about.
    "It seems like one minute you're into me, and the next you don't even want to be my friend." he said. I didn't respond. I didn't respond to a lot of things he said/
    "This is my house." I said, pointing to the white colonial house.
    "Give em your phone for a minute." he said, a mysterious glint in his eyes. I reluctantly handed him my iPhone, while he gave me his. He took a funny picture of himself, and set it as his contact number. I simply put my number in his phone as Kourtney. He handed me my phone back, and I thanked him for the ride. I walked into the house, my heart racing. I liked this guy, but for some reason, I wasn't completely ready to let him into my life.
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  14. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
    posted a quote
    May 20, 2012 9:06pm UTC
    taking chances
    Chapter 1
    The school day was going by so slow, and I honestly didn't know if I could handle another minute of pre-calc. I dropped my pencil on the floor, and when I went to pick it up, there was a note on the floor next to it. I picked both the note and the pencil up, curious as to what the note said.
    Somebody had written 'hey cutie' with a winky face on the piece of scrap paper. I looked to my left, and Tyler was smiling at me as I read it. I crumbled up the paper and walked to the recycling bin to throw it away. When I walked back to my seat, the bell rang. I collected my notebook and textbook and made my way to my locker, getting my stuff for the next class.
    "So you busy tonight?"
    I turned around and saw that Tyler was standing behind me.
    "Yeah, swim meet." I replied, grabbing my English Literature book and an extra pen.
    "Bummer. We could have hung out." he said, sounding a bit disappointed.
    "Come to the meet! It's gonna be a good one." I told him, secretly hoping he did come.
    "We'll see.." he said, with a wink. I walked off to my English, which flew by. Before I knew it, it was last period, which was my study hall. I left study hall early to go get warmed up for the swim meet, because I needed to bring my A game today. There was going to be scouts there, and if I swam good, there was a chance that one of them would want me on their swim team for college. I put on my team suit and my bathing cap, fastening my goggles once they were on my head. I grabbed my towel and when I walked out to the pool, my coach was already there.
    "Kourt! You ready for the meet today?" she asked, and I nodded my head yes. Once I got in the pool, time flew by. Eventually, it was time for the first event to start. My best stroke was butterfly, so I did all of those events. I was a pretty good swimmer for my age, and I really wanted to beat some of my old times today. The first race was the 200 medley, meaning I would have to do a 50 meter butterfly, which was easy. Right before I dove into the water, I saw Tyler walk in, with a sign in his hand. My teammate slapped the timer with her hand and I dove in. I swam as fast as I could, and when I made it back to the wall, I realized I hat beaten my time by 2.64 seconds. I was so proud of myself. I climbed out of the pool and saw that Tyler had brought ten of his friends. That made me smile, he was such a sweet guy. They all had signs, and when they held them up, I could feel my heart beating faster and faster. All together, the signs read "I'm no Michael Phelps, but I can treat a girl right." He did this half smile thing when I saw what the posters said, and I laughed. He was such a cutie. After the meet, I walked over to him and his friends.
    "Great job Kourt! I had no idea you were so good!" said one of his friends, Mike.
    "Thanks!" I answered. After seeing the signs, I was in a good mood.
    "So did you like our signs?" asked another one of his friends.
    "I loved them Chris." I responded.
    "So give me the chance to treat you right." said Tyler.
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  20. xostorywriterxo xostorywriterxo
    posted a quote
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    Unexpected
    ♥ Chapter 3
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    *RING RING* My alarm clock woke me up at six oh'clock.
    I woke up yawning, I was pretty tired and I got in the shower.
    An hour later I got out of the shower and I was clean and I blow dryed my long brunette hair
    I grabbed some lipgloss and put some on my lips; and then put eyeliner on.
    I hope he thinks I'm pretty,
    I grabbed some shorts and a shirt and got dressed.
    I looked out the window, and it looked a bit windy so I grabbed a sweater.
    Andrea called me and said, "He told me to tell you meet him in front of the beach"
    "Alright" I said, hanging up the phone.
    I don't even know who he is, what if he some creep.
    I got my keys, and went in my car and drove off.
    I live about an hour way from the beach. Maybe two hours,
    I hope this goes good, I'm so nervous.
    I'm always shy to meet new people, expecially guys. Well, I never even really meet guys. My parents are so over protective.
    ---
    Two hours later I got there, and I got out of the car
    Andrea got out of her car, and said "When he gets here I'll leave you two alone"
    I rolled my eyes playfully,"Oh stop being silly, we aren't going to anything"
    Maybe if I know him but not now, I don't even know the guy.
    "He's your type. Trust me"
    Andrea has been my friend for five years so she pretty much knows what I go for in a guy, how I am, and everything else.
    She smiled, and pointed to his car and waved to get his attention.
    He parked the car next to us, and he came out next to us.
    My mouth dropped when I seen him,
    "He is so cute" I thought to myself.
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