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taking chances
Chapter 1
The school day was going by so slow, and I honestly didn't know if I could handle another minute of pre-calc. I dropped my pencil on the floor, and when I went to pick it up, there was a note on the floor next to it. I picked both the note and the pencil up, curious as to what the note said. 
Somebody had written 'hey cutie' with a winky face on the piece of scrap paper. I looked to my left, and Tyler was smiling at me as I read it. I crumbled up the paper and walked to the recycling bin to throw it away. When I walked back to my seat, the bell rang. I collected my notebook and textbook and made my way to my locker, getting my stuff for the next class. 
"So you busy tonight?" 
I turned around and saw that Tyler was standing behind me. 
"Yeah, swim meet." I replied, grabbing my English Literature book and an extra pen. 
"Bummer. We could have hung out." he said, sounding a bit disappointed. 
"Come to the meet! It's gonna be a good one." I told him, secretly hoping he did come. 
"We'll see.." he said, with a wink. I walked off to my English, which flew by. Before I knew it, it was last period, which was my study hall. I left study hall early to go get warmed up for the swim meet, because I needed to bring my A game today. There was going to be scouts there, and if I swam good, there was a chance that one of them would want me on their swim team for college. I put on my team suit and my bathing cap, fastening my goggles once they were on my head. I grabbed my towel and when I walked out to the pool, my coach was already there. 
"Kourt! You ready for the meet today?" she asked, and I nodded my head yes. Once I got in the pool, time flew by. Eventually, it was time for the first event to start. My best stroke was butterfly, so I did all of those events. I was a pretty good swimmer for my age, and I really wanted to beat some of my old times today. The first race was the 200 medley, meaning I would have to do a 50 meter butterfly, which was easy. Right before I dove into the water, I saw Tyler walk in, with a sign in his hand. My teammate slapped the timer with her hand and I dove in. I swam as fast as I could, and when I made it back to the wall, I realized I hat beaten my time by 2.64 seconds. I was so proud of myself. I climbed out of the pool and saw that Tyler had brought ten of his friends. That made me smile, he was such a sweet guy. They all had signs, and when they held them up, I could feel my heart beating faster and faster. All together, the signs read "I'm no Michael Phelps, but I can treat a girl right." He did this half smile thing when I saw what the posters said, and I laughed. He was such a cutie. After the meet, I walked over to him and his friends. 
"Great job Kourt! I had no idea you were so good!" said one of his friends, Mike. 
"Thanks!" I answered. After seeing the signs, I was in a good mood. 
"So did you like our signs?" asked another one of his friends. 
"I loved them Chris." I responded. 
"So give me the chance to treat you right." said Tyler. 
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I wanted to re-write a few chapters, so here you go!
I would love feedback, please!!
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taking chances Chapter 1 The school day was going by so slow,

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storygirl2014 · 1 decade ago
i decided to rewrite them(:
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Phoebe* · 1 decade ago
with these new ones are they even dating yet ???
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courtneyAnn98 · 1 decade ago
yeahhh at first i was like, didnt you have like 2 other different chapters on here, but i reallllllllllyyyyyy like it:)
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