taking chances
Chapter 1
The school day was going by so slow, and I honestly didn't
know if I could handle another minute of pre-calc. I dropped my
pencil on the floor, and when I went to pick it up, there was a
note on the floor next to it. I picked both the note and the
pencil up, curious as to what the note said.
Somebody had written 'hey cutie' with a winky face on the
piece of scrap paper. I looked to my left, and Tyler was smiling
at me as I read it. I crumbled up the paper and walked to the
recycling bin to throw it away. When I walked back to my seat,
the bell rang. I collected my notebook and textbook and made my
way to my locker, getting my stuff for the next class.
"So you busy tonight?"
I turned around and saw that Tyler was standing behind
me.
"Yeah, swim meet." I replied, grabbing my English
Literature book and an extra pen.
"Bummer. We could have hung out." he said, sounding a
bit disappointed.
"Come to the meet! It's gonna be a good one." I
told him, secretly hoping he did come.
"We'll see.." he said, with a wink. I walked off to
my English, which flew by. Before I knew it, it was last period,
which was my study hall. I left study hall early to go get warmed
up for the swim meet, because I needed to bring my A game today.
There was going to be scouts there, and if I swam good, there was
a chance that one of them would want me on their swim team for
college. I put on my team suit and my bathing cap, fastening my
goggles once they were on my head. I grabbed my towel and when I
walked out to the pool, my coach was already there.
"Kourt! You ready for the meet today?" she asked, and I
nodded my head yes. Once I got in the pool, time flew by.
Eventually, it was time for the first event to start. My best
stroke was butterfly, so I did all of those events. I was a
pretty good swimmer for my age, and I really wanted to beat some
of my old times today. The first race was the 200 medley, meaning
I would have to do a 50 meter butterfly, which was easy. Right
before I dove into the water, I saw Tyler walk in, with a sign in
his hand. My teammate slapped the timer with her hand and I dove
in. I swam as fast as I could, and when I made it back to the
wall, I realized I hat beaten my time by 2.64 seconds. I was so
proud of myself. I climbed out of the pool and saw that Tyler had
brought ten of his friends. That made me smile, he was such a
sweet guy. They all had signs, and when they held them up, I
could feel my heart beating faster and faster. All together, the
signs read "I'm no Michael Phelps, but I can treat a
girl right." He did this half smile thing when I saw what
the posters said, and I laughed. He was such a cutie. After the
meet, I walked over to him and his friends.
"Great job Kourt! I had no idea you were so good!" said
one of his friends, Mike.
"Thanks!" I answered. After seeing the signs, I was in
a good mood.
"So did you like our signs?" asked another one of his
friends.
"I loved them Chris." I responded.
"So give me the chance to treat you right." said
Tyler.
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I wanted to re-write a few chapters, so here you go!
I would love feedback, please!!
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18 faves · 3 comments · May 20, 2012 9:06pm
Phoebe*
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1 decade ago
with these new ones are they even dating yet ???
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courtneyAnn98
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1 decade ago
yeahhh at first i was like, didnt you have like 2 other different chapters on here, but i reallllllllllyyyyyy like it:)
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storygirl2014 · 1 decade ago
i decided to rewrite them(:
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