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Br0kenHearts
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June 28, 2012 8:22pm UTC

Sorry..
I think i'm done with writing for now.
I know i'm not a good writer, and i don't have a lot of confidence in what i'm writing. I want to be the best writer i can be, but right now i don't really feel like my stories are any good. I'm sorry to anyone who read my story.. if that's anyone. Yes, i will continuing writing, but i wont share it with witty until i know it's 100% the way i want it.

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Br0kenHearts
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June 18, 2012 2:43pm UTC

Just a Dream
Chapter 5
I My whole class walked to Missle Creek.
It was silent between me and Ryan.
When we finally reached the creek
Mr. Kridge gave everyone a small bucket to
collect water with, he told us to go to
all different parts of the pond with
are partners so the bacteria would be slightly different.
Me and Ryan walked about two miles down
the creek when we reached a calm,
quiet part of the creek. Everyone else was out of sight.
Finally I broke the silence. "Hi."
i said in a soft voice. "Hi Nicole."
His voice was soft, and he knew my name.
Ryan Goldberg knew my name. I was speechless.
After we collected our pondwater we sat down by the creek.
It was romantic what so ever,
but it didn't matter to me. At that point,
nothing mattered to me.
We talked for what felt like hours, he seemed so
down to earth, i felt as if we were meant for each other.
Every word that came out of his mouth was so soothing, so calm. We sat by the creek,and i placed
my hand down beside me on the soft grass,
his hand soon fell on top of mine.
At that moment i felt butterflies in my stomach, i wondered if he felt the same. But soon the moment was ruined.
Mr. Kridge blew his whisle, and everyone
reported back to him. On our way walking back Ryan grabbed my hand, our fingers locked,
as we walked back to the other classmates.
As we reached everyone i saw Carter.
He was starring at us, not moving a muscle.
His face was stern, not emotions. Then my eyes quickly moved to Mallery, she looked at us,
and her eyes soon wondered
to our hands. I had never seen her so mad in my life. But i don't blame her.How could someone like me, get a guy like Ryan? I was to love struck to even think.
As we reached the school Ryan asked me sommething i've always wanted to hear him say to me.
"Wanna come to my place?"
Hmm, Ryan?? What do you think??
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Br0kenHearts
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June 16, 2012 6:58pm UTC

Just a Dream
Chapter 4
It was a normal monday, gloomy faces, and slamming lockers.
I walked into my first period class when i saw Ryan.
To my surprise he was sitting alone.
I looked to the other side of the room to see Mallery, her makeup covered face looking down at the desk.
I quickly walked over to Carter and set my books down.
"What's going on?" I asked anxiously.
"Mallery and Ryan, they broke up." He said sternly.
So many thoughts raced through my head.
I felt a slight smile come across my face,
I know it was mean of me, but for th first time in a while Ryan was single. The bell rang and class began.
Mr. Kridge walked in with a huge smile on his face.
"Good morning!" He practically shouted.
"Today we are going on a little trip!" Everyone cheered, and whispered in excitement.
"We are going to Missle Creek!"
He added, everyone groaned.
Missle Creek was probably the most disgusting
creek in the whole town, which made me realize why Mr. Kridge picked it. "We will be collecting creek water,
and tomorrow we will look at it under the microscope!"
He was the only one who seemed the slightest bit excited. "Now class," he began, "everyone will be picking a partner to work on this project with."
He said calmly. "Now when I call your
name pick a slip of paper out of this hat,on each slip is a name, the name of your Missle creek partner!"
Everyone groaned. Several people went up to pick out of the hat, and finally it was my turn.
I walked up to Mr. Kridge and stuck my hand into the hat and mixed around the papers,
I slowly pulled one out, and unrolled the tiny paper,
i began to read the name out loud.
"Ryan Goldberg."
Hmmm..
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Br0kenHearts
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June 9, 2012 9:59pm UTC

Sorry,
I have finals all next week so i wont be writing any new chapters until next week. Sorry to anyone who reads my story.
-__-

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Br0kenHearts
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June 7, 2012 5:04pm UTC

Just a Dream
Chapter 3
I heard pounding on the side of my house,
i looked out my window and saw Carter,
his light brown hair,
and dazling green eyes stood out in the dark.
I signaled for him to climb up to my window.
I knew he was terrified of heights,
so it took some convincing.
I could risk him coming in the front door and waking my mom. We did this a lot for the next few weeks,
every night when he could, he would climb to my window to make sure i was safe.
Every night before i closed my eyes,
i would tell him he didn't have to stay, but he always did.
He told me it was for his "scientific study" He wanted to take notes down on my dreams,
and how bad the cuts and bruises had gotten,
but I knew he was just trying to protect me.
Some nights when i had night mares i would scream and cry, he would lay on my bed and hold me like a child,
running his fingers through my long aubrey hair until i fell asleep. I felt so safe in his arms, almost like nothing else mattered but him.
I don't know, maybe it's just the heat of the moment,
but latley i have been looking at Carter for more than my best friend,
maybe i was falling for him.
Hey guys, sorry for the short chapter, the next ones will be longer, promise!!
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Br0kenHearts
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June 6, 2012 2:44pm UTC

Just a Dream
Chapter 2
After school i walked home with Carter, when we go to my front porch he stopped. "I'm worried about you."
He said sternly.
"Because of the dreams? It's ok Carter, i'm sure it's nothing."
I said. "No nicole, when you get hurt in your dreams, you get hurt in real life."
He started raising his voice.
"I can't control it Carter, it's nothing, trust me."
i said weakly. I new what was happening to me was dangerous, but i didn't want to upset Carter. "If you get hurt don't come crying to me"
he yelled. He walked away hands in his pockets, not even looking back.
I felt my eyes swell up with tears,
i just watched him hoping he would turn around and come back, but he didn't. I ran up to
my room tears streaming down my face. That was the first agrument i had ever had with Carter.
It killed me to know that he cared about me, and I just resented him. I wish i was more open to
people, I wish i could let people in. That night i was terrified to go to bed. Carter's words ran through my head over,
and over again. What if he was right?
I quickly picked up my phone and dialed his number. After i called him three times, he finally picked up.
"What?' He said in a crackling voice,
like he had been crying. "I'm sorry.. about before, I-I'm scared to, Do you think you could come over tonight?"
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Br0kenHearts
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June 5, 2012 4:16pm UTC

Just a Dream
Chapter 1
"Nicole! Nicole!" I turned around, it was Carter. "Hey what's up?" I smiled, and looked into his deep green eyes.
"Nothing much, just finished my amazing science project." He boasted. It was typical of Carter to be over happy
about science. I guess you could say
Carter was a nerd, but deffinently not a unattractive one. So many girls have been interested in him in the past, but he would always turn them down. As we
walked into our first period class, my eyes immediately locked with Ryan Goldberg's. He was gorgeous, every girl in the school drooled over him, including me.
Carter always told me how much of a jerk he was, but i always refuse to listen, to me he was perfect. His hair
was dark, it fell perfectly on this head everday, His eyes were an ocean blue, i couldn't
stare into them with out getting memorized, but of course he was taken, by Mallery Cruiz, only the most popular girl in the whole 11th grade. Everybody
stayed out of her way.
Mallery walked into class setting her books down next to Ryan. She flipped back her long blonde hair, sat and shot me an evil look. Mallery had never liked me.
Ever since 5th grade, when I stood up to her. She had been making fun of Carter, calling
him a nerd, and other awful names, so i stood up and slapped her across the face. I was suspended
for two days but it was so worth it. "Hey Carter?" I wispered softly. "Yeah?" he replyed. "My
dreams are becoming more vivid." I said. I always told Carter about my dreams. "Any more bruises?" He said with a concerned look. "Yeah."
i whispered, moving my bangs behind my ears. He saw the giant bruise I attempted tocover up with concealer.
"Holy crap." He whispered.
Hey guys, thank you for reading, Sorry for the borring chapter, i promise it will get better(; Also if you did not read the prolouge, this might be a bit confusing..

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Br0kenHearts
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June 4, 2012 6:38pm UTC

Just a Dream
Prolouge
Racing through the woods, my heart pounded, the cold mist hit my face.
I tripped on a tree root, my body collapsed,
my head hitting the hard wet ground. My eye lids flickered open to realize i was in the safty of my warm bed. I sighed im relief, "It was just a dream."
I mumbled, still panting in fear. I rolled out of bed, and looked at the clock. I was late, again. I ran to my closet
ripping a shirt off the hanger,
and wiggled into my skinny jeans. I ran to my mirror to see a bruise on my forhead. "Not again." I had been waking up with bruises ever since I could remember.
Atleast i had makeup to cover it up. I applied my
black eyeliner, and mascara. I began to lightly cover up the bruise on my head with concealer, it hurt.
I raced downstairs to find an empty kitchen. It wasn't a surprise to me, my mom usually stayed in bed all day. Ever since my dad left when I was 10 she had never been the same. But now i was sixteen. I have my own car,
and I don't need her to take care of me anymore.
I was basically a normal teenage girl, I had been through heart breaks, drama, and pain,
but through it all one boy stayed by my side.
My best friend Carter. We had been friends since the first grade, when he shared his crayons with me.
I wasn't the richest girl on the block, my mom had a job, which she rarely showed up to, but other than that, yeah, I guess you could say i was a normal teenage girl, or so I thought.

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