Witty Profiles
There is pain in your head,
A certain fright in your mind,
Little girl you aren't okay are you?
A cut left we didn't see,
A cry we didn't hear,
Little girl where are you?
A scream into the cool air,
A cry into the soft pillow,
Little girl?! Little girl?!
A cold silence,
A death defying whisper,
Little girl are you okay?
A pulse that slows,
They noticed too late,
Little girl where have you gone?
A body found dead,
A lost soul left alone
Alone in this “Perfect” world.
Little girl we were too late,
Rest in peace and live your fate.
Little girl little girl though we didn't see,
You always meant the most to me.
Copyright 2013 by justanotherwittyguy18
You can use it but ask me first.
112 faves · 16 comments · Mar 1, 2013 1:41am
doublesidedice
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1 decade ago
This is so good... But her death was fake. She went to school with someone who's friends with a wittian... It's all a fake... I'm so relieved
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18
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1 decade ago
Who told the lie im going to strangle them.
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doublesidedice
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1 decade ago
Do you know her in person? And idk... Simone random told me. Also there are no reports of a girl named Kelsey commuting suicide in this year at all.... My dad searched it... Idk what to believe. I like to think she's alive and happy though...
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18
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1 decade ago
no not at all lol. i just yeah. Ohhh.... well damn. if its fake im going to be mad .-. i hope she is too
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doublesidedice
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1 decade ago
Same.... I found out because of this.... I was so mad I punched my locker and almost dented it :/ the upside about being that mad is no one tried my patience today :P
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18
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1 decade ago
I just i dont even know why someone would lie like that. ugh .-. XDDD true that if i walk through the halls looking very mad people decide not to annoy me
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doublesidedice
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1 decade ago
Yeah it's a sick thing to do. I broke down for the first time in over a year last night.... For nothing.... I hate wasting tears
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MaxEatsCrayons
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1 decade ago
omg I love this
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18
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1 decade ago
thank you <3
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SparksFly34
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1 decade ago
This makes me so happy ❤ it's awesome that you are thinking of writing again :) You have no idea how happy I was when I saw that this quote was by you.... I'm glad you're still on Witty. Even if it's temporary ❤
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18
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1 decade ago
XD well thank you! i'm glad to be wanted on here :3
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SparksFly34
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1 decade ago
❤
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*compassionate soul*
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1 decade ago
This almost made me cry when I read it :( it's definitely very meaningful and makes you think. I really think you should start writing again hon :) and I'm sooooooo glad you haven't left witty...you're a huge inspiration to so many people <3
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18
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1 decade ago
It made my friend cry, i honestly just like it flows i don't even know how lol. I will try, i'll try to start again, i think it helps me anyway lol. Well i'm glad <3 i won't be on as much, but i won't let you guys down <3
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*compassionate soul*
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1 decade ago
Yeah, it flows really well though there is definitely a lot more to it than that lol. And I'm glad you'll try and I wouldn't doubt if it helps you lol...I mean writing is a great way to get frustrations out and whatnot. And I don't mind your not being on as much and I know you'd never let us down <3 you're a great guy Dalton :)
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SaturdayInJuly · 1 decade ago
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its a beautiful poem:)