MissOlivia · 1 decade ago
Love it!!♥
Just curious... did this happen to you?
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jessdillon1234 · 1 decade ago
i love this ! this is the only witty story i actually want to read !!
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camelsandcheeserobots44427 · 1 decade ago
I think ur story's really good, but im not seeing that extra pop like im not really sure whats supposed to be happening

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Maddie018 · 1 decade ago
This is super good! Can't wait for more! You can really write!(:
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Reader_Aubrey · 1 decade ago
This. Is. Amazing.
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emily626 · 1 decade ago
OH MY GOSH. THIS IS REALLY GOOD! Is this actually true? and by the way you can defiantly write!! I would know, I'm going to be an author. :D NEVER GIVE UP.<3
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well_hello_there_ · 1 decade ago
can you remind me? :)
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cmxoxoxo13 · 1 decade ago
i like it!
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kimiko · 1 decade ago
yea pretty interesting only thing is its a bit confusing on whos talking other then that i would keep reading:)

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thisisme_getoverit · 1 decade ago
honestly... not that great..
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79callmemaybe · 1 decade ago
LOVE ITTTT! :)
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belladancer516 · 1 decade ago
That's really good! (:
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Cassidy_Skye10 · 1 decade ago
did this happen to you? i love this story by the way!!(:
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AnonymousDixie · 1 decade ago
Nice! Cant wait to hear what the next chapter will be :]
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ImperfectTeenageGirl · 1 decade ago
Omg , I love it :D
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AnaCastro196 · 1 decade ago
Can I be notified?
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1Dandfashion · 1 decade ago
WOW! This is really good! can't wait for another chapter!! good job!

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JG101 · 1 decade ago
Wow! Can I get a reminder Please? :D
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Pacificmermaid812 · 1 decade ago
awsome bro. love it.


cool story bro. keep it going



lol
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Bravosierra* · 1 decade ago
Hi:) I like your story, it seems really good!
But, V like JoeBro said, that's what your supposed to do. It makes the story a little less confusing :) You have a great story so far though <3!
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