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Girl likes Boy
Chapter 1

High school. A prison for kids. Its purpose; make the lives of all kids miserable.

My name is Selena McCloy. Im a freshman. Im a little old nobody. Most people say that Im gorgeous . I dont see it. Im in love with the head quarterback. Unoriginal. I know. This is my story.

"Selena, are you even listening?!" Amy yelled, trying to get my attention in the lunchroom.Amy has been my best friend for a while. We met at a camp that was over run with big giant rats. We both had to be sent home early because we got in trouble for petting the rats. Its basically impossble to talk to anyone in the lunchroom.
"Uh, what? Uhm. yeah.  Whatever. . . " I was to busy staring at James McCloflin. The school hottie. Head quarterback. You know the story. Nice girl likes nice boy,nice boy likes slu.tty b.itch. 
"SELENA! IM TALKING TO YOU. ARE YOU STARING AT JAMES AGAIN?" Everything went quiet. I mean VERY quiet. Yup, if someone dropped their pen.. you would hear it.  Oh my gosh. Did anyone hear her? I instantly hid my face, praying that nobody heard Emily, and if they did, that they didnt know who I was. I slightly lifted up my head. EVERYONE was staring at me. I felt my cheeks start to warm up. Oh no! I hope James isnt here. I braved one more look. UGH. There he was. Right there at the oppisite side of the lunchroom. Just kill me now.
"Oh my god Selena! Im so sorry!" Emily was apoligizing over and over agian. But I didnt hear her. All I was focused on was getting out of there. So I did what I do best. I ran. 
 
Any comments?
What do you think so far?
*I know its short, but its a start*

 

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angielovesyouu · 1 decade ago
love it! Deff keep writing :)
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ceb8 · 1 decade ago
I really like it!:) keep writing
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Alishamarie725 · 1 decade ago
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KaraDara · 1 decade ago
looove itt!
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frazergirl · 1 decade ago
aha, love it!
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MusicSavesMySoul · 1 decade ago
omggg u have to put up another chapter todayyy!!! ur story is really good
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MeeAndYoouStories · 1 decade ago
My name's Amy :P ♥
I got a bit confused when it changed to Emily, but I like the story :) ♥
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heatherlovesyou · 1 decade ago
i like itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ilovepatrickforever1955 · 1 decade ago
keep it up awsome story chick

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halfempty · 1 decade ago
ahhhh this is too good
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ShesInLove · 1 decade ago
Hah. < 3 thanks! Ill be sure to fix that next time < 3(:
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abster70 · 1 decade ago
Oh my gosh this is great!!! Keep it goin girly!!! :D
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loveyou4ever · 1 decade ago
it's good but you switched the name of the friend from amy to emily.
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SmileyFacesAreAmazing · 1 decade ago
omg the main character has the same name as me ♥
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