HELLO! COULD YOU HELP ME? could you please tell me if my story is good so far? The boy I like asked me to write him a story. Please help? Zoey I was on my boat looking down at the days catch. I found a little squid and had to bring it home. It was the cutest thing ever. I was sad though as i watched it inch towards the wall of the live bait storage. This little guy couldn’t be bait, who could kill an adorable thing like that. I wanted to keep him, but i thought about my dad. He would never let me keep it. He would probably want to eat it, knowing him. Why did i even keep him? I was only going to bring him harm. That was probably one of my mistakes i could add to the list. I wished i could go back to the ocean and drop the little creature back into his home.Now thinking about it, i could. I Stepped off my boat and headed towards the ocean. I stuck my toes into the dry sand and breathed in heavily. While walking into the wet sand, I saw Lucas carrying his board back to his Jeep. He looked over at me and ran towards me. “Hey Zoe whatcha got in the bucket?” He said peering into my pale. “A baby squid! look at it isn’t it adorable?” i added looking back at Lucas. “Haha yeah it is. What are you going to do with it?” “I want to free it. we caught it today.” “nice, alright well i will catch up with you later!” “See ya Lukey” He glanced back, smiled and waved and he was back with his friends. He doesn’t know those few seconds talking to me means a lot. We have always been friends but hes my only good friend. Looking at him makes me actually feel good about myself. Even though i was the school nerd and he was the most popular we were best friends from day one. Lucas Listening to my favorite song, heading back from the beach on a hot summer morning makes my life just about the best. I saw Zoe today, i think she looks the best when she wears her hair up in a bun jean shorts and a tee oh and no make up (but she never wears it anyway). That’s exactly what she was wearing today. I wanted to tell her how beautiful she looked but she seems a bit different. More quiet than usual. Not the normal Zoe im used to seeing.
Just filling this out 'cause I'm bored -- you know, the usual. :P Just scroll on, haha, unless you aren't afraid to know me better. APPEARANCE  I am shorter than 5'4". [x] I have many scars. [x] I tan easily. [x] I wish my hair was a different color.  I have friends who have never seen my natural hair color.  I have a tattoo. [x] I wear glasses sometimes.  I would get plastic surgery if it were 100 percent safe, free of cost, and scar-free. [x] I've been told I'm attractive by a complete stranger.  I have more than 2 piercings.  I have piercings in places besides my ears.  I have freckles. FAMILY  I've sworn at my parents. [x] I've run away at home. [x] I've been kicked out of the house. [x] My biological parents are together.  I have a sibling less than one year old. [x] I wanna have kids someday. [x] I want to adopt someday. SCHOOL/WORK [x] I'm in school.  I have a job.  I've fallen asleep at school/work.  I almost always do my homework. [x] I missed a week or more of school.  I failed more that one class last year.  I've stolen something from my school. EMBARRASSMENT  I've slipped out a 'lol' in a spoken conversation. [x] Disney Movies still make me cry. [x] I've snorted while laughing. [x] I've laughed so hard I've cried.  I've glued my hand to something.  I've laughed till some kind of beverage came out of my nose. HEALTH  I was born with a disease/impairment. [x] I've broken a bone.  I've had my tonsils removed.  I've sat in the doctor's office with a friend.  I had a serious injury.  I've had chicken pox.  I have/had asthma. EXPERIENCES  I've gotten lost in my city. [x] I've seen a shooting star. [x] I've wished on a shooting star.  I've seen a meteor shower.  I've gone out in public in my pajamas.  I've pushed all the buttons on an elevator. [x] I've kicked a guy where it hurts.  I've been skydiving.  I've gone skinny dipping.  I've played spin the bottle.  I've drank a whole gallon of milk in one hour.  I've crashed a car. [x] I've been skiing.  I've been in a play.  I've met someone in person from the internet. [x] I've caught a snowflake on my tongue. [x] I've sat on a rooftop at night.  I've played chicken. [x] I've played a prank on someone. [x] I've ridden in a taxi. [x] I've eaten sushi. [x] I've been snowboarding. RELATIONSHIPS  I've gone on a blind date. [x] I miss someone right now. [x] I have a fear of abandonment.  I've gotten divorced. (LOL, no.)  I've told someone I loved them when I didn't.  I've told someone I didn't love them when I did.  I've told someone I loved them and didn't get a clear response. [x] I've felt rejected even if I wasn't.  I've loved someone I knew a friend was already in love with. HONESTY [x] I've done something I promised someone else I wouldn't. [x] I've done something I promised myself I wouldn't. [x] I've snuck out of my house. [x] I have lied to my parents about where I am. [x] I am keeping a secret from the world. [x] I've cheated while playing a game.  I've cheated on a test.  I've been suspended from school. BAD TIMES  I've consumed alcohol.  I regularly drink.  I can't swallow pills.  I can swallow 5 pills at a time no problem.  I have been diagnosed with clinical depression. [x] I shut out others when I'm depressed.  I take anti-depressants.  I've slept an entire day when I didn't need it.  I've hurt myself on purpose. [x] I've woken up crying.
You're only a teenager.Your not married, go with the flow, laugh tons, use manners.Will you just kiss him already? Trust your feelings. Spend your cash, introduce yourself, study hard, regret nothing. Dont laugh at other peoples dreams. "He isnt your world" cause you havent lived long enough. wish on 11:11. Take Pictures. ♥ Be you
WItty Lets Do Something Witty, lets Make a big summer Bucket List. i know we might not have a lot. In common but it would be fun. Comment things you would like to do before Bikinis. Ice-cream. Memories. Warm air. Camps. Short shorts. Sleeping in. SUMMER IS Over. . Summer 2012 nmf
Things to Be Happy About The sound of an ice cream truck.Sun showers.Birds chirping.Gentle ocean waves.That whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger.The smell of freshly baked bread.Colorful flowers.Being inside when it's raining. Especially in bed, where you can snuggle up and enjoy the fact that you're dry.Being outside in a hot and refreshing rain, when you don't care about getting wet.The sound of children laughing.Fresh, delicious food.Electricity.Clean water.The sound of trees rustling in the wind.The feeling you get when somebody smiles at you.A mother's hug.Cookies, still warm out of the oven.A parent saying “I'm proud of you.”Waking up to a fresh snow — and knowing it's Saturday so you don't have to shovel!Laughing so hard you cry.The feeling of comfort when a pet snuggles up to you after a long hard day.Epic sunsets.The excitement of going somewhere new.A great cup of coffee or tea (especially on a cold morning).Getting absorbed in a really good book.Cooking a meal that is so good it surprises even you.Hosting a party that goes off like a charm.Warm clothing in cold weather.Cool clothing in warm weather.Freedom of rights.A mug of frothy hot chocolate after coming in from the cold.Music that makes you want to dance.The thrill of new love.Sleeping in.How about being alive! The sun, the wind, the moon. Coffee, gelato, pineapple. Kissing, hugging, crying.Being healthy enough to travelMismatched wool socks and sandals!Good friends and fond memories.Double rainbows and changing fall colors.Bubble wrap and being able to be you.The word "bellybutton." I dunno...it just always makes me laugh saying it.Puppies first opening their eyes and looking in wonder at their world.Friends coming to visit.That you are young and your knees and hips still work!You're still alive, nothing is broken, and you aren't in jail...so anything is possible.