Witty Profiles
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Chapter 7
I gazed at the cup of hot chocolate that stood in front of
me.
I stuck the thin straw right through the whipped cream, taking in
a lukewarm sip of the liquid.
A small smile appeared on my face, remembering the time Cameron
tried to make me hot chocolate.
He ended up spilling it on the counter, as the brown liquid
dripped on the floor.
If my dad had seen it, he would've killed Cameron and I.
But, luckily, he wasn't home at the time, and we had cleaned
it up before he got home from the pub.
After Cameron and I cleaned up the mess, he handed me a cup.
I remember staring into the red mug, as chunks of unmelted cocoa
powder floated on the top.
Cameron and I laughed the whole night about our ironic
situation.
I had to admit, those were one of the rare days I was happy.
"What are you smiling about?" a voice spoke,
interrupting my flashback.
I flinched slightly, staring up at Hunter.
He pressed his coffee to his rosy lips, taking in a good sip.
"Nothing." I lied, licking the whipped cream off my
straw.
"Were you day dreaming about your boyfriend?" he
teased, raising an eyebrow.
I blushed, sulking in my seat.
"I don't have one." I said shyly.
Hunter's lips pulled into a sly grin, as he leaned closer
towards the table.
"Have you ever had one?" he asked, almost
whispering.
His warm, mocha coffee smelling breath trickled down my neck.
My face turned into a bright crimson color, as I twirled my
drink.
"N-no." I stuttered, embarrassed.
Hunter pulled back, leaning agaisnt his seat.
He looked genuniely shocked, as his eyes widened slightly.
"You're kidding, right?" he asked seriously.
I shook my head, letting my messy strands fall loose in my
face.
"I don't believe you." he concluded.
I stared up at him with a frown.
I wasn't lying!
Hunter's probably the closest I've ever been to a
guy.
"I'm not joking." I said, staring at him
intently.
Hunter looked taken aback, as he frowned.
"Have you ever went on a date?" he asked.
Was he trying to embarrass me more than I already was?
"No." I truthfully admitted.
"Well, you've had your first kiss, right?" he
paused.
When I didn't reply, he gasped slightly.
"Come on! Not even a peck?"
"No." I gritted through my teeth, turning scarlet
red.
Hunter slapped his and agaisnt the table.
"Is the male population blind to not ask you out?" he
muttered under his breath.
I felt my heart picking up its pace, as I bit my lip.
"Guys just don't like quiet girls, like me." I
shrugged.
Hunter gave me a gentle smile, staring at me with a strange
sparkle in his eyes.
"I do." he whispered.
His eyes grew into a bright ocean color.
How did he look so effortlessly beautiful?
"I thought you liked girls like Maddi." I muttered.
Hunter's face grew pale, as he stared at me blankly.
"Y-you aren't serious, right?" he asked.
I gave him a look to signify that I was completely, and utterly,
serious.
Suddenly, Hunter's eyes grew wide, as a loud laugh escaped
his lips.
He clamped a hand over his mouth, sinking down in his seat from a
misfit of laughter.
His eyes welled up with uncontrollable tears.
I sat up from my seat, staring at him with panicked eyes.
"H-Hunter? Are you okay?" I asked worriedly.
Hunter regained his posture, his face still red from
laughter.
"I-I'm fine." he coughed, wiping a tear from his
right cheek. "But, really, Hayden? Maddi? No, no. Big,
no."
733 faves · 47 comments · Jan 25, 2012 10:11pm
HarryPotterr
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1 decade ago
its been 5 days.
im dying here.
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SpkShay182
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1 decade ago
im like addicted to ur stories, theyre wicked good cant wait for the next chapter <3
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skittleslover24
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1 decade ago
NEW ONE??????
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fluffyfan1
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1 decade ago
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pafxox98
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1 decade ago
uploadd!!!!
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notAlable
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1 decade ago
awh ): y u no like this like ur other stories? personally i think this one is the best so far :l
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MissMonCherie
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1 decade ago
AMAZING!!!
But you really need to upload a bit quicker... but still you have serious talent and if ur really busy then that is cool
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RainDancer96
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1 decade ago
I love this!!
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wittyquotesgurl
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1 decade ago
how come you havent updated lately??
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masher33
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1 decade ago
I'd like this so much more if Hunter wasn't so rushed. Like, he only said like 10 words to her and tried holding her hand? Talk about creepy. I really like the plot for this though, except I don't really find it all that believable. Like, Hayden doesn't sound like a real person (I mean not literally but I don't really find her that realistic) and she doesn't have any good in her life, and that's one of the problems (in my opinion) in this story. I really do like this though, a lot. I have mixed feelings about the storyline, but you really are an amazing writer. Keep it up. :)
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micha136
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1 decade ago
new chapter?!
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dallasrae910
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1 decade ago
i have read all your stories. keep writing, your stories are amazing!
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stylishsista001
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1 decade ago
you.must.upload.now.
PLEASEE!?!?!?! i <3 it
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Awesome_Laura
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1 decade ago
LOVE IT!!!
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smilexobrightx17
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1 decade ago
Why is Hunter so freaking adorable? I already love him. Haha update soooon! :)
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1 decade ago
i LOVE this its so addicting! Please mke more! Love ur stories forever (:
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LittleMe123
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1 decade ago
Put up another chapter!!! Or two...., or three....
, or four or five or six:D
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Meika23
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1 decade ago
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1 decade ago
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RaeRae132 · 1 decade ago
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this story is completely adorable so far! cant wait for more! im addicted to your stories!!