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Catch Me if You Can
Chapter 34
Colby's Point of View
The rain droplets were falling agaisnt my roof, hard.
Everytime a raindrop fell upon the roof of my house, a thud would echo through my house.
I cuddled up in my warm blankets, sipping on a cup of hot chocolate.
My eyes were glued to the television screen, which were showing some reruns of an old show I used to love.
There was a soft knocking coming from my front door, but I figured it was just the rain.
After a minute of ignoring the knocking, it suddenly grew loud.
I groaned in irritation, throwing my plushy covers off of me.
I slipped on my fluffy bunny slippers, paddling my way towards the front door.
I swung it open, but I frowned when no one was there.
I turned around to close the door, but did a double take when I saw a dampened note on the doorsteps.
I bit my lower lip eagerly, picking up the note that was becoming soaked from the rain.
I quickly hurried inside to avoid a cold, ripping open the edges of the letter carefully.
The letter inside the envelope was a bit wet, but the scrawny handwriting was legible.
Come to the beach.
I gulped, knowing who exactly it might be, even though no one had signed the note.
I didn't hesitate to shove my feet into a pair of sneakers.
I sprinted out the door, even though I was still wearing my plaid pajama bottoms and an oversized hoodie.
The rain was pouring down harder, as I ran faster to the beach.
Through my blurred vision, I could see a figure trailing through the beach.
A small smile appeared on my face, as I began to jog towards the sand.
Come on, he had to remember me.
Even though the figure was halfway down the beach, and I was only at the front, I could instantly see his beautiful brown hair.
A small smile appeared on my quivering lips.
"Harry!" I shouted.
The figure turned around, and stopped in his tracks.
Even though Harry was so far away, I could see his grin.
I began to ran further down the beach, right towards him.
I slowed down, and stopped directly in front of him.
I left some space between us, since things were still complicated between us.
Harry's rosy pink lips curved into a smile.
His warm hand reached towards my face, rubbing the temples of my cheeks.
His fingers left burns on my face, as I stared up at this seafoam green eyes.
Oh, I missed those eyes so much.
"You've changed so much during the past year." Harry whispered. "You're so much more beautiful."
I let out a sigh of relief.
I had chopped my brown hair just past my shoulders, but that was about it.
"I'm sorry I didn't recognize you the first time I saw you. I was looking for you, though." he muttered, almost sounding ashamed.
I shook my head. "Don't apologize."
Harry moved a tiny bit closer to me, trailing his fingers down to the ends of my hair.
The rain was dampening my hair, as my clothes stuck onto my skin.
I swallowed, because the coldness I was feeling didn't affect me right now.
Only Harry did.
It was only Harry who ever could've affected me.
Harry leaned close towards me, as his lips brushed against the top of my head.
He left his chin on my head, pulling me closer for a tight embrace.
Tears began to flow out of my eyes.
I felt so safe in his arms, so warm.
"I never got to tell you how much I love you." he breathed.
"I love you, so much, Harry. It hurts." I chuckled quietly.
Harry's lips smiled, as he gave me a long, yet simple kiss.
"I will never leave you, ever again, Colby. I love you too much."

The End.
Hope you enjoyed that. No sequel, sorry! I don't have much to write about Colby and Harry anymore. And, I'm not good at the whole 'family' and 'marriage' thing, so I won't go into that.
I'm starting a new story soon, so hope you liked this one!
I love you, all! :)


 

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Biebercrazy · 1 decade ago
This is my favorite story c;
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aehadden99 · 1 decade ago
NOT THE END D:
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xobabyilikeitxo23 · 1 decade ago
THATS THE END?! :'(
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brookielovesvolleyball · 1 decade ago
THE END!? NOOOOOO.
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AmandaxXx · 1 decade ago
I usually don't read stories on witty, because I read them on www.quizilla.com instead, but I really like yours! I'm gonna read them all
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PastIsPast · 1 decade ago
that was such a good story ! but you should of have Harry and Colby play 'catch me as u can' that game they played when they first met ! right at the end of the story . that wood of been great ! LOL<3 good job
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sophie_ffion · 1 decade ago
AW so cute< 3
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ThatsSoMeee · 1 decade ago
that's a great end c:
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juturna* · 1 decade ago
Yay!
I'm your 100th comment :)
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peacelovemusic47 · 1 decade ago
this was amazing. omg. so cute. keep it up girl. i'll be reading your next story for sure. < 3
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cescarella001 · 1 decade ago
aww that was such a good ending! but i dont think anything could ever beat roommates<3
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Samluvscoobydoo · 1 decade ago
<3 i wish guys were like that in real life and werent jerks and hurt peoples feelings
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SophiaSchungg · 1 decade ago
you are an amazing writer!! keep going!!!! bbggg xoxoxoxoxo
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KeepSmiling4Ever · 1 decade ago
Hhmm, I guess your awesome stories give girls hope ! ♥ I've read all your stories and I loved them all, while reading your stories, I feel like in another worrld, where there's drama and respect for girls... I think roommates was your best story and I've cried while reading this one, alot of emotions came up when I read the words 'The End' .. I was sad and happy at the same time, sad because it was over, but happy because it had a happy ending. I can't wait to read your other awesome stories that overwhelm me with emotions. I hope you become a great writer... If thats what you wanna become in the future, I guess I would buy ALL your books and read them with alot of love, xBrikena.
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mNm0418 · 1 decade ago
u r such a good writer!
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dreamer18 · 1 decade ago
I just came back to your page to see if you had written a new chapter...only to remember it's over :(
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Pearlonthesea · 1 decade ago
♥That was amazing :')
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GreysonCislife · 1 decade ago
Best story on witty! Really! I haven't found one that was better! It was like I was actually reading a book... Amazing job. <3
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DjBx3 · 1 decade ago
omg. im crying. best story ive ever read♥
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soccerdogg25 · 1 decade ago
Yay! I loved it so much! Just like all your stories! Keep writing! I can't wait to see whats next!!!

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