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Ch. 1 where is Alice?
My name is Alice. Alice
Mckerry.
I was abducted on February 16, 1996. Right after
Valentine’s Day. I was only three years old. My parents
loved me very much and are still looking for me, but they will
never find me. I don’t even know where I am.
. . .
I was one of the cutest babies alive. I had big cheeks, brown
curly hair, and big blue eyes. Everyone loved to come up to me
and smile. I knew how to walk and I talked a lot. No one could
really understand me though. My favorite toy was a stuffed
animal elephant. I loved how soft it was and I would cuddle with
it all day long and I would take it with me everywhere. I named
her Elli.
Elli was
found on the street where I was abducted. That’s how
everyone knew I was gone. The police searched the town,
left and right but they couldn’t find the
Mckerry’s little princess. My parents cried for
weeks. My mom took Elli and would cradle it for hours every day. She
wanted to remember what I smelt like, the soft baby smell. She
and my dad would hand out pictures to everyone so people knew who
to look for. My face was all over the news. All that was on
anyone’s mind was, where is Alice?
Thoughts? this is my first story and i'd love to know what you
think!
29 faves · 7 comments · Aug 30, 2011 1:18pm
BloodyKisses
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1 decade ago
I Like It A Lot [:
Keep On Writing ![:
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Soccerbabe64
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1 decade ago
I like it. Great job (:
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hopelesslyinlove6
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1 decade ago
Sounds good! (: comment me when you post more (:
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MissCaitlin
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1 decade ago
like it :'] drop me a comment wehen you write more :')♥
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Mollymooandalishaloo4lyfe
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1 decade ago
seems interesting, i like it :}
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storygirl64
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1 decade ago
I like it a lot actually! :)
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GeneralMe · 1 decade ago
woow great stoory ;) keep writing :P
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