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Hey guys
My real account is dani64, in case you like me enough to check it out ;)
Soooo here's the deal. I'm one of thoes witty writers. lol yes another one
I love feedback, negative or positive. Anything-anything at all-that you like or don't like about my stories, don't be afraid to tell me
Like I siad, I love feedback lol
I also love to chat so if ya just wanna comment on my profile to say hi, that's cool too :)
p.s. if you read this whole thing, comment on my page 'chocolate' and you get 10 faves :)
 
Chapter 13 baby! Im am SOOOOO sorry I didn't post sooner! I have soo much school work! Ugh! Keep reading! Ily ♥
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Chapter 12 is up! Big plans. Big surprises! Read moree and I'll post moreeee :))
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Chapters 10 and 11 are up. I hope you guys read them, they're pretty good. Things are getting intesnse. Lol. And somebodys knows a little more than they're letting on to ;) You'll just have to find out who and what
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I am sooooooo sorry I haven't posted a chapter in a while but I will really soon I swear. I am working on chapter 9 right now :) Thx so muchh 4 ur patience ♥ I am sooo busy with school n' stuff. lol but thx :)
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Chapter 8 is uppp :) Mmkay guys I hope ya read and enjoy. Fave and comment ♥ Sorry it took so long for me to put up. School started :/ ugh. Hear from ya guys soon, k? Bii!
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Read chapter 7 ♥ It's on my page. I love you guys. This chapter is better, i swear :) You guys rock!
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Here is chapter 6! I hope ya guys like :) This really isn't the best chapter and I'm really really sorry for that but I do know where this story is going so bear with me lol. I love all your support :))))
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Chapter 5 is up :) I love all of your support thank you sooooooo much I love you guys :)
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Chapter 4 is up...ya like? I really hope you do, its about to get good :)
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Chapter 4 comming up really soon! I'm working on it right now! If ya want me to keep ya posted on my chapters, tell me :) Almost like a subscription
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Chapters two and three are both up! Ya guys gotta make sure you tell me your opinion and that you like it so I know to keep writitng!!! :))
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Just put up chapter 1...check it out. If you guys like it, chapter 2 will be comming out soon too ;)
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Working on my first story: Missing
Hope ya like :)


 
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  1. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    November 10, 2011 5:37pm UTC
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  2. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    November 10, 2011 5:09pm UTC
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    “I don’t get it. It just doesn’t even make sense.” Chelsea said, as she sat with Crista.
    “Sometimes things don’t make sense.” She replied
    “But she wouldn’t have killed herself! And what about the rest of them? Are they dead too?”
    “Maybe, I don’t know. I wish I did, I’m sorry. I know how you must feel.” Chelsea sighed. ‘I know how you must feel.’ You don’t know anything. She thought.
    “They aren’t dead. I just know. They’re stronger than that. I can’t go through this again.”
    “Again?” She asked
    Chelsea looked down. She didn’t mean for that to slip out.
    “Nothing,” She spat, not meaning it to come out as harsh as it did.
    “You can tell me. I was there when Nicole…” Her voice trailed off. “Erm, you know.”
    “I know you were there, it kind of has nothing to do with that. It’s just…never mind.” They sat in silence for a moment until Chelsea spoke. “Why did you ask me if weird things were happening to me?”
    “I didn’t.” She answered
    “Yes, you did.”
    “No, I didn’t.”
    “Remember when you asked me if weird things were happening to Tori and Brittany and I had to tell you that they were…gone” She lowered her voice when she said ‘gone.’
    “That wasn’t me…”
    “Then who the hell was it?”
    I'm sorry I haven't been on! OMG i promise i will try to post more sooner. Please don't loose interest, I'm trying! Lol i love you guysss ♥
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  3. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    October 20, 2011 8:35pm UTC
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    She heard a voice from behind her, very faintly. She heard what they were saying but the words didn’t mean anything to her mind, which couldn’t process anything at the time.
    “You’re in shock,” She heard and felt someone guide her to an ambulance. “You’ll be ok, we just need to check you out” Chelsea still couldn’t process. So many things were running through her mind at the moment, but she could only understand one of the thoughts. Nicole. Was. Dead. Suddenly, her mind came back to her.
    Suddenly she screamed. She felt scared and alone. All of her friends were gone. Just gone. One (and possibly more) was dead. Dead. And she was next. Chelsea was going to be murdered by a man who kidnapped and killed her friends. The air got tight again.
    “I-I don’t wanna die,” She whispered. Suddenly, she felt warm, loving arms wrap around her, and heard the person sobbing.
    “Mom?” She asked, and looked at her.
    “Baby? Are you ok? I love you so much, I heard what happened and came here as soon as I could. I just can’t believe someone would do this, I can’t believe…I am just so happy your ok.” She sobbed
    “Mom, I’m fine.” She said, hugging back. But she heard in the background, one of the cops say the word ‘Suicide.’ Chelsea closed her eyes and took a deep breath. “Suicide?” She asked a cop who was passing by. “Who committed suicide?”
    “We aren’t allowed to give away any information.” He snapped back, with a harsh tone.
    “Please. This girl was my best friend,” She stared, when Nicole’s mom came up behind her, nodding gently, and putting on the best fake smile she could put on.
    “You can tell her what happened, she deserves to know”
    The cop looked unhappy, and reluctantly explained. “We found Nicole in her house, hung.” He took a breath, obviously not wanting to explain this. “We figured it still could be a murder, but she had no fingerprints on her, or no fingerprints anywhere. There was no sign of someone breaking into her house. No windows are smashed, no locks are broken, nothing.” He took another breath and then looked up at Nicole’s mom again, who nodded with tears in her eyes. “This was the part that nobody knew,” he started. “Nicole came back. Yesterday. Nobody said anything, because she begged us not to. She said she had to take care of something before she ‘reappeared in life,’ as she said. Her parents went upstairs to check on her this morning and found her hung with a suicide note in her pocket”
    Omg I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sorry I havent' posted a chapter in a while. The story is really picking up now...is Chelsea going to die? Holy poop find out. Keep reading I love you guys so much ♥
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  4. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 27, 2011 9:08am UTC
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    Crista knows something. She’s hiding something…what? Chelsea looked around the room, still feeling like somebody’s watching her. Waiting for the perfect moment to leap out and take her. Then she heard it. Sirens. They were coming closer…and closer…and closer to her house. They zoomed right past her house and up the street. She followed them into her very familiar neighborhood. On her bike, she couldn’t keep up that well, but she just listened to the sound of the sirens and followed them until they stopped getting farther sounding, but started getting closer. The ambulances and police trucks were stopped in front of Nicole’s house. And there, in front of the police cars and tape, was Crista, standing there, with a look on her face that was very hard to figure out.
    Chelsea dropped her bike and ran up to the scene.
    “What the hell happened?” She asked Crista, but Crista wouldn’t answer. She just stood there with her mouth open and was shaking her head.
    “Crista! What the hell? Can you please answer me? What happened?” Still no answer. And then she saw it. She saw what happened. She dropped to the ground, out of breath and words. She couldn’t breathe. The whole world was closing in on her.
    There, laying in the middle of the grass, was Nicole's lifel.
    Omg they found Nicole's body! Does that mean Brittany and Tori and also dead? Or are they not dead yet but they will be soon? And what is with Crisa? She is definately hiding something...what? She can't be Nicole's murderer, she was there when Nicole went missing, right? I think Chelsea is forgetting a big piece of important information in this whole thing. Keep reading to figure out what :)
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  5. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 25, 2011 10:55am UTC
    Do you know how creepy it is to be stalked?
    You can’t make a single move without thinking to yourself, is somebody watching me? It’s much scarier than you think. Chelsea became so afraid of everything; she refused to leave the house unless mandatory. She became withdrawn and would sit in her room all day, too sad and scared to move. Her mom would try to cheer her up, her mom even forced her to go to a therapist or something. But nothing had helped. She was lost. Until she got a call.
    Missing
    It all starts here:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930

  6. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 25, 2011 8:25am UTC
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    “Hello?” She spoke into the phone
    “Hi, Chelsea?” She heard the familiar voice of Crista on the other side.
    “Yeah, it’s me.”
    “Has anything, weird been happening to you, Brittany, or Tori.” She said ‘weird’ like it was some alien word that she’s never used before.
    “What do you mean Brittany, or Tori?” Chelsea asked
    “Huh?” She didn’t know. Oh. My. God. She didn’t know. How could she not have heard about it, Chelsea had thought that the whole town of Henrietta had.
    “Um,” Chelsea had no clue how to tell her this. “You know how Nicole went kind of, ‘MIA?’”
    “Yeah, I was there when it happened.”
    “So did Brittany and Tori.” She blurted out. The other line was silent
    “I’m so sorry” She heard somebody finally whisper.
    “Yeah,” Chelsea replied, “So am I”
    “What happened?” Crista asked
    “I don’t know, I hardly know ANYTHING. I’m so confused right now and I jus-” When she remembered her original question “What do you mean by weird things? Are weird things happening to you?”
    “Um, well, I don’t know, it’s probably all in my head.”
    “No seriously, are weird things happening to you, because I’m trying to piece together they mystery of what happened, and whether or not we’re next.”
    “I really gotta go now, and, I, uh, I’m sorry. I can’t help you. Bye.” And she hung up.
    This is like part II of chapter 10 but witty said it was too long sooo, yeah. I REALLY love all your support :) Keep reading, I love you all ♥
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  7. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 25, 2011 8:16am UTC
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    Do you know how creepy it is to be stalked? You can’t make a single move without thinking to yourself, is somebody watching me? It’s much scarier than you think. Chelsea became so afraid of everything; she refused to leave the house unless mandatory. She became withdrawn and would sit in her room all day, too sad and scared to move. Her mom would try to cheer her up, her mom even forced her to go to a therapist or something. But nothing had helped. She was lost. Until she got a call.
    It was Crista. She had completely forgotten that Crista had been with them the day that Nicole disappeared. The thing was, Crista wasn’t really their friend. They hung out sometimes, but barely. Nicole had only invited her because, well, just because. No reason, actually. Chelsea couldn’t help but wonder if Crista is being threatened too, or if she was already taken, and was calling for help? She picked up her phone and pressed the green talk button.
    “Hello?” She spoke into the phone
    “Hi, Chelsea?” She heard the familiar voice of Crista on the other side.
    “Yeah, it’s me.”
    “Has anything, weird been happening to you, Brittany, or Tori.” She said ‘weird’ like it was some alien word that she’s never used before.
    “What do you mean Brittany, or Tori?” Chelsea asked
    “Huh?” She didn’t know. Oh. My. God. She didn’t know. How could she not have heard about it, Chelsea had thought that the whole town of Henrietta had.
    “Um,” Chelsea had no clue how to tell her this. “You know how Nicole went kind of, ‘MIA?’”
    “Yeah, I was there when it happened.”
    “So did Brittany and Tori.” She blurted out. The other line was silent
    “I’m so sorry” She heard somebody finally whisper.
    “Yeah,” Chelsea replied, “So am I”
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    Do you know how creepy it is to be stalked? You can’t make a single move without thinking to yourself, is somebody watching me? It’s much scarier than you think. Chelsea became so afraid of everything; she refused to leave the house unless mandatory. She became withdrawn and would sit in her room all day, too sad and scared to move. Her mom would try to cheer her up, her mom even forced her to go to a therapist or something. But nothing had helped. She was lost. Until she got a call.
    It was Crista. She had completely forgotten that Crista had been with them the day that Nicole disappeared. The thing was, Crista wasn’t really their friend. They hung out sometimes, but barely. Nicole had only invited her because, well, just because. No reason, actually. Chelsea couldn’t help but wonder if Crista is being threatened too, or if she was already taken, and was calling for help? She picked up her phone and pressed the green talk button.
    UGHHH This chapter was a lot better and longer but witty said it was too long so I have to make it two chapters. Ughh. Thanks sooo much for reading it seriously means the world :) I hope you enjoy and angain I LOVE feedback :)
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  8. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 22, 2011 3:33pm UTC
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    “They’re watching you, I hope you realize that.” Nicole said.
    “What do you mean, who is ‘they?’” Chelsea asked
    “They, Chelsea they.” Nicole said. She said it like it was so obvious, like there was no way Chelsea couldn’t know who ‘they’ was.
    “Nicole, I don’t get it. Could you please just tell me?” Chelsea pleaded, but Nicole just laughed. Then a look of fear crossed over her face, and she pointed at a door that was open just a crack. “They’re watching,” she sputtered, and with that, she just ran away, leaving Chelsea to figure out her strange metaphor for herself. Chelsea turned at looked at the door. It was open, just barely and she just stared at it, until it closed, showing that someone had been there, watching her.
    A high pitched shriek escaped her throat, and with that, her eyes flung open and she woke up, from that horrible nightmare.
    And since that, she couldn’t shake the feeling that somebody was watching her. Like, actually watching her, not just in a dream. And maybe Nicole was giving her a clue. Maybe somebody was watching her. Maybe her Nicole, Brittany’s, and Tori’s kidnapper was not only planning on kidnapping her, but was actually stalking her. The ironic part was, that as if he had heard her thinking, something reflected in her window, a shadow. Something, or someone, was outside, right now. Watching her.
    I hope ya guys like :) I am soooo sorry it took so long to post! School n' stuff. More comming really soon, I promise! Thank you sooo much for all the faves and support, you can never understand how much it means ♥
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    Chapter 1:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930
    Chapter 2:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3715312
    Chapter 3:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3722601
    Chapter 4:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3729097
    Chapter 5:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3737264
    Chapter 6:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3745782
    Chapter 7:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3769407
    Chapter 8:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3801601

  9. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 9, 2011 3:56pm UTC
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    Pacing around her room, Chelsea wept silently. She. Was. Next. How the hell was she supposed to avoid this guy? Tori couldn’t even escape him when she was in a hospital. Which, she thought were safe. Guess again. The only way to avoid him, was to know where he is. At. All. Times. But how? She can’t turn into a stalker in an hour. Stalking takes skill, and commitment. Besides, how did she know she wasn’t being stalked by him? Maybe he isn’t just a kidnapper, maybe he is a stalker too. He could be watching her right now. As she thought this she closed all her blinds and locked her door. This was the scariest thing she has ever been through. And worst of all? She didn’t have her best friends to help her through it. She had to find out what happened to them. Where are they? Are they…dead?
    No.
    No.
    No.
    They can’t be. They aren’t dead. They’re not that kind of people. They don’t…they don’t…they just don’t die. They just don’t.
    So, now is it up to Chelsea to find out what happened? Or should that be up to the police? Wasn’t it her duty as their best friend to keep them safe? What is a 16 year old supposed to do? What can a 16 year old do?
    This wasn’t right. No. Who would do this? Who could be so heartless? It was up to Chelsea. She had to find the kidnapper.
    This is an ok chapter lol ♥ Sorry it's taking so long to get good haha. Keep reading...more comming soon :)
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    September 5, 2011 8:29am UTC
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  11. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 2, 2011 8:22pm UTC
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    “Tori.” No response “TORI!” Chelsea screamed. She wasn’t sure if she was dead or just passed out. After they got that creepy stalker note, Chelsea found herself seconds later hovered over Tori’s motionless body laying on the ground. She was pretty sure she had just fainted after a brief panic attack. Chelsea, petrified, called the police, and then an ambulance, all in a panic. But after Chelsea had calmed down, but was still waiting for the police and ambulance, she started pacing (something she always does when she’s thinking). She was fairly confident that the police could handle this problem, like, the police can handle anything, right? They’re the police, seriously.
    WRONG
    After the police came and the paramedics looked at Tori-and declared she would be ok-the police took the box and the note.
    Tori had been admitted to the hospital just to make sure she was ok. But the doctors ensured she would be ok. So Chelsea hadn’t worried. But the next day, the police called and asked her to come to the station because they had ‘news.’ She got there, and the only thing they said was “Whoever he is, this guy is good. No fingerprints, no hair samples, no DNA molecules of any sort. There is no way to tell who sent this.”
    Big help. Really, that was a big help.
    So Chelsea went to go visit Tori, that’s what friends do, right? So she found Tori’s room number (number 56) and burst into her room. But nobody was in there. So Chelsea called Tori’s mom to see if maybe she was sent home, but all her mom said was “What do you mean? She’s in the hospital, room 56. I am coming to-” But that’s as far as she got before Chelsea dropped her phone. There, staring at her on the curtain in Tori’s hospital room, in the same small handwriting, it said
    I’m coming for you now
    Sorry, this wasn't the best chapter, but it will get better I swear! Lol keep reading, I REALLY love all your support :)
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  12. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 1, 2011 9:02pm UTC
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    Suddenly there was a knock on the door. Tori jumped up, startled.
    “Tori, it’s just the door” Chelsea reassures. “I’ll get it”
    “WAIT! DON’T!” Tori blurts out
    “Why not?” Chelsea retorts
    “It could be Nicole and Brittany’s kidnapper!” Courtney rolled her eyes
    “Tori, it’s ok. You need to stop being scared, you need to face up to your fears. You can’t live your life hiding under the covers.” Tori slowly nodded
    “Ok,” She mumbled under her breath.
    Chelsea walks down the stairs and puts her eye against the peep hole. She can’t see anybody, so just opened the door, slowly.
    There was a package on the ground. It was about a foot long and half a foot wide. She was just about to open it when she saw the label. It read “For Tori, Enjoy!”
    “Tori!” Chelsea screamed “It’s for you!” She called up the stairs.
    Tori ran down the stairs “Who is it?”
    “It’s this package” Chelsea handed it over to her. Tori looked up at Chelsea, who nodded in return. She slowly opened it and looked inside. The only thing in there was a small piece of paper, about 2 inches long. Chelsea and Tori looked at each other and Tori picked up the piece of paper. In tiny, neat handwriting, that you could only see if you looked really closely, it said “You’re next"
    Sorry for the short chapter...I have an idea for where this is going soooo I had to make this short. lol. Tell me what ya think :)
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  13. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    September 1, 2011 9:44am UTC
    Calling All Story Lovers
    .Chapter 1:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930
    Chapter 2:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3715312
    Chapter 3:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3722601
    Chapter 4:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3729097

  14. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    August 31, 2011 10:23pm UTC
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    Two weeks after Nicole went missing, Brittany went with her. Yes, Brittany went missing. Tori, Chelsea, and Brittany were hanging out in Tori’s backyard. This time, when Brittany went missing, it was weird, like, really weird, and it happened so fast. They were hanging out and Tori said that it was getting dark and they should go inside. Tori and Chelsea both filed inside and when they turned around, Brittany just wasn’t there. They called for her outside, but no response. They had glanced at each other and then ran outside screaming her name while crying at the same time. They knew that she was gone, but the looked for hours anyway. They looked all night, but it was no use. She was gone
    Tori and Chelsea sat on Tori’s bed together and cried for hours. Two of them were gone, now they were far from complete. Nicole was gone. Brittany was gone. Who was next?
    They both looked at each other when Tori said
    “Chelse, what if, what if we’re next? They are probably coming to get us right now!”
    “Tori, calm down. I-I don’t know what to tell you. I wish I did, I really do.” She let out a big sigh and said “I just don’t understand what happened. Were they kidnapped? Or did they just wander off?”
    Tori looked at Chelsea with huge, pleading eyes. A piece of her dark brown-black messy bun fell into her face and she pushed it behind her ear. As if they read each other’s minds, they collapsed into each other’s arms, hugging each other as tight as they could.
    “I love you, and I have no idea what I would do without you. Don’t you disappear on me” Tori pleaded to Chelsea
    “I’m not going anywhere” She was going to say ‘I promise’ but she didn’t want to keep a promise she wasn’t sure she could keep.
    Chapter 1:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930
    Chapter 2:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3715312 Chadaf
    Chapter 3
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3722601
    Hey guys thanks so much for all the faves...you don't even know how much it means...seriously I love you guys :) I'll keep ya posted on my chapters :) Thanks again
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  15. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    August 31, 2011 8:36am UTC
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    They were all at Chelsea’s house, looking at pictures again. It cheered them up; it was like Nicole was still there, with them. They could feel her practically. Yeah I know that sounds creepy, but deep down inside, they knew, they just knew that Nicole was not dead. She couldn’t be! There were so many pictures it took them hours to go through them all. Occasionally, they would glance up at each other and just fall into each other’s arms. It was like they were lost without her. They weren’t complete. There was just no explanation for why she was gone. Nothing.
    Finally Chelsea stood up.
    “Guys, what the hell are we doing?”
    “What do you mean?” Brittany asked
    “We can’t just sit around and feel sorry for ourselves! Ok, Nicole is gone. I miss her too, but sitting here and doing nothing isn’t going to bring her back or find her, or find out what happened to her or-or-do anything! We have to get off our sorry butts and get out there and find out what the hell happened to her!”
    Tori was in the corner of the room in a fetal-ish position. Brittany stood up, but then stopped, she was scared. She hates to admit that, even to herself, she’s always so fearless, but she was. Finally after looking at Tori laying on the floor, she brought herself together and said
    “Tori, get up.” Brittany demanded “She’s right”
    “But we could get hurt! We could be next!” She retorted
    “Shut up. Stop worrying, we’ll be fine. What happened to Nicole was some freak thing. It isn’t going to happen again. Don’t you want to find out what happened to Nicole?” Brittany lectured
    The saddest part of all was that Tori was right.
    So what do ya guys think??? Please tell me your TRUE opinion, even if it is bad!
    Chapter 1:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930
    Chapter 2:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3715312
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  16. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    August 30, 2011 2:11pm UTC
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    But she never did. The whole night, they waited, all too afraid to fall asleep. Days past, she never showed up. Each day, Chelsea, Tori, and Brittany grew closer and closer. Their friendship bonded over Nicole’s disappearance. Nicole’s mom had become so sad and withdrawn. She didn’t have a husband and no kids besides Nicole so she was all alone. She filed a missing persons report with the police, who weren’t much help. They questioned each of the girls. He asked them each the same stupid questions that ultimately got them nowhere. Nicole was gone. Then there was that thought that had crossed each of their minds, but each girl pushed it right out, because it was too horrible to consider. Is Nicole dead?
    They felt like they were in a Pretty Little Liars book. But this was real. Nicole could be dead, and she may never come back. Just that thought made them all tense up. And someone would have to calm them down. Especially Tori, she needed to be calmed down, a lot. After a week, they’ve all cried a lot together and spent almost every second together. The only times they were separated was when they had to pee or shower. That was basically it. None of them could stand the thought that Nicole was gone. It had been a week since she was gone, there was still hope. She could be found.
    They looked through old pictures of themselves when they were little. They had been best friends since birth. All of their parent’s had worked together so, well, you know how that goes.
    To think that this was supposed to be the best summer ever. They were supposed to go to Nicole’s beach house in Miami and spend the whole summer there. But when Nicole went missing, they all had no choice but to go home. It was too weird to be there without her. Nicole Daniels was so full of life. She always knew how to cheer the girls up. They could really use her now more than ever. Their new favorite activity, instead of taking pictures of themselves, or having lame fashion shows, was now crying in their rooms together. It was sad, it really, really was. Their best friend was gone. Maybe forever
    Hey if ya like, please tell me...pwetty please, it would mean the world. I always return the favor of a fave, comment, or follow :)
    Chapter 1:
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930
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  17. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    August 30, 2011 1:39pm UTC
    Hey Guysss :)
    » Check out my new story? «
    http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930
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  18. storygirl64 storygirl64
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    August 30, 2011 1:18pm UTC
    Hey guys
    This is my new story account
    My real username is dani64...if ya guys care. I love writing stories n' stuff so, uh, yeah, I would love for you guys to read them and fave and comment and give me your opinions haha I love all constructive criticism, good or bad so tell me what you think. I also love to read stories so if you write or know the link to good stories, tell me please! Lol i also love to meet fellow writiers so tell me if you write. i love you guyssss talk 2 u soon :)
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    August 30, 2011 1:12pm UTC
    Missing: 1 : 1 1::
    “Nicole!” Chelsea Heathernall cried “Where the hell did you go?” She screamed. “Guys, come on, help me find her!” She said. Tori Puerskia followed close behind, scared as hell, after came Crista McJore and lastly Brittany Mouh.
    “Where is she?” Brittany asked
    “If I knew, do you think I would be screaming her name and looking for her?” Chelsea retorted.
    “Guys, cool down. We’ve had a long day and we’re all worried. Let’s just go back inside and relax. She’ll definitely come back in. What is she going to stay out her all night?” Brittany suggested. She pushed a long caramel colored piece of hair out of her face and behind her ears.
    Tori butted in, “Yeah guys, I agree with Brittany. These woods are freakin’ scary and we should go back inside. If Nicole is sane, she’ll come back in and soon.”
    They had all been playing manhunt not too long ago. Tori and Chelsea vs. Nicole and Brittany. Nicole and Brittany had been hiding. They had found Brittany, but they never found Nicole. They’d been looking for at least an hour and it was getting late and cold.
    They all piled inside, worried and frantic. They sat on Nicole’s suede couch silent. It felt weird being in Nicole’s house with, you know, no Nicole. All of them kept picturing in their minds that in any second, Nicole would burst through the door and say “Haha I got you! I win!” Knowing her, this is exactly what she would do to win. She is so competitive. Everyone was still silent, when Tori finally spoke “What if she never comes back?” She whispered, so quietly everyone else almost couldn’t hear them. Chelsea hugged her. “She will.” She add just as quietly “I promise”
    I've got big plans for this story. This is chapter 1 lol obviously so PLEASE tell me what you think about it. Please tell me if you like it. I love consturictive critisim and to hear what you guys think...thanks a lot
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