she will be loved
chapter 1.

It was about 6 months ago when my heart was shattered into millions of microscopic pieces.
And forgive me if I may sound a bit dramatic. But believe me when I say that it was broken. Forever.
---Flashback---
I was getting ready to go to the airport to pick up Ryan. He was coming home from Paris from his band's tour. I put my straightener down and danced downstairs because I wanted to check the mail. I was waiting for my new catalog for Vera Bradely. I ran passed my dad and out the door to the mailbox. There was mail for me. A letter. From Ryan. Along with my catalog. Ryan never sent letters. He wasn't that kind of guy. I went back upstairs and read the letter.

My dearest Sophie,
It is great here in Paris. Everyone loves our shows. There are so many people here! But that's not the reason that I'm writing this letter. I'm writing this letter for a completely different reason. I'm sorry that I couldn't pick up my phone. It's been months since I've talked to you. Where I am doesn't exactly have the best service. So, I'm sending this to you in letter form. Please, forgive me for what I'm about to say. I love you, Sophia. But over the tour, I met a girl. She really understands me, much like you do. Sophie, I'm not coming back. I've moved on. I'm staying out here with Lucy. We're getting married. I'm so sorry. I won't ever forget you. Please, Sophie. Forgive me. I never meant to hurt you.
With all of my heart,
Ryan.
---End of Flashback---
That was all it took to break my heart. And now, it's broken. For good. I remembered my mind playing those very words in my mind. "I met a girl." That was all it took to ruin my life. Listen to me. I've been through so many things. I'm surprised this has hurt me so much. But it did. Ryan was the only thing I really loved, along with my mom. But they were both taken away from me, for reasons I'm not sure of. But all I am aware of now is that my life will never be how it was when I was with Ryan. It will never go back to the way it was. I won't ever be as happy as I was with him. He was the only thing that kept me from holding on to my life. Without him, I would have ended my life. I'm surprised that I didn't let go in these six months. Believe me. That thought entered my mind so many times before. But there was just that one strand of hope that left me hanging on. And I was willing to do whatever it took to make my life just a fraction of how good it was before.

"look for the girl with the broken smile. ask her if she wants to stay awhile..."♥ ""
*nmf

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397 faves · 32 comments · Jun 13, 2011 9:04pm

gogoletsgo · 1 decade ago
I LOVE ITTT KEEP IT GOING!!! no offfense but its better then Justica (I still love it though)
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sarahISyours · 1 decade ago
Renee I LOVE itt.<3
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aminaiswhoiam · 1 decade ago
amazingness , Love it ;)
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BeingMyself · 1 decade ago
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHH!!! This is gonna be good!!
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xLizzIsAmazing · 1 decade ago
AH-MA-ZING!! :)

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Greenfreak78 · 1 decade ago
love it already peanut, as a older, devoted readerx3x3
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antus_girl · 1 decade ago
omg! why can't we all be great writers like u??
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justinbieber4lifee · 1 decade ago
eh
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you_know_you_love_me · 1 decade ago
It's so good and its only the first chapter! I can tell its gonna be good:)
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wittylicious21 · 1 decade ago
I love it soo muchh! Do more storys like thiss(:
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pandapilar23 · 1 decade ago
its a good start to your story hope it has the real love connection and tension that the other story had! but can you please not use that leter format (i liked the scroll box) the letter font was really hard for me to read
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x3scrubydoox3 · 1 decade ago
Renee, i love this!! and by the looks of the comments every one else loves it(: and i agree with TheGuitargirl118, its better than the Justica story! its really descriptive and nice! and every girl on witty can relate to it! thats why i love it so much! keep writing (: you're really good at it.(:
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white_angel47 · 1 decade ago
LOVE THIS STORY keep on writing!
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little_flirt_burger · 1 decade ago
I love it already! :)
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_Rhi_ · 1 decade ago
i love it so far! i really do! i feel this will be a great story, like your others :D
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jssx623 · 1 decade ago
idk if its as good as the jb one, but i think she should meet a new boy
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young_writerxx · 1 decade ago
For Everyone that's habit trouble reading it because of the scroll box, paste it into a message! It works really easily and I hope it helps! :)
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young_writerxx · 1 decade ago
Love the layout! ;) haha and the title name is adorable! Love that song!!! :) haha

-- love kellyn
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Maryummy · 1 decade ago
Its just like Dear John, I Loveee it<33333333
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TheGuitargirl118 · 1 decade ago
OHHHH! better then the JB story! LOL
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