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I'll Never Let You Go
Chapter 1.
Jessica's POV.

 

"Mom, don't worry. We'll be fine." I reassured my mom. We were in our new house. A year passed and today is my 18th birthday. Justin got me a house for my birthday. It was absolutely amazing. It was even better then our other house. It had a bigger land, a huge pool, 5 bedrooms and other huge rooms. He knew that I loved the spa and movie theater in our old house, so he got those in this one.
I'll fill you in on what happened in the last year.
We went on our cruise and it was amazing. I had a reunion with my senior friends and they were all so happy for me. It was almost Justin and my 2 year anniversary. It was in 2 days. Justin was taking me out to dinner tonight but wouldn't tell me where. But I had to dress nice.
"Okay, I'll go home now then." My mom said. She was helping us unpack all of our things. When it was all decorated, my mom finally let us be alone. She walked towards the door and turned back. "Are you s-"
"Mom, we're fine. Good bye." Pattie was already in the car. She helped too. She was waiting for my mom to go out.
Justin and I walked upstairs. We went into the master bedroom. It was my favorite room. There was a huge bed. And that brings me to another point. Justin has waited patiently for me to "make love." We still haven't yet. And he was waiting patiently for me which I thought was sweet. Anyway, about the room. There was a huge flat screen TV and a bunch of other amazing things. I looked in the bathroom again. There was a huge bathtub that was like a Jacuzzi. I loved this house! It was amazing. I don't know how Justin payed for it all. My mom and Pattie probably helped him. He couldn't pay this much. It was probably 1 million dollars for Heaven's sake. I looked at the clock. 2:00. I got in the shower and washed up. I was going to wear my new blue dress and black shoes. I wore my favorite Tiffany necklace and bracelet that Justin got me. Justin was somewhere else getting ready when I got out. He probably knew that I wanted to surprise him. I dried my hair and curled it. It looked good. I put my makeup on and did my nails. When I was done, it was 5:00. I slipped my shoes on and walked out to show Justin.
"Wow." He said when he looked at me. "Stop!"
"Stop what!?"
"Getting more and more beautiful." He came closer to me and kissed me on the lips. "Happy birthday, birthday girl."
"Let's go, Bieber."

*Thank you SOSOSOSOS much for the love on that last chapter. This is the sequel! PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT. Thank you for the people that gave me suggestions on that quote that I made. "I'll Never Let You Go" won as you can see :)

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81 faves · 17 comments · May 6, 2011 8:00am

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Queenykiss · 1 decade ago
Ive read every single one but it huerts my eyes too much :(
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xoneeloveex18 · 1 decade ago
sorry, i just read this cause i was scrolling top quotes but is this seriously about justin bieber ?
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maddig11 · 1 decade ago
really good
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mandabreee · 1 decade ago
can you make it a different font? I've read everyone of your stories but I can't read this ):
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luckylady11 · 1 decade ago
love it!!!
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treebs14 · 1 decade ago
could you make a different font next time please?

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cutecrew1234 · 1 decade ago
Omg i wish i could fave this 10000000000 timess!
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cocobananasxx · 1 decade ago
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! KEEP WRITING.....!!!!!
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carcar7867 · 1 decade ago
i cant read it...
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foreverr_and_ever · 1 decade ago
this story is amazing!! i think its safe to say your the best writer on witty. :)
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LoserLikeMe17 · 1 decade ago
I love your story so far and it's only been one chapter.
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ittsssmekate · 1 decade ago
lllooovvveeeee. keeeep this going !
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nicoleey13 · 1 decade ago
Im sorry but i cant read what it says!! Can you please make it bigger or change the font? love love love
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penguinluv · 1 decade ago
Good start:) love your story!
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cutecrew1234 · 1 decade ago
ahh they're sooo perfect togetherr! <3 its getting wicked intensee! keep writing! (:
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_Rhi_ · 1 decade ago
amazing first chapter :D
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a_sunny_user · 1 decade ago
first to comment :D
love this. keep going. :)
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