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My Last Breath
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[Sorry it took so long! Just got over a horrible break up :'( But part 11 will be up sooner, i promise.]
I was in the car with Katrina, driving to the hospital, when she turned to me and asked me how Declan was. "He's okay," I answered, and turned up the radio before she went too far. Before the tears started to fall.
We arrived at the hospital. I said Hello to the receptionist, who I'd become close to while visiting Declan, and she directed us to my Dad's room.
"Hi, Dad." Katrina said as she walked in the room, not quite looking at him.
"Katrina," He greeted her.
"Hey," I said nervously.
"Leighlani."
It was awkard. Kat and I stood there looking around the room, rocking back and forth on our heels.
"Thanks for coming," he broke the silence.
"No problem, Dad," we both answered.
"How are you?" I asked.
He shrugged. "Eh."
"How's the other person?"
"Alive."
"That's good. For both of you." I patted his hand, still awkwardly, and faked a gentle smile.
He grunted.
"Hey, uh, Dad," Katrina said.
"What?"
"Tomorrow night's my prom," She began. "And my date can't use his car because his Dad needs it."
"Okay..?"
"So..uh.. I was wondering, can we drive your car? Since we can't afford a limo."
"Um.. Trina.." I tried to stop her, wondering if she knew how idiotic her request was.
"Shut up, Leighlani," my dad said. "We're talking. Don't be rude." He glared at me, then continued. "Katrina, you know how i was in a CAR accident?"
"Yes, daddy."
"I was driving. MY car." His voice got louder.
"Oh."
"it's in the shop. Can't use it for another few weeks. Well, I can't use it anyway. Both my legs are broken."
They were starting to fight. I took this as my opportunity to sneak away to Declan's room.
When I found it empty, I tried to find the nurse. I finally found her.
"Leighlani! Hi, sweetie." She called.
"Hi, Sally. Where's Declan?"
"Oh..Um.. He's in one of the uh.."
"Yes?"
"The surgery room. He's getting a very large tumor removed.." She trailed off.
"Oh. He didn't tell me he'd be getting surgery today. When will he be visit-able?"
"Uh, Leighlani, sit down."
I did. She started talking before i could ask questions. "Honey, Declan's tumor is near a very major artery. It's a big tumor, too. They have to be really, really careful when they're cutting around the tumor, and this could take the whole night. If they aren't careful, and they hit the artery, well..."
"Well..?"
"Declan could die."
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SourGummyWorm · 1 decade ago
hurrrrry uppppppppp!!!!!! (:
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yeah_thats_how_it_is · 1 decade ago
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS STORY YOURE SUCH A GOOD WRITER PLEASE WRITE MORE! oh and sorry about your break up ='( i bet he wasnt good enought for you anyways
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aphrodite814r · 1 decade ago
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! please write more! ♥
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