TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
Still awesome tho reply
TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
Uhm wow, that's two packets of Kleenex gone...
Mia died... :( I hadn't anticipated that, umm I don't know what to say because it isn't the same without her and it's weird to continue reading but I am going to. If you are willing to write the rest of course :) Just... don't kill anyone else of because I get the feeling Niall's gonna go suicidal and :( reply
tigersforever
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1 decade ago
I loved your story, it was the best one direction story ive read, kinda sad its over: your a very talented writer. :)
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tigersforever
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1 decade ago
I really loved your story, you have a real talent
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TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
No, seriously I don't care if it was a filler I'm just glad you're writing again and the characters of this story aren't dead. SOO HAPPY *unicorns and rainbows" n_n <3 reply
TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
Oh ma gerdd! Hell to the yes! Thankyouuuuu! <3 Really though :P reply
TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
THAT'S IT, if you din't update I'll... just have to give up and assume Louis and Katia are never getting back together. I know you're busy but I'm asking for words on a page. Get yourself together! Your readers need you, so help us before you lose us..? pretty please? reply
isabeltheosm
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1 decade ago
yeah, upload please?
i love you :)
its a great story too, come back to writing! reply
TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
*weeps* why haven't you updated :'( I'm missing this story. I'm so close to giving up pwetty pwease upload? reply
Zoë*
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1 decade ago
Yayyy! I have a feeling the next few chapters are going to be great ahahha reply
isabeltheosm
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1 decade ago
lol i thought the secret was a lot bigger :D like louis was cheating on her or something reply
TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
I thought the secret was actually... Perfect. :) It kinda glued the last few chapters together x reply
isabeltheosm
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1 decade ago
am,.sdfn.a.,mdfsna.,dmf
i hate you.
but please let them stay together?
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mj25
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1 decade ago
It's very well thought out, but I think you should come up with something more creative as an ending? Idk it's just that usually the first or the last line of a poem is what people remember. And the ending was sort-of typical you know? It flows very nicely. I didn't spot anything really awkard or out of place. Really amazing poem. :') reply
Zoë*
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1 decade ago
I really like Katia and Louis together, but I think I'd like to see a single Katia as well. Not sad and mopey though, but actually going out and having a bit of fun. I think it could give the story a bit of a twist. And maybe bring in more Harry and Katia, since Katia and Louis break up, Harry (even though he has a girlfriend) might think about her again? It might also mean Harry and Louis have a fight? I don't know, I just think that might make an interesting story line. reply
OnceUponAStory
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1 decade ago
Oh by the way! I'm leaving again tomorrow for vacation(I'm going to go see the Grand Canyon! :D ) but I'm going to gone for a week. This time, however, I will be able to write and maybe post a chapter or two depending on how much I'm able to write and what not. Sorry guys, but I will definitely be able to reply to all of the qutoe comments I get (; reply
TaintedCherry
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1 decade ago
Love you for uploading but... WHAT IS THAT SECRET?? :'( i really want to know, I'm dying her... DYING :( Pweety Pweese? xx reply
tigersforever
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1 decade ago
You need to have more confidence in your writing, this was really good. reply
OnceUponAStory
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1 decade ago
Part two is a quote you have to click to see! Sorry guys I clicked the add quote button and then the warning came up. reply
TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
Still awesome tho
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TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
Uhm wow, that's two packets of Kleenex gone...
Mia died... :( I hadn't anticipated that, umm I don't know what to say because it isn't the same without her and it's weird to continue reading but I am going to. If you are willing to write the rest of course :) Just... don't kill anyone else of because I get the feeling Niall's gonna go suicidal and :(
reply
tigersforever · 1 decade ago
I loved your story, it was the best one direction story ive read, kinda sad its over: your a very talented writer. :)
reply
tigersforever · 1 decade ago
I really loved your story, you have a real talent
reply
TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
No, seriously I don't care if it was a filler I'm just glad you're writing again and the characters of this story aren't dead. SOO HAPPY *unicorns and rainbows" n_n <3
reply
TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
Oh ma gerdd! Hell to the yes! Thankyouuuuu! <3 Really though :P
reply
TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
THAT'S IT, if you din't update I'll... just have to give up and assume Louis and Katia are never getting back together. I know you're busy but I'm asking for words on a page. Get yourself together! Your readers need you, so help us before you lose us..? pretty please?
reply
isabeltheosm · 1 decade ago
yeah, upload please?
i love you :)
its a great story too, come back to writing!
reply
TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
*weeps* why haven't you updated :'( I'm missing this story. I'm so close to giving up pwetty pwease upload?
reply
Zoë* · 1 decade ago
Yayyy! I have a feeling the next few chapters are going to be great ahahha
reply
isabeltheosm · 1 decade ago
lol i thought the secret was a lot bigger :D like louis was cheating on her or something
reply
TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
I thought the secret was actually... Perfect. :) It kinda glued the last few chapters together x
reply
isabeltheosm · 1 decade ago
am,.sdfn.a.,mdfsna.,dmf
i hate you.
but please let them stay together?
reply
mj25 · 1 decade ago
It's very well thought out, but I think you should come up with something more creative as an ending? Idk it's just that usually the first or the last line of a poem is what people remember. And the ending was sort-of typical you know? It flows very nicely. I didn't spot anything really awkard or out of place. Really amazing poem. :')
reply
Zoë* · 1 decade ago
I really like Katia and Louis together, but I think I'd like to see a single Katia as well. Not sad and mopey though, but actually going out and having a bit of fun. I think it could give the story a bit of a twist. And maybe bring in more Harry and Katia, since Katia and Louis break up, Harry (even though he has a girlfriend) might think about her again? It might also mean Harry and Louis have a fight? I don't know, I just think that might make an interesting story line.
reply
OnceUponAStory · 1 decade ago
Oh by the way! I'm leaving again tomorrow for vacation(I'm going to go see the Grand Canyon! :D ) but I'm going to gone for a week. This time, however, I will be able to write and maybe post a chapter or two depending on how much I'm able to write and what not. Sorry guys, but I will definitely be able to reply to all of the qutoe comments I get (;
reply
TaintedCherry · 1 decade ago
Love you for uploading but... WHAT IS THAT SECRET?? :'( i really want to know, I'm dying her... DYING :( Pweety Pweese? xx
reply
tigersforever · 1 decade ago
You need to have more confidence in your writing, this was really good.
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OnceUponAStory · 1 decade ago
Part two is a quote you have to click to see! Sorry guys I clicked the add quote button and then the warning came up.
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Live_life98 · 1 decade ago
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