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  1. *Yours Truly* *Yours Truly*
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    October 25, 2014 4:44am UTC
    So we had to pretend to be what we were not, so we would not be harmed for what we were.

  2. OnceUponAStory OnceUponAStory
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    December 4, 2013 10:15pm UTC
    The Letter. The Change.
    THE LIE.
    Chapter 4: End of April
    *Katia's POV*
    Once I could breath I got up and walked into the bathroom. I locked the door right away and then just stared at myself in the mirror. I did look as bad as Niall. The bags under my eyes were just as bad, only now my eyes were red and puffy from crying. My eyes looked pretty though, that is one thing crying did do to me, it made the color difference stand out and it looked really pretty. What wasn't pretty was the pain I felt.
    It was overwhelming; I felt like there was a whole missing in my chest and the edges were being burned and frozen at the same time. It hurt to breath, like when the air is too cold for your lungs. God I needed to get rid of this pain. I needed it to end. Then a thought ran through my mind: I bet cutting would get rid of the pain.
    I knew from talking to other girls who used to cut that when they cut the pain would leave temporarily, but thats all I needed. Just a moment without pain. I glanced at the locked door and knew that if I did no one could stop me. I could do it, I could stop the pain.... and get addicted to something new. I started thinking of how the girls talked about how it became an obsession, a crutch, that it wasn't worth it. I had never wanted to cut, I had never considered it an option but now....
    What would my family think? What would Louis think? What would Mia think? The question made the pain even worse. I knew she wouldn't want me too, she would would try to convince me not to but she never felt this. My eyes traveled to where I knew Louis was sitting on the other side of the wall.
    Quickly I opened the door and walked out and away from the temptation. Lou gave me a weak smile as he watched me walk over. I laid back down next to him and snuggled into his chest.
    "What do you want to do love?" he asked me. I thought about it for a moment before answering.
    "Lets watch Princess Bride." I picked up the dvd player remote and just pressed play. The dvd was still in there from the last time I watched it.
    I started to drift asleep as the movie started until I was in a half sleep half awake state. I listened as Louis said "as you wish" every time it was said in the movie. I felt every soft kiss he left on the top of my head as the movie went on. I must of really fallen asleep at one point because the next thing I knew my sisters were home and we were watching Grease.
    I slowly opened my eyes, and looked around. I was still in Louis's arms and could feel his steady heart beat beneath me. All the lights were turned down and there was now a blanket draped over us. I could hear whispering voices in the other room but didn't really care. I just continued to lay there with Louis and watched the movie. The rest of the night seemed to go by fast. Soon I was eating supper(which consisted of orange rolls and chicken noodle soup) and showering. My mom let Louis and I take the family room and made everyone else stay downstairs or in the living room. We ended up talking most of the night. Not about anything in particular, just every little thing we could think of that didn't involve Mia. Around 9:30 the rest of my family went to bed. My dad was working the night shift so it was just Louis and I.
    We decided to watch a movie and I let him pick this time. He picked Despicable Me, and even though I knew he picked it for me he wouldn't admit to it. I eventually gave up arguing with him and just watched the movie. Even though I took an afternoon nap my eye lids started to get drowsy halfway through the movie. I struggled to keep them open for 30 minutes before finally giving in. I matched my breathing to Lou's and quickly fell asleep.
    *Louis's POV*
    About half way through the movie Katia fell asleep. I kept my grip around her waist tight; as much as I didn't want to admit it I was afraid I was going to loose her like Niall lost Mia. My thumb rubbed small circles into the back of one of her hands. I stayed up until the end of the movie even though I wasn't watching it. I was mainly watching Katia. She kept fidgeting and I knew she was going to be tired in the morning.
    I had finally started to drift to sleep when Katia started tossing and turning. She was mumbling under her breath in a terrified voice. "Shhh Katia, its alright," I whispered rubbing her back. "Shhh you're all right."
    It seemed to slightly calm her, though she was still shaking. I started to softly hum and after a while she was sound asleep. This time I was actually able to fall asleep before it started again. But this time she was screaming. I couldn't tell what she was screaming, her words were choked by her tears.
    "Katia," I gently shook her. "Katia love. Wake up." She jumped slightly as her eyes opened wide in fear.
    "You're okay. It was just a dream, you are safe," I tried to reassure her.
    "it wasn't just a dream," she shook her head. "Mia is actually gone." I didn't know what to say to that. So I just held her closer and prepared myself for a long night.

  3. OnceUponAStory OnceUponAStory
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    December 4, 2013 10:12pm UTC
    The Letter. The Change.
    THE LIE.
    Chapter 4: End of April
    *Katia's POV*
    The car ride back was quiet. Liam was driving my car, Louis, Niall, and I in the back seat, me in between the two. Harry and Zayn were driving their rental car with Milo and soon we were back at my house. My mom told them they could stay there but they decided to stay at a hotel. I thought Louis was going to be staying, but I really wasn't sure. We got out of the cars and out into the sunny morning. Off in the distance I could see clouds and I knew it was going to rain. I took Milo as we walked into the house.
    Milo was big now, almost a year. Louis had told me a couple days ago that he was starting to walk by himself and at the time I couldn't believe it, but now I did. He wouldn't stop squirming and kept mumbling things to himself. He had a British/Irish/American accent and it was the cutest thing ever. One of the guys opened the front door and I walked in first.
    I could hear my mom in the kitchen and the tv was on showing reruns of the Mentalist. I continued to walk into the living area and then put Milo down. The rest of the boys followed after me, and Harry sat down on the floor next to him.
    Liam talked to my mom while I sat on the couch with Louis. Harry and Zayn were on the floor with Milo and Niall was sitting on the chair. My mom and Liam were whispering so I couldn't hear what she was saying. After a couple minutes Milo started fussing and my mom came over and joined us.
    "Whats wrong?" She asked picking him up. I noticed Niall was watching cautiously from his seat as my mom lifted him onto her hip. I started to really study Niall since he got here.
    He looked drained, he had no color to his face, making the circles under his eyes only that much more noticeable. His hair was a mess and didn't look like he had combed it besides running his hand through it over and over. His eyes had no life to them, they were dull and full of pain. I wondered if that was how I looked, so... alone.
    We all just sat around watching reruns of the Mentalists for a couple hours without any talking. But after a while Liam said they should go check in at the hotel. Zayn and Harry stood up and stretched from sitting on the floor the entire time. Niall picked up Milo and held him close as Louis tightened his grip around my waist.
    "I think I'm going to stay here if that's okay with you Mrs. Thompson," he half asked.
    "Oh that is fine Lou, you are always welcome," she called from the behind the kitchen counter. Louis got up to go get his bags from the car.
    I didn't move from my spot on the couch, I don't know if I would be able to even if I wanted to. After a few minutes Louis came back in and took the bags downstairs to the spare bedroom. He must of just dropped them off and came back up because just a few seconds later he was back on the couch next to me. I leaned back as he wrapped his arms around me just as a new episode started.
    I glanced at the clock, it was 2. I don't know if that was good or bad. I mean it was already two. Time seemed to go by faster with Louis which was good because that meant it seemed like there was less time to think about... things. But then again it was already 2, and that meant it was almost time to go to bed and then go to school. I don't know if I wanted to go to school or not. I mean I wanted the distraction, I didn't want time to think, I didn't want to be alone. But I knew I would get tons of sympathy and stares and I didn't want that either.
    I closed my eyes trying to get rid of the thoughts. Louis leaned down and kissed my forehead. "You okay love?" he whispered gently into my ear.
    I shook my head as a few tears started to fall. I turned around to face him and buried my face in his chest. My chest rose and fell fast as I struggled for breath. Louis's hand rubbed small circles on my back as I continued to sob into his chest. My tears were soaking his shirt but he didn't say anything about it. After a couple more minutes I was able to compose myself.

  4. Main Account: LoveYourLifeee* Main Account: LoveYourLifeee*
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    December 1, 2013 8:27pm UTC
    Dreams Don't Always Come True.
    Chapter 4
    "Thank you, Josh." I say leaning over and giving him a kiss on the cheek. I get out of the car
    and head up stairs before my mother realises that im late. I have the worst migraine and on top
    of that i've been getting sick non-stop. Finally, I fall asleep only to be woken by my mother's
    nagging. "Callie, get down here, I need you to empty the dish washer so I can make breakfast.
    " I get out of bed and head to the bathroom across the hall, I look in the mirror, what did I do
    last night? I brush my teeth multiple times before grabbing a few aspirins and rushing down stairs.
    I do not want to get on her bad side. As im finishing my Lucky Charms, Josh comes down stairs.
    He gives me a 'look' then proceeds to say, as if it's a joke, " How was the party? "
    My mother looks over waiting for my response. "Fine." I say as im rinsing my bowl. I head
    back to my room. "Gotta go do my homework." I blurt this out quickly, to change subject.
    I hear my mother say " what was that all about?" I get in my bedroom and shut the door,
    oblivious to what Josh's response was. Heading towards the bed, I hear my phone go off.
    7 missed calls : 4 from Victoria, 2 from Brooke, and 1 from Shane. I make a three way call to my
    friends, I need to tell them what happened last night. They agree to meet me at the park,
    so my mom won't hear. After 10 minutes of telling my story im finally finished. "Go girl!"
    Brooke shouts, she never takes things seriously. "Shhhh, not so loud." We all burst out in
    laughter. Still laughing, Victoria says, " Atleast you're not pregnant, right?" This
    statement makes me think. " I could be, we didn't use protection." They gasp. We all
    stand up, no one says where we're going, but I know. We get to the store and I
    purchase a test. The three of us head to Brooke's house. Negative. A sigh of relief leaves
    my body, I pick up the phone and call Shane, I have no worries.
    Author's Note: I Know That I Haven't Posted In A While. I Have Been Really Busy, I Know Thats A Lame Excuse But Whatever. I Hope You Guys Enjoyed This Chapter! Expect Many More Chapters, Please Leave Your Feedback.

  5. Shelley♥* Shelley♥*
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    October 20, 2013 4:10am UTC
    Broken
    Chapter 4
    Her Point Of View
    So, I didn’t really describe our relationship, mine and James, I’m saying, so I might just give you a little ‘tour’ of it now. So, James is really friendly, and he’s always there for me. Example (a)- Emails and texts, telling me “You’re beautiful, stay strong & I’ll love you forever.” Example (b)- “You are the straw to my berry.” I know it’s corny but I love him, and I love all of it, this relationship, everything!
    I think, it was on Sunday when we first kind of went out together. Sunday the 20th of October, I’ll never forget that day. Now that we knew we liked each other, there was simply no easy way of asking one another out. I was glad he made the first move. “Look, Seri- I think you’re really amazing, I’m sure you know that by now, and, um..” “Go ahead?” I commented, curious. “WillyougooutwithmebecauseIthinkyourextracuteandamazingandIcouldtalkaboutitalldayhehe” and he quickly walked to a nearby bush and like, sort of hid behind it and I thought he was peeing or something but he as actually hiding because he thought I would say no. As if!
    His Point Of View
    I was kind of scared that she would say no, at first, but when she rushed over to the bush I was hiding in she scooped me into her arms and hugged the air and life out of me. I loved her so much, see? She was the only reasonable on in our school. At least she had the heart to tell me, and like a proper lady too. Most girl would approach with the “Hey you’re hot,” method.
    Well, our relationship started in the park, basically. It was snowing, yes, call me creepy, but our relationship start was set in a cold, snowy and dainty park. I made the first move, hid in a bush and we ended up kissing for what, 20 minutes? I love her so much, but I made one thing very clear: NOT for her body.
    Most people in our school had told me “Oh, you should ask that babe out, just for her BODY.” And other people would object, saying, “Oh she’s lovely, I just never really found the time to talk to her, oops.” And the ended up debating about it, and you know how Seri told me she writes? I don’t think she told you about Martin..
    If you’re wondering who Martin is, he’s the rough, head, leader kind of person in our school. He’s like the male version of Kimberly. He thought that using someones body would’ve been quite funny, obviously. He told Seri she was beautiful and he loved her since the start, and all that bull was untrue. But you know what? Seri was young, and gullible, and she believed him. So the went home together, and luckily Seri wasn’t pregnant but after the whole thing she just seemed so broken.
    At least we’re together now, and that’s all that matters. I love her, she loves me, and admit it. You were singing the Barney lyrics along to that little sentence. Well I’ve started writing about her and our relationship, and it’s pretty addictive; watch out, you’ll be hearing a lot more.
    Comment and fav if you enjoyed!

  6. Alexisiscool Alexisiscool
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    August 20, 2013 3:35pm UTC
    Infernal
    Chapter4
    I walked up to the women and glared up, "Excuse Miss, I would Like to go across the bridge, if that is not a problem with you?"
    The woman laughed, "Child, I am Jane, Jane Little, And you may not cross this bridge without money!" I Shoved my hand into the pocket of my vest only to find a empty wallet. "Err," I gave out an awarkward laugh, the women smiled, and grabbed something from the floor the bridge, a long staff. Eek, She swung it high and hit me hard over the head, I fell into the water, gasping for breath.
    "I guess I'll swim!" I began to swim to the other side, Eventually getting out to find the Giant behind me, "What IS your problem?" The giant shrugged, "Where are you going child?" The giant asked,
    I shook my head "WTF? why the hell do you want to know, you just tried to kill me!!!"
    "Aye, but I would like to join you on your way my courageous friend!"
    "Huh? Wahhh? Hey, you aint following me you strange mother-" She smiled and reached for me, "No way my friend, No way are you grabbing ME!"
    "I will follow you Ruby, I am sorry for the inconverance, I had to put you to this test to see if you have determination and will to not fight those innocent and to get the other side!"
    "Test? Fight? what?"
    "Come now!"
    "Huh?"
    "Just come child I am no danger, Furry may come too!" She smiled down at me,
    "I am Jane as said before!" THe giant, I mean Jane, gestured for Furry to come over to us, and as she did Furry came to join us at the other side. Smiling Jane Lead on, I gingerly followed behind with Furry, I had no idea what was going on. She lead us into the deepness of the forest opposite the one we were in. She lead us down a muddy dirty road.
    "So, Urm-How did you know our names Miss Jane?" I asked politely,
    she grinned "My dear- It is a extremely talent, I know all of the woods and everything that enters I know what they want and they're names!"
    "Err, Furry?" I looked down to the red fox next to me,
    "Mistress, This women is the guardian of the forest, she can protect it no matter were she is, she is a friend, she must be taking us to friar Oka's Church..." Furry trotted along, grumpily.
    "Oh kay-" We walked down the long grubby road. All the while I wondering "What if she kills us? She is most definitely strong enough!" Half an hour went past and we arrived at an clearance. A church stood before us, a tall cream colour church, covered with mould and lime stone. A bell tower was towered above us at the top of the 100 foot church. Jane went down to the door of the church and bowed, then dragged the stone temple door. "Come, come!" She called to us, we ran over to her. I looked around in case the sheriff was around or his guards! Jane closed the doors behind us just as I ran in. I slipped to the floor with a thud. My head at a mans feet. I slowly stood up, looking at the hooded man, he was large and frightening, despite only been 4 foot tall, a foot shorter then me! I took a step back and bumped into Jane, who smiled down at me. I gulped, "He-l-l-o!" I grumbled "Hello..." said a voice behind me, not Jane's, a happy, not so booming voice, "Hello, welcome to the church!" smiled a man running in front of us, grinning like a chesure cat, I smiled gingerly and waved. "Oh hello Ruby, you wont know me, I was friends with your father, yes lovely man, he was, I guess you've met friar Jack, changed hasn't he, I know you know him, he's old now and getting ready to settle into a town house down in London!" The man said so quickly I couldn't understand a word he said.
    "Hunt for them in the forest I will go into the church with Albert and Jame, GOT THAT YOU SNIVERLING BRATS?" I heard a man bellow "If you find her, beat her and strip her! Ruby Hood!"

  7. Supergoth Supergoth
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    July 7, 2013 1:48pm UTC
    Twist
    Chapter 4
    “Hi mum. I know that there is no point talking to you but I just wanted to say that things are okay and I love you,” I spoke in the phone. With my luck her phone would probably be dead, like her. Tyson came up from behind me and kissed my neck.
    “Well, well, looks like we have someone who is too cute for words. Well then Melody, shall we celebrate on that?” Tyson laughed and picked me up. I kicked my legs and squirmed around.
    “Put me down! You know I don’t like it!” I screamed, giggling at the same time.
    “No, you are mine!” Tyson replied and threw me on the bed. I chucked a pillow at his face and surprisingly knocked him over. Tyson lost his balance and went flying into the corner of the window pane. I heard a slight crack as his skull crashed against it and a thump as Tyson fell to the floor. I screamed and ran up to him. My hands were drenched in blood and Tyson wouldn’t move. He was still breathing and that gave me hope. I lifted him onto the bed and put an ice pack where the cut was. When he was okay looking I called an ambulance. What was going to happen? When they arrived I sat and sobbed, feeling hopeless.
    “Now don’t worry he will be okay. Now I need the names of both of you. And I need your relationship,” said the ambulance lady.
    “Um I’m Melody and the boy is Tyson. His last name is Maroon and mine is Humingson. We are boyfriend and girlfriend,” I stuttered. The lady nodded and walked off. I stepped in the ambulance behind Tyson and suddenly the whole van was alight. A golden spark bright enough to blind someone. They were coming from Tysons head and hands. After a couple seconds the spark dimmed and Tyson was all okay. The massive crack in his head was gone and he was grinning. Sadly, the blinding light had blinded the driver of the ambulance and caused a crash. Tyson guiltily stepped out of the van and touched the driver. Within an eighth of a second the man was able to see. He was like Jesus. I stood there, gob smacked and frozen. Tyson walked over to me and pushed my mouth closed. He laughed and I blushed.
    “Well nice to see your okay. Have a nice day,” the lady commented and I just linked hands with Tyson. When we were back at the house the storm broke. Everywhere was lightened up by sparks of lightning. The thunder was so loud that even Tyson couldn’t hear the television. I cuddled up to him and slowly fell asleep. I felt safe in Tysons’ arms, like he would protect me whatever the weather. (Get my joke? No? OK.) My dream was okay, but it made me cry because I wanted it to be real so much. We were on a beach, with a picnic, and it was so romantic. Then Tyson pulled me under a tree-which I have no idea where it came from-and kissed me. Then he told me that he was the longest man to live. He said that he will never die and he always stays the same. He said that he is still human but he just doesn’t age. Then he takes holds of my hands and a bright light covers my body. And then we live together forever. Tyson wiped away the tears from my eyes and chuckled.
    “Bad or Good?” he asked. I closed my eyes and wipe away the remaining sourness.
    “Okay…probably…a good,” I mumble and sigh. “In fact so good I want it to be real.” I sit up feeling awkward and go to the window. The storm had finished but it left a wreck behind. Lots of telephone poles were either burnt or broken. And a little flood floated across the road. I stood there feeling mad for some reason, then happy and then I started to cry.
    “Why are you crying?” Tyson asked, concerned.
    “I don’t know!” I exclaimed and laughed at myself. I felt so dizzy and confused and as I skipped around the table, my eyes closed. The room fell black and I heard echoing voices then silence. In my mind I was giggling, my eyes a psychopathic whirl. The room was spinning as the light slowly crept through my blocked eyes. One hundred people starting at me as I smiled a notorious grin. “What are you up to?” I asked.
    “Right darling, you have hit your head. You should be ok but we don’t know until you have had your operation. There is a possible chance of…” someone placed their hands over her mouth and hushed her. Two of possible symptoms ran over my brain.
    1. Cancer
    2. Nothing…
    Only that one thing could be it. That one word sent shivers down my spine, that made sweat dribble down my forehead. Cancer.

  8. emilygm* emilygm*
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    July 6, 2013 9:11pm UTC
    Angels Hide Demons
    Chapter 4
    "Rowan Talley, Period 4." I dotted the i and slid my finished English homework into a binder, then closed up my backpack. My phone buzzed, and I pounced on it like a wild cat. It was Brayden.
    "Hello?"
    "Hey, Rowan. I heard you know-"
    "Where you were today? Don't worry; I won't tell." Because I might die if I do.
    "Thanks. So what did I miss in Science?"
    "Nothing interesting. We watched a video about biodiversity in Madagascar; no notes, no homework."
    "Really?"
    "It's because we all got A's on the Chapter 7 Test."
    "Cool. Well, thanks again. I gotta go."
    "Okay; bye."
    I snapped my phone shut and gave a sigh of relief. Brayden was okay. So, what did they do today?
    I decided to go to bed early, since anything else I did would most likely put me in a bad mood. Scrolling through Facebook on my phone, I found this really unusual stream of friendly messages- from Alaia. WTF was this?! In my private messenger, I typed back:
    Alaia, I know that we used to be friends. But we're not anymore. Not after what you did a year ago. I'm sorry but I just can't forgive you. If you want things to be the way they used to be, well, that won't happen unless you find yourself a time machine. And what was up with this afternoon?
    She never replied to the message.
    _____________________________________________________________________________________
    Okie Dokie, guys. This was a super-short chapter because I have a few author's notes for you. First of all, the layout. I have a couple things to adress about the formatting. One, if you can't already see it, the title and chapter number are supposed to be written in this really pretty script font, which isn't normally available on Witty (I coded it in). I found out yesterday that the font doesn't show up on mobile, and it also is written as Comic Sans (this font) on certain computer monitors. I just really hope that you guys can all see it, because I love it. In addition, do you like the current formatting? Is it too plain? Any suggestions? If you have an idea in mind, go ahead and comment. I love to get feedback from you guys.
    Formatting/Layouts/HTML/CSS Coding aside, what do you guys think of the story so far? This is the first story I've put out there that isn't fanfiction. (BTW don't look me up because the fanfic I write is absolute garbage) I'll take any and all constructive criticism you guys can provide. I think that's about it.
    Oh, one more thing! If anyone wants me to notify them when I post new chapters, comment on this or my profile and I'll do that for you, from now on. I'm already notifying EpicTrouble and skittlepringle.
    THANKS FOR READING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  9. changed changed
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    June 28, 2013 11:01pm UTC
    Gone
    Chapter 4
    I got out of the car walking around the front headed for the drivers seat.
    Colton went the other way as if trying not to make eye contact with me.
    I climbed in the white Subaru and waited. I was in the car for 30 seconds
    and there was no sign of Colton coming back. I got out of the car and walked
    towards the back
    “Colton!”
    There he was laying on the ground behind the car. I bent down to him
    to see what was going on. I tried waking him up, but I got no response.
    “Colton!’ I yelled one more time.
    Once again no response, I could still feel his heart
    beating but he was not waking up.
    “Colton please wake up!”
    I decided the best decision would be to call 911.
    “Hello 911, what`s your emergency?”
    “My friend has passed out behind my
    car that we pulled over!”
    “Okay miss calm down and tell me where you are.”
    “Um were at the intersection of Summer Lane
    and Katie Field Road.”
    “Okay our services are on the way. Can I get your name and your friends name?”
    “My name is Mary and my friend is Colton.”
    “Okay, try to stay calm and tell me what happened.”
    “Me and Colton were on our way out to dinner and we
    stopped at the stop sign at the end of Summer Lane and he
    fell asleep while driving. I told him to pull over and that I would drive.
    So he did and when he went around the back of the car
    something happened and he passed out and now here we are.”
    “Okay, the ambulance will be there any second”
    “Colton, don`t worry the ambulance is almost here.
    We will get you to the hospital everything will be okay.”
    I hear the loud siren coming from the ambulances. It`s getting louder
    and louder as it comes closer. I can see the red flashing lights in the distance.
    Thank God they are finally here.
    *******AUTHORS NOTE*********
    Hey y`all hope you are enjoying the story so far
    please leave me feedback so i know how you guys feel about it!!
    Hope you enjoy

  10. Secret_Stories Secret_Stories
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    June 5, 2013 4:36pm UTC
    Life of a sucidal girl/////
    chapter four.
    We were sitting on Rosies bed when I realised she hadn't told me what happened between her and Sasha. "Rosie?" I asked "What even happened between you and Sash?"
    "I went up to her locker to ask if she'd seen you and she just said 'don't talk to me, I know what you did.' So then I went and asked some her friends what was going on with her and they said that Sasha had told them that I was caught by one of the teachers with her boyfriend during school time outside,"
    "Wow..." that was really all I could say.
    "But your soo taking my side right?"
    I looked at her with raised eyebrows. Sides? She wanted me to choose between my two best friends.
    "Who said I'm taking sides?"
    "I just thought you'd take my side...but if your taking her side then you can get out of my house!"
    I couldn't believe this. I got up and left because it didn't really matter, in the morning I would be leaving California and I would never see any of them again.
    I looked at my watch. 8:17. Better get home for dinner.
    Authors Note: This is like the shortest chater ever but I feel like nobodys reading so.. I think i might start a new book. But comment if your reading and I might continue

  11. hellyeahitskat hellyeahitskat happy birthday!
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    June 4, 2013 6:41pm UTC
    Sunset ch 4
    It was Christmas break now. Only four days till christmas to be exact.
    I was out shopping with my mom for last minute gifts and also trying to pick a gift for Ryan.
    We have only been together 2 weeks and I was still learning about what he liked and didn't.
    So I didn’t really know what to get him “Does he like belts?” my mom asked holding up a studded belt.
    “I don’t know. But he sure needs one. His pants are always falling down,” I said.
    “We can get him a belt then. Do you want to go to Hot Topic and get him that Rise Against shirt still?”
    she asked. “Yeah. I’ll do that now while you pay for the belt,”I said.
    I left Spencer’s and took the escalator upstairs to Hot Topic.
    I scanned the selection of oh shirts they had displayed on the wall.
    Finally spotting the shirt I wanted to get him I got his size and went to the counter to pay for it.
    I hoped he liked it. Rise Against was his favorite band after all.
    I meet up with my mom at the car and we went home.
    At home I picked out a box and put his gifts inside.
    I wrapped the outside with a Christmas tree wrapping paper.
    I added twirled ribbons and a bow to complete it.
    I slid it under the Christmas tree in the way back so my cat wouldn’t try to mess with the ribbon.
    I couldn’t wait to give him his gift and also see what he got me.
    Tomorrow he would come over and we would make breakfast together.
    Later we would plan to do some other things the rest of the day.
    I couldn’t wait to be in his arms again and see his smile spread across his face when he laughed.
    Just all those little cute things you see in a guy that makes him special.
    Those things were running through my head now.
    A smile spread across my face.
    I couldn’t be happier to be with Ryan.
    ♥ ♥ ♥
    The next morning he came over and just like we had planned, we made breakfast together.
    My parents laughed at us because we kept bumping in to each other and dropping things.
    I thought it was funny also, I couldn’t stop laughing most of the time.
    When my parents had left we exchanged gifts.
    “Open yours first!” I said handing him his gift.
    “You have to open yours to! At the same time we will, “he said.
    We both opened ours gifts.
    He had gotten me a shirt from Zumiez that had an anchor on it which I loved, and he had given me one of his necklaces. After he had opened his I gave him a kiss and a hug.
    “Go try it on for me,” he said smiling and held the shirt out to me.
    I went to try on the shirt and walked out to show him “It’s too big,” I said looking down at it with a frown.
    I looked up to see Ryan frowning also. “We will just have to get you a smaller size,” he says.
    I changed out the shirt in my room then went to meet Ryan in the driveway.
    We got into his truck and headed for the mall.
    When we got to Zumiez they were out of my shirt.
    So I had to pick a different gift. Sorting though the different clothes I found a obey dress that I liked.
    Ryan bought me the dress and we went back to his truck.
    I was buckling my seatbelt thinking we were driving home only to realize Ryan had leaned his seat back and was laying down placing his hands behind his head.
    “What are you doing?” I asked. “Relaxing. It’s not like we r in a rush are we?” He asked.
    “No,” I said unbuckling my seatbelt and leaning back my seat.
    Ryan reached over and switched on the radio to a country station.
    I turned to look at him and notice him humming along with the song with his eyes closed.
    He had such a pleasant smile on his face. I wanted to kiss him so badly.
    I leaned over about to do so when he opened his eyes.
    His smile widened and he pulled me into his seat with him.
    I leaned my head against his chest has he brushed his finger though my hair.
    “You’re so pretty,” he said. “I’m so lucky to have you.” I looked up at him and smiled.
    “Thanks babe. I’m so lucky to have you also,” I said.
    He tilted my chin towards him and kissed me softly on the lips.
    I wrapped my arms around his neck and we started to make out.
    He wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me closer to him.
    It was such a perfect moment only to be shattered by my phone ringing.
    “Hello?” I answered. “Where are you? You need to come home,” my mom said through the receiver.
    “We will be home in a bit,” I say then hang up. “We have to go now,” I say to Ryan. “I heard,” he said.
    I slide back into my seat and we pull out of the parking lot.
    I was starting to get annoyed by the country station he had put on and was about to change it when Ryan’s hand stopped me mid way.
    “I like this song!” He said as Luke Bryon’s, I Don’t Want This Night To End, came on.
    As the song played I started to like it. This is a first, since I don’t like country music.
    Ryan looked at me and saw my nodding my head to the music.
    “This is going to be our song,” he says with a smile. I started to listen to the lyrics closely.
    He was right; it should be our song,
    because I never wanted any night I spent with him to end.

  12. DontLetThemGetToYou DontLetThemGetToYou
    posted a quote
    May 31, 2013 5:12am UTC
    Pretend It's Ok.
    *A Little Mix Fan Fiction*
    Chapter 4 - Appearances To Appeal
    Sophie's P.O.V
    I was getting ready to go to the party by myself.
    Without Kat, without anyone.
    I had completely lost everyone.
    I wanted to look good, so I went to a makeup store.
    I bought some Chanel perfume, spritzing it to see what it smelt like.
    Then I got some lipstick, foundation, eyeliner and eyeshadow.
    Finally, I went to a fancy dress store and bought a red, strapless dress.
    But then I remembered that my bangles were getting a bit tight, so I went to a fifty cent store and bought some colourful, plastic bangles.
    When I got home, I tried the outfit on.
    It looked good on me, and I was pleased with that.
    Then I tried to apply my makeup.
    I had never actually tried this before, so I was a bit nervous.
    I rubbed the foundation on my skin, giving it a darker colour.
    It looked much more better, compared to my pale skin.
    I applied some black eyeliner, and some sparkly red eyeshadow.
    Then I smacked my hand to my forehead.
    I had forgotton to shop for some cute heels.
    Oh well.
    I applied my lipstick.
    It was bright red, and looked attractive, to be honest.
    I dug through my wardrobe, looking at my outdated flats.
    I sighed, settling on a pair of bright pink heels.
    I looked at my reflection in the mirror, running my hand through my hair.
    My hair had ruined this outfit.
    It looked disgusting.
    Long.
    I had dyed it pink, yellow and red.
    Ew.
    I quickly rushed to the salon, asking to dye my whole hair blonde, and to cut about two centimetres of it.
    After she did that, I looked stunning.
    Then I washed my hair, dried it, and made some loose waves.
    And I finally decided not to cut for the day.

  13. 1hockey2lax3crazy 1hockey2lax3crazy
    posted a quote
    May 8, 2013 9:23pm UTC
    Just The Way You Are
    chapter four
    ✯✯✯✯✯✯✯✯✯✯✯
    Bella's P.O.V.
    "Hey! Bell?" I heard Julia's voice right outside my door, she sounded panicked. I didn't think much of it. She didn't know where I was, otherwise she wouldn't have been yelling and looking for me, so I ignored her. "Bell?" She called again and I sighed, she only yelled for me twice if something was actually important.
    "Room!" I yelled, turning my music down as her smaller blonde head poked through the door. "What up freak?" I mumbled shutting my laptop quickly.
    "Do you…" She mumbled, staring at her feet. "Do you think Annika is hurting herself…?" I jumped off the bed, my eyes gone wild as I stared at my sister.
    "Are you stupid!" I shouted, towering
    "It was just a question…" Julia bowed her head, and then I started to think about it.
    "It was a good question…" I muttered, it was my way of admitting I agreed. "But I know the one person who would actually know…"
    "Niall," Julia mumbled walking out of my room.
    Annika's P.O.V.
    I slammed my bed room door shut. It was a good defense, but at least then my father would know where I was. Then we wouldn't scream around the house, stumbling over his drunk self to find me. I had found it was better he know, then it wasn't as bad when he found me. The abuse wouldn't go on as long. The slaps would be from the front of his hand, not the back. It was no cure for the sexual abuse that was sure to come later, but that was a whole different battle to fight. Sneaking out to Bella, or Ash around ten o'clock, hopefully before he came home from the bar.
    "ANNIKA!" Great, hadn't even thought of him yet. I poked my head out of the door, looking around quick for the male that held the voice. "ANNIKA!" He shouted again and I flipped my dark hair to look the other way. Huh, Cam hadn't gone out to party yet. "There you are…" He muttered, Cam was smart, he was athletic, he could have had a free ride to any college he wanted, and then… bam. His junior year came around. He started smoking, I thought it was just a faze.
    But then Mum died, not that he cared, and Dad started drinking, that he cared about. And I knew the faze would stick. He started drinking too, partying instead of going to practice, creating a rather lengthy police record for himself in a matter of months. Throwing away and chance of even going to college. He still managed to stay in shape though. Maybe it was the weed, or maybe we was drinking more whiskey then beer. Either way… Cam was an alcoholic too, he just wasn't an abusive drunk.
    "Can I help you?" I raised an eyebrow. I used to love Cam, he was sweet, and funny, and he was my best friend. But now, I could barely hold a conversation with him. All I saw was who he used to be…
    "Where's Dad?" He mumbled, staring at me with a lighter blue eye then my own.
    "Don't know, don't care," I started to close my door, turning around when Cam's foot wouldn't let me. "What?"
    "Then we're leaving. Pack necessary stuff, I'm not letting him hurt us anymore. You have an hour. Go."
    "What are you talking about?"
    "We're leaving. Now hurry up."
    Author's notes~
    Sorry this chapter took so long.. I just kept writing and re-writing but it wouldn't come out write. So... sorry if it sucks. Ideas and feedback.. PLEASE! I love hearing fom you, and it makes it easier to write... so tell me something, anything!
    Thanks Loves

  14. Ireland201 Ireland201
    posted a quote
    April 27, 2013 1:47pm UTC
    If you could see me now
    chapter 4
    "Jodie?" he said, smiling slightly.
    "Oh my God, please don't say you work here too," I moaned.
    "I don't," he said, still smiling.
    "Thank the Lord!"
    "I live here." A wide grin spread across his face. I sighed. Just my luck. "Don't worry, Dad, I'll show her around." He smiled at John - his Dad - and took my hand. I wiggled out of it and he laughed.
    "I'm coming too," Eoin said quickly, following us out of the back door. I saw Conor roll his eyes. His green eyes. The same ones as Eoin had. They looked alike too. That must have been why I thought of Conor when I saw Eoin.
    "So, you're alive," Conor commented.
    "What's that supposed to mean?" Eoin asked.
    "I'm talking to Jodie."
    "I am. So?" I snapped.
    "Must have been my inspirational words," he said, grinning.
    I wanted to scream and cry. He didn't understand. He never would. I was going back and I was quitting this job. I couldn't bear another minute with him. Here he was, joking about me killing myself. He didn't know why, or anything about me. He would never understand. Because I was going to quit this job that I had had for less than two minutes, and then I was going to go home, give up on my Everything happens for a reason theory, and overdose. My heart was lead. I could only think of everything that should have killed me, and how it hadn't. I was an accident. That was for certain.
    "Look what you did, Conor! She's crying!" Eoin said.
    "I am?"
    "I was joking, Jodie," Conor muttered. We had stopped walking and he was standing in front of me, his face inches from mine, his green eyes staring intently into my gray ones. He put his right hand on my left cheek and wiped away a tear I hadn't even noticed had fallen, leaving a trail of tingles. "I'm sorry."
    I nodded, not trusting my voice. He stepped back then, smiling. He took my hand in his and started his tour.
    All that week, I went to their house. Nobody came to visit the little petting farm. I spent most of my time with Conor and Eoin. Usually we played with the dogs when there was nobody there.
    "We'll have to teach Jodie to ride horses," Eoin said one day, as we sat at the table eating bread and butter that their mother had given us.
    "No, thank you!"
    "You would like it," Conor assured me. "I'll take you out to the sheds, you can meet Teddy."
    "Teddy?"
    "The chestnut brown horse. Kind of the same colour as your hair," Eoin said, grinning at me.
    I had gotten used to not getting offended whenever Eoin or Conor said something that would have offended me before. They had the same sense of humour. I had met their brother Darren. He was tall and muscular, with dark brown hair and blue eyes. He was very serious and didn't resemble Conor or Eoin. There was another brother, called Joseph. He was fifteen and was like Darren in both looks and personality. Maybe not as serious. They had a sister too. Her name was Annie. She had sandy-coloured hair and green eyes like Conor, but looked like Joseph. She was thirteen, and was care-free like Conor and Eoin. I liked her very much, though I didn't talk to her all that often. Their mother and father were a match made in Heaven. She had long, silky blond hair and green eyes. She was very beautiful and kind. Her name was Hazel, and I thought the name suited her very well.
    Conor never asked about my history again. But sometimes he looked as if he wanted to read my mind. He didn't want to upset me though, so he never straight out asked.
    After we had finished eating, Conor took me out to the sheds to see Teddy. I had seen him in the fields when I had first come here, and thought he was very beautiful.
    "He's a nice horse," Conor told me. "Friendly. A people person, you could say."
    "Evan wanted a horse," I whispered as I stroked Teddy's neck.
    "Who?"
    "A friend of mine," I said, smiling slightly.
    Author's Note:
    This is a looooooooonnng chapter. And there are two today because I'm bored.
    Feedback? Follow for a follow. Thanks! ~Mary :)

  15. xxreadytoflyxx xxreadytoflyxx
    posted a quote
    March 22, 2013 9:51pm UTC
    ♥Magic In My Eyes♥
    Chapter 4
    Leah's P.O.V
    "What do I f/cking do?" I screamed at Julian. "My best friend is going to die!"
    Julian shrugged. "You can't do anything, really."
    "Are you freaking serious? Do I defeat this queen or what?"
    "Don't ask me, I've got nothing to do with it."
    "You're her best friend!"
    "You are too. I'll leave it up to you." he walked out.
    What did I do?
    Ava's P.O.V
    "Ava, you're going to school!" Crystal shouted.
    "No," I whispered to myself.
    This was the moment I had been dreading.
    This was going to be the worst moment of my whole entire life.
    The worst.
    This was the moment when I had to face school, and the kids who bullied me.
    Of course, I can't tell Crystal about that, never.
    I walked outside, the cold breeze carrying me through the wind.
    I reluctantly walked to school.
    It was a ten minute walk. Urgh, how I hated school.
    As I stared up at it, I caught her eye.
    That girl was mean to me.
    An older, senior girl.
    Her name was Regina.
    She was like that evil queen in those fairytales that little girls read.
    Little girls like me.
    Regina is an A class student in Science, especially chemistry.
    She's a fashion queen.
    She comes from America.
    She's part of the Science club.
    She's part of the cheerleading team.
    She's perfect.
    Everyone adores her.
    She's the most popular girl in the school.
    Regina.
    That's her.
    And that evil glint in her eyes and that wicked smile she deliberately puts on makes her seem a little suspicious...
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I'm sorry I haven't uploaded in a long time! I won't upload 'Pretend It's Ok' on DontLetThemGetToYou right now. Sorry! x

  16. AlwaysInsideYourHeart AlwaysInsideYourHeart
    posted a quote
    March 16, 2013 3:34pm UTC
    But I Swear, I Thought You Were Perfect
    Chapter 4~ First Days, Brian's POV
    Just another day of school, but it's the first day again so its a lot more loud and annoying. I don't really see anybody I know, so I just head over to my art class for first period. I didn't see any of my friends in that class, so I just picked a random seat and watched people enter the room.
    A guy and a girl walked in together, and they both had really amazing looking hair. They kind of reminded you of a punk- anime type thing.
    But the girl interested me the most, she was gorgeous, literally stunning. I wanted to say something and introduce myself, but I was too nervous to. Luckily, the guy picked her up and they sat across from me and saved me from having to make an awkward introduction.
    I wanted to tell her how pretty she was, but all I could get out was about their hair. She introduced her cocky friend as Drake, and herself as Charlotte or Char.
    I thought they were dating and I figured I should ask, just so I wouldn't say something wrong later. But I had already said something wrong. She had the slightest look of horror and shock on her face when I asked if they were together.
    I really hope I didn't already mess this up.
    Sorry it's kind of short,
    this is Chapter 3 again,
    but in Brian's point of view.
    After Drake's POV the story
    will continue more.
    Remember to give feedback
    and let me know if you want to
    be added to the notification list.

  17. BrokenHeartedGirl1 BrokenHeartedGirl1
    posted a quote
    February 25, 2013 10:04pm UTC
    A New Direction.
    Chapter 4
    *Allie's POV*
    "Heyyy" Colleen called behind me.
    I turned to see Katie and Colleen, slowing my pace to let them catch up to me.
    "You ready for English?"
    "Nice joke" Katie mumbled.
    "Hate this class." Collen chimed in.
    It was a cool late November day. My friends were still unaware about the events that had occured the previous summer.
    As we sat in Mr. Tesso's class, we continued to chat.
    "Are you ready for practice today" I questioned Kate.
    "When am I ever ready? We're going to get our as/ses kicked again!" she grumbled.
    "I hate swimming" I agreed.
    "Just wait to February. Four more months of hel/l!"
    "Late again Luke" Mr. Tesso drew the room's attention to the back of the room.
    Luke, strolled in casually and took the seat behind me.
    "Hey babe" he flirted.
    "Oh hey." I smiled.
    Luke was simply gorgeous. He had slick brown hair and bright green eyes. Figuring out that he liked me in August was one of the best things in my life. He saved me from the depression caused 2 months previous of the unspoken night. Mr. Tesso began teaching the remainder of The Great Gatsby.
    ***
    The day drew on as lunch approached. We all sat in our usual seats. Kate with her boyfriend Cole. Colleen with her boyfriend Alex and Kelsey forever alone. I sat practically on Luke's lap as he gave me a peck on the cheak. I slid my backside down so I was sitting independently on the bench next to him.
    After we all ate, we had an hour of roam time. During this time, we had to check in with our homeroom teachers and then it was pure freedom. I always dreaded homeroom because it required me to be in the prescence of Luke's ex girlfrined, Taylor. I tried to make my time spent in homeroom as brief as possible, and always avoided eye contact.
    After the awkward minutes had passed, I met Luke in the locker room for our usual "study session". We read over our notes for the Great Gatsby and he tried to explain Trig to me. Before I knew it, it had turned from studying to something else. Luke had me against the locker as our lips and tounges interconnected. Our make out session lasted around 20 rough minutes. He pinned me to the lockers as his front rubbed on mine.
    When we had finnished our time, we were both a bit warn out.
    "Quite a warm up for practice later." I winked as I exited the locker room.
    Author's note~Love you guys! Keep Reading. Tell me what you think!

  18. iloveu4ever51 iloveu4ever51
    posted a quote
    February 15, 2013 8:53pm UTC
    Sick Chapter 4
    I had left after awhile since I sensed Mira and her boyfriend wanted time alone.For some reason Mira being with her boyfriend made me think of Hunter.I was grateful to him but I couldn't let anyone get close to me and find out everything.I couldn't afford to lose my life because of one mistake of trusting a guy.I used to have a boyfriend name Cody.It ended up badly and I can't ever trust a guy again.Cody is one of the football players at my school and for some reason out of all girls he picked me to date.I was at first surprised when he started talking to me and we eventually became friends.When I told him about finding a band he beecame differnt.Somehow it seemed like we seperated.Cody was a classic high school football guy.He had light brown hair and blue eyes.I was scared at our first date but he was gentle.I thought I loved him but I was a fool.Real love doesn't exist or atleast not for me.I'm starting to believe relationships don't mean much anymore.Hunter was just another guy who was going to be dating me as a bet and I was just a game to him.So why get close to him?
    ***********************************
    I walked to my locker and hid my cuts on my arms with long sleeves.It was stupid of me to live when I was just a waste of space.I made music sure but did I save someone's life?No.I missed my dad who I barely know of.I feel like a orphan with my mom barely home and sleeping with 40 year olds or younger.I felt weird and not normal like other people.Why couldn't I be skinny as those cheerleaders?Or beautiful as my friends or anyone else?Why am I fat and worthless?I walked in Mr.Moody's class and sat down.The class went by fast and Mr.Moody kept on walking near me and I tried not noticing it.The incident at the grave was running in my mind and I wanted to forget it.It's sad but even if Mr. Moody likes me I don't even deserve that.After class since I was helping out and I was late Mr.Moody started talking to me.
    "Hey beautiful."Mr.Moody said as soon as everyone left.
    "Don't call me beautiful."I spat and was disgusted by him.
    "Awwww honey why are you so upset?"He came up to me and hugged me.His arms were like steel and I couldn't break free.I felt so uncomfortable and I knew this was against the school policies.
    "Let me go!'I almost shouted.
    "Never honey,hunter isn't here to save you.Where are you going to run?"Mr.Moody said darkily and I screamed.In a rush I kicked him and opened the door.I had gotten a pass earlier so I didn't need to run back to Mr.Moody to get a pass as I walked in my science class.Everyone stared at me like I was a freak and I know I am.Nothing except a worthless stupid girl who was freaking wasting the planets life.I sat down in my seat and as was handed my test that I took a couple days before.I saw at the top of the paper that I got a D.Something inside of me crawled and said that I deserved to get a D.I was stupid this test proved it.All the classes went by fast and I was getting in trouble which ended up with me getting detention.I was such a failure I thought to myself.
    ****************************************
    I had caught up with Mira and Christine.When we dumped our lunches I decided to go to the restroom.
    "Hey guys I'll be right back I'm just going to use the restroom."I said.I walked to the restroom,checked to see no one else was there and locked myself up.I made myself barf and I felt much skinner then before.No one would notice me doing this and who cares if I died?It's not like anyone cares anyways.I washed my hands and went back to see Hunter with Mira and Christine.Oh no!What was he going to do?I sat at the corner of the table and saw him wink at me.
    "Hey Jenny,Hunter was waiting for you?"Mira said and looked at me and her eyes said hot guy right?
    I leaned in and whispered to Christine,"Christine!What's he doing here?I don't want to talk to him you could have lied that I was absent or something."
    "Jenny he's not like Cody at all,Hunter is a sweet guy."Christine said and my throat tightened.Christine noticed and added,"I'm sorry Jenny I shouldn't have said that."
    "It's okay."I said lying.Christine brightened up and she had no idea how I felt like cutting.
    "Jenny can I talk to you alone?"Hunter asked.
    It was quiet but I decied to talk to him."Sure."I said and we both headed towards the field.I wonder what he was going to say he probably was going to scream at me for running into his arms when Mr.Moody was chasing me.
    Teaser:"Let me see your arms Jenny."
    A/N:I'm back guys I know its been about a month or longer and whoever is reading this story thank you for reading this and waiting for so long.I hope you like and comment if you want a reminder.Remember you're all beautiful just the way you are.Sorry if it's too long I just have so much to write about love you all.

  19. aislinn325 aislinn325
    posted a quote
    February 3, 2013 10:51pm UTC
    Stepping Out
    Chapter 4
    "Uhhh...." I moaned as I sat up. My head was pounding. I opened my eyes slowly as they adjusted to the light. The room I was in was carpeted in a bluish color and the walls were painted to match. I was lying on a bed, a very large one at that. There was a chair and a desk across the room and a closet to my left. I heard the door open and I pushed myself as far away from the door as possible. As the person walked in, they shut the door behind them. It was a guy who looked a year older than me. He had soft, copper colored hair that was short and kept. He was at least six foot and was very muscular. He came and sat on the bed.
    "Hey, I'm Greyson. What you did in class today was pretty bada**. I'm impressed; a pretty girl like you doing something like that. You never seemed like the kind of girl who would. You are always so shy and quiet." What. Was this Greyson guy actually saying that he payed attention to me. That he noticed and acknowledged me.
    "What grade are you in? Why did you take me?" I asked him keeping my voice even.
    "I'm a senior. I knew you wouldn't come with me if I asked you, and I really wanted to talk to you." He said, some shame leaking into his voice.
    "I would have come with you...maybe." I whispered. "What do you want to talk to me about?" He handed me the glass of water that I didn't realize he held. I took it and he spoke.
    "I wanted to tell you how awesome that was in class today. You proved Seth was a jerk and that he shouldn't be trusted. That must've taken every courageous bone in your body. You showed him that he shouldn't expect to breeze through life." Greyson stared at me expectingly.
    "He treated it like a game, I showed him how it's played. I was done being the girl that no one talked to or even knew existed. I wanted to be more. Not like popular more, just a normal girl with friends. " I informed him. He looked back at me with a look in his eyes that told me he knew exactly how I felt. I stared at him back. He had deep carmel colored eyes that told that his life was not all rainbows and unicorns. He started to slowly scooch closer to me, I didn't move. When he was right next to me, he leaned in slowly. I started to lean in too.
    And then---
    --------------------------------
    ahhh, cliffhanger!
    sorry it's been so long!
    so what do you guys think? good? bad? tacos?
    still interested?
    thanks!

  20. 1hockey2lax3crazy 1hockey2lax3crazy
    posted a quote
    January 31, 2013 9:28pm UTC
    I Would♥
    Chapter Four
    Niall's P.O.V.
    "Hay Lou?" I heard Zayn walking downstairs. "Where'd Rose, and Anna go?" He scratched his head.
    "School," Louis laughed drinking some water.
    "But, OHHH! Today is the last day!" Liam said walking downstairs with Harry following close behind.
    "Your idiots," I mumbled staring at my phone, waiting for Hunter to text me back. I know it sounds stupid, but I already missed her. I didn't even know if Hunter liked me yet, and I hadn't told Lou I was in love with his sister yet. How could I?
    Thats cute ~ Hunter =)
    I felt my phone vibrate in my hands and instantly smiled when I opened the message.
    Yes you are ;) ~ Nialler
    I sent back feeling like an idiot. "Who you texting?" Louis asked sitting next to me.
    "Hunter," I mumbled waiting for another text.
    "You like her, don't you?" Lou asked turning on the T.V.
    "Maybe a little," I admitted.
    "Good," He laughed.
    "How is that good?"
    "Cause she might like you," Lou said sticking his tongue out. I felt my cheeks turn a rosy shade of pink as my phone vibrated again.
    =) Your the sweetest ~ Hunter =)
    Can I ask you something? ~ Nialler
    Anything ~ Hunter =)
    Will you go out with me? ~ Nialler
    I took a deep breath, sightly terrified of the answer.
    I'll be home in fifteen minutes. Can I give you the answer then? ~ Hunter =)
    I guess =P ~ Nialler
    Fifteen minutes. It was going to feel like forever. I looked for things to occupy my time. T.V. Guitar. Food. Music. Running in circles. I heard the basement door open, and four girl's voices talking amongst themselves. I forced myself to sit down, and picked up my laptop, immediately opening twitter. The door opened in the kitchen, Taylor, Anna, and Rose walked through, still laughing. Where was Hunter?
    Taylor sat down on the couch next to Louis, curling up into his chest. Rose and Anna were in the kitchen when the door opened again. There she was. I hadn't realized till a week ago that I was actually in love with her. The long flowing hair. The big brown eyes. The idiotic humor. How could someone not love her?
    "Hi baby sis," Louis smiled as Hunter walked over and kissed his cheek before setting down her bag, and sunglasses.
    "Hay Ni?" She spoke up, finally looking at me. "Can I talk to you for like two minutes?" I didn't answer I just nodded my head before following her upstairs.
    "Will you?" I whispered as she closed the door to her room, and wrapped her arms around my neck like she had that first day back, standing in the kitchen. I tilted my head down so our foreheads were pressed together.
    "Yes," She whispered as I pulled her slightly closer to my chest. "You have no idea how much I freaked out when I read that text from you. Taylor will you tell you. I almost fainted," She laughed slightly as I kissed her nose gently.
    "That's cute," I whispered brushing a piece of hair behind Hunter's ear. "But not as cute as your little smile," I finished my sentence as the corners of her mouth raised. "See, I mean how adorable is that?" I whispered kissing her nose again.
    "Not as adorable as the little grin on your face right now," She whispered back giggling slightly.
    "And nothing will ever be as perfect as this," I mumbled before gently pressing my lips to Hunter's.
    Author's Notes ~ Feedback + ideas pwease! thanks lovesXX pre-pare for major adorableness next chapter, you know. Just cause I can =P
    Polyvore ~ Nothing sorry Doll

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