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Chapter 4
Her Point Of View

So, I didn’t really describe our relationship, mine and James, I’m saying, so I might just give you a little ‘tour’ of it now. So, James is really friendly, and he’s always there for me. Example (a)- Emails and texts, telling me “You’re beautiful, stay strong & I’ll love you forever.” Example (b)- “You are the straw to my berry.” I know it’s corny but I love him, and I love all of it, this relationship, everything!

I think, it was on Sunday when we first kind of went out together. Sunday the 20th of October, I’ll never forget that day. Now that we knew we liked each other, there was simply no easy way of asking one another out. I was glad he made the first move. “Look, Seri- I think you’re really amazing, I’m sure you know that by now, and, um..” “Go ahead?” I commented, curious. “WillyougooutwithmebecauseIthinkyourextracuteandamazingandIcouldtalkaboutitalldayhehe” and he quickly walked to a nearby bush and like, sort of hid behind it and I thought he was peeing or something but he as actually hiding because he thought I would say no. As if!

His Point Of View
I was kind of scared that she would say no, at first, but when she rushed over to the bush I was hiding in she scooped me into her arms and hugged the air and life out of me. I loved her so much, see? She was the only reasonable on in our school. At least she had the heart to tell me, and like a proper lady too. Most girl would approach with the “Hey you’re hot,” method.

Well, our relationship started in the park, basically. It was snowing, yes, call me creepy, but our relationship start was set in a cold, snowy and dainty park. I made the first move, hid in a bush and we ended up kissing for what, 20 minutes? I love her so much, but I made one thing very clear: NOT for her body.

Most people in our school had told me “Oh, you should ask that babe out, just for her BODY.” And other people would object, saying, “Oh she’s lovely, I just never really found the time to talk to her, oops.” And the ended up debating about it, and you know how Seri told me she writes? I don’t think she told you about Martin..

If you’re wondering who Martin is, he’s the rough, head, leader kind of person in our school. He’s like the male version of Kimberly. He thought that using someones body would’ve been quite funny, obviously. He told Seri she was beautiful and he loved her since the start, and all that bull was untrue. But you know what? Seri was young, and gullible, and she believed him. So the went home together, and luckily Seri wasn’t pregnant but after the whole thing she just seemed so broken.

At least we’re together now, and that’s all that matters. I love her, she loves me, and admit it. You were singing the Barney lyrics along to that little sentence. Well I’ve started writing about her and our relationship, and it’s pretty addictive; watch out, you’ll be hearing a lot more.

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